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Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAY522WB2NTQNJRF9BR9P7
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Model:
Grok 4.1 Fast
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
33.3s
Cost:
$0.001633
Provider:
xAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
80.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.90%
Name drop frequency
(details)
84.21%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
99.34%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
75.04%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
31.75%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
78.2748%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora gripped the Fae-forged blade's
hilt, its moonsilver
chill
seeping through her glove into her palm.
The small crescent scar on
her wrist itched under the leather. Nyx hovered at her shoulder, a humanoid silhouette of writhing shadow, violet eyes flickering like distant storm lights.
They crouched behind a bramble-choked
ridge in Richmond Park. Dusk bled into the trees. Twisted oaks
loomed
ahead, bark
etched
with spirals that
pulsed
faint green. No birds called. No wind stirred leaves. "Those stones,"
Aurora whispered, nodding toward the
ring. "Eva swore they marked the way."
Nyx's form thinned, tendrils probing
the air. "Boundaries hum. This one sings."
She straightened, boots sinking into
damp earth.
Heartstone pendant lay heavy against
her chest, silent—no
warmth
, no
throb
.
Whatever rift hid here stayed
cold to its Hel-tuned
pulse
. One step closed the gap. Fingers brushed the nearest oak. Bark yielded like warm wax, then snapped firm.
A shiver raced up her
arm,
electric
honey in her veins. The world folded.
Air thickened, laced with scents
of crushed mint and sun-warmed honey.
Grass sprang ankle-high underfoot, blades
tipped silver, each quiver releasing sparks that danced upward and fizzled. Aurora blinked.
Sky arched above, not bruised
twilight but a dome of rippling teal, threaded with gold veins like lightning frozen mid-strike.
Flowers carpeted the clearing—blooms the
size of fists, petals layered in iridescent sheaths that shifted from cobalt to flame with every breath. One cluster unfurled as she passed, stamens uncoiling like tiny serpents, exhaling chimes that layered into a melody sharp as glass.
Nyx solidified beside her, taller
now, six-foot-two frame blocking chunks of light. "Solid ground pulls at me. Shadows here cling." Aurora knelt, touched a petal. It parted under her fingertip, revealing a core that
pulsed
liquid pearl. Warmth bloomed in her chest,
not the pendant's heat but something lighter, threading through ribs
. "Listen." Distant laughter bubbled, childlike and wild, chased by flutes that wove no tune she knew—notes twisting backward,
echoing
before the sound struck. She rose,
scanned
the ring. Eight oaks encircled them, trunks merged at roots into a single mass, branches interlacing overhead into a cage of living filigree. Beyond, paths forked: one dusted white with what looked like crushed bone, another lined with thorns that wept ruby droplets, evaporating mid-fall. "Pick one." Nyx flowed ahead, incorporeal again, vanishing into the thorn path's shade. "Blood calls blood." Aurora followed, blade drawn now, its leaf-shape catching glints from nowhere. Thorns curved away as she neared, parting like courtiers. Droplets plinked onto soil, each splash birthing sprouts that twisted into miniature vines, leaves broad and veined purple. Deeper, the path widened into a glade. Trees here shed bark in sheets that floated upward, defying gravity, stacking into clouds that drifted lazy circles. Fruits dangled from branches—globes striped crimson and gold, skins taut, emitting low purrs like contented cats. She plucked one. Flesh yielded soft, juice bursting sweet-tart across tongue, fizzing like champagne trapped in cells. Vision sharpened; colors deepened, teal sky now
etched
with fractals. Nyx rematerialized, snatching a fruit. Shadow fingers crushed it, black tendrils drinking the pulp. "Time frays here. Your
pulse
slows." Aurora checked her
watch
. Hands blurred, stuck at 6:47. She tapped the face. Nothing. "Feels right to me." A ripple crossed the glade. Grass parted, revealing a stream. Water flowed uphill, surface skinned with lily pads that beat like hearts, each
throb
sending ripples that climbed the bank. She dipped a hand. Current tugged playful, cool
silk
wrapping fingers, then warmer, urging her wrist deeper. Nyx's violet gaze fixed upstream. "Eyes
watch
." Figures danced in the water's sheen—
not reflections, but silhouettes prancing on the bed, elongated limbs twirling to
silent rhythm. One paused, head cocking,
as if scenting her
. Aurora yanked back, water droplets clinging, evaporating into steam that smelled of vanilla and ash. "Playthings or traps?" "Both." The bone-dust path tempted now, visible through trees. White powder shifted under unseen feet, forming prints that filled instantly, erased.
She veered that way, Nyx
a
whisper
at her heels. Dust coated boots, fine as talc, tingling soles. Each step birthed faint glows, blue motes rising to join the bark-clouds. Unease coiled low. Air pressed closer, breaths shallower. Pendant stirred—a faint twitch,
not its usual Hel-warning pulse, but enough to prickle neck hairs
. "Getting tight." Nyx solidified, hand—cool smoke—on her shoulder. "Veins tighten. Push." Ahead, the path spilled into a hollow. Standing stones ringed it smaller now, moss-cloaked, humming bass notes that
vibrated
teeth. Center: a pool, surface mirror-flat, reflecting
not sky but stars in daylight swirl
. Aurora edged near. Reflection stared back—not her face, but silver-haired woman, lavender eyes piercing, lips curving sly. She recoiled. Pool undisturbed. "Did you—" Nyx leaned over, shadow spilling across surface. Stars warped, violet flares answering. "She sees through." Ripples spread unprompted. Mist rose, coiling into form. Ethereal woman materialized, waist-length silver hair floating untethered, bare feet hovering inches above grass—no prints marred the dust. Pale lavender eyes locked on Aurora. "Seekers cross thorns and bones, yet thirst for deeper draughts. What riddles chase you into my weave?" Aurora tightened grip on blade, its cold grounding her. Isolde. The Seer. Voice wove like smoke, each word bending light. "Eva sent word. Hel stirs. Portals bleed. We need sight." Isolde drifted closer, no step taken. Air sweetened, flowers chiming frantic. "Sight spills free, but chains bind the pour. Touch the heart, or let shadows sip?" Nyx's form bulked, violet glow sharpening. "No games. Truth, seer." Isolde's laugh tinkled, petals shuddering. She extended hand, palm up. A wildflower bloomed there instant, black-centered. "Truth wears masks in groves where hours
dance
. Follow the upward stream. Find the oak that drinks stars."
She dissolved into mist, sucked
back to pool. Surface smoothed, stars steady. Aurora scowled at the water. "Cryptic bitch." Nyx pointed upstream, where water defied, climbing a root-woven hill. "She points." They climbed. Uphill flow splashed calves, invigorating, muscles lightening. Trees thinned, revealing orchard: apples hung upside-down from roots protruding skyward, bark inverted. One branch snagged her sleeve. Fruit tumbled free, rolling uphill into grass. She snatched it. Bite crunched—flesh spiced cinnamon fire, vision splitting: glimpses of amber skies, endless tables groaning under roasts. Pendant warmed proper now, crimson glow seeping through shirt. "Hel
echo
?" Nyx nodded, shadows lengthening despite teal dome. "Veil thins here." Summit crested. Vast hollow yawned, ringed cliffs of
crystal
veined emerald, waterfalls plummeting upward into mist-veils. Central tree dominated: oak colossal, trunk split into faces—grinning, weeping, blind—branches plunging into earth and sky both. Roots
pulsed
, drinking from upward streams converging. Fruits clustered thick, skins translucent, innards swirling galaxies. Aurora approached. Faces tracked her, wooden eyes creaking. One mouth parted. "Thirst?" She froze. Voice gravel-deep, wind through hollows. Nyx circled, tendrils probing roots. "Living. Old." "Drink stars, child of iron and law. Or flee the weave's
unravel
." Blade hummed in her fist, luminescent faint. Cliffs
echoed
laughter again, flutes twisting sharper. She reached for fruit. Skin split eager, juice thick starlit. One sip, and world tilted—time stretched, seconds balloons inflating. Vines stirred at roots, questing. Nyx yanked her back. "Not yet." Deeper hollow beckoned, paths spiraling into tree's base, shadows thick with whispers. Aurora licked lips, stars
dancing
on tongue. "In." They plunged toward the
maw
.
created_at
"2026-02-20T20:12:54.733Z"
2/20/2026, 8:12:54 PM
model
"x-ai/grok-4.1-fast"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
385
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
33200
tokens_prompt
1816
tokens_completion
2401
native_tokens_prompt
1792
native_tokens_completion
3087
native_tokens_completion_images
0
native_tokens_reasoning
1310
native_tokens_cached
1791
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"completed"
usage
0.00163325
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"9821aa0e-dce3-4c27-9716-161359123d0b"
id
"132655de-27b2-c82e-0252-33c5295c2ba1"
is_byok
false
latency
92
model_permaslug
"x-ai/grok-4.1-fast"
provider_name
"xAI"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771618374-JEf2fRp1KThCpOWmAkPm"
upstream_id
"132655de-27b2-c82e-0252-33c5295c2ba1"
total_cost
0.00163325
cache_discount
0.00026865
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"xAI"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
1
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
30
tagDensity
0.033
leniency
0.067
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
100.00%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1240
totalAiIsmAdverbs
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
80.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
0
"Lily"
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1240
totalAiIsms
28
found
0
word
"chill"
count
1
1
word
"loomed"
count
1
2
word
"etched"
count
2
3
word
"pulsed"
count
3
4
word
"warmth"
count
2
5
word
"throb"
count
2
6
word
"pulse"
count
3
7
word
"raced"
count
1
8
word
"electric"
count
1
9
word
"echoing"
count
1
10
word
"scanned"
count
1
11
word
"silk"
count
1
12
word
"whisper"
count
1
13
word
"vibrated"
count
1
14
word
"dance"
count
1
15
word
"echo"
count
1
16
word
"crystal"
count
1
17
word
"unravel"
count
1
18
word
"echoed"
count
1
19
word
"dancing"
count
1
20
word
"maw"
count
1
highlights
0
"chill"
1
"loomed"
2
"etched"
3
"pulsed"
4
"warmth"
5
"throb"
6
"pulse"
7
"raced"
8
"electric"
9
"echoing"
10
"scanned"
11
"silk"
12
"whisper"
13
"vibrated"
14
"dance"
15
"echo"
16
"crystal"
17
"unravel"
18
"echoed"
19
"dancing"
20
"maw"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
123
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
123
filterMatches
0
"watch"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
152
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
23
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1203
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
4
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.90%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
45
wordCount
1059
uniqueNames
11
maxNameDensity
1.32
worstName
"Nyx"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Nyx"
discoveredNames
Fae-forged
1
Richmond
1
Park
1
Nyx
14
Hel-tuned
1
Hel-warning
1
Aurora
13
Seer
1
One
6
Air
3
Isolde
3
persons
0
"Nyx"
1
"Aurora"
2
"One"
3
"Air"
4
"Isolde"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
globalScore
0.839
windowScore
1
84.21%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
76
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"looked like crushed bone, another lined w"
1
"as if scenting her"
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
6
per1kWords
4.988
wordCount
1203
matches
0
"not bruised twilight but a dome of rippling teal, threaded with gold veins like light"
1
"not the pendant's heat but something lighter, threading through ribs"
2
"not reflections, but silhouettes prancing on the bed, elongated limbs twirling to"
3
"not its usual Hel-warning pulse, but enough to prickle neck hairs"
4
"not sky but stars in daylight swirl"
5
"not her face, but silver-haired woman, lavender eyes piercing, lips curving sl"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
152
matches
0
"veered that way"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
73
mean
16.48
std
12.41
cv
0.753
sampleLengths
0
45
1
33
2
14
3
12
4
28
5
29
6
3
7
27
8
65
9
20
10
32
11
1
12
22
13
48
14
2
15
14
16
38
17
41
18
27
19
20
20
14
21
4
22
30
23
17
24
7
25
27
26
15
27
3
28
1
29
20
30
30
31
23
32
2
33
9
34
33
35
17
36
4
37
2
38
15
39
26
40
6
41
17
42
20
43
10
44
11
45
15
46
10
47
16
48
18
49
12
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
123
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
257
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
14
semicolonCount
1
flaggedSentences
13
totalSentences
152
ratio
0.086
matches
0
"Heartstone pendant lay heavy against her chest, silent—no warmth, no throb."
1
"Flowers carpeted the clearing—blooms the size of fists, petals layered in iridescent sheaths that shifted from cobalt to flame with every breath."
2
"Distant laughter bubbled, childlike and wild, chased by flutes that wove no tune she knew—notes twisting backward, echoing before the sound struck."
3
"Fruits dangled from branches—globes striped crimson and gold, skins taut, emitting low purrs like contented cats."
4
"Vision sharpened; colors deepened, teal sky now etched with fractals."
5
"Figures danced in the water's sheen—not reflections, but silhouettes prancing on the bed, elongated limbs twirling to silent rhythm."
6
"Pendant stirred—a faint twitch, not its usual Hel-warning pulse, but enough to prickle neck hairs."
7
"Nyx solidified, hand—cool smoke—on her shoulder."
8
"Reflection stared back—not her face, but silver-haired woman, lavender eyes piercing, lips curving sly."
9
"Ethereal woman materialized, waist-length silver hair floating untethered, bare feet hovering inches above grass—no prints marred the dust."
10
"Bite crunched—flesh spiced cinnamon fire, vision splitting: glimpses of amber skies, endless tables groaning under roasts."
11
"Central tree dominated: oak colossal, trunk split into faces—grinning, weeping, blind—branches plunging into earth and sky both."
12
"One sip, and world tilted—time stretched, seconds balloons inflating."
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1096
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"lay heavy against her"
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.020072992700729927
lyAdverbCount
3
lyAdverbRatio
0.002737226277372263
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
152
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
152
mean
7.91
std
5.43
cv
0.686
sampleLengths
0
16
1
11
2
18
3
9
4
5
5
12
6
3
7
4
8
8
9
6
10
7
11
5
12
7
13
11
14
10
15
5
16
5
17
8
18
11
19
3
20
11
21
16
22
2
23
20
24
22
25
21
26
12
27
8
28
5
29
12
30
15
31
1
32
22
33
5
34
21
35
22
36
2
37
11
38
3
39
11
40
9
41
18
42
7
43
18
44
16
45
3
46
14
47
10
48
5
49
9
99.34%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
1
diversityRatio
0.6052631578947368
totalSentences
152
uniqueOpeners
92
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
113
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
13
totalSentences
113
matches
0
"They crouched behind a bramble-choked"
1
"She straightened, boots sinking into"
2
"It parted under her fingertip,"
3
"She rose, scanned the ring."
4
"She plucked one."
5
"She tapped the face."
6
"She dipped a hand."
7
"She veered that way, Nyx"
8
"She extended hand, palm up."
9
"She dissolved into mist, sucked"
10
"She snatched it."
11
"She reached for fruit."
12
"They plunged toward the maw."
ratio
0.115
75.04%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
87
totalSentences
113
matches
0
"Aurora gripped the Fae-forged blade's"
1
"The small crescent scar on"
2
"Nyx hovered at her shoulder,"
3
"They crouched behind a bramble-choked"
4
"Dusk bled into the trees."
5
"Aurora whispered, nodding toward the"
6
"Nyx's form thinned, tendrils probing"
7
"She straightened, boots sinking into"
8
"Heartstone pendant lay heavy against"
9
"Whatever rift hid here stayed"
10
"Fingers brushed the nearest oak."
11
"Bark yielded like warm wax,"
12
"A shiver raced up her"
13
"The world folded."
14
"Air thickened, laced with scents"
15
"Grass sprang ankle-high underfoot, blades"
16
"Sky arched above, not bruised"
17
"Flowers carpeted the clearing—blooms the"
18
"Nyx solidified beside her, taller"
19
"Aurora knelt, touched a petal."
ratio
0.77
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
113
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
31.75%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
45
technicalSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"Flowers carpeted the clearing—blooms the size of fists, petals layered in iridescent sheaths that shifted from cobalt to flame with every breath."
1
"One cluster unfurled as she passed, stamens uncoiling like tiny serpents, exhaling chimes that layered into a melody sharp as glass."
2
"Distant laughter bubbled, childlike and wild, chased by flutes that wove no tune she knew—notes twisting backward, echoing before the sound struck."
3
"Beyond, paths forked: one dusted white with what looked like crushed bone, another lined with thorns that wept ruby droplets, evaporating mid-fall."
4
"Droplets plinked onto soil, each splash birthing sprouts that twisted into miniature vines, leaves broad and veined purple."
5
"Water flowed uphill, surface skinned with lily pads that beat like hearts, each throb sending ripples that climbed the bank."
6
"White powder shifted under unseen feet, forming prints that filled instantly, erased."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
1
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
1
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
30
tagDensity
0.033
leniency
0.067
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
0.067
78.2748%