Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAYQK2ZHMXG66PG4E50ZK6

Run Details

Duration:
21.7s
Cost:
$0.000184
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the windows of The Raven’s Nest, a steady, insistent drumming that mirrored the pulse in my temples. The air hung thick with the scent of stale beer, woodsmoke, and something vaguely floral, an attempt at masking the decades clinging to the walls. I’d been nursing a scotch, watching the blurry figures navigate the low-lit space, when he appeared. Not a sudden, dramatic entrance. Just… there. Standing beside my table, a silhouette against the gloom, a familiar shape resolving into the broad shoulders and receding hairline of Evan. He hadn't aged well. The sharp angles of his face had softened, blurred around the edges, and the expensive tailoring strained across a frame that looked heavier, slower. He wasn’t smiling. “Rory,” he said, his voice a low rasp, like gravel rolling over stone. I took a slow sip of my scotch, the burn a small comfort. “Evan.” The word felt foreign on my tongue, a fossil unearthed from a forgotten excavation. He didn’t move, just watched me with an unsettling intensity. His hazel eyes, the same shade as Silas’s, held a depth I hadn’t anticipated – a brittle stillness that spoke of a thousand unspoken regrets. The silver signet ring on his right hand gleamed faintly in the dim light, a silent testament to a life lived meticulously, carefully constructed. “It’s been a while,” he finally said, the phrase sounding flat, devoid of genuine feeling. “Ten years, three months, and sixteen days,” I replied, deliberately precise. It felt necessary to quantify the distance between us, to make the silence less…threatening. He shifted his weight, the slight limp in his left leg betraying a vulnerability he’d obviously worked hard to conceal. “You look…different.” “So do you,” I countered, gesturing vaguely around him. “More…burdened.” The rain intensified, a cascade against the glass. I finished my scotch, placing the empty glass on the table with a quiet scrape. “What brings you here, Evan? I thought you were…investing in a vineyard in Tuscany.” A ghost of a smile flickered across his lips, quickly extinguished. “Business. Always business. It suits me.” “Does it?” I leaned back in my chair, studying him closely. He looked like a man wearing a suit that didn’t quite fit, a facade struggling to contain the shadows beneath. “You seem…removed.” “Some things change, Rory,” he said, his gaze fixed on the rain. “People change.” “Some things don’t,” I pressed, the words coming out before I could fully process them. “Like the way you held me. Like the way you…promised.” The air thickened, charged with a static electricity that prickled my skin. He didn't turn to face me. “Don’t.” “Don’t what?” “Don’t dredge this up. It was a mistake.” “A mistake?” I laughed, a short, brittle sound that seemed to echo in the confined space. “Leaving Cardiff? Running across the Channel? Abandoning everything because you told me you loved me, because you said you wanted to build a life with me? That was a mistake, Evan? You shattered my life.” He finally turned then, his eyes dark and guarded. “You were young. Impulsive. You needed to escape.” “I needed you,” I said, the words raw and painful. “I genuinely needed you. And you gave me a beautiful lie.” A pause stretched between us, long and heavy. The only sound was the relentless rain and the murmur of voices from the bar. I watched him closely, searching for a flicker of the man I remembered, the one who had once held a fierce, almost unsettling intensity in his gaze. But it was gone, replaced by a carefully constructed mask of indifference. “I…I sent you money,” he offered, the words sounding apologetic, hollow. “Over the years. Enough to…start over.” “Money isn’t a substitute for a life, Evan,” I said, my voice low and steady. “It doesn't erase the scars.” I touched the crescent-shaped scar on my wrist, a constant reminder of a childhood accident, a small, tangible piece of my past. “This,” I indicated the scar, “is a reminder. You gave me a wound that never truly healed.” He shifted again, his fingers tightening around the signet ring. “I thought I was protecting you. From me.” “Protecting me?” I tilted my head, studying his expression. “By leaving me to drown in a city I didn’t know, to rebuild my life with no resources, no support, just the ghost of a broken promise?” “It was complicated,” he mumbled, avoiding my gaze. “Complicated?” I repeated, raising an eyebrow. "Leaving a woman heartbroken is complicated?" “My work…it required discretion,” he said, his voice clipped. “Things I couldn’t explain.” “So you traded my happiness for your secrets,” I finished for him. “How selfless.” The silence returned, heavier than before. Silas appeared from behind the bar, his face impassive as ever. He placed a fresh glass of scotch in front of me without a word. “You’ve changed,” Evan observed, stating the obvious. “You look…capable.” “I deliver packages,” I replied, offering a wry smile. “It keeps me busy. Pays the rent.” The work was honest, unglamorous, a deliberate rejection of the life I’d once envisioned. “You could have had a different life,” he said, his voice barely above a whisper. “A better life.” “And you would have built that different life for me?” I asked, my voice laced with skepticism. “Or would you have continued to build your own, leaving me as an afterthought?” He didn’t answer. He simply stared at his glass, swirling the amber liquid as if searching for an escape. “I don't understand why you’re here, Evan,” I said, the words tinged with a weary sadness. “Unless you’re looking for absolution. You’re not going to find it here.” He finally looked up, his eyes meeting mine with a fleeting intensity. “It’s…complicated,” he repeated, the words sounding even more defeated than before. “There are things you don't know.” “I know you lied,” I said, my voice firm. “I know you broke my trust. And honestly, Evan, that’s all I need to know.” He reached for his glass, taking a long, slow sip. The rain continued to fall, washing over the windows of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the edges of the room, obscuring the truth. “Don’t think this is over,” he said, his voice low and menacing. “It’s not.” I didn’t reply. I simply watched him, a cold certainty settling over me. Some things, I realized, never truly end. He drained his glass, placed it on the table, and stood up. He didn't offer a goodbye, a farewell, just turned and walked out into the rain, disappearing into the shadows of Soho. I watched him go, the echo of his footsteps fading into the rhythmic drumming of the rain. Silas placed a small bottle of dark rum on the table beside my glass. “Another one?” he asked, his voice devoid of emotion. “Please,” I said, accepting the bottle. I took a long, deliberate sip of the rum, the fiery liquid burning a welcome path down my throat. The rain continued to fall, a relentless, cleansing torrent. “He’s a dangerous man,” Silas said, after a moment of silence. “I know,” I replied, swirling the rum in my glass. “But he’s also a ghost. And ghosts,” I added, looking towards the rain-streaked windows, “are often the most persistent.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
1"I leaned back [back]"
2"the life I’d once [once]"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.559
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
71.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count2
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"deliberately"
2"quickly"
3"truly"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"navigate"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"resolving"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count3
6
word"unspoken"
count1
7
word"testament"
count1
8
word"constructed"
count2
9
word"silence"
count3
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"facade"
count1
13
word"charged"
count1
14
word"echo"
count2
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"mask of indifference"
count1
18
word"reminder"
count2
19
word"tangible"
count1
20
word"eyebrow"
count1
21
word"whisper"
count1
22
word"tinged"
count1
23
word"fleeting"
count1
24
word"footsteps"
count1
25
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"navigate"
2"gloom"
3"familiar"
4"resolving"
5"intensity"
6"unspoken"
7"testament"
8"constructed"
9"silence"
10"weight"
11"flickered"
12"facade"
13"charged"
14"echo"
15"shattered"
16"flicker"
17"mask of indifference"
18"reminder"
19"tangible"
20"eyebrow"
21"whisper"
22"tinged"
23"fleeting"
24"footsteps"
25"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1209
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount855
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.47
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Evan2
Silas4
Soho1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"erability he’d obviously worked hard to conc"
1"quite fit, a facade struggling to contain the shadows beneath"
2"looked like a man wearing a suit that did"
3"sound that seemed to echo in the confined space"
4"as if searching for an escape"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1209
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean25.19
std15.35
cv0.609
sampleLengths
062
157
23
313
428
559
615
725
822
910
1037
1117
1233
1314
1425
1519
162
178
1851
1917
2021
2162
2217
2359
2418
2536
268
2712
2813
2914
3031
319
3230
3318
3431
3519
3628
3729
3824
3932
4014
4120
4233
4331
449
4534
4611
4729
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs156
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences104
ratio0.01
matches
0"His hazel eyes, the same shade as Silas’s, held a depth I hadn’t anticipated – a brittle stillness that spoke of a thousand unspoken regrets."
93.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount857
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.043173862310385065
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.024504084014002333
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean11.63
std6.9
cv0.593
sampleLengths
021
125
216
35
41
51
622
74
824
93
1013
1113
1215
1310
1425
1524
1615
1711
1814
1920
202
219
221
238
2415
2514
2611
276
2811
2920
302
3112
322
3315
3410
3512
366
371
382
398
4016
4135
429
438
4410
4511
468
4715
4827
4912
55.45% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences76
matches
0"I’d been nursing a scotch,"
1"He hadn't aged well."
2"He wasn’t smiling."
3"he said, his voice a"
4"I took a slow sip"
5"He didn’t move, just watched"
6"His hazel eyes, the same"
7"he finally said, the phrase"
8"I replied, deliberately precise"
9"It felt necessary to quantify"
10"He shifted his weight, the"
11"I countered, gesturing vaguely around"
12"I finished my scotch, placing"
13"I leaned back in my"
14"He looked like a man"
15"he said, his gaze fixed"
16"I pressed, the words coming"
17"He didn't turn to face"
18"I laughed, a short, brittle"
19"He finally turned then, his"
ratio0.711
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences76
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"The air hung thick with"
2"I’d been nursing a scotch,"
3"He hadn't aged well."
4"The sharp angles of his"
5"He wasn’t smiling."
6"he said, his voice a"
7"I took a slow sip"
8"The word felt foreign on"
9"He didn’t move, just watched"
10"His hazel eyes, the same"
11"The silver signet ring on"
12"he finally said, the phrase"
13"I replied, deliberately precise"
14"It felt necessary to quantify"
15"He shifted his weight, the"
16"I countered, gesturing vaguely around"
17"The rain intensified, a cascade"
18"I finished my scotch, placing"
19"A ghost of a smile"
ratio0.961
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
27.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The rain hammered against the windows of The Raven’s Nest, a steady, insistent drumming that mirrored the pulse in my temples."
1"The sharp angles of his face had softened, blurred around the edges, and the expensive tailoring strained across a frame that looked heavier, slower."
2"His hazel eyes, the same shade as Silas’s, held a depth I hadn’t anticipated – a brittle stillness that spoke of a thousand unspoken regrets."
3"He simply stared at his glass, swirling the amber liquid as if searching for an escape."
4"The rain continued to fall, washing over the windows of The Raven’s Nest, blurring the edges of the room, obscuring the truth."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rasp, like gravel rolling over stone"
1"The word felt, a fossil unearthed from a forgotten excavation"
2"he finally said, the phrase sounding flat, devoid of genuine feeling"
3"I pressed, the words coming out before I could fully process them"
4"he offered, the words sounding apologetic, hollow"
5"I said, my voice low and steady"
6"he said, his voice clipped"
7"he said, his voice barely above a whisper"
8"I said, the words tinged with a weary sadness"
9"he repeated, the words sounding even more defeated than before"
10"I said, my voice firm"
11"he said, his voice low and menacing"
12"he asked, his voice devoid of emotion"
31.36% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags24
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"I pressed (press)"
1"I laughed (laugh)"
2"he mumbled (mumble)"
3"I repeated (repeat)"
4"Evan observed (observe)"
5"he repeated (repeat)"
6"I added (add)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.814
rawRatio0.292
effectiveRatio0.237
69.3007%