Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAZ6QDT73V1R0DPKQWWKCF

Run Details

Duration:
42.4s
Cost:
$0.000257
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked, a heavy, deliberate sound in the narrow hallway. Rory stared at the door, hand still gripping the delivery bag from the Golden Empress. Chicken and mushroom with extra chili, for Mrs. Sharma. She’d almost forgotten the order. Almost. Because standing on the other side of the door, rain plastering his platinum blond hair to his forehead, was Lucien Moreau. He hadn’t changed, not really. Still impossibly tall, still impeccably dressed in a charcoal suit that somehow looked both timeless and aggressively modern. The heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—were fixed on her, a quiet intensity burning in their depths. “Lucien,” she said, the word a rusty hinge creaking open. “Aurora.” His voice was a low murmur, the French accent still thick despite years in London. He raised an eyebrow, a familiar gesture that used to send a ridiculous flutter through her stomach. Now, it just tightened the knot of apprehension in her chest. “May I come in?” She hesitated. “I’m kind of in the middle of something.” A blatant lie. The only thing she was in the middle of was avoiding him. He didn’t push, just stood there, a solid, elegant barrier against the hallway. The rain drummed a steady rhythm against the windowpanes of the flat above the curry house. “It’s raining,” he observed, stating the obvious with a faintly amused tilt of his head. Rory sighed, resigned. “Fine. Come in.” She stepped back, holding the door open a fraction longer than necessary, observing him as he moved past. He shook the rain from his coat, the tailored fabric rippling around his lean frame. He smelled of rain, and something else—a subtle, expensive cologne she couldn’t quite place, overlaid with the faintest hint of something older, something indefinable, that always made her skin prickle. The flat was, as always, a chaotic testament to Eva’s tireless research. Books spilled from overflowing shelves, scrolls lay unrolled across the ancient Persian rug, and stacks of notes threatened to topple from every available surface. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, materialized from beneath a pile of arcane texts, arching his back and emitting a questioning meow. “Hello, Ptolemy,” Lucien said, offering a slow, deliberate scratch behind the cat’s ears. Ptolemy, usually wary of strangers, seemed to accept Lucien’s overture with surprising ease, purring loudly as the man’s long fingers stroked his fur. “He likes you,” Rory said, acutely aware of the way Lucien’s attention seemed to encompass everything in the room, including the feline. “Don’t let it go to your head.” He chuckled, a low, rumbling sound that vibrated through the cramped space. “I’ve dealt with far more discerning creatures than a tabby cat, Aurora.” She set the delivery bag on the already crowded kitchen counter, carefully avoiding a stack of crumbling manuscripts. “So, what are you doing here? You haven’t exactly been a regular visitor since…” she trailed off, unwilling to voice the unspoken words—since the disastrous end of their brief, intense entanglement six months ago. He followed her gaze to the kitchen, his expression unreadable. He leaned heavily on his cane, the ivory handle gleaming in the dim light. "I need your help." Rory snorted. “My help? Lucien, you’re a fixer. You solve problems. People don’t usually come to me for help—unless they’ve run out of other options.” “This is… different,” he said, his voice losing some of its usual polish, laced with an uncommon urgency. “It’s a matter of… family.” The word hung in the air, heavy with unspoken history. Lucien rarely spoke of his past, of Marseille, of his mother, and certainly not of the shadowy realm of Avaros from which his father hailed. Family was a deliberately avoided topic. “Family?” Rory echoed, skepticism dripping from her voice. “Let me guess, demonic squabbles? A rogue imp wreaking havoc in Kensington?” He ignored her sarcasm. “My sister needs assistance. She's... unwell.” Rory felt a flicker of something—pity, perhaps—but quickly smothered it. He was playing a game, she was sure of it. A subtle manipulation, a calculated move to draw her back in. “And you think I can help? I deliver Chinese food and try to avoid Evan’s increasingly frantic calls.” Evan. Her ex. The reason she’d come to London in the first place. The reason she’d tried to build a life as far away from him as possible. Lucien’s eyes narrowed slightly. “You possess a certain… acuity, Aurora. A knack for seeing patterns others miss. And a remarkable resourcefulness.” He paused, his gaze lingering on the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. “You've faced difficult circumstances, haven't you?" Rory instinctively pulled her sleeve down, concealing the faint white mark. It was a relic of a childhood accident, a reminder of a time before the world had gotten complicated. “Everyone faces difficult circumstances, Lucien.” "Yours seem… particularly persistent." He pushed himself off the cane, moving with an unexpected grace despite his reliance on it. He closed the distance between them, his presence filling the small space, forcing her to tilt her head back to meet his gaze. "This isn't about past grievances, Aurora. This is about preventing something… dangerous. Something that could affect more than just my family.” The scent of rain and expensive cologne intensified, swirling around her. She could feel the familiar pull, the dangerous magnetism that had almost consumed her before. She reminded herself of Evan's betrayal, of the raw hurt and the carefully constructed walls she’d built around her heart. “What exactly do you need me to do?” she asked, her voice deliberately neutral. “I need you to translate this,” he said, producing a small, tightly rolled scroll from his coat pocket. He unrolled it carefully, revealing delicate, unfamiliar script penned in faded ink. “It’s an ancient dialect of Avarosian. I believe it describes a ritual – a binding ritual - used to contain a rogue entity.” Rory took the scroll, her fingers brushing against his. A jolt of electricity shot up her arm, a visceral reminder of the potent connection that still existed between them. The script was complex, interwoven with archaic symbols she’d never encountered before. “Avarosian?” she murmured, studying the text. Her knowledge of obscure languages was a quirky side effect of her parents’ academic pursuits, and a skill she’d honed during her less-than-stellar attempt at a law degree. “That’s… remarkably obscure, even for Avarosian. Where did you get this?” “It came into my possession… recently. It's fragmented, incomplete. But I believe it holds the key to preventing a significant breach.” His eyes, amber and black, locked onto hers. "I need your skills, Aurora. I need your insight." Rory looked around the cluttered flat, at Eva’s piles of books, at Ptolemy dozing in a sunbeam. She glanced back at Lucien, at the weary lines around his eyes, at the quiet desperation that lay beneath his impeccable facade. She knew this was a mistake. Getting involved with Lucien again was a recipe for disaster. But something in his expression—the vulnerability she rarely saw—stuck in her throat. “And what do you think I get out of this?” she asked, her voice barely a whisper. A ghost of a smile played on Lucien’s lips. “The satisfaction of preventing a catastrophe. And perhaps… a chance to mend a few broken things.” He paused, his gaze intense. “Besides, Aurora, you always did enjoy a challenge.” Rory stared at the scroll, and then back at Lucien, the weight of his request, and the dangerous lure of him, pressing down on her. She knew, with a sickening certainty, that she was already in too deep.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
64.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1264
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count3
2
adverb"deliberately"
count2
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"carefully"
2"deliberately"
3"quickly"
4"slightly"
5"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1264
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"depths"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"apprehension"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"testament"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count2
10
word"unreadable"
count1
11
word"gleaming"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"calculated"
count1
15
word"remarkable"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count2
17
word"could feel"
count1
18
word"constructed"
count1
19
word"complex"
count1
20
word"fragmented"
count1
21
word"facade"
count1
22
word"whisper"
count1
23
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"depths"
2"eyebrow"
3"familiar"
4"stomach"
5"apprehension"
6"chaotic"
7"testament"
8"vibrated"
9"unspoken"
10"unreadable"
11"gleaming"
12"echoed"
13"flicker"
14"calculated"
15"remarkable"
16"reminder"
17"could feel"
18"constructed"
19"complex"
20"fragmented"
21"facade"
22"whisper"
23"weight"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
87.20% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences77
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1254
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
96.98% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount943
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Mrs1
Lucien10
Moreau1
French1
London2
Rory10
Eva3
Persian1
Ptolemy3
Marseille1
Avaros1
Evan2
persons
0"Mrs"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
5"Evan"
places
0"Golden"
1"London"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.97
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place, overlaid with the faintest hint of something older, something indefinable, that always made her skin prickle"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1254
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
85.67% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean36.88
std16.59
cv0.45
sampleLengths
062
139
210
348
425
544
66
763
856
936
1029
1124
1252
1328
1425
1523
1641
1720
1810
1977
2040
2135
2264
2346
2414
2553
2641
2745
2838
2939
3028
3117
3238
3338
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"were fixed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs146
matches
0"was avoiding"
1"was playing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences93
ratio0.054
matches
0"The heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—were fixed on her, a quiet intensity burning in their depths."
1"He smelled of rain, and something else—a subtle, expensive cologne she couldn’t quite place, overlaid with the faintest hint of something older, something indefinable, that always made her skin prickle."
2"“So, what are you doing here? You haven’t exactly been a regular visitor since…” she trailed off, unwilling to voice the unspoken words—since the disastrous end of their brief, intense entanglement six months ago."
3"Rory felt a flicker of something—pity, perhaps—but quickly smothered it."
4"But something in his expression—the vulnerability she rarely saw—stuck in her throat."
84.20% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount880
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.05113636363636364
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.02727272727272727
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.48
std7.38
cv0.547
sampleLengths
011
115
28
31
45
51
621
75
818
916
1010
1116
1217
1311
144
152
1611
1712
1813
1916
2015
213
223
2318
2415
2530
2612
2724
2820
2913
3023
3122
327
3312
3412
3518
3634
3710
3814
394
402
4123
4218
435
4410
4525
466
478
4812
494
58.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3978494623655914
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
22.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences71
matches
0"She’d almost forgotten the order."
1"He hadn’t changed, not really."
2"she said, the word a"
3"His voice was a low"
4"He raised an eyebrow, a"
5"He didn’t push, just stood"
6"he observed, stating the obvious"
7"She stepped back, holding the"
8"He shook the rain from"
9"He smelled of rain, and"
10"He chuckled, a low, rumbling"
11"She set the delivery bag"
12"she trailed off, unwilling to"
13"He followed her gaze to"
14"He leaned heavily on his"
15"he said, his voice losing"
16"He ignored her sarcasm."
17"He was playing a game,"
18"He paused, his gaze lingering"
19"It was a relic of"
ratio0.493
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences71
matches
0"The deadbolts clicked, a heavy,"
1"Rory stared at the door,"
2"Chicken and mushroom with extra"
3"She’d almost forgotten the order."
4"He hadn’t changed, not really."
5"The heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
6"she said, the word a"
7"His voice was a low"
8"He raised an eyebrow, a"
9"A blatant lie"
10"The only thing she was"
11"He didn’t push, just stood"
12"The rain drummed a steady"
13"he observed, stating the obvious"
14"Rory sighed, resigned."
15"She stepped back, holding the"
16"He shook the rain from"
17"He smelled of rain, and"
18"The flat was, as always,"
19"Books spilled from overflowing shelves,"
ratio0.93
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Because standing on the other"
1"Now, it just tightened the"
ratio0.028
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He closed the distance between them, his presence filling the small space, forcing her to tilt her head back to meet his gaze."
1"She could feel the familiar pull, the dangerous magnetism that had almost consumed her before."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory echoed, skepticism dripping from her voice"
1"she asked, her voice deliberately neutral"
2"she asked, her voice barely a whisper"
3"He paused, his gaze intense"
91.18% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.265
leniency0.529
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.118
75.2628%