Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAZJRHENJ0WACYRJ4T772F

Run Details

Duration:
6.4s
Cost:
$0.000289
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something like rusted iron left too long in the rain. Aurora Carter adjusted the strap of her delivery bag, her fingers brushing the cold metal of the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. The pendant pulsed faintly, a warmth she hadn’t noticed before, like a slow, steady heartbeat pressed against her skin. The Grove wasn’t supposed to look like this. She’d memorised the way in—past the standing stones, where the oaks grew gnarled and twisted, their bark blackened as if scorched by something unseen. But tonight, the path twisted unnaturally, the trees leaning in closer, their branches scraping against each other like skeletal fingers. The wildflowers, usually vibrant and untouched, lay crushed underfoot, their petals trampled into the mud. Aurora exhaled through her nose, her breath fogging in the cold night air. *Just a delivery. Just a package.* She’d been sent by Yu-Fei to drop off a shipment of rare herbs to a contact in Richmond. Nothing more. But the way the Grove had *shifted* since she last stood here—if she’d ever stood here before—made her skin prickle. A twig snapped. She froze. The sound came from the left, just beyond the dappled light of the moon filtering through the canopy. Her pulse hammered in her throat, loud enough she was sure the trees would hear it. She turned slowly, her boots sinking slightly into the damp earth. Nothing. Only the whisper of wind through the leaves. Aurora swallowed. *Paranoia. Exhaustion.* She’d been on her feet since dawn, the city’s noise still ringing in her ears despite the distance. But the Grove had never felt this… *wrong* before. She took another step forward, her boot catching on a root. The pendant warmed again, pressing against her ribs. She reached up, fingers brushing the silver chain, half-expecting it to burn her skin. It didn’t. But the warmth lingered, like a promise. A rustle. This time, it wasn’t the wind. Aurora’s breath hitched. She turned, her gaze darting between the shadows. The trees here were taller, their trunks swallowing the moonlight entirely. She could see nothing but darkness, but the air *shifted*, as if something had moved just beyond her vision. She stepped back, her heel bumping against something solid. A rock? A root? Her fingers curled into her palm, nails digging into her skin. Then— A whisper. Not wind. Not animal. Something *human*, but wrong. Distorted, like a voice speaking through water. Aurora’s breath came faster. She forced herself to move, her steps measured, deliberate. The pendant pulsed again, harder this time. She could feel it, a low, steady vibration against her chest. *What the hell is happening?* She reached the edge of the clearing, her eyes straining into the dark. The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces smooth and unmarked—unlike the ones she’d seen before, which bore strange, carved symbols. These were bare. A sound like tearing fabric. Aurora’s blood turned to ice. She spun, her hand flying to her throat. The trees behind her *moved*. Not the wind. Not branches swaying. The trunks themselves seemed to shift, their bark splitting and reforming, like living flesh. The pendant burned against her skin now, hot enough to sear. A voice, clear and cold, slithered from the dark. *"You shouldn’t have come."* Aurora’s breath left her in a rush. She stumbled back, her heel catching on something unseen. She fell, her palms scraping against the damp earth. The pendant slipped from her grip, clattering against the ground. The voice came again, closer this time. *"The stones don’t let you in. They let you *through*."* Aurora’s fingers clawed at the dirt. She didn’t dare look up. *"Who—?"* The voice didn’t answer. Instead, the darkness *moved*. Shadows pooled at her feet, rising like smoke, twisting into shapes—too many limbs, too many eyes. The pendant pulsed violently, its warmth searing her skin. She scrambled back, her body betraying her with every step. The trees loomed closer, their branches twisting like grasping hands. Then— A hand closed around her ankle. Aurora screamed. The pendant flew from her fingers, clattering into the dark. The hand yanked her forward, her body slamming into something solid. She gasped, her lungs burning, as the darkness swallowed her whole.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
85.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount713
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount713
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count2
7
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"whisper"
4"measured"
5"could feel"
6"loomed"
7"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans12
markdownWords34
totalWords705
ratio0.048
matches
0"Just a delivery. Just a package."
1"shifted"
2"Paranoia. Exhaustion."
3"wrong"
4"shifted"
5"human"
6"What the hell is happening?"
7"moved"
8"\"You shouldn’t have come.\""
9"\"The stones don’t let you in. They let you *through"
10"\"Who—?\""
11"moved"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount690
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone1
Grove3
Yu-Fei1
Richmond1
Aurora9
persons
0"Carter"
1"Grove"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
globalScore0.848
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like rusted iron left too long in"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount705
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean18.55
std18.12
cv0.976
sampleLengths
059
18
259
359
43
52
645
71
88
931
1042
112
126
1341
1424
151
162
1715
1831
195
2036
215
225
2333
2411
259
264
2735
287
2910
3011
311
3233
3320
341
356
362
3732
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"been sent"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences84
ratio0.083
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something like rusted iron left too long in the rain."
1"She’d memorised the way in—past the standing stones, where the oaks grew gnarled and twisted, their bark blackened as if scorched by something unseen."
2"But the way the Grove had *shifted* since she last stood here—if she’d ever stood here before—made her skin prickle."
3"Then—"
4"The standing stones loomed ahead, their surfaces smooth and unmarked—unlike the ones she’d seen before, which bore strange, carved symbols."
5"Shadows pooled at her feet, rising like smoke, twisting into shapes—too many limbs, too many eyes."
6"Then—"
85.12% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount698
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"untouched, lay crushed underfoot,"
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.050143266475644696
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.011461318051575931
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean8.39
std5.95
cv0.708
sampleLengths
018
122
219
38
424
520
615
713
83
921
102
1120
123
132
1418
1516
1611
171
188
192
201
2119
227
232
2411
258
2614
272
287
292
306
313
328
3311
3419
359
362
372
3811
391
402
412
422
434
447
454
469
477
4811
495
36.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences65
matches
0"*Just a delivery."
1"Just a package.* She’d been"
2"Only the whisper of wind"
3"Instead, the darkness *moved*."
ratio0.062
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences65
matches
0"She’d memorised the way in—past"
1"Her pulse hammered in her"
2"She turned slowly, her boots"
3"She took another step forward,"
4"She reached up, fingers brushing"
5"She turned, her gaze darting"
6"She could see nothing but"
7"She stepped back, her heel"
8"Her fingers curled into her"
9"She forced herself to move,"
10"She could feel it, a"
11"She reached the edge of"
12"She spun, her hand flying"
13"She stumbled back, her heel"
14"She fell, her palms scraping"
15"She didn’t dare look up."
16"She scrambled back, her body"
17"She gasped, her lungs burning,"
ratio0.277
52.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences65
matches
0"The air smelled of damp"
1"Aurora Carter adjusted the strap"
2"The pendant pulsed faintly, a"
3"The Grove wasn’t supposed to"
4"She’d memorised the way in—past"
5"The wildflowers, usually vibrant and"
6"Aurora exhaled through her nose,"
7"A twig snapped."
8"The sound came from the"
9"Her pulse hammered in her"
10"She turned slowly, her boots"
11"Exhaustion.* She’d been on her"
12"She took another step forward,"
13"The pendant warmed again, pressing"
14"She reached up, fingers brushing"
15"This time, it wasn’t the"
16"Aurora’s breath hitched."
17"She turned, her gaze darting"
18"The trees here were taller,"
19"She could see nothing but"
ratio0.815
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She’d memorised the way in—past the standing stones, where the oaks grew gnarled and twisted, their bark blackened as if scorched by something unseen."
1"But tonight, the path twisted unnaturally, the trees leaning in closer, their branches scraping against each other like skeletal fingers."
2"The trunks themselves seemed to shift, their bark splitting and reforming, like living flesh."
3"Shadows pooled at her feet, rising like smoke, twisting into shapes—too many limbs, too many eyes."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.1512%