Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYAZQE8K388C9YVEH1WCE97

Run Details

Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.000183
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered against the slick asphalt, reflecting the neon glow of The Raven’s Nest in fractured shards. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her worn leather watch, the rhythmic tick a counterpoint to the drumming downpour. Her breath plumed white in the frigid air as she followed him. Tomás Herrera. A medic, a shadow, and increasingly, a thread pulling her toward something rotten beneath London’s surface. He moved with a practiced ease, a dark silhouette weaving through the crowded streets of Soho. The rain plastered his dark curls to his forehead, revealing the olive skin beneath. He didn't glance back. Didn’t acknowledge her presence. Just kept moving. “Herrera,” she called, her voice clipped and tight. The words sliced through the rain and the din of the city. He paused at a red light, then turned. His brown eyes, warm and hesitant, met hers. A flicker of something – fear? – crossed his face before he melted back into the shadows. Quinn pushed off the curb, her boots splashing in puddles. She gained on him, the relentless rain mirroring her urgency. He navigated a maze of narrow alleyways, the smell of damp brick and exhaust fumes thick in the air. The streetlights cast an unsettling orange glow, painting the scene in hues of decay. “Stop,” she commanded, her hand hovering over her holster. He didn’t. Instead, he ducked into a doorway, disappearing from view. A wave of frustration washed over Quinn. She slammed her hand against the wall, the impact jarring her arm. “He’s anticipating me,” she muttered, scanning the alley. Nothing but shadows and the persistent rain. She checked her watch again. Seventeen minutes past the last confirmed sighting. The rain intensified, turning the street into a river. She adjusted her coat, pulling it tighter around her. The memory of DS Morris, lost three years ago in a case steeped in the impossible, tightened its grip on her chest. A case that had started with whispers of something beyond human comprehension. She circled the block, checking doorways, windows, anything that might offer a clue to his next move. The Raven’s Nest’s neon sign pulsed with an almost mocking invitation. Silas, the bar’s owner, was a collector of secrets, a subtle dealer in information. He’d likely have noticed Herrera’s presence. She pushed open the heavy wooden door of the bar, the smell of stale beer and something vaguely medicinal hitting her. The interior was dim, illuminated by flickering candles and the green glow of the neon sign outside. A handful of patrons huddled at the bar, their faces obscured by shadows. Silas, a stout man with a perpetually bored expression, wiped down the counter with a damp cloth. "Silas," she said, her voice authoritative. "Have you seen Tomás Herrera?" He didn’t immediately respond. He finished wiping the counter, his gaze sweeping over her with an unsettlingly perceptive intensity. “Lots of faces pass through here, Detective. You'll have to be more specific.” “He was here earlier. Asking about… unusual remedies.” Silas paused, his eyes narrowing slightly. “Unusual remedies, you say? Plenty of folks around here deal in unusual remedies. The Veil Market’s been particularly active lately.” The Veil Market. A ripple of unease passed through her. An underground black market for supernatural goods, tucked away beneath the city. Dangerous territory. The kind of place she actively avoided. “Tell me where it is,” she demanded. He hesitated, a flicker of something unreadable in his eyes. “It shifts. Like a shadow. There’s a bone token required to enter. Moves every full moon.” “And he’s headed there?” “Possibly. He’s a… delicate man. Requires specific treatments.” Silas leaned closer, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. “He's been coming to me for a few weeks, requesting ingredients for a… revitalization potion. Something potent.” Quinn felt a knot tighten in her stomach. Revitalization potion. It sounded like a euphemism. A way to mask something darker. “Does he say what he needs it for?” “Just that he ‘needs to return to his roots.’” Silas shrugged. "Don't ask me too many questions, Detective. Some doors are best left unopened." She ignored his warning. "The entrance." Silas pointed towards a darkened corner of the bar, obscured by a towering bookshelf packed with ancient maps and faded photographs. “Behind the cartography. Only those with the token can see it.” Quinn moved towards the bookshelf, her hand instinctively reaching for her holster. The air grew colder as she approached the corner. The rain outside seemed to intensify, drumming against the windows with renewed ferocity. She ran her fingers along the spines of the books, searching for a hidden latch, a mechanism. Then she felt it. A subtle shift in the shelf, a barely perceptible click. The bookshelf swung inward, revealing a narrow, descending staircase disappearing into darkness. The stench of damp earth and something metallic – blood, perhaps – wafted up from below. She hesitated for only a moment. The rain continued to batter the building, the city’s discordant symphony masking the deeper, more unsettling sounds emanating from the depths beneath. She took a step down, the steel of her boots echoing in the darkness. The staircase opened into a vast, cavernous space – The Veil Market. It was a chaotic sprawl of stalls and makeshift tents, illuminated by flickering oil lamps and the eerie glow of enchanted items. Vendors hawked their wares in hushed tones, their faces obscured by hooded cloaks. The air was thick with the scent of strange herbs, volatile chemicals, and something indefinably… ancient. Tomás Herrera was there, haggling with a wizened woman over a small, intricately carved wooden box. He was surrounded by a small group of figures, their faces hidden in shadow. Quinn moved silently through the throng, her eyes scanning the crowd, searching for him. He didn’t notice her approach until she was almost upon him. He turned, his eyes widening with a flash of alarm. He instinctively reached for the wooden box, clutching it tightly to his chest. “Herrera,” she said, her voice devoid of emotion. “You’re under arrest.” He didn’t resist. He simply raised his hands, his expression a mixture of resignation and something akin to… sadness. “Detective,” he said, his voice soft. “You shouldn’t be here.” “I have reason to believe you’re involved in illegal activities. Specifically, trafficking in… esoteric substances.” “I’m a healer,” he corrected, his hand tightening around the wooden box. “I provide care. That's all.” “The ‘revitalization potion’ Silas mentioned. It’s more than just care, isn't it, Herrera?” Before he could respond, a man stepped out from behind one of the stalls. Tall, imposing, and cloaked in black, his face was hidden in shadow. He moved with a predatory grace, his hand resting on the hilt of a silver dagger. “He offers solace, Detective,” the man said, his voice a low, gravelly rasp. “A temporary reprieve. But some wounds… they demand a deeper cure. And certain cures require a sacrifice.” Quinn recognized the scent immediately – ozone and decay. The unmistakable signature of a Revenant. One of the creatures her partner, DS Morris, had investigated before his death. The rain intensified, seeming to press against the makeshift walls of the market, as if eager to drag the secrets beneath the city to the surface. She knew, with a chilling certainty, that this was not just a chase. It was a descent into something far darker, something that reached back into the forgotten corners of London’s past. She drew her weapon, the cold steel a familiar comfort in the chaos. "I'm not leaving without him," she said, her eyes fixed on the Revenant. “And I won't hesitate to ensure he doesn’t endanger anyone else."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1266
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1266
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"practiced ease"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count2
4
word"navigated"
count1
5
word"anticipating"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"symphony"
count1
13
word"depths"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"chaotic"
count1
16
word"imposing"
count1
17
word"solace"
count1
18
word"chilling"
count1
19
word"familiar"
count1
20
word"ensure"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"rhythmic"
2"practiced ease"
3"flicker"
4"navigated"
5"anticipating"
6"scanning"
7"pulsed"
8"intensity"
9"unreadable"
10"whisper"
11"stomach"
12"symphony"
13"depths"
14"echoing"
15"chaotic"
16"imposing"
17"solace"
18"chilling"
19"familiar"
20"ensure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences100
matches
0"A wave of frustration"
1"A ripple of unease"
2"felt a knot"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1272
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1045
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Harlow1
Quinn7
Herrera3
London2
Soho1
Morris2
Veil2
Market2
Revenant2
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Herrera"
5"Morris"
6"Silas"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something akin to…"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1272
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean30.29
std17.84
cv0.589
sampleLengths
064
141
220
333
453
59
630
715
864
948
1068
1111
1232
138
1426
1531
167
1726
184
1935
2021
218
2224
236
2432
2551
2642
2742
2863
2944
3034
3111
3219
3310
3415
3517
3613
3742
3830
3928
4058
4137
98.25% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"was surrounded"
1"was hidden"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs166
matches(empty)
21.79% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences118
ratio0.042
matches
0"A flicker of something – fear?"
1"– crossed his face before he melted back into the shadows."
2"The stench of damp earth and something metallic – blood, perhaps – wafted up from below."
3"The staircase opened into a vast, cavernous space – The Veil Market."
4"Quinn recognized the scent immediately – ozone and decay."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1039
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.030798845043310877
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01828681424446583
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean10.78
std5.37
cv0.499
sampleLengths
017
117
212
32
416
516
614
74
84
93
108
1112
128
138
146
1511
1610
1710
1819
1914
209
212
229
237
2412
258
267
275
287
299
309
3122
3212
3317
3411
3514
366
3721
3817
3913
4017
416
425
434
4415
4513
468
476
4820
493
49.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3474576271186441
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"Just kept moving."
1"Instead, he ducked into a"
2"Then she felt it."
ratio0.033
46.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences92
matches
0"Her breath plumed white in"
1"He moved with a practiced"
2"He didn't glance back."
3"she called, her voice clipped"
4"He paused at a red"
5"His brown eyes, warm and"
6"She gained on him, the"
7"He navigated a maze of"
8"she commanded, her hand hovering"
9"She slammed her hand against"
10"she muttered, scanning the alley"
11"She checked her watch again."
12"She adjusted her coat, pulling"
13"She circled the block, checking"
14"He’d likely have noticed Herrera’s"
15"She pushed open the heavy"
16"she said, her voice authoritative"
17"He didn’t immediately respond."
18"He finished wiping the counter,"
19"He hesitated, a flicker of"
ratio0.435
14.35% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences92
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted her"
1"Her breath plumed white in"
2"A medic, a shadow, and"
3"He moved with a practiced"
4"The rain plastered his dark"
5"He didn't glance back."
6"she called, her voice clipped"
7"The words sliced through the"
8"He paused at a red"
9"His brown eyes, warm and"
10"A flicker of something –"
11"Quinn pushed off the curb,"
12"She gained on him, the"
13"He navigated a maze of"
14"The streetlights cast an unsettling"
15"she commanded, her hand hovering"
16"A wave of frustration washed"
17"She slammed her hand against"
18"she muttered, scanning the alley"
19"Nothing but shadows and the"
ratio0.891
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Before he could respond, a"
ratio0.011
88.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She circled the block, checking doorways, windows, anything that might offer a clue to his next move."
1"Quinn moved silently through the throng, her eyes scanning the crowd, searching for him."
2"The rain intensified, seeming to press against the makeshift walls of the market, as if eager to drag the secrets beneath the city to the surface."
3"It was a descent into something far darker, something that reached back into the forgotten corners of London’s past."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she commanded, her hand hovering over her holster"
1"she said, her voice authoritative"
2"Silas leaned, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper"
3"she said, her voice devoid of emotion"
4"he said, his voice soft"
5"he corrected, his hand tightening around the wooden box"
6"the man said, his voice a low, gravelly rasp"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she demanded (demand)"
2"he corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.2
79.7045%