| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1259 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.57% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1259 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "reminder" | | 5 | "glinting" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "wavered" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "loomed" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 131 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 24 | | markdownWords | 40 | | totalWords | 1250 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "“You feel it too.”" | | 1 | "it" | | 2 | "different" | | 3 | "hungry" | | 4 | "leaned" | | 5 | "“The grove is a door. Not the destination.”" | | 6 | "is" | | 7 | "clean" | | 8 | "bright" | | 9 | "them" | | 10 | "“We’re not alone.”" | | 11 | "stood there" | | 12 | "shifted" | | 13 | "pulled" | | 14 | "hungered" | | 15 | "“Run.”" | | 16 | "breathing" | | 17 | "waiting" | | 18 | "pulsed" | | 19 | "“Go.”" | | 20 | "snapped" | | 21 | "real" | | 22 | "“You shouldn’t have come.”" | | 23 | "behind" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1196 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.59 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 9 | | Shade | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Rory | 19 | | Isolde | 10 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Silas | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Fae | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Shade" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.706 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.8 | | wordCount | 1250 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the sickly, bruised light of the grove, but something *clean*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 20.49 | | std | 20.29 | | cv | 0.99 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 84 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 67 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 58 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 67 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 53 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 58 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 20 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 1 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 51 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | | 0 | "was walking" | | 1 | "was breathing" | | 2 | "was watching" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "The Shade’s violet eyes flickered—once, twice—before settling on the path ahead, which wasn’t a path at all." | | 1 | "The trees here were wrong—too tall, their bark etched with spirals that pulsed faintly, like veins beneath translucent skin." | | 2 | "The air here was warmer, thick with the scent of something sweet and rotting at once—like overripe fruit left to ferment in the sun." | | 3 | "It was a smear of colours—amber bleeding into violet, then something darker, like the bruise beneath a cut." | | 4 | "And beyond it—light." | | 5 | "Their forms wavered, like heat haze over pavement, but she could make them out—just." | | 6 | "She could feel it—the world *breathing*, watching, *waiting*." | | 7 | "She stepped through the stones—and vanished." | | 8 | "She lunged through the stones—and the world *snapped* back into place." |
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| 88.53% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1205 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 64 | | adverbRatio | 0.053112033195020746 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005809128630705394 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 8.8 | | std | 6.27 | | cv | 0.712 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 35 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 40.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.29577464788732394 | | totalSentences | 142 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 84.75% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the grove opened up." | | 1 | "Of course she wouldn’t touch" | | 2 | "Then she saw the figures" |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 1 | "It was a shift in" | | 2 | "It was more a reminder" | | 3 | "She didn’t ask how." | | 4 | "She didn’t ask why they" | | 5 | "Her own steps made wet," | | 6 | "It pooled on the ground," | | 7 | "She was too busy watching" | | 8 | "It was a smear of" | | 9 | "Their branches twisted into shapes" | | 10 | "It was *hungry*." | | 11 | "She adjusted the Heartstone pendant" | | 12 | "It pulsed once, twice, warm" | | 13 | "She didn’t know." | | 14 | "she asked, though she already" | | 15 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 16 | "It was warm." | | 17 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 18 | "she said, though the words" | | 19 | "She was too busy watching" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 36.27% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 100 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled wrong the" | | 1 | "Rory’s boots sank into damp" | | 2 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 3 | "The Shade’s violet eyes flickered—once," | | 4 | "It was a shift in" | | 5 | "Isolde moved first, her silver" | | 6 | "The trees here were wrong—too" | | 7 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours," | | 8 | "Isolde murmured, though her voice" | | 9 | "It was more a reminder" | | 10 | "Rory exhaled sharply, her fingers" | | 11 | "The metal was cold, as" | | 12 | "She didn’t ask how." | | 13 | "She didn’t ask why they" | | 14 | "Questions would come later, when" | | 15 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadow" | | 16 | "The ground beneath their feet" | | 17 | "Rory envied that." | | 18 | "Her own steps made wet," | | 19 | "The standing stones fell away," |
| | ratio | 0.847 | |
| 84.75% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Because then she saw it." | | 1 | "Because the voice hadn’t come" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 6.08% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "She glanced at Nyx, who stood motionless beside her, their shadowed form drinking in the scene like a thirsty thing." | | 1 | "Nyx drifted forward, their shadow stretching unnaturally long, as if the light itself was reluctant to touch them." | | 2 | "Her own steps made wet, sucking sounds, like she was walking through mud that wasn’t there." | | 3 | "Vines coiled around ancient oaks, their leaves broad and waxy, dripping with dew that wasn’t dew." | | 4 | "Their branches twisted into shapes that made Rory’s stomach clench." | | 5 | "Nyx moved again, their shadow detaching from their form and slithering ahead like a living thing." | | 6 | "The ground here was soft, almost spongy, as if the land itself was breathing." | | 7 | "Rory turned and sprinted, her lungs burning, her boots slipping in the damp earth." | | 8 | "Nyx was a blur of shifting shadow, their form flickering in and out of sight as they kept pace beside her." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, though her voice carried no warning" | | 1 | "she said, though the words felt stupid even as they left her mouth" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |