| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.35 | | leniency | 0.7 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 868 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 868 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "scanning" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "depths" | | 13 | "perfect" | | 14 | "silk" | | 15 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 57 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 857 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "clicking" | | 1 | "wrong" | | 2 | "door" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 41.75% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 739 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.17 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Nyx | 8 | | Isolde | 4 | | Veil | 4 | | Earth | 1 | | Courts | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.417 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 47.96% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if whispering secrets she didn’t yet understand" | | 1 | "not quite" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 857 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 27 | | mean | 31.74 | | std | 19.87 | | cv | 0.626 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 81 | | 1 | 73 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 41 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 45 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 32 |
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| 92.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "being tapped" | | 1 | "was stretched" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.1 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was thick with the scent of something older than the earth itself—warm, damp earth mingled with the faintest tang of iron, like the breath of a sleeping beast." | | 1 | "The air here moved differently—warmer, slower." | | 2 | "Aurora exhaled, the scent of wildflowers—something unfamiliar but intoxicating—filling her lungs." | | 3 | "She knew of the Veil—had read about it in the margins of her pre-law textbooks, the way it stretched between Earth and Hel, between the Fae Courts and the mortal plane." | | 4 | "The standing stones pulsed, their bark glowing faintly, and from the depths of the grove, something emerged—a figure draped in tattered robes, its form shifting between solid and shadow." | | 5 | "The moment the tip touched the shadow’s arm, the creature shrieked—a sound like breaking glass—and dissolved into a storm of black smoke." | | 6 | "A new sound filled the air—a chorus of whispers, a chorus of voices speaking in unison." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 750 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "soft, moss-covered ground." |
| | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.02666666666666667 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006666666666666667 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 12.24 | | std | 6.87 | | cv | 0.561 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 12 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 31 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 29 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 42.38% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3142857142857143 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, with a sound like" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 1 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 2 | "she murmured, her voice a" | | 3 | "She knew of the Veil—had" | | 4 | "It was Nyx, but not" | | 5 | "Their form was stretched, elongated," | | 6 | "It moved with unnatural grace," | | 7 | "It wore a robe of" |
| | ratio | 0.143 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here was thick" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter adjusted the strap" | | 2 | "The glow inside it had" | | 3 | "She stepped forward, her boots" | | 4 | "The standing stones of the" | | 5 | "The air here moved differently—warmer," | | 6 | "She glanced at Nyx, who" | | 7 | "Nyx asked, their voice a" | | 8 | "Aurora exhaled, the scent of" | | 9 | "Isolde’s silver hair brushed against" | | 10 | "she murmured, her voice a" | | 11 | "A gust of wind howled" | | 12 | "The air grew colder, the" | | 13 | "Nyx’s form flickered, their silhouette" | | 14 | "Aurora asked, her pulse quickening" | | 15 | "Isolde’s fingers traced the curve" | | 16 | "Aurora’s breath hitched." | | 17 | "She knew of the Veil—had" | | 18 | "This was alive." | | 19 | "A low, rhythmic *clicking* echoed" |
| | ratio | 0.929 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 61.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 35 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The glow inside it had dimmed since she’d last felt its warmth near a Hel portal, but it still hummed faintly, as if whispering secrets she didn’t yet understan…" | | 1 | "She glanced at Nyx, who stood just behind her, their shadow shifting between solid and mist, their violet eyes fixed on the ancient carvings." | | 2 | "Nyx’s form flickered, their silhouette dissolving into the shadows before reforming with a gasp." | | 3 | "The standing stones pulsed, their bark glowing faintly, and from the depths of the grove, something emerged—a figure draped in tattered robes, its form shifting…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx asked, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice a thread of static" | | 2 | "Aurora asked, her pulse quickening" | | 3 | "Aurora said, her voice steady despite the terror clawing at her throat" | | 4 | "Aurora said, her voice barely above a whisper" |
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| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.35 | | leniency | 0.7 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |