Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB0CS0N91REB8W8DG2ZP43

Run Details

Duration:
37.9s
Cost:
$0.000560
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The chipped paint on the doorframe felt cool under Rory’s palm. Three deadbolts clicked—a practiced sequence after years living above Silas’ bar and, more recently, escaping Evan. She hadn’t expected a visitor. Especially not *him*. Lucien stood bathed in the dim hallway light, looking impossibly sharp in a charcoal suit that probably cost more than her month’s rent. Platinum hair, slicked back from his forehead, gleamed. One eye, amber and warm, met hers. The other, black as pitch, tracked the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. “Rory,” he murmured, the sound a low, resonant hum in the cramped space. He hadn’t aged a day. A cruel trick of half-demon physiology, she supposed. “Luc.” She kept her voice even, refusing to betray the jolt that ran through her. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound around her ankles, sensing the shift in atmosphere. “May I?” He gestured with a slight inclination of his head toward the open doorway. Rory stepped back, allowing him inside. The scent of sandalwood and something darker, something distinctly *not* human, followed him. It hadn’t changed. She remembered breathing it in, a reckless indulgence, during stolen moments that now felt like fragments of a dream. He surveyed the flat with a slow, assessing gaze. Books stacked haphazardly on every surface, scrolls unfurled across the table, research notes pinned to a corkboard – a testament to Eva’s chaotic genius. “Still a mess, I see,” he commented, his lips curving in a faint smile. “It’s lived in.” She crossed her arms, a defensive maneuver. “What brings you to Brick Lane, Luc? Besides a critique of my housekeeping.” He didn’t answer immediately, instead taking in the space, his amber eye lingering on a chipped mug on the counter. “Eva isn’t here, is she?” “She’s at a conference in Dublin. Archaeology thing.” “Right.” He leaned against the doorframe, the ivory handle of his cane gleaming in the dim light. “I was hoping to catch her.” “And you just happened to swing by, hoping I wouldn’t mention she was away?” Rory raised an eyebrow. “I needed to speak with her. It's… complicated.” “Everything with you always is.” The words slipped out before she could stop them, sharper than intended. Old wounds throbbed. His gaze met hers, the black eye unreadable. “Some things aren’t easily resolved.” “Like leaving without a word?” she pressed, watching for a flinch. “I did what I thought was necessary.” A muscle ticked in his jaw. “Necessary for *who*, Luc? Certainly not for me.” She’d spent weeks after his departure wrestling with anger, confusion, and a sickening sense of betrayal. She hadn’t realized how much she’d relied on his dry wit, his quiet strength. Or maybe, she’d been in denial about the feelings altogether. He pushed himself off the doorframe, moving further into the flat. Ptolemy, emboldened, rubbed against his impeccably tailored trousers. Lucien didn’t react, not even a twitch. “Don't pretend it was easy for me." “Easy?” Rory laughed, a brittle, humorless sound. “You vanished. One minute we were… whatever *we* were, and the next you were gone. No note, no call, nothing.” “I couldn’t risk involving you.” “Involving me in what? Your shadowy world of demons and fixers?” She paced a small circle, the floorboards creaking beneath her feet. “I was already involved, Luc. You knew that.” He stopped pacing with her, close enough that she could smell the sandalwood, feel the weight of his gaze. "There are forces at play, Rory, that you don't understand.” "Try me," she challenged, refusing to back down. “It’s not something I can simply explain over tea.” “I don’t *want* an explanation. I want to know why you couldn't trust me.” Silence stretched between them, thick and heavy. Finally, he ran a hand through his platinum hair, disrupting its perfect slickness. It was a rare display of frustration. “I made a mistake, all right?” His voice dropped, roughened with something she couldn’t quite decipher. Regret, maybe. “A mistake?” She scoffed. “That’s it? You upended my life and it was just a ‘mistake’?” “I thought I was protecting you.” “From what? From myself? From the fact that I was falling for a half-demon with secrets he wouldn’t share?” The admission hung in the air, raw and vulnerable. He flinched—a subtle reaction, but she saw it. “Don’t say that.” “Why not? Is it the truth?” She took a step closer, invading his personal space. "I saw how you were, Luc. Always looking over your shoulder, always guarded. I wanted to know what you were hiding, but you shut me out." His gaze locked with hers, the amber eye burning with intensity. "Some things are better left buried." “That’s convenient.” “Practical.” He reached into his inner jacket pocket, producing a small, silver object. It resembled a intricately designed compass, but instead of cardinal directions, shimmering symbols circled the face. “What is that?” Rory asked, trying to ignore the sudden hammering of her pulse. “An artifact. A locator. I need Eva’s help to decipher it.” He held it out towards her. "She's the only one who knows enough about Avarosian symbology.” Rory didn’t take it. "And if she isn’t here?" “Then I hoped you could reach her.” “You come here, track me down, and expect me to be your messenger to Eva?” “It’s not just about Eva, Rory.” His fingers brushed against her hand as he offered the compass again. It was a deliberate, lingering touch. “This concerns something…bigger. Something that could have consequences for both of us.” She hesitated, her fingers hovering over the cool silver. The heat of his gaze felt like a physical touch, stirring a flicker of the old attraction. A dangerous, reckless part of her wanted to take the compass, to be drawn back into his world, to unravel the mysteries he guarded so fiercely. But another part, the part that had spent months picking up the pieces of her shattered trust, urged her to keep her distance. “I’ll forward your message to her,” she finally said, her voice barely a whisper. She wouldn't take the compass from his hand. He didn’t press, but a shadow crossed his face. “Thank you.” The silence descended again, heavier this time. The air felt charged with unspoken words, with regret, with a lingering, undeniable connection. Rory stared at the space between them, bracing for what came next. The past wasn’t yet settled. Not by a long shot.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.042
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
1.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1064
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"testament"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"gleaming"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"resolved"
count1
7
word"sense of"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"disrupting"
count1
11
word"perfect"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"flicker"
count1
15
word"unravel"
count1
16
word"shattered"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"charged"
count1
19
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"testament"
1"chaotic"
2"gleaming"
3"eyebrow"
4"throbbed"
5"unreadable"
6"resolved"
7"sense of"
8"weight"
9"silence"
10"disrupting"
11"perfect"
12"intensity"
13"pulse"
14"flicker"
15"unravel"
16"shattered"
17"whisper"
18"charged"
19"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences69
matches
0"g with anger"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords5
totalWords1060
ratio0.005
matches
0"him"
1"not"
2"who"
3"we"
4"want"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount703
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Ptolemy2
Eva2
Old1
Silence1
Regret1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Old"
4"Silence"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
20.69% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like fragments of a dream"
1"quite decipher"
2"felt like a physical touch, stirring a"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1060
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean22.08
std14.06
cv0.637
sampleLengths
035
150
226
327
415
541
633
714
823
925
108
1123
1218
138
1420
1513
1611
1713
1848
1926
207
2127
225
2330
2429
258
269
2714
2827
2918
3016
316
3228
3311
3441
3517
362
3729
3814
3927
409
417
4215
4336
4475
4522
4611
4743
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs124
matches(empty)
51.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences94
ratio0.032
matches
0"Three deadbolts clicked—a practiced sequence after years living above Silas’ bar and, more recently, escaping Evan."
1"Books stacked haphazardly on every surface, scrolls unfurled across the table, research notes pinned to a corkboard – a testament to Eva’s chaotic genius."
2"He flinched—a subtle reaction, but she saw it."
97.63% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount281
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.042704626334519574
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.014234875444839857
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean11.28
std6.09
cv0.54
sampleLengths
011
116
25
33
423
58
67
712
813
95
108
1115
1212
1315
146
1513
163
1719
189
1924
2014
2110
2213
2320
245
258
2617
276
2818
298
3017
313
328
335
3411
3513
3624
3714
3810
3911
408
417
427
437
4420
455
4622
478
4819
4910
81.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners47
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Especially not *him*."
1"Finally, he ran a hand"
ratio0.03
17.01% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences67
matches
0"She hadn’t expected a visitor."
1"he murmured, the sound a"
2"He hadn’t aged a day."
3"She kept her voice even,"
4"He gestured with a slight"
5"It hadn’t changed."
6"She remembered breathing it in,"
7"He surveyed the flat with"
8"he commented, his lips curving"
9"She crossed her arms, a"
10"He didn’t answer immediately, instead"
11"He leaned against the doorframe,"
12"His gaze met hers, the"
13"she pressed, watching for a"
14"She’d spent weeks after his"
15"She hadn’t realized how much"
16"He pushed himself off the"
17"She paced a small circle,"
18"He stopped pacing with her,"
19"she challenged, refusing to back"
ratio0.507
19.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences67
matches
0"The chipped paint on the"
1"She hadn’t expected a visitor."
2"Lucien stood bathed in the"
3"Platinum hair, slicked back from"
4"The other, black as pitch,"
5"he murmured, the sound a"
6"He hadn’t aged a day."
7"A cruel trick of half-demon"
8"She kept her voice even,"
9"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, wound around"
10"He gestured with a slight"
11"Rory stepped back, allowing him"
12"The scent of sandalwood and"
13"It hadn’t changed."
14"She remembered breathing it in,"
15"He surveyed the flat with"
16"Books stacked haphazardly on every"
17"he commented, his lips curving"
18"She crossed her arms, a"
19"He didn’t answer immediately, instead"
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"She kept, refusing to betray the jolt that ran through her"
1"he commented, his lips curving in a faint smile"
2"She paced, the floorboards creaking beneath her feet"
3"she challenged, refusing to back down"
4"Rory asked, trying to ignore the sudden hammering of her pulse"
5"she finally said, her voice barely a whisper"
45.83% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he commented (comment)"
2"she pressed (press)"
3"Rory laughed (laugh)"
4"she challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.146
leniency0.292
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.208
77.8190%