Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB1A6HMG17A7XVGXBGAGZR

Run Details

Duration:
23.6s
Cost:
$0.000796
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the pavement in jagged staccato, each drop a tiny hammer striking the metal grates beneath Quinn’s boots. She didn’t slow. Didn’t breathe. The neon glow of a flickering streetlamp painted her face in sickly green, the salt-and-pepper stubble of her cropped hair glistening with water. The suspect—some low-level dealer, maybe—had bolted down a narrow alley between two crumbling brick buildings, his coat flapping like a flag in the wind. Quinn’s fingers tightened around the grip of her revolver. The gun was cold, the metal biting into her palm. She didn’t like guns. Not like this. But she had no choice. A shadow moved ahead of her, just for a second, before vanishing into the mouth of the alley. She didn’t hesitate. The rain turned to a mist around her as she lunged forward, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the sickly glow of the city’s dying lights. The alley smelled of damp stone and something sharper—alcohol, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of blood. Then, the suspect was gone. Quinn skidded to a halt, her breath coming in sharp, controlled bursts. The alley dead-ended against a rusted fire escape, the metal groaning under the weight of the rain. No one there. No sign of him. Just the echo of her own footsteps, the distant wail of a siren, and the steady drip of water from a broken pipe. She pulled out her phone, the screen glowing blue in the dark. The last known location of the suspect’s phone pinged—somewhere beneath the city. The signal was weak, but it was there. And it was leading her down. Quinn checked the time on her watch. 2:17 AM. The kind of hour when the city’s veins pulsed slow and deep, when the shadows stretched long and hungry. She didn’t like the dark. Not like this. But she didn’t have a choice. She turned back the way she’d come, her boots splashing through the puddles once more. The streets were quieter now, the rain softer. She passed a boarded-up shop, its windows dark and empty, the sign above it long since peeled away by time and weather. A flicker of movement caught her eye—a figure darting between the buildings, just for a second, before vanishing into the night. Quinn didn’t follow. Not yet. She had a lead. A signal. And she wasn’t about to lose it. She reached the main road, the hum of traffic still loud despite the late hour. A taxi honked, its headlights cutting through the rain. She ignored it, her eyes locked on the phone in her hand. The signal was stronger now, pulsing like a heartbeat beneath the city’s skin. Then, the phone died. Quinn cursed under her breath. She fumbled in her pocket, pulling out a spare battery. The phone flickered back to life, the signal still there, but weaker. She had to move. Now. She turned left, following the signal down a side street, the rain hammering down around her. The buildings loomed closer, their windows dark and empty. She passed a graffiti-covered wall, the words faded and indistinct. A figure moved in the shadows, just for a second, before vanishing into the night. Quinn didn’t look. She didn’t have time. She reached the end of the street, the signal leading her down a flight of stairs. The stairs were narrow, the steps slick with rain and something else—something darker. She didn’t want to know what it was. She didn’t care. She just wanted to follow the signal. She descended, her boots splashing through the water that pooled at the bottom of the stairs. The air was damp, the smell of damp stone and something older, something deeper. The signal was stronger now, pulsing like a heartbeat beneath her feet. Then, the stairs ended. Quinn found herself in a narrow tunnel, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her deeper into the dark, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The tunnel opened into a narrow alley, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her down the alley, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The courtyard opened into a narrow alley, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her down the alley, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The courtyard opened into a narrow alley, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her down the alley, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. The alley opened into a narrow courtyard, the walls slick with moisture. The signal led her across the courtyard, the rain still hammering down above her. She passed a flickering light, the glow of a neon sign just visible through the darkness. The Raven’s Nest. Silas’ bar. Quinn didn’t stop. She didn’t slow. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark. --- The neon sign of the Raven’s Nest flickered above her, its green glow casting long, jagged shadows across the damp pavement. Quinn hesitated at the entrance, her breath steady, her grip tight on her revolver. The signal had led her here. But this wasn’t where the suspect was. Not yet. She stepped inside, the door creaking shut behind her. The bar was dim, the air thick with the scent of old wood and something sharper—alcohol, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of blood. The walls were lined with old maps and black-and-white photographs, the faces of long-dead men staring down at her from the shadows. A figure moved behind the bar, a man with dark hair and a sharp jaw. He didn’t look up as she entered, his hands busy behind the counter. Quinn didn’t wait. She moved deeper into the bar, her eyes scanning the faces in the shadows. A man sat in the corner, his back to her, a glass of whiskey untouched in front of him. He didn’t look like a suspect. Not like the others. But the signal was still there, pulsing like a heartbeat beneath the city’s skin. Quinn moved closer, her boots splashing through the puddles that pooled on the floor. The man didn’t turn, his gaze fixed on the glass in front of him. She could see the faint scar running along his left forearm, the medallion around his neck just visible beneath his shirt. Tomás Herrera. Quinn didn’t hesitate. She pulled out her phone, the screen glowing blue in the dark. The signal was still there, but weaker now. She had to move. Now. She reached out, her fingers brushing the man’s shoulder. He turned, his eyes wide with surprise. "Detective Quinn," he said, his voice low and steady. "What are you doing here?" Quinn didn’t answer. She just kept going, the signal leading her deeper into the dark.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:14:38.301Z" 2/20/2026, 8:14:38 PM
model"mistralai/ministral-8b-2512"
app_id182717
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cancelledfalse
latency263
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generation_time23006
tokens_prompt1140
tokens_completion5043
native_tokens_prompt1027
native_tokens_completion4280
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native_tokens_reasoning0
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
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is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
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router(null)
provider_responses
0
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status200
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3307
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.88% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3307
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"glistening"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count2
7
word"loomed"
count1
8
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"glistening"
1"weight"
2"echo"
3"footsteps"
4"pulsed"
5"flicker"
6"flickered"
7"loomed"
8"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences346
matches
0"e with surprise"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences346
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences383
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3291
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions124
wordCount3211
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn49
Raven37
Nest37
Herrera1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Herrera"
places(empty)
globalScore0.737
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences206
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount3291
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences383
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs100
mean32.91
std16.77
cv0.51
sampleLengths
073
131
265
35
459
538
642
766
818
949
104
1132
1250
137
1447
1542
164
1748
1818
1947
2018
2147
2218
2347
2418
2547
2618
2747
2818
2947
3018
3147
3218
3347
3418
3547
3618
3747
3818
3947
4018
4147
4218
4347
4418
4547
4618
4747
4818
4947
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences346
matches
0"was gone"
1"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs460
matches
0"was leading"
98.10% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences383
ratio0.016
matches
0"The suspect—some low-level dealer, maybe—had bolted down a narrow alley between two crumbling brick buildings, his coat flapping like a flag in the wind."
1"The alley smelled of damp stone and something sharper—alcohol, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of blood."
2"The last known location of the suspect’s phone pinged—somewhere beneath the city."
3"A flicker of movement caught her eye—a figure darting between the buildings, just for a second, before vanishing into the night."
4"The stairs were narrow, the steps slick with rain and something else—something darker."
5"The bar was dim, the air thick with the scent of old wood and something sharper—alcohol, maybe, or the faint metallic tang of blood."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount693
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03607503607503607
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002886002886002886
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences383
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences383
mean8.59
std5.86
cv0.682
sampleLengths
021
13
22
323
424
59
610
74
83
95
1018
113
1227
1317
145
1512
1617
173
184
1923
2012
2112
228
236
247
252
2619
275
283
296
3015
318
3222
3321
343
352
364
372
387
3915
409
4112
4213
434
445
4510
4612
474
481
4916
28.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats81
diversityRatio0.04699738903394256
totalSentences383
uniqueOpeners18
39.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences338
matches
0"Then, the suspect was gone."
1"Just the echo of her"
2"Then, the phone died."
3"Then, the stairs ended."
ratio0.012
55.50% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount139
totalSentences338
matches
0"She didn’t slow."
1"She didn’t like guns."
2"She didn’t hesitate."
3"She pulled out her phone,"
4"She didn’t like the dark."
5"She turned back the way"
6"She passed a boarded-up shop,"
7"She had a lead."
8"She reached the main road,"
9"She ignored it, her eyes"
10"She fumbled in her pocket,"
11"She had to move."
12"She turned left, following the"
13"She passed a graffiti-covered wall,"
14"She didn’t have time."
15"She reached the end of"
16"She didn’t want to know"
17"She didn’t care."
18"She just wanted to follow"
19"She descended, her boots splashing"
ratio0.411
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount323
totalSentences338
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"She didn’t slow."
2"The neon glow of a"
3"The suspect—some low-level dealer, maybe—had"
4"Quinn’s fingers tightened around the"
5"The gun was cold, the"
6"She didn’t like guns."
7"A shadow moved ahead of"
8"She didn’t hesitate."
9"The rain turned to a"
10"The alley smelled of damp"
11"Quinn skidded to a halt,"
12"The alley dead-ended against a"
13"She pulled out her phone,"
14"The last known location of"
15"The signal was weak, but"
16"Quinn checked the time on"
17"The kind of hour when"
18"She didn’t like the dark."
19"She turned back the way"
ratio0.956
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences338
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences187
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The suspect—some low-level dealer, maybe—had bolted down a narrow alley between two crumbling brick buildings, his coat flapping like a flag in the wind."
1"The rain turned to a mist around her as she lunged forward, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the sickly glow of the city’s dying lights."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice low and steady"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.6827%