Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB1SKC3S9S7Q0CF8CD746A

Run Details

Duration:
20.8s
Cost:
$0.000164
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of mildew and something faintly metallic, like old blood. Detective Harlow Quinn took a measured breath, the scent clinging to the back of her throat. Rain slicked the concrete floor of the abandoned Tube station, reflecting the weak, flickering gas lamps strung haphazardly along the platform. It wasn’t a good sign. Not really. Not for a crime scene. “Impressive, isn’t it?” DS Miller’s voice came from behind her, laced with a patronizing amusement that always grated on Quinn’s nerves. Miller was young, fresh out of Hendon, and believed everything he read in the precinct’s briefing documents. He was currently examining the body—a man sprawled across a stained section of the platform, clad in a ridiculously ornate velvet jacket that looked utterly out of place in this subterranean ruin. Quinn ignored him, her gaze sweeping the area with the practiced efficiency of eighteen years on the force. The platform itself was relatively small, maybe thirty feet by forty. A single, rusted metal staircase led down into the darkness—the perceived exit, though Quinn suspected it was less a way out and more a deliberately obscured entrance. The victim’s hands were clutching a small, tarnished brass compass—a Veil Compass, she recognized instantly. “Looks like a simple mugging gone wrong,” Miller said, adjusting his spectacles. “A valuable jacket, perhaps. The victim could have resisted.” Quinn knelt beside the body, her hand brushing aside a smear of dark, viscous fluid. It wasn’t blood. Not entirely. There was a shimmer to it, a faint iridescent quality that wouldn’t be visible to the naked eye but was undeniable to someone who’d seen a little of the city’s darker corners. “The wound pattern doesn’t match a knife,” she stated, her voice flat. “It’s… displaced. Like something pushed through him. And the residue.” She pointed to a barely perceptible dusting of violet powder clinging to the victim’s jacket. “That’s not common lead. Not precisely.” Miller scoffed. “You’re overthinking it, Quinn. This place is crawling with junkies and petty thieves. A little bit of fancy powder doesn't change that.” Quinn didn’t respond, instead focusing on the details. The Compass was the key, she knew it. The Veil Market, a subterranean black market dealing in enchanted goods, moved locations every full moon. This station, deep beneath Camden, was one of its known haunts. But the items traded there weren't usually associated with blunt force trauma. They were whispers, secrets, and carefully calibrated spells. “There’s no sign of a struggle beyond this point,” she observed, indicating the small area around the body. “No overturned furniture, no broken glass. The attacker simply… appeared and vanished.” “Perhaps he was quick,” Miller offered helpfully. “Or he traversed a short distance,” Quinn countered, retrieving a small evidence bag and carefully collecting a sample of the violet powder. Her watch, a worn leather piece that had seen better days, ticked steadily on her wrist, a constant reminder of the passage of time—a commodity she rarely afforded herself. She glanced up at the platform ceiling, noticing something she’d initially missed. A series of faint, almost invisible etchings. Small, spiraling symbols carved into the concrete, partially obscured by grime. “Miller, take a look at this,” she said, her voice gaining a sharper edge. Miller shuffled over, peering at the symbols through his spectacles. “Just graffiti, Quinn. Ancient graffiti, maybe. Decorative.” “Not decorative,” Quinn corrected him, gently brushing away some of the accumulated dirt. The symbols weren’t random. They were protective sigils—the hallmark of Shade artisans, the craftspeople who built the Veil Compass and other items sold at the Market. “These suggest a ritual occurred here.” A chill, deeper than the dampness of the station, crept into the air. Quinn felt a prickle at the back of her neck, a phantom echo of the case that had haunted her for three years – the disappearance of Detective Morris, her partner. He’d vanished during a similar investigation, a case involving a similarly obscure location and a peculiar, unsettling residue. The department had chalked it up to a breakdown, a lapse in judgment. She knew better. “There’s a nexus here,” Quinn said, her voice barely a whisper. “A point of weak… permeability.” “You’re saying someone used magic?” Miller asked, his skepticism evident. “I’m saying something *unusual* happened here,” Quinn corrected. “And whoever did it didn’t want to leave a trace beyond these symbols.” She pulled out her phone and activated the forensic analysis app. “Let’s see if this powder tells us anything more.” The app scanned the sample, comparing its composition to known substances. The results flashed across the screen: “Trace elements of nocturnium – a rare earth metal found only in concentrated deposits within the Shadowfell.” “Nocturnium,” Quinn murmured. “That’s… unusual.” It was an ingredient notoriously difficult to acquire, requiring specialized rituals and access to treacherous, forgotten places. Suddenly, a voice cut through the silence. “Detective Quinn? I didn’t expect to find you here.” Eva Kowalski stood a few feet away, her red curls pulled back from her face, her round glasses slipping slightly down her nose as she nervously tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear. She clutched a worn leather satchel filled with books – a testament to her research into the occult. “Eva,” Quinn said, her tone neutral. “What are you doing here?” “Aurora asked me to come,” Eva replied, her voice trembling slightly. “She… she wanted to see the scene. And, well, she found something.” Eva stepped closer, extending a small, intricately folded piece of parchment. “This was found tucked into the victim’s jacket pocket. It’s a cipher. I’ve been working on it for the last few hours.” Quinn took the parchment, her fingers tracing the strange, geometric patterns. It was a complex encoding, far beyond anything a common thief would employ. “This isn’t simple.” “Aurora believes it’s connected to the Veil Market,” Eva said. “She thinks the victim was trying to sell information – specifically, the location of a new shipment of Shade-crafted weapons." As Quinn deciphered the message, a horrifying picture began to emerge. The victim wasn't a simple mugger. He was a courier, transporting a potentially lethal shipment of enchanted blades to the Market. And the symbols on the platform weren't protective. They were a ward – hastily erected, poorly maintained, and now utterly shattered. “Someone breached the ward,” Quinn said, her eyes narrowing. “And they didn’t bother to cover their tracks properly.” She looked at Miller, who was still examining the body with a puzzled expression. “This wasn’t a simple robbery, DS. This was a targeted assassination, performed by someone who knew about the Veil Market, about the sigils… and about the Shadowfell." A cold certainty settled over Quinn. This wasn’t just a crime. It was a prelude. A signal. She glanced back at the Veil Compass lying on the floor, its brass casing gleaming faintly in the gaslight. The needle, still pointing towards the darkness beyond the stairs, seemed to vibrate with a silent, unsettling energy. And she knew, with a chilling clarity, that the Shadows were stirring.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Miller offered helpfully [helpfully]"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.05
48.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1172
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count2
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count2
5
adverb"gently"
count1
6
adverb"suddenly"
count1
7
adverb"slightly"
count2
8
adverb"nervously"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"utterly"
2"deliberately"
3"precisely"
4"carefully"
5"gently"
6"suddenly"
7"slightly"
8"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1172
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"calibrated"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"chill"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"treacherous"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"testament"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"complex"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count1
14
word"gleaming"
count1
15
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"velvet"
2"calibrated"
3"reminder"
4"chill"
5"echo"
6"whisper"
7"scanned"
8"treacherous"
9"silence"
10"testament"
11"tracing"
12"complex"
13"shattered"
14"gleaming"
15"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences75
matches
0"felt a prickle"
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1171
ratio0.001
matches
0"unusual"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
52.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount868
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.96
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn17
Tube1
Miller8
Hendon1
Veil4
Compass4
Market3
Camden1
Shade1
Detective2
Morris1
Suddenly1
Kowalski1
Eva4
Shadows1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Compass"
4"Detective"
5"Morris"
6"Kowalski"
7"Eva"
places
0"Veil"
1"Market"
globalScore0.521
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences55
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1171
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean40.38
std24.39
cv0.604
sampleLengths
061
170
271
321
495
524
663
730
87
981
1014
1117
1245
1378
1416
1510
1641
1734
1822
1916
2053
2111
2223
2333
2427
2530
2653
2759
2866
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs143
matches
0"were clutching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences90
ratio0.089
matches
0"He was currently examining the body—a man sprawled across a stained section of the platform, clad in a ridiculously ornate velvet jacket that looked utterly out of place in this subterranean ruin."
1"A single, rusted metal staircase led down into the darkness—the perceived exit, though Quinn suspected it was less a way out and more a deliberately obscured entrance."
2"The victim’s hands were clutching a small, tarnished brass compass—a Veil Compass, she recognized instantly."
3"Her watch, a worn leather piece that had seen better days, ticked steadily on her wrist, a constant reminder of the passage of time—a commodity she rarely afforded herself."
4"They were protective sigils—the hallmark of Shade artisans, the craftspeople who built the Veil Compass and other items sold at the Market."
5"Quinn felt a prickle at the back of her neck, a phantom echo of the case that had haunted her for three years – the disappearance of Detective Morris, her partner."
6"She clutched a worn leather satchel filled with books – a testament to her research into the occult."
7"They were a ward – hastily erected, poorly maintained, and now utterly shattered."
70.78% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount870
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.05632183908045977
lyAdverbCount33
lyAdverbRatio0.03793103448275862
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean13.01
std7.75
cv0.595
sampleLengths
012
116
221
35
42
55
621
717
832
918
1011
1127
1215
1312
149
1515
163
172
1832
1912
2025
216
222
2322
248
258
2616
2711
2812
298
3018
3112
327
3322
3429
3512
367
3711
3814
3910
407
4113
424
4322
446
4513
4631
4718
4813
493
60.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3888888888888889
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners35
49.02% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"Suddenly, a voice cut through"
ratio0.015
90.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences68
matches
0"It wasn’t a good sign."
1"He was currently examining the"
2"It wasn’t blood."
3"she stated, her voice flat"
4"She pointed to a barely"
5"They were whispers, secrets, and"
6"she observed, indicating the small"
7"Her watch, a worn leather"
8"She glanced up at the"
9"she said, her voice gaining"
10"They were protective sigils—the hallmark"
11"He’d vanished during a similar"
12"She knew better."
13"She pulled out her phone"
14"It was an ingredient notoriously"
15"She clutched a worn leather"
16"It was a complex encoding,"
17"He was a courier, transporting"
18"They were a ward –"
19"She looked at Miller, who"
ratio0.324
18.82% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences68
matches
0"The air tasted of mildew"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn took a"
2"Rain slicked the concrete floor"
3"It wasn’t a good sign."
4"DS Miller’s voice came from"
5"Miller was young, fresh out"
6"He was currently examining the"
7"Quinn ignored him, her gaze"
8"The platform itself was relatively"
9"A single, rusted metal staircase"
10"The victim’s hands were clutching"
11"Miller said, adjusting his spectacles"
12"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
13"It wasn’t blood."
14"she stated, her voice flat"
15"She pointed to a barely"
16"Quinn didn’t respond, instead focusing"
17"The Compass was the key,"
18"The Veil Market, a subterranean"
19"This station, deep beneath Camden,"
ratio0.882
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He was currently examining the body—a man sprawled across a stained section of the platform, clad in a ridiculously ornate velvet jacket that looked utterly out…"
1"There was a shimmer to it, a faint iridescent quality that wouldn’t be visible to the naked eye but was undeniable to someone who’d seen a little of the city’s …"
2"Her watch, a worn leather piece that had seen better days, ticked steadily on her wrist, a constant reminder of the passage of time—a commodity she rarely affor…"
3"They were protective sigils—the hallmark of Shade artisans, the craftspeople who built the Veil Compass and other items sold at the Market."
4"Quinn felt a prickle at the back of her neck, a phantom echo of the case that had haunted her for three years – the disappearance of Detective Morris, her partn…"
5"She glanced back at the Veil Compass lying on the floor, its brass casing gleaming faintly in the gaslight."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she stated, her voice flat"
1"she said, her voice gaining a sharper edge"
2"Quinn said, her voice barely a whisper"
3"Miller asked, his skepticism evident"
4"Quinn said, her tone neutral"
5"Eva replied, her voice trembling slightly"
6"Quinn said, her eyes narrowing"
11.11% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she stated (state)"
1"she observed (observe)"
2"Quinn corrected (correct)"
3"Quinn corrected (correct)"
4"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.361
leniency0.722
rawRatio0.385
effectiveRatio0.278
71.3144%