Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB206N03MBFV3VAEEZ7Q9T

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Duration:
2m 17s
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$0.013270
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory wrenched the third deadbolt free and slammed the door open. She’d been fumbling with the locks for ten seconds, the bangs on Eva’s flat door rattling the stack of scrolls perched on the doorknob. Curry fumes from the basement restaurant curled up through the floorboards, stinging her sinuses as she stared at Lucien. His slicked-back platinum blond hair glinted in the streetlight, tailored charcoal suit crisp despite the damp London air. He rested one hand on his ivory-handled cane, the other tucked into his suit pocket, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked on hers. Sandalwood and bergamot cologne cut through the curry stench, a scent she’d tried to scrub from her memory after he vanished from her Cardiff flat’s doorstep three months prior. “What do you want?” “Information.” “I don’t owe you anything.” “You owe yourself to stop hiding from Evan’s new allies.” “Allies?” “Avaros demons. My father’s kind.” Rory’s fist clenched, the crescent scar on her left wrist tugging with the movement. She stepped back, but Lucien pushed past her, his polished shoes crinkling the scattered research notes on the floor. The door clicked shut behind him, and she reached for the nearest scroll knife—its handle wrapped in worn red thread, Eva’s old gift—resting on a side table. Eva’s flat crammed around them: cramped old rectangular brown leather books stacked to the ceiling, scrolls tied with frayed twine draped over every chair, and Ptolemy the tabby curled under a desk, his purr cutting off with a hiss as Lucien’s cane tapped the floor. Paper dust tickled Rory’s throat, and she coughed, her grip on the knife tightening. The curry fumes grew thicker, mingling with the faint smell of ink from a half-open jar on the desk. “Evan made a deal with them,” Lucien said, his voice low and precise—his French accent peeking through when he was tense. “He’s trading human souls for power to track you down. He knows you’re in London.” “You vanished when I fled Cardiff,” Rory said. “Left me to beg Eva for a place to crash, to deliver takeaways for pocket money just to pay rent on Silas’ bar flat. Why show up now?” “I was tracking his demon ties,” Lucien said. He rested his hand on the ivory cane handle, his fingers brushing the hidden blade’s release. “You wouldn’t have listened. You thought I abandoned you, that I cared more about my fixer deals than your safety.” “I did think that.” “Because you refused to see the supernatural mess you’d stumbled into. Evan wasn’t just an abusive ex—he was courting demons long before you left him. I saw him meet a shadowy figure in Cardiff’s docks three months ago, a figure that reeked of Avaros’ brimstone.” Rory’s bright blue eyes narrowed. She’d spent months ignoring the odd occurrences: Evan’s sudden bursts of inhuman strength that left bruises on her arms that wouldn’t fade for weeks, the shadowy figures lingering outside her Cardiff flat’s window at night, the whispers that sounded like they came from a realm far away, their words twisting into unintelligible snarls. She’d written them off as stress-induced hallucinations, but Lucien’s words tied them together like a frayed scroll bound with twine. “You knew,” she said. “You knew and didn’t tell me.” “I couldn’t. My father’s realm forbids half-demons from interfering with human deals—unless the souls are at risk of being dragged to Avaros. I had to gather proof to bypass the ban.” “Your father’s rules are more important than my life?” “Not more important. Different. I risked being dragged to Avaros myself to track Evan’s deals. You think I wanted to see you flee to London with nothing but a backpack and a broken phone?” Lucien pulled a crumpled piece of paper from his suit pocket and tossed it to her. She caught it, her fingers brushing the cold, rain-smudged paper—it was a delivery receipt from Golden Empress restaurant, her workplace, with a note scrawled in Evan’s messy handwriting: I’m watching you. The ink smudged where rain had soaked it, but the words burned into her vision. “You found this where?” she said. “On a goon I took down outside your bar flat last night. He was waiting for you to come home.” “Why didn’t you warn me then?” “I didn’t want to lead Evan’s other goons to you. I came to Eva’s flat because it’s the only place he might not have tracked—yet.” Ptolemy jumped onto a shelf, his tabby paws knocking over a ceramic vase and a jar of ink. The vase shattered on the floor, its shards scattering over the research notes, and the ink spilled onto a scroll about Avaros demons, making the black symbols bleed into the paper like dried blood. Rory’s breath caught—she’d been reading that scroll that morning, trying to make sense of Eva’s notes about demon deals that trapped humans in eternal servitude. A new round of bangs hit the door, louder and more insistent than before. The sound rattled the book stacks, and a few leather-bound volumes toppled to the floor. Rory glanced at the door, her heart racing—she’d locked all three deadbolts when Lucien came in, but the bangs made the frame creak. The curry fumes now mixed with the faint smell of cigarette smoke seeping through the door crack, a habit Evan’s goons had picked up in Cardiff’s pubs. “Who is that?” she said. “Evan’s goons. Cardiff accents—he sent people from home to find you. They followed me here when I left your bar flat this morning.” Another bang, and a piece of glass from the kitchen window shattered. A shard cut Rory’s arm, and she wiped the blood on her jeans, her grip on the scroll knife tightening. A rough voice yelled from the street, its Cardiff lilt sharp with malice: “Carter! Come out, and we’ll make it quick! Evan wants to talk to you about your father’s barrister files!” Lucien’s hand tightened on his cane’s handle, his amber eye flaring with a faint inhuman glow. Rory grabbed a stack of scrolls and tossed them at the broken window, blocking the goon’s view. Ptolemy yowled and darted under the bed, his tabby fur standing on end as he hissed at the intruding voices. The ink-stained scroll on the floor stared up at her, its bleeding symbols a reminder of the supernatural danger she’d tried to outrun. “You should have left me alone,” Rory said, her voice tight with frustration. “I couldn’t,” Lucien said. “Evan’s deal will drag hundreds of Londoners to Avaros. You’re the only one who can testify against him—you saw his inhuman strength, his shadowy allies. You’re the only witness he can’t silence easily.” The door’s first deadbolt snapped. Rory’s heart raced, her fingers brushing the scroll knife’s sharp blade. She’d fled Cardiff to escape Evan’s fists, but now she was trapped in a cramped flat above a curry house, with a half-demon she didn’t trust and goons who wanted her dead or dragged back to Cardiff. The paper dust in the air made her eyes water, and she blinked away tears as she scanned the room for an exit—only to see the fire escape was blocked by a stack of books twice her height. Another deadbolt snapped. The door’s handle wrenched back and forth, and a third goon appeared at the broken window, his hand reaching through the glass to grab a scroll. Lucien drew his cane’s blade—thin, silver, glinting in the streetlight—and stepped toward the window, his voice low: “Stay back.” The door flew open, and two goons with Cardiff accents charged in, their fists clenched and their eyes glinting with malice. One of them grabbed Rory’s arm, his grip tight enough to make her drop the scroll knife, and the other lunged at Lucien, his fist aimed straight at his heterochromatic eyes.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1324
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"shattered"
count2
1
word"sense of"
count1
2
word"racing"
count1
3
word"lilt"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count2
9
word"charged"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"sense of"
2"racing"
3"lilt"
4"reminder"
5"silence"
6"raced"
7"scanned"
8"glinting"
9"charged"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count2
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"fist clenched"
2"fists clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences50
matches
0"t with frustration"
85.71% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences50
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences70
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1300
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount919
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Lucien12
London1
Cardiff7
Ptolemy3
Rory12
French1
Evan4
Golden1
Empress1
Avaros1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.847
windowScore0.833
89.02% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like they came from a realm far aw"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1300
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"reading that scroll"
76.19% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs19
mean68.42
std28.51
cv0.417
sampleLengths
054
171
226
360
478
5165
678
784
862
957
1077
1179
1228
1364
1476
1550
1691
1748
1852
91.23% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences50
matches
0"was trapped"
1"was blocked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs146
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences70
ratio0.114
matches
0"He rested one hand on his ivory-handled cane, the other tucked into his suit pocket, and his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked on hers."
1"The door clicked shut behind him, and she reached for the nearest scroll knife—its handle wrapped in worn red thread, Eva’s old gift—resting on a side table."
2"“Evan made a deal with them,” Lucien said, his voice low and precise—his French accent peeking through when he was tense."
3"She caught it, her fingers brushing the cold, rain-smudged paper—it was a delivery receipt from Golden Empress restaurant, her workplace, with a note scrawled in Evan’s messy handwriting: I’m watching you."
4"Rory’s breath caught—she’d been reading that scroll that morning, trying to make sense of Eva’s notes about demon deals that trapped humans in eternal servitude."
5"Rory glanced at the door, her heart racing—she’d locked all three deadbolts when Lucien came in, but the bangs made the frame creak."
6"The paper dust in the air made her eyes water, and she blinked away tears as she scanned the room for an exit—only to see the fire escape was blocked by a stack of books twice her height."
7"Lucien drew his cane’s blade—thin, silver, glinting in the streetlight—and stepped toward the window, his voice low: “Stay back.”"
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount938
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"old rectangular brown leather"
1"cold, rain-smudged paper—"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.013859275053304905
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010660980810234541
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean18.57
std11.37
cv0.612
sampleLengths
011
124
219
318
424
529
64
71
85
910
101
115
1214
1319
1427
1545
1614
1719
1821
1915
208
2128
228
2316
2420
254
2645
275
2853
2920
304
316
3231
339
3434
3516
3631
3715
386
3920
406
4125
4218
4334
4425
4514
4615
4723
4827
495
62.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences44
matches
0"She’d been fumbling with the"
1"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
2"He rested one hand on"
3"She stepped back, but Lucien"
4"He rested his hand on"
5"She’d spent months ignoring the"
6"She’d written them off as"
7"She caught it, her fingers"
8"She’d fled Cardiff to escape"
ratio0.205
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences44
matches
0"Rory wrenched the third deadbolt"
1"She’d been fumbling with the"
2"Curry fumes from the basement"
3"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
4"He rested one hand on"
5"Sandalwood and bergamot cologne cut"
6"Rory’s fist clenched, the crescent"
7"She stepped back, but Lucien"
8"The door clicked shut behind"
9"Eva’s flat crammed around them:"
10"Paper dust tickled Rory’s throat,"
11"The curry fumes grew thicker,"
12"Lucien said, his voice low"
13"He rested his hand on"
14"Rory’s bright blue eyes narrowed."
15"She’d spent months ignoring the"
16"She’d written them off as"
17"Lucien pulled a crumpled piece"
18"She caught it, her fingers"
19"The ink smudged where rain"
ratio0.977
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.64% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She’d spent months ignoring the odd occurrences: Evan’s sudden bursts of inhuman strength that left bruises on her arms that wouldn’t fade for weeks, the shadow…"
1"She caught it, her fingers brushing the cold, rain-smudged paper—it was a delivery receipt from Golden Empress restaurant, her workplace, with a note scrawled i…"
2"The vase shattered on the floor, its shards scattering over the research notes, and the ink spilled onto a scroll about Avaros demons, making the black symbols …"
3"She’d fled Cardiff to escape Evan’s fists, but now she was trapped in a cramped flat above a curry house, with a half-demon she didn’t trust and goons who wante…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"A rough voice yelled, its Cardiff lilt sharp with malice:"
1"Rory said, her voice tight with frustration"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"A rough voice yelled (yell)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.3
leniency0.6
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.067
76.2620%