| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "a thought implanted directly [directly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.056 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 85.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1059 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tightly" | | 1 | "sharply" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1059 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "fractured" | | 2 | "unsettled" | | 3 | "enigmatic" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "navigate" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "sense of" | | 10 | "echoes" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "imposing" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "throbbed" | | 16 | "perfect" | | 17 | "intricate" | | 18 | "anticipation" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | | |
| 73.17% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "started to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 22 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1045 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "drifted" | | 1 | "flowed" | | 2 | "between" | | 3 | "other" | | 4 | "look" | | 5 | "assessed" | | 6 | "Endless feasting." | | 7 | "Infinite pleasure." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 51.60% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 813 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 9 | | Rory | 16 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Kensington | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fruits | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Kensington" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.516 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a captured ember now" | | 1 | "quite look* at them, but *assessed* them, like livestock" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.957 | | wordCount | 1045 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 29.03 | | std | 17.28 | | cv | 0.595 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 68 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 60 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 28 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 37 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 56 | | 33 | 27 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 135 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 103 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, Nyx drifted—not walked, *drifted*—between the ancient oak standing stones, their form flickering like a heat haze." | | 1 | "Wildflowers, blooms she’d never seen before—luminescent blues, fiery oranges—carpeted the ground, their scent cloying and sweet." | | 2 | "They moved deeper, following Nyx, who seemed to navigate by something other than sight—a shifting of shadows, a whisper of energy." | | 3 | "Nyx traced a hand—or what served as a hand—over the bark." | | 4 | "A figure materialized within the amber light—a shadow at first, then slowly coalescing into a form." | | 5 | "Fruits she’d never seen—glowing crimson and deep purple—overflowed from silver platters." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 827 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "delicate, star-shaped flower." | | 1 | "ice cold against her" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.032648125755743655 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012091898428053204 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 103 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 103 | | mean | 10.15 | | std | 4.96 | | cv | 0.489 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 15 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 63.75% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.44660194174757284 | | totalSentences | 103 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 42.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it was a pocket" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t the fading light" | | 1 | "She'd pictured something quaint, perhaps" | | 2 | "It pulsed with a faint" | | 3 | "She’d gotten the pendant a" | | 4 | "It started feeling warmer a" | | 5 | "she said, her voice hushed" | | 6 | "They moved deeper, following Nyx," | | 7 | "It wasn't simply beautiful." | | 8 | "It was *other*." | | 9 | "She looked down and realized" | | 10 | "They reached a clearing." | | 11 | "It didn't quite *look* at" | | 12 | "Its voice wasn't sound, but" | | 13 | "It was ice cold against" | | 14 | "It raised a hand, and" |
| | ratio | 0.192 | |
| 56.15% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of overripe" | | 1 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "Isolde, a splash of silver" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 4 | "Rory glanced over her shoulder" | | 5 | "The mundane sprawl of Richmond" | | 6 | "It wasn’t the fading light" | | 7 | "Isolde offered a small, enigmatic" | | 8 | "Nyx’s whisper cut through the" | | 9 | "The grove wasn’t what Rory" | | 10 | "She'd pictured something quaint, perhaps" | | 11 | "Wildflowers, blooms she’d never seen" | | 12 | "Rory asked, dropping her bag" | | 13 | "Isolde corrected, plucking a delicate," | | 14 | "Nyx moved further into the" | | 15 | "Isolde’s gaze drifted past Rory," | | 16 | "Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant" | | 17 | "It pulsed with a faint" | | 18 | "She’d gotten the pendant a" | | 19 | "It started feeling warmer a" |
| | ratio | 0.808 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, Nyx drifted—not walked, *drifted*—between the ancient oak standing stones, their form flickering like a heat haze." | | 1 | "Twisted branches of ancient trees intertwined, forming a canopy that filtered the sunlight into emerald shards." | | 2 | "It started feeling warmer a few days ago and had led her to Isolde, who confirmed its connection to Hel." | | 3 | "They moved deeper, following Nyx, who seemed to navigate by something other than sight—a shifting of shadows, a whisper of energy." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a chime" | | 1 | "Isolde’s gaze drifted, unfocused" | | 2 | "she said, her voice hushed" | | 3 | "Rory trailed, struggling to find the right words" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, their form solidifying, becoming sharply defined" | | 5 | "Isolde said, her voice barely a whisper" | | 6 | "warned Isolde, her voice sharper" | | 7 | "Nyx said, their form flickering" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 5 | "warned Isolde (warn)" | | 6 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.538 | | effectiveRatio | 0.359 | |