Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB22TGTFA2DXP2HH8RVQ8H

Run Details

Duration:
4m 1s
Cost:
$0.000529
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of overripe fruit and something metallic, like warm pennies. Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, the weight of the Fae-Forged Blade a cool press against her side. Ahead, Nyx drifted—not walked, *drifted*—between the ancient oak standing stones, their form flickering like a heat haze. Isolde, a splash of silver against the deepening green, didn’t so much step as *flowed* into the grove. “Time likes a suggestion here,” Isolde murmured, her voice a chime. “Don’t look back too often.” Rory glanced over her shoulder anyway. The mundane sprawl of Richmond Park felt miles away, the late afternoon sun fractured and distant. It wasn’t the fading light that unsettled her, but the way the air *between* the trees seemed to ripple. “What does that even mean?” Isolde offered a small, enigmatic smile. “Meaning is a fragile thing, Aurora. Best not grip it too tightly.” Nyx’s whisper cut through the stillness. “The Veil thins here. Feels… porous.” The grove wasn’t what Rory expected. She'd pictured something quaint, perhaps a fairy ring. Instead, it was a pocket of raw, untamed beauty. Wildflowers, blooms she’d never seen before—luminescent blues, fiery oranges—carpeted the ground, their scent cloying and sweet. Twisted branches of ancient trees intertwined, forming a canopy that filtered the sunlight into emerald shards. There were no paths, just an unfolding of natural chaos. “So, this is it?” Rory asked, dropping her bag by a moss-covered stone. "A hidden bit of fairyland in suburban London?" “A bridge,” Isolde corrected, plucking a delicate, star-shaped flower. “A place where the seams between worlds loosen. A place I’m forbidden to linger.” Nyx moved further into the grove, their shadowy form dissolving into the dappled light. “Forbidden doesn’t deter you much, does it?” “Restrictions are merely suggestions to those with insight.” Isolde’s gaze drifted past Rory, unfocused. “We search for a fracture, yes? A point where the pull from Dymas is strongest.” Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed with a faint warmth, a subtle thrum against her skin. She’d gotten the pendant a month ago, slipped into her bag after a delivery to a particularly eccentric collector in Kensington. No note, no explanation. Just… the pendant. It started feeling warmer a few days ago and had led her to Isolde, who confirmed its connection to Hel. “It’s getting stronger,” she said, her voice hushed. The heartstone felt like a captured ember now. “The pull, I mean.” They moved deeper, following Nyx, who seemed to navigate by something other than sight—a shifting of shadows, a whisper of energy. The wildflowers grew denser, taller, brushing against their faces with a velvety touch. Strange melodies echoed through the grove, neither bird song nor music, but something in between. The air grew heavy, saturated with a sense of ancient power. “This isn't like anything I’ve ever…” Rory trailed off, struggling to find the right words. It wasn't simply beautiful. It was *other*. Like a dream given form, or a half-remembered myth. Isolde stopped before a copse of trees, their bark a shimmering silver. “The Wardens used to mark these passages with runes. Long faded, now. But the echoes remain.” Nyx traced a hand—or what served as a hand—over the bark. “Energy signature. Definite strain on the Veil here.” The ground beneath Rory’s feet felt strangely soft, yielding. She looked down and realized she wasn’t standing on earth, but on a layer of petals. Millions of them, swirling in gentle currents of air. “Footprints don’t take hold here,” Isolde said, observing Rory’s lack of impressions. “A courtesy, perhaps. Or a warning.” A low hum began to vibrate through the grove, growing steadily louder. The wildflowers started to glow, their colors intensifying. Rory felt a prickling sensation on her skin, like static electricity. “Something’s changing,” Nyx whispered, their form solidifying, becoming sharply defined. “The air…it’s becoming richer, denser.” They reached a clearing. In the center stood an ancient oak, its branches gnarled and reaching like skeletal fingers. The tree wasn't alive. Not in any way Rory understood. The wood possessed a dull, obsidian sheen, as if carved from stone. A swirling vortex of amber light pulsed at the base of the trunk. “Dymas,” Isolde breathed, her pale lavender eyes widening. “A tendril reaching through.” The heat radiating from the vortex was intense, baking Rory's skin. The scent of overripe fruit had become overpowering, bordering on nauseating. The metallic tang in the air had sharpened, now smelling distinctly of blood. “It's…warm,” Rory said, swallowing hard. “Unnaturally warm.” “Belphegor’s influence,” Nyx observed. “The Smoker likes to tempt. To indulge. The warmth is a lure.” A figure materialized within the amber light—a shadow at first, then slowly coalescing into a form. Tall and imposing, with antlers sprouting from its head, the creature’s eyes burned with a hungry, avaricious light. It didn't quite *look* at them, but *assessed* them, like livestock. “He’s testing us,” Isolde said, her voice barely a whisper. “Seeing who might be tempted.” The creature’s lips peeled back in a slow, predatory smile. “Welcome, travelers. I offer respite. Sustenance. All your heart desires.” Its voice wasn't sound, but a thought implanted directly into Rory’s mind. *Endless feasting.* *Infinite pleasure.* Rory’s hand tightened on the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade. It was ice cold against her palm, a stark contrast to the oppressive heat radiating from the vortex. The Heartstone Pendant throbbed, almost painfully, against her chest. “Don’t look too long,” warned Isolde, her voice sharper. “Don’t let it see your hunger.” Nyx moved forward, their shadowy form cutting through the heat like a knife. "We seek a rip. Not a banquet.” The creature’s smile didn’t falter. “Rips are easily mended. Hunger… is eternal." It raised a hand, and a table laden with food materialized before them. Fruits she’d never seen—glowing crimson and deep purple—overflowed from silver platters. Roasted meats, dripping with succulent juices, emitted a mouthwatering aroma. But something was wrong. The food looked…too perfect. Too vibrant. “Don’t even think about it,” Rory muttered, focusing on the intricate carvings on the obsidian oak. The air felt thick with anticipation, heavy with a silent challenge. “Subtlety suits them,” Nyx said, their form flickering. “They weren’t expecting a fight.” “They rarely do.” Isolde’s gaze remained fixed on the creature. "But they always prepare for one."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"a thought implanted directly [directly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.051
85.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1059
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1059
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"fractured"
count1
2
word"unsettled"
count1
3
word"enigmatic"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count3
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"navigate"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"sense of"
count1
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"imposing"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"oppressive"
count1
15
word"throbbed"
count1
16
word"perfect"
count1
17
word"intricate"
count1
18
word"anticipation"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"fractured"
2"unsettled"
3"enigmatic"
4"whisper"
5"pulsed"
6"warmth"
7"navigate"
8"echoed"
9"sense of"
10"echoes"
11"traced"
12"imposing"
13"stark"
14"oppressive"
15"throbbed"
16"perfect"
17"intricate"
18"anticipation"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences82
matches
0"k with anticipation"
73.17% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords10
totalWords1045
ratio0.01
matches
0"drifted"
1"flowed"
2"between"
3"other"
4"look"
5"assessed"
6"Endless feasting."
7"Infinite pleasure."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
51.60% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount813
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Nyx9
Rory16
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde12
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Kensington1
Hel1
Fruits1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Heartstone"
4"Pendant"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Kensington"
3"Hel"
globalScore0.516
windowScore0.667
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a captured ember now"
1"quite look* at them, but *assessed* them, like livestock"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.957
wordCount1045
matches
0"neither bird song nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean29.03
std17.28
cv0.595
sampleLengths
066
116
241
35
418
512
665
721
823
921
1029
1168
1220
1360
1431
1528
1619
1734
1818
1931
2015
2154
2212
2335
247
2516
2645
2715
2836
2937
3015
3120
3256
3327
3413
3516
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"wasn’t standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences103
ratio0.058
matches
0"Ahead, Nyx drifted—not walked, *drifted*—between the ancient oak standing stones, their form flickering like a heat haze."
1"Wildflowers, blooms she’d never seen before—luminescent blues, fiery oranges—carpeted the ground, their scent cloying and sweet."
2"They moved deeper, following Nyx, who seemed to navigate by something other than sight—a shifting of shadows, a whisper of energy."
3"Nyx traced a hand—or what served as a hand—over the bark."
4"A figure materialized within the amber light—a shadow at first, then slowly coalescing into a form."
5"Fruits she’d never seen—glowing crimson and deep purple—overflowed from silver platters."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount827
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"delicate, star-shaped flower."
1"ice cold against her"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.032648125755743655
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.012091898428053204
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean10.15
std4.96
cv0.489
sampleLengths
012
119
217
318
411
55
66
716
819
95
106
1112
126
136
146
158
169
1716
1816
1910
2013
218
229
2314
2414
257
2614
2715
288
2912
3021
314
321
332
3420
358
368
374
3821
3913
4015
4111
4215
434
443
459
4612
4716
4811
498
63.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.44660194174757284
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners46
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Instead, it was a pocket"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences78
matches
0"It wasn’t the fading light"
1"She'd pictured something quaint, perhaps"
2"It pulsed with a faint"
3"She’d gotten the pendant a"
4"It started feeling warmer a"
5"she said, her voice hushed"
6"They moved deeper, following Nyx,"
7"It wasn't simply beautiful."
8"It was *other*."
9"She looked down and realized"
10"They reached a clearing."
11"It didn't quite *look* at"
12"Its voice wasn't sound, but"
13"It was ice cold against"
14"It raised a hand, and"
ratio0.192
56.15% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences78
matches
0"The air tasted of overripe"
1"Rory adjusted the strap of"
2"Isolde, a splash of silver"
3"Isolde murmured, her voice a"
4"Rory glanced over her shoulder"
5"The mundane sprawl of Richmond"
6"It wasn’t the fading light"
7"Isolde offered a small, enigmatic"
8"Nyx’s whisper cut through the"
9"The grove wasn’t what Rory"
10"She'd pictured something quaint, perhaps"
11"Wildflowers, blooms she’d never seen"
12"Rory asked, dropping her bag"
13"Isolde corrected, plucking a delicate,"
14"Nyx moved further into the"
15"Isolde’s gaze drifted past Rory,"
16"Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant"
17"It pulsed with a faint"
18"She’d gotten the pendant a"
19"It started feeling warmer a"
ratio0.808
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Ahead, Nyx drifted—not walked, *drifted*—between the ancient oak standing stones, their form flickering like a heat haze."
1"Twisted branches of ancient trees intertwined, forming a canopy that filtered the sunlight into emerald shards."
2"It started feeling warmer a few days ago and had led her to Isolde, who confirmed its connection to Hel."
3"They moved deeper, following Nyx, who seemed to navigate by something other than sight—a shifting of shadows, a whisper of energy."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her voice a chime"
1"Isolde’s gaze drifted, unfocused"
2"she said, her voice hushed"
3"Rory trailed, struggling to find the right words"
4"Nyx whispered, their form solidifying, becoming sharply defined"
5"Isolde said, her voice barely a whisper"
6"warned Isolde, her voice sharper"
7"Nyx said, their form flickering"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde corrected (correct)"
2"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
3"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
4"Nyx observed (observe)"
5"warned Isolde (warn)"
6"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.538
effectiveRatio0.359
73.4641%