Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB2BN7X4Y1PFK02GHJB4DF

Run Details

Duration:
35.6s
Cost:
$0.000287
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pulsed, a frantic thrum against Aurora’s skin. It vibrated with an intensity that made her teeth ache. Beside her, Nyx shifted, their form rippling like heat rising from asphalt. They’d been silent since stepping through the shimmering portal tucked away in Richmond Park, a portal Isolde had insisted was “the most direct route to… acclimation.” “Are you getting a reading?” Aurora asked, clutching the pendant. Nyx’s violet eyes, faintly luminous in the amber twilight, scanned the landscape. "Magnitude… significant. Resonance nearing critical." They extended a hand, the shadow-like fingers blurring as they reached out to touch a towering, iridescent fungus that pulsed with soft, internal light. “This place… it sings.” Eva, ever the pragmatist, tugged at the sleeve of Aurora’s worn jacket. "Singing fungi aren’t exactly reassuring, Rory. Where *are* we exactly? It’s warm, uncomfortably so.” Aurora swallowed, the air thick and sweet, tasting faintly of overripe fruit and something she couldn’t quite place - something decadent and unsettling. “Dymas. Isolde said it’s a pocket, a fractured echo of Hel’s realm of Gluttony.” The sight that unfolded around them defied easy description. The sky was a perpetual amber sunset, casting a honeyed glow over a landscape that seemed to defy the laws of botany. Vines thick as pythons dripped with clusters of luminescent berries. Trees bore fruit of impossible colors - sapphire blue peaches, ruby red pears, emerald green plums. A waterfall cascaded down a cliff face covered in what looked like sculpted marzipan, the water itself shimmering with a viscous, golden sheen. The ground beneath their feet was soft, yielding, and spongy, like walking on a giant, moss-covered cake. The air hummed with the buzz of unseen insects and a low, rhythmic thrumming that resonated deep in their chests. Eva wrinkled her nose. “It smells like a bakery exploded.” Nyx inhaled deeply, the shadow of their form rippling. “More than that. It smells of… satiety. Of endless fulfillment.” They moved forward, effortlessly gliding over the spongy ground. Aurora followed, the Heartstone warming against her palm. The Fae-Forged Blade at her hip felt cold in contrast, a stark reminder of the potential danger lurking beneath the veneer of indulgence. "Isolde didn’t mention anything about it feeling like inhaling honey,” Aurora muttered. They ventured deeper, passing trees laden with fruit that practically vibrated with ripeness. A creature resembling a hummingbird, but the size of a small dog, zipped past, its wings a blur of iridescent scales, sipping nectar from a blossom the size of a dinner plate. “Bloody hell,” Eva breathed, staring after it. Up ahead, they saw structures – not buildings in any conventional sense, but rather organic forms that seemed to have grown from the landscape itself. One resembled a giant, hollowed-out pomegranate, its walls pulsating with a soft, rosy light. Another looked like a colossal mushroom cap, its underside covered in intricate carvings of swirling vines and grotesque, grinning faces. “This is… unsettling,” Aurora said, her voice barely above a whisper. Nyx paused, their form solidifying slightly, the violet glow of their eyes intensifying. “The architecture… it’s not merely decorative. It’s consuming. Observe the patterns.” Aurora followed their gaze. The carvings on the mushroom cap weren’t just decorative. They seemed to depict scenes of feasting, of endless, voracious consumption. Figures with elongated limbs and hollow eyes devoured mountains of food, their faces contorted in expressions of ecstatic greed. Eva shivered. “I don’t like the look of those faces.” They approached the pomegranate structure cautiously. As they drew closer, they heard sounds – a cacophony of clinking glasses, cheerful laughter, and the rhythmic chopping of knives. “Sounds like a party,” Eva said dryly. Nyx tilted their head, listening intently. “Not precisely a celebration. More akin to… a competition. A perpetual banquet.” The opening of the pomegranate structure resembled a giant, beckoning maw. Peeking inside, they saw a vast chamber bathed in the rosy light. Tables stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with an unimaginable array of food. Roasts shimmered on spits, mountains of pastries rose in tiers, and rivers of wine flowed freely in jeweled goblets. And seated around the tables were… things. Not quite human, not quite anything Aurora could recognize. Some resembled bloated, grotesque caricatures of humans, their faces flushed and their eyes glazed over with gluttony. Others were entirely alien, with multiple limbs, shimmering hides, and mouths filled with rows of needle-sharp teeth. They were all eating. Devouring. With a frantic, almost desperate energy. A figure detached itself from the throng and glided towards them. It was tall and slender, with skin the color of deep burgundy and eyes that glowed with an unsettling intelligence. It wore a chef's hat and apron stained with an assortment of vibrant juices. “Welcome, travelers,” the figure said, its voice smooth and oily. “Welcome to the Eternal Feast. Care to join us? We have every conceivable delicacy, prepared with the finest ingredients from across all realms.” It gestured towards the tables with a flourish. “There is no shortage here. Only endless possibility.” Aurora felt a pang of nausea. The sheer excess of it all was overwhelming. “We… appreciate the invitation,” Aurora managed to say, her voice tight. “But we’re just passing through.” The figure’s smile didn’t waver, but its eyes narrowed slightly. “Passing through? No one merely *passes through* Dymas. Everyone feasts. Everyone indulges. It is the nature of this place.” Nyx stepped forward, their form solidifying further, casting a long, unsettling shadow over the figure. “We are not here to partake in your… endless revelry. We have a destination.” The figure’s smile widened, revealing rows of sharp, pointed teeth. “A destination? How… intriguing. But tell me, traveler… what could be more important than a moment of exquisite pleasure? A taste of true fulfillment?” It reached out a long, slender hand towards Aurora, its fingers twitching. "Just one bite," it purred. "A single taste." Aurora instinctively recoiled, the Heartstone pulsing against her skin, growing hotter with each passing second. Eva stepped in front of her, her expression a mixture of fear and defiance. “We’re leaving,” Eva stated, her voice surprisingly firm. The figure chuckled, a dry, rasping sound. “Leaving? But the feast has only just begun.” Its eyes flickered to Nyx. “Perhaps you would be willing to stay? A Shade such as yourself… you must be terribly bored.” Nyx’s shadow rippled again, obscuring their features. “I am not easily amused.” “Then you lack imagination,” the figure retorted, its voice dripping with mock amusement. “Very well. Go. But know this: the doors of Dymas are always open. And the hunger… it never fades.” They turned and hurried back toward the portal, the laughter and clinking glasses echoing behind them. The sweetness of the air suddenly felt cloying, suffocating. “What was *that*?” Eva gasped, stumbling over the spongy ground. Aurora didn’t answer, her eyes fixed on the Heartstone. It pulsed with an almost unbearable intensity, guiding them toward the shimmering gateway that separated them from the horrors of Dymas.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:15:12.561Z" 2/20/2026, 8:15:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said dryly [dryly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
69.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"cautiously"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"slightly"
2"cautiously"
3"precisely"
4"very"
5"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1162
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"vibrated"
count2
2
word"intensity"
count2
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"resonance"
count1
5
word"fractured"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count2
8
word"resonated"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"potential"
count1
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count1
14
word"structure"
count2
15
word"cacophony"
count1
16
word"maw"
count1
17
word"shimmered"
count1
18
word"pang"
count1
19
word"intriguing"
count1
20
word"flickered"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"vibrated"
2"intensity"
3"scanned"
4"resonance"
5"fractured"
6"echo"
7"rhythmic"
8"resonated"
9"stark"
10"reminder"
11"potential"
12"intricate"
13"whisper"
14"structure"
15"cacophony"
16"maw"
17"shimmered"
18"pang"
19"intriguing"
20"flickered"
21"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
67.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords1162
ratio0.003
matches
0"are"
1"passes through"
2"that"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount885
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Aurora14
Nyx8
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde1
Eva8
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Dymas1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Eva"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.709
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"quite place - something decadent and unsettling"
1"landscape that seemed to defy the laws of botany"
2"looked like sculpted marzipan, the water"
3"forms that seemed to have grown from the landscape itself"
4"looked like a colossal mushroom cap, its"
5"Not quite human, not quite anything Aurora could recognize"
6"not quite anything Aurora could recognize"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.861
wordCount1162
matches
0"not buildings in any conventional sense, but rather organic forms"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean29.05
std17.24
cv0.594
sampleLengths
057
110
245
326
437
580
637
710
828
931
1012
1145
127
1359
1411
1524
1643
1710
1827
197
2018
2158
2250
2311
2445
2549
2614
2716
2829
2929
3034
3120
3229
338
3437
3512
3632
3725
3810
3930
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences92
ratio0.043
matches
0"Aurora swallowed, the air thick and sweet, tasting faintly of overripe fruit and something she couldn’t quite place - something decadent and unsettling."
1"Trees bore fruit of impossible colors - sapphire blue peaches, ruby red pears, emerald green plums."
2"Up ahead, they saw structures – not buildings in any conventional sense, but rather organic forms that seemed to have grown from the landscape itself."
3"As they drew closer, they heard sounds – a cacophony of clinking glasses, cheerful laughter, and the rhythmic chopping of knives."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount885
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"giant, moss-covered cake."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.03954802259887006
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.0192090395480226
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean12.63
std6.67
cv0.528
sampleLengths
09
110
212
326
410
512
629
74
812
914
1023
1114
129
1322
1410
1516
1623
1717
1820
194
206
219
2219
238
2423
2512
2613
2732
287
2925
3014
3120
3211
3313
3411
354
369
3711
3819
392
408
416
4221
437
446
4512
4611
4712
4816
4919
78.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners46
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences71
matches
0"It vibrated with an intensity"
1"They’d been silent since stepping"
2"They extended a hand, the"
3"They moved forward, effortlessly gliding"
4"They ventured deeper, passing trees"
5"They seemed to depict scenes"
6"They approached the pomegranate structure"
7"They were all eating."
8"It was tall and slender,"
9"It wore a chef's hat"
10"It gestured towards the tables"
11"It reached out a long,"
12"Its eyes flickered to Nyx"
13"They turned and hurried back"
14"It pulsed with an almost"
ratio0.211
16.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences71
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed, a frantic"
1"It vibrated with an intensity"
2"They’d been silent since stepping"
3"Aurora asked, clutching the pendant"
4"Nyx’s violet eyes, faintly luminous"
5"They extended a hand, the"
6"Eva, ever the pragmatist, tugged"
7"Aurora swallowed, the air thick"
8"The sight that unfolded around"
9"The sky was a perpetual"
10"Vines thick as pythons dripped"
11"Trees bore fruit of impossible"
12"A waterfall cascaded down a"
13"The ground beneath their feet"
14"The air hummed with the"
15"Eva wrinkled her nose."
16"Nyx inhaled deeply, the shadow"
17"They moved forward, effortlessly gliding"
18"Aurora followed, the Heartstone warming"
19"The Fae-Forged Blade at her"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Beside her, Nyx shifted, their form rippling like heat rising from asphalt."
1"The sky was a perpetual amber sunset, casting a honeyed glow over a landscape that seemed to defy the laws of botany."
2"The air hummed with the buzz of unseen insects and a low, rhythmic thrumming that resonated deep in their chests."
3"Up ahead, they saw structures – not buildings in any conventional sense, but rather organic forms that seemed to have grown from the landscape itself."
4"Nyx paused, their form solidifying slightly, the violet glow of their eyes intensifying."
5"Nyx stepped forward, their form solidifying further, casting a long, unsettling shadow over the figure."
6"Aurora instinctively recoiled, the Heartstone pulsing against her skin, growing hotter with each passing second."
7"It pulsed with an almost unbearable intensity, guiding them toward the shimmering gateway that separated them from the horrors of Dymas."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"the figure said, its voice smooth and oily"
2"Aurora managed, her voice tight"
3"Eva stated, her voice surprisingly firm"
4"the figure retorted, its voice dripping with mock amusement"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
1"Eva breathed (breathe)"
2"Aurora managed (manage)"
3"Eva stated (state)"
4"the figure retorted (retort)"
5"Eva gasped (gasp)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.375
67.2137%