| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.42% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1192 | | totalAiIsms | 44 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "apprehension" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "crystalline" | | 4 | "resonance" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "effortless" | | 10 | "spectral" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "comforting" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "constructed" | | 15 | "intricate" | | 16 | "stark" | | 17 | "glistening" | | 18 | "shimmered" | | 19 | "down her spine" | | 20 | "echoed" | | 21 | "structure" | | 22 | "profound" | | 23 | "chilling" | | 24 | "silk" | | 25 | "footsteps" | | 26 | "dance" | | 27 | "shattered" | | 28 | "fractured" | | 29 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 43.65% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1195 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 1044 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 10 | | Nyx | 4 | | Silas | 4 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Dymas | 2 | | Suddenly | 2 | | Isolde | 4 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Blade" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "something akin to burnt sugar as Aurora stepped" | | 1 | "sounded like silverware and the ragged sig" | | 2 | "grace that seemed to defy gravity, gliding through the alien forest with effortless ease" | | 3 | "looked like miniature feasts – glistening" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1195 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 51.96 | | std | 34.99 | | cv | 0.673 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 123 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 122 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 64 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 113 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 103 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 23 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 78 | | 17 | 28 | | 18 | 45 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 47 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 51 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 172 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 85 | | ratio | 0.118 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Nyx drifted, a silhouette sculpted from deepest shadow, their violet eyes – faint, almost swallowed by their form – fixed on the space beyond." | | 1 | "The bark wasn't wood; it resembled polished obsidian, cool to the touch, and pulsed with a faint, rhythmic heartbeat." | | 2 | "Nyx shifted, momentarily coalescing into a more defined form – a lean, powerful figure with limbs like polished charcoal and eyes that burned with an ancient, unsettling intelligence." | | 3 | "It wasn’t a comforting warmth; it felt…" | | 4 | "They resembled opulent palaces, yet there was a disturbing lack of decoration – no tapestries, no paintings, no personal touches." | | 5 | "A procession of shadowy figures, their forms shifting and indistinct, passed them by, carrying platters laden with what looked like miniature feasts – glistening meats, candied fruits, and swirling drinks that shimmered with an unnatural light." | | 6 | "Suddenly, a sound pierced the atmospheric chanting – a high-pitched, keening wail that echoed through the forest." | | 7 | "It was coming from a massive, circular structure at the heart of the vineyard – a colossal, obsidian amphitheater dominated by a towering altar crafted from a single, enormous ribcage." | | 8 | "The butterflies were alive with tormented faces—lost loved ones, shattered dreams, forgotten ambitions." | | 9 | "A gaping fissure opened in the mossy ground, revealing a swirling vortex of darkness – a shimmering portal to another realm." |
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| 92.25% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1041 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "gleaming, crimson-handled knife," |
| | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.03650336215177714 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.022094140249759846 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 85 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 85 | | mean | 14.06 | | std | 7.77 | | cv | 0.553 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 20 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 36 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 61.96% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.43529411764705883 | | totalSentences | 85 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "More like a heat haze" | | 1 | "Suddenly, a sound pierced the" | | 2 | "Suddenly, the ground beneath them" |
| | ratio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t a curtain, not" | | 1 | "It was a landscape sculpted" | | 2 | "It was a carpet of" | | 3 | "she asked, pointing to a" | | 4 | "They moved with a fluid" | | 5 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 6 | "He focused the device on" | | 7 | "It wasn’t a comforting warmth;" | | 8 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 9 | "They resembled opulent palaces, yet" | | 10 | "They moved with a disconcerting," | | 11 | "It was coming from a" | | 12 | "It was a complete soul," | | 13 | "It was tall and gaunt," | | 14 | "It moved with a chilling" | | 15 | "he reported, his voice strained" | | 16 | "It was like looking into" | | 17 | "they whispered, their violet eyes" | | 18 | "she said, gripping the hilt" | | 19 | "It didn't scream." |
| | ratio | 0.3 | |
| 38.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of crushed" | | 1 | "It wasn’t a curtain, not" | | 2 | "The scent intensified, prickling at" | | 3 | "Isolde followed, her silver hair" | | 4 | "Silas muttered, his voice tight" | | 5 | "The world beyond the veil" | | 6 | "It was a landscape sculpted" | | 7 | "Trees, impossibly tall and slender," | | 8 | "The bark wasn't wood; it" | | 9 | "It was a carpet of" | | 10 | "Isolde stated, her voice a" | | 11 | "Aurora swallowed, the sweet-burnt sugar" | | 12 | "she asked, pointing to a" | | 13 | "The leaves weren’t green, but" | | 14 | "A low, guttural chanting drifted" | | 15 | "Nyx shifted, momentarily coalescing into" | | 16 | "They moved with a fluid" | | 17 | "they murmured, their voice a" | | 18 | "Silas, ever the pragmatist, was" | | 19 | "He focused the device on" |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Before anyone could answer, a" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde followed, her silver hair spilling down her back like a frozen waterfall, and Silas, predictably, was already cursing under his breath, adjusting the str…" | | 1 | "Trees, impossibly tall and slender, spiraled upwards, their branches intertwining to form a canopy that obscured the sky entirely." | | 2 | "It was a carpet of shimmering, iridescent moss that yielded with a disconcerting softness, like walking on liquid moonlight." | | 3 | "Strange, crystalline flowers, shaped like teardrops, bloomed in patches, emitting a low, humming resonance that vibrated through their bones." | | 4 | "The leaves weren’t green, but a deep, bruised purple, and they seemed to writhe subtly as if conscious." | | 5 | "They moved with a fluid grace that seemed to defy gravity, gliding through the alien forest with effortless ease." | | 6 | "A procession of shadowy figures, their forms shifting and indistinct, passed them by, carrying platters laden with what looked like miniature feasts – glistenin…" | | 7 | "Suddenly, a sound pierced the atmospheric chanting – a high-pitched, keening wail that echoed through the forest." | | 8 | "Aurora felt a sharp, overwhelming wave of sorrow wash over her, a profound sense of loss that wasn’t her own." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, their voice a whisper carried on the wind" | | 1 | "she said, her voice barely audible above the unsettling chorus" | | 2 | "Aurora observed, a shiver crawling down her spine" | | 3 | "the figure said, its voice a silken rasp" | | 4 | "he reported, his voice strained" | | 5 | "Isolde asked, her eyes narrowed" | | 6 | "they whispered, their violet eyes widening" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Silas muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde stated (state)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Aurora observed (observe)" | | 4 | "Nyx stated (state)" | | 5 | "he reported (report)" | | 6 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.583 | | effectiveRatio | 0.538 | |