Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB2JWH14EQE47S7T7VCBN9

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Duration:
42.5s
Cost:
$0.000740
Provider:
Phala

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of dust and something else, something metallic and old. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her coat, the chill of the abandoned tube station clinging to the fabric despite the late spring evening. Camden Town, Above, throbbed with music and chatter, a world away from this damp, cavernous space. The sounds were muffled down here, swallowed by the earth. She hadn’t been underground in years, not since… she pushed the memory of DS Morris down, a familiar, unwelcome weight. “Right mess, isn’t it?” Sergeant Miller said, his voice echoing off the curved tiles. He was young, eager, and—Harlow thought with a flicker of irritation—prone to jumping to conclusions. He gestured with a gloved hand towards the body. The victim lay sprawled on the tracks, pale against the grimy concrete. Male, late thirties, expensive suit ruined. A single, precise wound marred his chest, almost surgical in its neatness. No blood splatter. Clean. Too clean. “What are we thinking?” Harlow asked, already knowing Miller’s answer. “Gang related, Detective. Definitely. This place… the Veil Market, I’ve heard stories. Drugs, illegal artifacts. He probably got on the wrong side of someone.” Harlow grunted, circling the body. The Veil Market. She’d heard the whispers too, dismissed them as urban legend. A black market for the… unusual. Bone tokens for entry, rumors of enchanted objects, deals struck in shadows. It sounded like something out of a bad novel. Still, she’d pulled some strings, gotten a reluctant informant to confirm its existence, its shifting location tied to the lunar cycle. The informant hadn’t breathed a word about actual bodies turning up. “No witnesses, of course,” Miller continued, meticulously bagging evidence – a dropped wallet, a single, tarnished coin. “It’s a ghost station. No cameras, no regular patrols.” “What about the wound?” Harlow asked, crouching beside the body. Her worn leather watch, a gift from Morris, scratched against her wrist. “Knife. Professional job, like I said. Someone who knows what they’re doing.” Harlow ran a gloved hand along the victim's coat. Expensive Italian wool. The pockets were empty, but not rifled. The man hadn’t been robbed. He'd been *targeted*. She noticed something else - a faint scent, not of blood, but of ozone. A static charge prickling at the back of her nose. Odd. “The coin,” she said, nodding towards the evidence bag. “What is it?” Miller shrugged. “Looks old. Roman, maybe? I flagged it for forensics.” “Get it to Eva Kowalski,” Harlow said. Miller blinked. “Eva Kowalski? The museum girl? You think she can help with a murder?” “She's an expert in ancient languages and iconography. Overspecialized for most cases, admittedly, but this… this feels different. This isn’t a typical gangland hit, Miller. Something’s off.” Harlow rose, scanning the platform. The Market itself was gone, vanished as quickly as it appeared. Tonight’s location, a forgotten spur off the Northern Line, was now just an empty space, littered with the debris of hasty departure: discarded wrappers, crushed cigarette packets, a single playing card – the Queen of Swords. She picked up the card, turning it over in her hand. “Look at this,” she said, pointing to the tracks. A series of almost imperceptible scratches marred the steel, not the gouges of metal-on-metal, but something finer, like…glass. She pulled out a small flashlight from her kit, sweeping the beam along the tunnel. Deeper in the darkness, she saw them: tiny, glittering fragments, barely visible to the naked eye. “Forensics will miss those,” Miller said, looking over her shoulder. “They’re too small.” “Exactly.” Harlow felt a growing unease. The scratch marks, the ozone smell, the lack of blood…something about this didn't fit. “What do you think then, Detective?” Miller asked, his voice hesitant. “Some kind of…ritual killing?” Harlow didn't dismiss the idea outright. She’d seen enough strange things in her eighteen years on the force to know that the world wasn’t always as it seemed. But she preferred evidence, concrete details she could build a case on. “Not necessarily a ritual, but… deliberate. Precise. The killer didn’t want to leave a mess.” She walked further down the platform, her boots echoing on the stone. She found another oddity - a small brass compass lying near a ventilation shaft. It was tarnished with verdigris, its casing intricate with etched patterns. She picked it up, examining it closely. It wasn’t a standard navigational tool. The face was marked with unfamiliar symbols, a language she didn’t recognize. The needle, instead of pointing North, spun wildly, then settled, quivering, towards a solid wall. “What’s that?” Miller asked, approaching cautiously. “I think,” Harlow said slowly, “it’s a Veil Compass.” She remembered the informant’s whispered description of the device - a tool used to locate supernatural rifts or… portals. It was a ridiculous notion, of course. But the evidence was mounting, pointing towards something beyond the mundane. Something *wrong*. “A compass?” Miller scoffed. “For getting lost in fog?” “It’s attuned to supernatural energy,” Harlow corrected, her voice flat. “Or that’s the theory.” She looked at the needle, still pointing at the wall. "And it's telling us there’s something *behind* that wall." She ran her hand along the brickwork, searching for a seam, a hidden panel. It was solid, unyielding. But she noticed something else: a barely perceptible warmth radiating from the wall, a subtle energy that made the hairs on her arms stand on end. "Miller," she said, her voice sharp. "Get a team to scan this wall. Thermal imaging, sonar, everything. I want to know what's behind it." “You think there’s a hidden room?” “I think we’re not seeing the whole picture, Miller. We’re looking at a murder, yes, but I suspect it's a consequence of something…bigger. Something that operates outside the normal rules.” Miller, still looking skeptical, nodded and reached for his radio. “Right you are, Detective. Sending the request now.” Harlow turned back to the body, her gaze lingering on the precise wound. The lack of blood continued to bother her. “Find out everything you can about the victim. His associates, his business dealings, everything. And Miller…check if he has any connections to the occult.” She paused, thinking of Eva. She needed a fresh perspective, an understanding of the symbols and artifacts that were starting to surround this case. “And get me Kowalski,” she repeated. “I want her down here as soon as possible.” As Miller barked orders into his radio, Harlow stared at the spinning Queen of Swords. It felt like a message, a warning. She didn't know what game was being played, but she knew, with a chilling certainty, that she'd just stepped onto the board. And that whatever had happened here tonight wasn't over. Not by a long shot.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Harlow said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.486
leniency0.971
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.057
86.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"cautiously"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1112
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count2
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"standard"
count1
10
word"warmth"
count1
11
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"throbbed"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"echoing"
5"flicker"
6"scanning"
7"intricate"
8"etched"
9"standard"
10"warmth"
11"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1113
ratio0.003
matches
0"targeted"
1"wrong"
2"behind"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
65.05% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount824
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow14
Quinn1
Town1
Morris2
Miller11
Veil1
Market2
Italian1
Northern1
Line1
Queen2
Swords2
North1
Eva1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Miller"
4"North"
5"Eva"
places
0"Town"
globalScore0.65
windowScore0.667
65.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like something out of a bad novel"
1"felt like a message, a warning"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.695
wordCount1113
matches
0"not of blood, but of ozone"
1"not the gouges of metal-on-metal, but something finer, like…glass"
2"Not necessarily a ritual, but… deliberate"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"know that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean30.92
std21.7
cv0.702
sampleLengths
083
138
236
310
424
577
626
722
812
952
1012
1111
127
1315
1427
1563
1658
1713
1820
1915
2055
2177
226
239
2439
259
2633
2744
2824
296
3030
3118
3245
3324
3415
3558
85.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences87
matches
0"were muffled"
1"been robbed"
2"been *targeted"
3"was gone"
4"being played"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs145
matches
0"was mounting"
1"were starting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences105
ratio0.057
matches
0"He was young, eager, and—Harlow thought with a flicker of irritation—prone to jumping to conclusions."
1"“No witnesses, of course,” Miller continued, meticulously bagging evidence – a dropped wallet, a single, tarnished coin."
2"She noticed something else - a faint scent, not of blood, but of ozone."
3"Tonight’s location, a forgotten spur off the Northern Line, was now just an empty space, littered with the debris of hasty departure: discarded wrappers, crushed cigarette packets, a single playing card – the Queen of Swords."
4"She found another oddity - a small brass compass lying near a ventilation shaft."
5"She remembered the informant’s whispered description of the device - a tool used to locate supernatural rifts or…"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount823
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03523693803159174
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009720534629404616
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean10.6
std6.65
cv0.627
sampleLengths
012
125
216
310
48
512
614
715
89
912
106
1112
123
131
142
1510
1624
175
183
1910
205
211
2212
239
2421
2511
2617
279
2810
2912
3012
319
323
337
345
353
3614
3710
381
399
403
412
429
437
442
4513
4627
475
4811
4936
64.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.41904761904761906
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.37% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences76
matches
0"She hadn’t been underground in"
1"she pushed the memory of"
2"He was young, eager, and—Harlow"
3"He gestured with a gloved"
4"She’d heard the whispers too,"
5"It sounded like something out"
6"Her worn leather watch, a"
7"He'd been *targeted*."
8"She noticed something else -"
9"she said, nodding towards the"
10"She picked up the card,"
11"she said, pointing to the"
12"She pulled out a small"
13"She’d seen enough strange things"
14"She walked further down the"
15"She found another oddity -"
16"It was tarnished with verdigris,"
17"She picked it up, examining"
18"It wasn’t a standard navigational"
19"She remembered the informant’s whispered"
ratio0.382
32.37% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences76
matches
0"The air tasted of dust"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"Camden Town, Above, throbbed with"
3"The sounds were muffled down"
4"She hadn’t been underground in"
5"she pushed the memory of"
6"Sergeant Miller said, his voice"
7"He was young, eager, and—Harlow"
8"He gestured with a gloved"
9"The victim lay sprawled on"
10"A single, precise wound marred"
11"Harlow asked, already knowing Miller’s"
12"Harlow grunted, circling the body."
13"The Veil Market."
14"She’d heard the whispers too,"
15"A black market for the…"
16"Bone tokens for entry, rumors"
17"It sounded like something out"
18"The informant hadn’t breathed a"
19"Miller continued, meticulously bagging evidence"
ratio0.855
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"But she noticed something else: a barely perceptible warmth radiating from the wall, a subtle energy that made the hairs on her arms stand on end."
1"She needed a fresh perspective, an understanding of the symbols and artifacts that were starting to surround this case."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Sergeant Miller said, his voice echoing off the curved tiles"
1"Miller asked, his voice hesitant"
2"Harlow corrected, her voice flat"
3"she said, her voice sharp"
64.29% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Miller continued (continue)"
1"Harlow corrected (correct)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.171
72.6320%