Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB2S6G8SHWRJDDHV6D7AV8

Run Details

Model:
Grok 4
Duration:
1m 45s
Cost:
$0.044848
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain pelted the cobblestones outside The Raven's Nest, turning Soho's narrow streets into slick mirrors under the streetlamps. Aurora Carter pushed through the heavy wooden door, shaking water from her jacket. She hadn't planned on stopping here. London had spat her back out after five years in Berlin, chasing shadows of a life she'd thought she could rebuild. The flat above the bar? Long since rented out to strangers. But habits died hard, and thirst pulled her in. The place smelled the same—peat smoke and aged whiskey, with a undercurrent of damp wood. Dim lights cast long shadows over the walls, where old maps curled at the edges and black-and-white photos stared out like ghosts. A few patrons hunched over their pints at the scarred oak bar, murmuring low. Aurora scanned the room, her bright blue eyes catching on the green neon sign flickering through the window. She slid onto a stool at the far end, away from the cluster of locals. "Whiskey, neat," she said to the bartender, a young guy with tattoos snaking up his arms. He nodded, poured, and slid the glass over without a word. She wrapped her fingers around it, feeling the warmth cut through the chill in her bones. Straight shoulder-length black hair clung to her neck, still wet from the downpour. The small crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom reminder of that childhood fall from the apple tree in Cardiff. Five years. Evan was ancient history now, buried under layers of reinvention—Laila in Berlin's underground clubs, Malphora in the hacker circles she'd dipped into for quick cash. But Rory? That name felt like a skin she'd shed. A shadow fell across the bar. She looked up. Silas Blackwood stood there, wiping a glass with a cloth, his hazel eyes narrowing as recognition dawned. Grey streaked his auburn hair more than she remembered, and his neatly trimmed beard carried the same silver threads. He set the glass down with deliberate care, his silver signet ring glinting under the low lights. A slight limp marked his step as he moved closer, the old knee injury from Prague still dictating his gait. "Rory?" His voice cut through the murmur like a blade, quiet but edged with authority. No hello, no surprise fanfare—just her name, hanging in the air. She froze, glass halfway to her lips. "Silas." He leaned against the bar, arms crossed, studying her. The years had carved deeper lines around his eyes, but he carried himself with that same quiet command, the retired spymaster who never fully retired. "Thought you were a ghost. Berlin, was it? Or did the winds blow you elsewhere?" She set the glass down, harder than intended. Liquid sloshed. "Berlin, yeah. Then Prague for a bit. You keeping tabs?" A faint smile tugged at his lips, but it didn't reach his eyes. "Old habits. Heard you vanished after that mess with Evan. Good riddance to him. But five years, no word? Not even a postcard from the underground?" She traced the rim of her glass, avoiding his gaze. The bar's hum filled the silence—ice clinking in someone else's drink, a low laugh from the corner booth. "Didn't think postcards were your style. Besides, I needed clean air. London choked me after... everything." He nodded, pouring himself a measure of the same whiskey. Slid it across to join hers. "Choked a lot of us. Remember that night you showed up here, bag in hand, eyes like you'd seen the devil? Eva sent you my way. Said you needed a roof and a job that didn't ask questions." Aurora sipped, the burn steadying her. "Yeah. Delivery girl for the Golden Empress by day, crashing in that flat upstairs by night. You patched me up, taught me how to spot a tail. Hell, you even showed me that hidden room behind the bookshelf, like I was one of your operatives." Silas chuckled, a dry sound that echoed off the maps on the wall. "You had the knack for it. Quick thinker, out-of-the-box. Reminded me of myself at your age—before Prague turned me into a limping barman." She glanced at his leg, the limp more pronounced now as he shifted weight. "You never talked much about that. Botched op, knee shattered. End of story." He raised his glass, clinked it against hers. "Stories end when they're done. But you... you've changed. Not just the aliases—Laila, Malphora. Heard whispers. Hacking rings, close calls with the law. That's not the Rory who fled Cardiff with dreams of law school." Her laugh came sharp, bitter. "Law school? That was Dad's dream. Brendan Carter, the barrister, molding his daughter in his image. Mom just nodded along. I ran from Evan, but really, I ran from all of it. Berlin sharpened me. Taught me survival isn't pretty." Silas leaned in closer, voice dropping. "Survival's one thing. Becoming someone else entirely? That's a weight. Saw it in the field—agents who crossed lines, forgot their own names. You look at me like I'm a relic, but I see the regret in your eyes, Rory. Unspoken, sure, but it's there." She met his gaze then, bright blue clashing with hazel. The bar faded around them, the photos on the wall blurring into memories. "Regret? For what? Leaving? Or coming back?" He straightened, ring tapping the bar once. "Both. You left without a goodbye. I woke up one morning, flat empty upstairs. Note on the counter: 'Thanks for the nest. Flying solo.' Thought you'd circle back eventually. Years pass, and here you are, dripping rain like a stray." Aurora pushed her hair back, scar catching the light. "Wasn't personal. Eva checked in on you, didn't she? Told me the bar was thriving, your network still humming in that secret room. You didn't need me underfoot." His expression tightened, a flicker of something raw crossing his face. "Need? No. But you were like the daughter I never had. After Prague, this place became my world. Contacts, whispers, the occasional favor. You brought life to it—your quick wit, those late-night talks over maps, plotting escapes that never happened." She drained her glass, signaling for another. The bartender obliged, but Silas waved him off, pouring it himself. "Escapes. Funny, coming from the Spymaster. You taught me to vanish, Silas. And I did. Berlin's shadows swallowed me whole. Met people who made Evan look like a choirboy. Learned to code my way out of tight spots, forge paths where none existed." He sipped slow, eyes never leaving hers. "And the cost? I see it in how you hold that glass—tight, like it'll slip away. Regret's a silent killer, Rory. Eats at you from the inside. I carried mine from Prague—lost a partner, botched intel. Limped home, opened this bar as a front. But the weight? Never leaves." Her fingers tightened on the glass. Rain hammered the window, a relentless drum. "You think I regret it? The aliases, the risks? Hell, Malphora pulled off hacks that paid for my flat in Kreuzberg. Laila danced through nights that blurred into days. But yeah, maybe there's a piece missing. Coming back here, seeing you... it's like staring at a mirror I shattered years ago." Silas set his glass down, limp carrying him around the bar to her side. He pulled up a stool, close enough that she caught the faint scent of his aftershave—sandalwood, unchanged. "Shattered mirrors still reflect truths. Tell me about Berlin. Not the glamour—the grit." She exhaled, leaning back. "Grit? Started with a job bouncing at a club. Met a guy, hacker type. He showed me the ropes—dark web dives, phishing schemes that danced on the edge of legal. One night, we cracked a corporate server. Adrenaline hit like nothing else. But then... mistakes. Cops raided the squat we operated from. I bolted, left him behind. Echoes of Evan, in a way—running when it got messy." His hand hovered near hers, not touching, but the gesture hung there. "Running's my specialty. Did it after Prague. Partner's name was Elena. Bullet meant for me caught her instead. I limped away, regrets piling up like unpaid tabs. Opened the Nest to bury them. But you? You're young. Don't let it harden you into stone." Aurora's voice softened, edges fraying. "Young? Twenty-five feels ancient some days. Dad's calls stopped after I ditched uni. Mom's letters... they petered out. Unspoken regret there, too. I fled Cardiff, then London, chasing what? Freedom? Now I'm back, and the city's the same, but I'm not." He nodded, beard scratching as he rubbed his chin. "Cities don't change. People do. Look at me—grey hair, bad knee, still pulling strings from behind this bar. That hidden room? Used it last week for a contact from the old days. Favor for favor. But the thrill's gone, replaced by aches." She glanced toward the bookshelf at the back, knowing the mechanism—a twist of a false book spine. "Thrill's overrated. Berlin taught me that. One alias too many, and you forget your own face. Rory Carter? She's the girl with the scar from climbing trees, dreaming of courtrooms. Now? I'm a delivery ghost who hacks on the side." Silas poured them both another round, the amber liquid swirling. "Forget? Never fully. I see her in you still—that cool head, the out-of-the-box spark. Regret's not about erasing the past; it's about carrying it without breaking." Her laugh escaped, softer now. "Poetic for a barman. You always had a way with words, Si. Remember those nights upstairs, poring over your old case files? You'd spin tales of close calls, and I'd plot alternate endings. Childish, maybe, but it felt like possibility." He smiled, genuine this time, lines crinkling. "Not childish. Vital. I missed those nights. After you left, the flat echoed. Rented it to some artist kid, but it's not the same. Unspoken words, Rory—we pile them up like debts." She reached across, fingers brushing his signet ring. "Debts. Yeah. I should've said goodbye. Regretted it on those cold Berlin mornings, wondering if you'd forgotten me." "Forgotten? Impossible." His voice roughened, limp forgotten as he stood. "Come on. Let's dust off that hidden room. Maps are still there. Plot a new escape—together this time." Aurora slid off the stool, rain still drumming outside. The bar's warmth wrapped around them as they moved toward the bookshelf, the weight of years shifting, not lifting, but shared. Unspoken regrets lingered in the air, thick as smoke, but dialogue bridged the gaps, pulling them back from the edges.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:15:26.429Z" 2/20/2026, 8:15:26 PM
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1770
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elena"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1770
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"weight"
count4
9
word"shattered"
count3
10
word"unspoken"
count4
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"echoes"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"warmth"
2"chill"
3"reminder"
4"glinting"
5"traced"
6"silence"
7"echoed"
8"weight"
9"shattered"
10"unspoken"
11"flicker"
12"echoes"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen69
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1746
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount796
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Berlin2
Cardiff1
Laila1
Malphora1
Rory1
Blackwood1
Prague1
Silas6
Aurora6
persons
0"Nest"
1"Carter"
2"Laila"
3"Rory"
4"Blackwood"
5"Silas"
6"Aurora"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
2"Berlin"
3"Cardiff"
4"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a skin she'd shed"
85.45% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.145
wordCount1746
matches
0"not touching, but the gesture hung there"
1"not lifting, but shared"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
70.49% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean45.95
std18.23
cv0.397
sampleLengths
078
184
227
388
49
573
626
78
849
920
1039
1144
1254
1351
1436
1527
1643
1745
1850
1930
2047
2137
2251
2361
2456
2564
2644
2771
2856
2946
3051
3157
3236
3345
3439
3526
3628
3750
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences100
ratio0.07
matches
0"The place smelled the same—peat smoke and aged whiskey, with a undercurrent of damp wood."
1"Evan was ancient history now, buried under layers of reinvention—Laila in Berlin's underground clubs, Malphora in the hacker circles she'd dipped into for quick cash."
2"No hello, no surprise fanfare—just her name, hanging in the air."
3"The bar's hum filled the silence—ice clinking in someone else's drink, a low laugh from the corner booth."
4"He pulled up a stool, close enough that she caught the faint scent of his aftershave—sandalwood, unchanged."
5"She glanced toward the bookshelf at the back, knowing the mechanism—a twist of a false book spine."
6"\"Forget? Never fully. I see her in you still—that cool head, the out-of-the-box spark. Regret's not about erasing the past; it's about carrying it without breaking.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount805
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02360248447204969
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002484472049689441
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean17.46
std13.29
cv0.761
sampleLengths
018
113
26
321
45
56
69
715
822
914
1018
1115
1216
1311
1416
1513
1622
172
1825
192
208
216
223
2317
2419
2517
2620
2715
2811
297
301
319
3225
3315
348
352
3610
3713
3826
3910
4018
4116
4210
436
4438
456
4645
4713
4823
4914
86.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.52
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners52
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
34.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences67
matches
0"She hadn't planned on stopping"
1"She slid onto a stool"
2"she said to the bartender,"
3"He nodded, poured, and slid"
4"She wrapped her fingers around"
5"She looked up."
6"He set the glass down"
7"His voice cut through the"
8"She froze, glass halfway to"
9"He leaned against the bar,"
10"She set the glass down,"
11"She traced the rim of"
12"He nodded, pouring himself a"
13"She glanced at his leg,"
14"He raised his glass, clinked"
15"Her laugh came sharp, bitter."
16"She met his gaze then,"
17"He straightened, ring tapping the"
18"His expression tightened, a flicker"
19"She drained her glass, signaling"
ratio0.463
34.63% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences67
matches
0"Rain pelted the cobblestones outside"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"She hadn't planned on stopping"
3"London had spat her back"
4"The flat above the bar?"
5"The place smelled the same—peat"
6"Aurora scanned the room, her"
7"She slid onto a stool"
8"she said to the bartender,"
9"He nodded, poured, and slid"
10"She wrapped her fingers around"
11"The small crescent scar on"
12"Evan was ancient history now,"
13"That name felt like a"
14"A shadow fell across the"
15"She looked up."
16"Silas Blackwood stood there, wiping"
17"He set the glass down"
18"A slight limp marked his"
19"His voice cut through the"
ratio0.851
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.03
leniency0.061
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.8122%