Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB2ZTB1Q4Z8FFXGMP61XXM

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29.0s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory wrenched the door open, the top deadbolt's scrape echoing off the narrow landing. Lucien stood there, cane hooked over his arm like a gentleman's affectation. Platinum hair gleamed under the dim stairwell bulb. One amber eye caught the light; the black one swallowed it. She gripped the frame. Ptolemy slunk between her ankles, hackles up, a low hiss rumbling from his throat. "You've got some nerve." "Always." He stepped forward uninvited. The cane's ferrule tapped the threshold, then the scuffed lino inside. "Eva around?" Rory blocked him with her shoulder. Bookshelves loomed behind her, scrolls spilling onto every surface like an avalanche frozen mid-slide. The air hung thick with curry spices from downstairs and old paper dust. "Out. Research. And you know that." His lips curved, not quite a smile. He leaned in, close enough for her to catch vetiver and smoke on his collar. "Do I?" She shoved the door wider, letting him pass rather than touch him. Heat prickled her skin where their coats might brush. Ptolemy bolted under the sagging sofa, yellow eyes flashing accusation. Lucien surveyed the flat, gloved fingers trailing a stack of grimoires. Dust motes danced in his wake. "Charming as ever. Your friend's taste in security rivals a vault." "Three deadbolts for a reason." Rory slammed the door, locks snicking home one by one. Her pulse thudded in her ears. Last time they'd parted, his parting gift had been a demon's claw mark across her ribs, courtesy of his underworld mess. "What do you want, Luc? Deliveries stopped at midnight." He turned, cane planted like a challenge. Heterochromatic gaze pinned her. "Information. On Malphora." The alias hit like cold water. Her street name in the shadows, the one she'd buried with Evan back in Cardiff. Lucien had dug it up months ago, during their... whatever it was. Nights tangled in his Mayfair sheets, his half-demon strength pinning her wrists while he whispered secrets in French. Then betrayal. His deal with Avaros demons had dragged her into a firefight, left her bleeding on Shoreditch pavement. He'd vanished. No note. No trace. She crossed her arms, crescent scar on her wrist itching under the sleeve. "Google it. Or pay someone who cares." "Malphora cares." He shed his overcoat, draping it over a chair piled with Eva's notes. Charcoal suit hugged his frame, crisp as a blade. "Sightings in the Warren. Goblins whispering your name. Half-Demon hunter with a barrister's brain." Rory snatched a kettle from the cluttered counter, filled it with a splash. Water hissed against hot metal. Anything to keep her hands busy. "Goblins lie. And I'm retired." "Liar." His voice dropped, velvet over gravel. He closed the gap, stopping inches away. Heat radiated from him, unnatural, like a furnace banked low. "You delivered my package to Silas last week. The one with fangs." She slammed the kettle down. Steam curled up, fogging the air. "Business. Not personal." "Isn't it?" His cane clattered to the floor. Ivory handle gleamed. He cupped her chin, thumb brushing her jaw. Rough stubble grazed her skin. Those eyes bored in, amber flaring like hellfire. "You vanished after Avaros. Left my bed cold. My calls unanswered." Her breath caught. Lies burned her tongue. She'd waited three days in that hotel, stitches pulling, phone clutched like a lifeline. Nothing. Then Eva's call: *He's gone underground. Demons own him now.* Hurt twisted into fury. She jerked free, but his fingers lingered, tracing her pulse. "You left first." She shoved his chest. Solid muscle yielded, then pushed back. "Firefight. Your demon daddy's mess. I wake up alone, courtesy of your fixer friends." Lucien caught her wrists, gentle but iron. The scar on her left one whitened under his grip. "I saved you. Avaros wanted your head for outsmarting their scout. I bargained." "Bargained me away, you mean." She twisted, but he held firm, pulling her flush against him. Vetiver flooded her senses, mingled with his skin's faint brimstone tang. Memories crashed: his mouth on her throat in that penthouse, cane discarded, blade forgotten. Her nails digging into his back as he growled her true name. *Aurora.* "Not you." His breath feathered her ear. "Your mark. Malphora's bounty. Cleared." She searched his face. Black eye unreadable, amber molten. Lies? Truth? Quick thinking had always been her edge, but he scrambled it. "Why now? Six months silent, then this?" The kettle whistled, shrill. He released her. She yanked it off, scalding water sloshing. China mugs clinked as she poured, hands steady by force. Tea bags plopped in, steaming. "Because they're circling again." He retrieved his cane, blade glinting as he flexed it shut. "Goblins in Eva's alleys. Sniffing for Pre-Law dropout with demon-slaying scars." Rory thrust a mug at him. Black, no sugar, how he took it. Their fingers brushed. Electricity arced, sharp as his hidden steel. "Eva's clean. Brick Lane's her turf." "Not anymore." He sipped, eyes never leaving hers. Mug paused midway. "Ptolemy sensed it first. Hissing at shadows." The cat growled from under the sofa, fur bushed. Rory knelt, peered into the gloom. Ptolemy's tail lashed, pupils slits. Something scratched faint at the baseboards. "Rat?" But her gut twisted. Supernatural reek seeped through: wet earth and rot. Lucien crouched beside her, suit trousers stretching taut. His shoulder brushed hers. "Worse. Warren scouts." She shot up, heart slamming. "You brought them here?" "Followed me." He rose fluid, cane ready. "Old debts." Fury ignited. She grabbed Eva's nearest grimoire, heavy tome slapping open to a binding spell. Latin runes swam before her eyes. "Get out. Both of you." His laugh rumbled low. "Fight with me, Rory. Like old times." Old times. His body arching over hers, sweat-slick, her name a prayer in four tongues. Hurt resurfaced, raw. She slammed the book shut. "Old times ended when you ghosted." "I protected you." He stepped closer, crowding her against the bookshelves. Scrolls tumbled. His free hand skimmed her waist, possessive. "Avaros marked you through me. I cut the tie." Her back hit a shelf. Hard spines dug in. His scent enveloped her, dizzying. "By fucking off?" "By letting you hate me." His mouth hovered over hers, breath mingling. Amber eye burned. "Easier than watching you die." Lips brushed. Soft. Tentative. Then demanding. She melted, hands fisting his shirt. Silk whispered under her palms. He tasted of tea and sin, tongue coaxing hers with demon hunger. Cane propped against the wall, his fingers tangled in her black hair, tilting her head. Ptolemy yowled. They broke apart. Scratching intensified, baseboards buckling. Dust puffed. A clawed hand burst through, green-skinned, fangs gnashing. "Goblin!" Lucien snatched his cane, blade snicking free. Rory kicked the arm back, grimoire raised like a shield. Another claw punched through beside it, splintering wood. "Seal the flat!" Lucien slashed, ichor spraying. The goblin shrieked, high and wet. She chanted the binding, voice steady despite the quake in her chest. Runes glowed faint blue. The hole sealed, claws scraping futile outside. Silence fell, broken only by their ragged breaths. Lucien sheathed the blade, eyes dark. "They're organised." Rory dropped the book, chest heaving. His kiss lingered on her lips, traitorous heat pooling low. "You led them here. To Eva's." "To you." He cupped her face again, thumb smudging ichor on her cheek. "Malphora's the prize." She slapped his hand away. Attraction warred with rage. "Use someone else." "Can't." His voice roughened. "You're in my blood." Ptolemy darted out, rubbing her calves. The front door rattled. Three deadbolts held, but hinges groaned. More claws. Multiple. The floor vibrated. Lucien's cane whirred open. "They breached the wards." Rory scanned the chaos. Scrolls, books, Ptolemy fleeing. Her scar burned. History crashed back: attraction like wildfire, hurt like salt in wounds. Unsaid words choked her. "Why me, Luc? Truth." He met her gaze, amber and black unblinking. "Because I never stopped." The door splintered. Green faces poured through the gap, fangs bared. Rory grabbed a silver letter opener from the table. Lucien lunged. A larger shape loomed behind them, horns curling from shadow. Demon eyes gleamed red.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.309
leniency0.618
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1345
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1345
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"vibrated"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"loomed"
2"pulse"
3"velvet"
4"tracing"
5"unreadable"
6"glinting"
7"gloom"
8"silk"
9"silence"
10"vibrated"
11"scanned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences157
matches
0"d with rage"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences157
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences194
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords8
totalWords1339
ratio0.006
matches
0"He's gone underground. Demons own him now."
1"Aurora."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1068
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Evan1
Cardiff1
Mayfair1
French1
Avaros1
Shoreditch1
Eva3
Charcoal1
Ivory1
Hurt2
Solid1
Vetiver1
Rory10
Mug1
Supernatural1
Fury1
Scrolls2
Amber1
Ptolemy6
Lucien10
persons
0"Evan"
1"Eva"
2"Hurt"
3"Vetiver"
4"Rory"
5"Mug"
6"Scrolls"
7"Amber"
8"Ptolemy"
9"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"French"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1339
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences194
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean21.95
std13.8
cv0.629
sampleLengths
014
131
218
34
418
539
624
731
828
951
1014
1176
1220
1338
1429
1536
1614
1743
1846
1927
2030
2154
2212
2329
2429
2526
2629
2718
2826
2913
3015
319
329
3326
3411
3529
3629
3717
3820
3944
402
4117
428
4318
4413
4523
468
478
4822
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences157
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs237
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences194
ratio0.005
matches
0"One amber eye caught the light; the black one swallowed it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1072
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.021455223880597014
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0009328358208955224
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences194
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences194
mean6.9
std4.06
cv0.588
sampleLengths
014
112
28
311
44
514
64
75
811
92
106
1114
1213
136
147
1515
162
1712
189
1910
2011
216
2211
2315
246
2521
269
277
284
293
306
3115
329
333
3418
352
3617
372
382
392
4013
417
4215
439
4414
4513
465
476
485
497
88.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5360824742268041
totalSentences194
uniqueOpeners104
24.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences137
matches
0"Then Eva's call: *He's gone"
ratio0.007
71.09% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences137
matches
0"She gripped the frame."
1"He stepped forward uninvited"
2"His lips curved, not quite"
3"He leaned in, close enough"
4"She shoved the door wider,"
5"Her pulse thudded in her"
6"He turned, cane planted like"
7"Her street name in the"
8"His deal with Avaros demons"
9"She crossed her arms, crescent"
10"He shed his overcoat, draping"
11"His voice dropped, velvet over"
12"He closed the gap, stopping"
13"She slammed the kettle down."
14"His cane clattered to the"
15"He cupped her chin, thumb"
16"Her breath caught."
17"She'd waited three days in"
18"She jerked free, but his"
19"She shoved his chest"
ratio0.372
29.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences137
matches
0"Rory wrenched the door open,"
1"Lucien stood there, cane hooked"
2"Platinum hair gleamed under the"
3"She gripped the frame."
4"Ptolemy slunk between her ankles,"
5"He stepped forward uninvited"
6"The cane's ferrule tapped the"
7"Rory blocked him with her"
8"Bookshelves loomed behind her, scrolls"
9"The air hung thick with"
10"His lips curved, not quite"
11"He leaned in, close enough"
12"She shoved the door wider,"
13"Heat prickled her skin where"
14"Ptolemy bolted under the sagging"
15"Lucien surveyed the flat, gloved"
16"Dust motes danced in his"
17"Rory slammed the door, locks"
18"Her pulse thudded in her"
19"He turned, cane planted like"
ratio0.861
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory slammed, locks snicking home one by one"
1"He retrieved, blade glinting as he flexed it shut"
2"He sipped, eyes never leaving hers"
3"His mouth hovered, breath mingling"
4"Lucien snatched, blade snicking free"
5"Lucien slashed, ichor spraying"
6"He cupped, thumb smudging ichor on her cheek"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.8125%