"The air hung thick, laced with a sweetness that cloyed her throat—wildflowers, blooming out of season, their petals unfurling under a moon that sliced through the canopy like a blade."
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"The standing stones emerged first—twisted oaks, ancient and gnarled, their trunks etched with patterns that caught the faint starlight."
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"Richmond Park thrummed with life at night—foxes yipping, branches creaking—yet here, nothing."
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"She circled the edge, the pendant shifting against her skin—still cool."
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"The air thickened, carrying a hum low in her ears—not wind, not insects, but a vibration that resonated in her teeth."
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"A snap echoed from the treeline—twig underfoot?"
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"There—beyond the toadstools, a flicker."
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"She swept the beam again, illuminating bark that twisted into faces for a heartbeat—eyes hollow, mouths agape—then smoothed to nothing."
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"Petals unfurled wider, releasing spores that danced in her beam, golden motes swirling into shapes—hands, reaching."
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"It pointed—toward the altar?"
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"Rory halted, beam slashing left—empty."
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"Right—shadow lunged, elongated, then vanished."
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"Glow intensified, pulsing in rhythm with the hum—a beacon cutting the fog that rolled in, tendrils coiling at her ankles."
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"The whispers laughed, a chorus rising, names tumbling: Laila, Aurora, Malphora—aliases she never shared."
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"A touch grazed her arm—feather-light, gone."
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"The pendant swung wild, its light fracturing the fog into prisms—faces within, distorted, mouths moving in silent pleas."
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"Blood welled—warm, real."
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"The hum peaked, vibrating through bone, visions flashing: her flat above Silas's bar, empty; the Golden Empress, doors barred; Cardiff streets, her parents' faces fading."
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"The pendant scalded, glow illuminating a figure at the clearing's rim—tall, cloaked in leaves, eyes like the flowers' centers, fixed on her."
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"The stones appeared, closer now, but altered—gaps narrowed, trunks leaning to block escape."
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"She squeezed through, fabric ripping, the figure's hand—cold, bark-rough—brushing her scar."
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"The air hung thick, laced with a sweetness that cloyed her throat—wildflowers, blooming out of season, their petals unfurling under a moon that sliced through t…"
1
"The standing stones emerged first—twisted oaks, ancient and gnarled, their trunks etched with patterns that caught the faint starlight."
2
"Her boot scuffed earth soft as velvet, wildflowers nodding underfoot, their centers glowing faintly phosphorescent."
3
"The air thickened, carrying a hum low in her ears—not wind, not insects, but a vibration that resonated in her teeth."
4
"She reached the heart of the grove, a flat stone altar slick with dew, etched with spirals that matched nothing in her memory."
5
"She swept the beam again, illuminating bark that twisted into faces for a heartbeat—eyes hollow, mouths agape—then smoothed to nothing."
6
"Petals unfurled wider, releasing spores that danced in her beam, golden motes swirling into shapes—hands, reaching."
7
"She bolted left, beam bouncing off toadstools that toppled in her wake, caps splitting to reveal pulp like exposed muscle."
8
"The pendant swung wild, its light fracturing the fog into prisms—faces within, distorted, mouths moving in silent pleas."