| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 74.03% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 385 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 385 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "footsteps" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 46 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 14 | | totalWords | 383 | | ratio | 0.037 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Eva said this place was safe,\"" | | 1 | "\"You shouldn’t have come.\"" | | 2 | "right" | | 3 | "\"Who are you?\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.43% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 7 | | wordCount | 370 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 1.35 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.824 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 27 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 383 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 22.53 | | std | 22.56 | | cv | 1.001 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 52 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 61 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 46 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 6.76% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "was coming" | | 1 | "was holding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 48 | | ratio | 0.063 | | matches | | 0 | "A whisper slithered through the trees—not wind, not breath, something deeper." | | 1 | "The standing stones groaned, their bark splitting open as something slithered from the earth—a shape, indistinct, moving just beyond her vision." | | 2 | "She had to—" |
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| 97.37% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 372 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.043010752688172046 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010752688172043012 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 48 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 48 | | mean | 7.98 | | std | 5.55 | | cv | 0.696 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 |
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| 45.14% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 48 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the rustling grew louder." | | 1 | "Then, the first shadow moved." |
| | ratio | 0.048 | |
| 86.67% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She’d come here for the" | | 2 | "She froze, listening." | | 3 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 4 | "She didn’t need to turn" | | 5 | "She spun, her pulse hammering" | | 6 | "She stumbled back, her heel" | | 7 | "she whispered, but the words" | | 8 | "It wasn’t even *right*." | | 9 | "She clutched the pendant tighter," | | 10 | "She could run." | | 11 | "She could scream." | | 12 | "She had to get out." | | 13 | "She had to—" |
| | ratio | 0.333 | |
| 7.62% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 3 | "She’d come here for the" | | 4 | "A whisper slithered through the" | | 5 | "She froze, listening." | | 6 | "The silence that followed was" | | 7 | "The silence of something waiting." | | 8 | "Aurora exhaled sharply, her breath" | | 9 | "The Heartstone pulsed again, its" | | 10 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 11 | "The wildflowers swayed unnaturally, their" | | 12 | "A rustle came from the" | | 13 | "She didn’t need to turn" | | 14 | "She spun, her pulse hammering" | | 15 | "The shadows stretched too long," | | 16 | "The standing stones groaned, their" | | 17 | "She stumbled back, her heel" | | 18 | "Pain flared up her leg," | | 19 | "she whispered, but the words" |
| | ratio | 0.905 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 17 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones groaned, their bark splitting open as something slithered from the earth—a shape, indistinct, moving just beyond her vision." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, but the words felt hollow" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 3 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |