Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB36YC8YRGEPTR7Y0WEYB2

Run Details

Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.000174
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain clung to the ancient oak stones, slick and dark. It smelled of wet earth and something else, something subtly floral and unsettling. Rory pulled her threadbare jacket tighter, the damp already seeping into the cotton. She’d stepped through the boundary – a shimmer in the twilight of Richmond Park, a sudden rush of cold – and now found herself in The Fae Grove. It wasn't the picturesque clearing the old maps suggested. This place felt… bruised. She’d come seeking answers about the pendant. A man, nondescript and smelling of old paper and pipe tobacco, had delivered it to her flat above Silas’ bar a week ago. Wrapped in oiled linen, it had pulsed against her palm, a faint warmth that hadn’t dissipated. He’d simply said, “It calls to you.” “Calls to you,” her ex, Evan, would have scoffed. “Probably some tourist trinket.” He’d been good at reducing everything to a cynical dismissal. The air here thrummed with a low, persistent vibration. It wasn’t audible, not exactly, but it resonated in her bones. It made her teeth ache. She adjusted the Heartstone Pendant, a small crimson stone nestled against her chest, where it pulsed with a subtle, insistent warmth. The silver chain felt strangely heavy. “Right,” she muttered to the rain, “Let’s just find out what this thing wants.” The wildflowers, a riot of impossible colours – indigo, crimson, chartreuse – seemed to watch her. They weren't unnaturally bright, just… different. More saturated, almost painfully so. A robin, perched on one of the standing stones, tilted its head and regarded her with unnervingly intelligent eyes before taking flight with a single, sharp chirp. She moved deeper into the Grove, the rain intensifying, transforming the already oppressive atmosphere into a thick, clinging blanket. The light was fading fast, the grey deepening into an impenetrable gloom. Every shadow seemed to lengthen, to writhe. She’d been walking for what felt like an hour, though she knew time behaved differently here. A glance at her watch confirmed it – only twenty minutes had passed outside. The pulse of the Heartstone grew stronger, a quickening in her chest. A sound. A twig snapping. Rory froze. It wasn’t a deer, not a rabbit. Too deliberate. She strained her ears, listening. Silence. Just the rain and the unsettling vibration. She moved forward cautiously, scanning the periphery of her vision. Nothing. “Hello?” Her voice sounded thin and reedy in the vast, silent space. Only the rain answered. Another sound. This one closer, a rustling in the undergrowth. It was accompanied by a scent – not of vegetation, but of something metallic, faintly coppery. She pulled her jacket tighter, her hand instinctively reaching for the small, folding knife she carried. It wasn’t much, but it was something. She noticed then – a track in the mud, almost invisible beneath the rain. A single, deeply impressed footprint, larger than a human’s, elongated and subtly clawed. The Heartstone pulsed violently against her chest, a burning warmth spreading through her veins. “Okay,” she said, her voice barely a whisper. “This is not good.” The air grew colder. The rain stopped abruptly, as if someone had pulled a plug. The forest became utterly silent. The wildflowers held their heads still, their colors deepening, becoming almost black. A shape began to coalesce in the shadows at the edge of the clearing. It wasn't distinct at first, just a distortion of the gloom, a shifting of the darkness. Then it solidified – tall and vaguely humanoid, but impossibly slender. It seemed woven from the shadows themselves, its form flickering and unstable. It didn’t move towards her, didn’t make a sound. It simply *watched*. Rory held her breath, her hand tightening around the knife. She felt a pressure behind her eyes, a growing sense of dread that threatened to overwhelm her. It wasn’t a visual thing, not exactly. It was a comprehension, cold and absolute. *You shouldn’t have come.* A voice, without lips, without vocal cords, echoed in her mind. It wasn't spoken, but *felt*. Ancient and desolate. “Who… who are you?” she managed to ask, the words catching in her throat. The figure tilted its head, a movement that seemed to warp the very air around it. *A reminder.* The Heartstone pulsed with a furious heat, pulling at her, urging her onward. She took a hesitant step forward, drawn by an irresistible force. “What do you want?” *The balance.* The voice whispered. *It has shifted.* She glanced down at the pendant. The crimson stone glowed with an increasingly intense, almost blinding light. She realized then, with sickening clarity, that the pendant wasn't calling *to* her. It was calling *from* her. More shapes began to emerge from the shadows, indistinct and unsettling, all of them tall, slender, and radiating an aura of profound sadness. They surrounded her, a silent, watchful circle. “This isn’t right,” she said, her voice shaking. “This isn't… natural.” *Natural?* The voice echoed again, tinged with amusement. *There is nothing natural here.* She tried to back away, but her feet felt rooted to the ground. She risked a glance at the standing stones. The intricate carvings across their surfaces, previously hidden by the rain, seemed to writhe and shift, forming grotesque faces, whispering silent warnings. The figure closest to her – the one that had first appeared – took a single, deliberate step forward. It extended a hand, long and skeletal, tipped with claws that shimmered like obsidian. “Stop,” she choked out, raising the knife. It felt pathetic, utterly inadequate. The figure didn’t flinch. It didn’t even seem to register her movement. It simply continued to advance, its eyes – two pools of absolute darkness – fixed on her. *You carry the echo.* Rory didn't understand. “What echo?” *The pain. The loss. The thing you tried to bury.* The memories slammed into her: Evan’s rage, his cruel words, the suffocating fear. Her childhood accident, the searing pain, the unending shame. Things she’d buried deep, believing she’d escaped them. But here, in this place, they were resurrected, amplified, projected onto the shadows around her. The Heartstone throbbed with a blinding light, and she understood. The pendant wasn’t a gift. It was a receptor. It was drawing her back to the source of the disturbance, to the place where her pain had begun. She looked down at her wrist, at the small crescent-shaped scar shaped like a lost tear. The scar pulsed with the same crimson light as the pendant. The figure reached for her, its touch like ice. *Join us.* Rory screamed, a primal, desperate sound that was immediately swallowed by the silence of the Grove. As the figure’s hand closed around her wrist, she felt a dizzying sensation of falling, of being pulled apart and reassembled. The forest around her dissolved into a swirling vortex of shadows and wildflowers, and she realized, with chilling finality, that she wasn't running *from* something. She was running *toward* it. Toward the source of the pain, toward the heart of the Fae Grove, towards a darkness far older and far more terrible than she could have ever imagined. And the pendant, warm against her skin, was guiding her home.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He’d simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.769
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
83.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"utterly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1181
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"pulsed"
count5
1
word"warmth"
count3
2
word"resonated"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"gloom"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"sense of"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count2
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"profound"
count1
13
word"tinged"
count1
14
word"intricate"
count1
15
word"shimmered"
count1
16
word"echo"
count2
17
word"searing"
count1
18
word"throbbed"
count1
19
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"resonated"
3"oppressive"
4"gloom"
5"pulse"
6"silence"
7"scanning"
8"whisper"
9"sense of"
10"echoed"
11"reminder"
12"profound"
13"tinged"
14"intricate"
15"shimmered"
16"echo"
17"searing"
18"throbbed"
19"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences118
matches(empty)
9.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences118
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"managed to"
3"tried to"
4"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans15
markdownWords39
totalWords1192
ratio0.033
matches
0"watched"
1"You shouldn’t have come."
2"felt"
3"A reminder."
4"The balance."
5"It has shifted."
6"to"
7"from"
8"Natural?"
9"There is nothing natural here."
10"You carry the echo."
11"The pain. The loss. The thing you tried to bury."
12"Join us."
13"from"
14"toward"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount1144
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.44
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Grove"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae2
Grove4
Wrapped1
Evan2
Heartstone5
Pendant1
Rory5
persons
0"Evan"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Pendant"
globalScore1
windowScore1
23.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like an hour, though she knew time"
1"seemed woven from the shadows themselves, its form flickering and unstable"
2"movement that seemed to warp the very air around it"
3"appeared – took a single, deliberate step forward"
32.21% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.678
wordCount1192
matches
0"not exactly, but it resonated in her bones"
1"not of vegetation, but of something metallic, faintly coppery"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean27.09
std21.51
cv0.794
sampleLengths
077
153
223
352
414
554
638
742
85
935
1012
114
1249
1327
1414
1512
1632
1753
1812
1945
2019
2114
2216
232
2424
254
268
2735
2830
2911
3013
3143
3233
3312
3429
354
365
3710
3845
3938
4027
419
422
43106
96.34% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences118
matches
0"was accompanied"
1"were resurrected"
2"being pulled"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs189
matches
0"wasn't calling"
1"was calling"
2"was drawing"
3"wasn't running"
4"was running"
5"was guiding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences122
ratio0.066
matches
0"She’d stepped through the boundary – a shimmer in the twilight of Richmond Park, a sudden rush of cold – and now found herself in The Fae Grove."
1"The wildflowers, a riot of impossible colours – indigo, crimson, chartreuse – seemed to watch her."
2"A glance at her watch confirmed it – only twenty minutes had passed outside."
3"It was accompanied by a scent – not of vegetation, but of something metallic, faintly coppery."
4"She noticed then – a track in the mud, almost invisible beneath the rain."
5"Then it solidified – tall and vaguely humanoid, but impossibly slender."
6"The figure closest to her – the one that had first appeared – took a single, deliberate step forward."
7"It simply continued to advance, its eyes – two pools of absolute darkness – fixed on her."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount119
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.03361344537815126
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.008403361344537815
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean9.77
std6.27
cv0.641
sampleLengths
010
113
213
328
49
53
61
77
823
916
107
119
1214
139
1411
155
1621
176
1814
1916
205
211
225
2327
2419
2512
267
2716
2814
2912
302
313
322
337
342
355
361
377
3810
391
4012
414
422
438
4416
4516
467
4714
4813
4914
39.89% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.32786885245901637
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners40
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences106
matches
0"More saturated, almost painfully so."
1"Just the rain and the"
2"Only the rain answered."
3"Then it solidified – tall"
ratio0.038
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences106
matches
0"It smelled of wet earth"
1"She’d stepped through the boundary"
2"It wasn't the picturesque clearing"
3"She’d come seeking answers about"
4"He’d simply said,"
5"her ex, Evan, would have"
6"He’d been good at reducing"
7"It wasn’t audible, not exactly,"
8"It made her teeth ache."
9"She adjusted the Heartstone Pendant,"
10"she muttered to the rain"
11"They weren't unnaturally bright, just…"
12"She moved deeper into the"
13"She’d been walking for what"
14"It wasn’t a deer, not"
15"She strained her ears, listening."
16"She moved forward cautiously, scanning"
17"Her voice sounded thin and"
18"It was accompanied by a"
19"She pulled her jacket tighter,"
ratio0.5
21.32% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount93
totalSentences106
matches
0"Rain clung to the ancient"
1"It smelled of wet earth"
2"Rory pulled her threadbare jacket"
3"She’d stepped through the boundary"
4"It wasn't the picturesque clearing"
5"This place felt…"
6"She’d come seeking answers about"
7"A man, nondescript and smelling"
8"He’d simply said,"
9"her ex, Evan, would have"
10"He’d been good at reducing"
11"The air here thrummed with"
12"It wasn’t audible, not exactly,"
13"It made her teeth ache."
14"She adjusted the Heartstone Pendant,"
15"The silver chain felt strangely"
16"she muttered to the rain"
17"The wildflowers, a riot of"
18"They weren't unnaturally bright, just…"
19"A robin, perched on one"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The wildflowers held their heads still, their colors deepening, becoming almost black."
1"She felt a pressure behind her eyes, a growing sense of dread that threatened to overwhelm her."
2"Rory screamed, a primal, desperate sound that was immediately swallowed by the silence of the Grove."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
1"she managed, the words catching in her throat"
2"she said, her voice shaking"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"He’d simply (would)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she managed (manage)"
3"she choked (choke)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.462
leniency0.923
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.615
64.1979%