"She checks her watch—11:17 PM—fingers brushing the worn leather band, the same one Morris used to wear, the one he’d never taken off."
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"Then the first body—found in a warehouse, throat slit, eyes replaced by black glass."
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"Three years of digging, of collecting half-truths, of the Clique—so named because they moved in a tight, secret circle—eluding her like smoke."
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"She flicks on her flashlight, cutting through the rain, and the beam catches his profile—sharp cheekbones, a jagged scar above his left eyebrow."
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"Jax moves like water—smooth, unpredictable—darting left, then right, as if the rain itself is guiding him."
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"Quinn’s boots slip on a patch of oil; by the time she catches her balance, he’s gone."
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"The rumors had always been there—about an underground market beneath Camden, a place for those who traded in what the law deemed *unholy*."
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"Not until Morris—"
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"Footsteps, receding—*but not down the alley*."
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"She reaches a metal grate, its lock bent—Jax had pried it open."
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"Jax’s tracks lead left—she can see the indentation of his boots in the mud."
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"The walls are slick with moss; above, a faint glow filters through a cracked manhole cover."
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"The steps lead to a derelict Tube station—signs for “Camden Town” hang crookedly, their paint peeling."
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"He’s fumbling with his duster, revealing a leather satchel, and—*a bone token in his hand*."
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"Quinn runs to the brick wall, pressing her palm to the cool stone—no token in her coat pocket, she realizes."
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"She fumbles with her keys, yanking a small, rusted lockpick from her pocket—Morris had taught her, way back when."
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"The staircase is steep, the air thick with the smell of sage and something sweet, cloying—like burning honey."
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"The tube station has been transformed: stalls line the walls, their vendors hidden behind tattered curtains, their wares glowing with strange light—vials of liquid that pulse like hearts, swords with blades that shimmer like smoke, cages holding tiny, winged creatures that chirp softly."
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"Maria—Jax had killed her, two months ago."
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"Quinn had tracked Jax to this market three times before—each time, he’d vanished into the crowd, his token leading her here, only to disappear into the stalls."
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"Inside, a glint of metal—*a knife*, its blade etched with the same runes as the bone token."
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"“Morris,” the woman says, and her voice is Morris’—warm, with a hint of a Spanish accent."
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"The woman—*the keeper*—reaches into her pocket, pulling out a vial of the green liquid."
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"In his place, a shadow—tall, thin, with eyes like black pits—looms over the keeper."
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"Jax is out there, somewhere, but so is the truth—about Morris, about the Clique, about the supernatural that haunts London."
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"Jax moves like water—smooth, unpredictable—darting left, then right, as if the rain itself is guiding him."
1
"He’s fumbling with his duster, revealing a leather satchel, and—*a bone token in his hand*."
2
"He presses it to a brick wall, which slides open with a hiss, revealing a narrow staircase."
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"The tube station has been transformed: stalls line the walls, their vendors hidden behind tattered curtains, their wares glowing with strange light—vials of liq…"
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"Its mouth opens, a scream that splits the air, and the woman dissolves, her porcelain face crumbling to dust."
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"Quinn’s hand goes to her pocket, pulling out a crumpled photograph: Morris, grinning, holding a feather."