Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB3TVJAT0PM6TQ00HZTG8K

Run Details

Duration:
35.0s
Cost:
$0.001662
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora gripped the Heartstone Pendant tighter. Its deep crimson core throbbed like a second heartbeat, heat seeping through her fingers and up her arm. The silver chain bit into her skin. Beside her, Nyx's shadowy form rippled, solidifying into a tall silhouette under the faint moonlight filtering through Richmond Park's ancient oaks. Isolde stood ahead, her silver hair swaying like mist, pale lavender eyes fixed on the shimmering distortion ahead—the Veil's tear, jagged and pulsing in sync with the pendant. "Threads hunger pulls taut," Isolde murmured, her voice a chime lost in wind. She extended a hand, fingers tracing the air. No footprints marked the dew-kissed grass behind her. Nyx leaned forward, violet glow sharpening in their eyes. "Smell it already. Ripeness beyond flesh." Aurora swallowed. The air hummed, charged like storm-static. She nodded once. They moved as one, stepping through the distortion. Heat enveloped them first. Not fire's bite, but a languid embrace, amber light flooding from a sky stretched taut like honeyed glass. Aurora blinked against the glow. Ground squelched underfoot—rich soil, black as ink, veined with glowing fungi that pulsed in rhythm with her pendant. Vines thicker than her thigh coiled around obsidian trunks, heavy with fruits the size of fists: skins bruised purple, splitting to ooze nectar that steamed in the warmth. "Look." Nyx pointed, their whisper slicing the humid air. Shadowy hand passed through a low-hanging cluster without touch. Juice splattered the soil, releasing a scent of caramelized sugar laced with something sharper, like blood-wine. Aurora knelt, touched a droplet. It clung to her fingertip, warm, viscous. Her stomach growled unbidden. She wiped it off on her jeans, stood. "Keeps pulling. Deeper." Isolde glided ahead, waist-length hair brushing fruits that quivered at her passage. "Roots drink deep where mouths forget to close." Paths wound between orchards, bark etched with faces—mouths agape, eyes hollowed pits weeping sap. Laughter echoed distant, a cacophony of wet smacks and guttural moans, undercut by stringed instruments plucking at the spine. Aurora's boots sank into loam soft as entrails. Sweat beaded her forehead despite the evening chill they'd left behind. The Fae-Forged Blade at her belt hummed cold against her hip, a counterpoint to the pendant's fever. Nyx flowed beside her, incorporeal now, weaving through vines. "Hear the feasts. Chefs hammer souls into platters." Aurora crested a rise. Below sprawled terraced gardens, levels cascading into haze. Exotic blooms unfurled petals wide as platters, centers throbbing with nectar pools where iridescent insects drowned in bliss. Hedges sculpted into reclining figures clutched goblets overflowing with bubbling liquors. Steam rose from pits where cauldrons bubbled, helbound souls—translucent figures in aprons stained crimson—stirred vats with bones as ladles. One soul hefted a haunch of meat, veins still pulsing, and plunged it into oil that spat golden arcs. "God." Aurora's breath caught. A fruit dangled near her face, split open by its own weight. Seeds gleamed like polished teeth. She batted it away. Hunger clawed her gut, sharper now. Isolde paused at a fountain carved from veined marble. Water—no, wine—spurted from mouths of carved cherubs, pooling in basins etched with runes that fizzed on contact. She dipped a finger, lifted it glistening. "Sips that drown the throat in echoes." Nyx solidified, snatched a low berry. Shadow fingers crushed it. Purple pulp sprayed, and they inhaled deep. "Tastes of forgotten hungers. Mortal vice, amplified." Aurora snatched the pendant chain, held it aloft. The glow intensified, pointing toward a vineyard slope where grapes swelled monstrous, skins translucent, pulp shifting like living gel. "This way. It's leading." They descended, air thickening with spice—cinnamon bark, smoked flesh, blooms rotting sweet. Laughter swelled closer, a banquet hall's roar spilling from colonnades of bone-white stone draped in living moss. Servitors—hulking shades with bellies distended—lurched past, trays balanced on palms scarred from eternal toil. One dropped a platter; pies burst open, fillings writhing like maggots before dissolving into steam. Unease prickled Aurora's neck. The ground pulsed underfoot, syncing with her steps, urging her toward the scents. Her mouth watered. She clenched teeth. "Too much. Feels like it's... watching." Nyx's eyes flared violet. "Gluttony's gaze fattens on want. Prince's domain breathes temptation." Isolde wove through trellises heavy with vines that snagged at clothing, thorns drawing beads of blood that vines lapped up. "Breathe shallow where fullness blooms eternal." Deeper, the path narrowed into a grotto. Walls dripped with honeycombs, combs alive with bees the size of fists, wings humming dirges. Central pool reflected the amber sky, surface rippling with half-formed faces mouthing pleas. Aurora edged closer. A hand breached the water—pale, clawing—before submerging with a slurp. "Back." Nyx yanked her arm, shadow grip chill. But curiosity burned. Aurora peered in. Depths swirled with fish scales and pearlized orbs—eyes? staring up. Isolde circled the pool, skirt trailing ripples. "Eyes feast on light denied. Dive, and surfaces shatter." Aurora retreated, pulse racing. The pendant yanked her onward, past groves where trees bore candied limbs—fingers, toes—glazed and proffered on branches. Wind carried moans of ecstasy, bodies entwined in hammocks of spider-silk, skins stretched taut over endless indulgence. Nyx darted ahead, reappearing with a plucked bloom. Petals unfolded in their palm, revealing a core of pulsing meat. "Hearts of orchard beasts. Beat for the knife." Aurora waved it off. "Don't. Feels wrong." Yet her hand trembled. Saliva pooled. The blade at her hip warmed, moonsilver edge itching to cut. Terraces leveled into a plaza. Tables groaned under spreads: towers of pastries flaking gold, roasts carved mid-bleed, fruits sculpted into nudes that wept juice. Diners—mortals? shades?—gorged, cheeks ballooned, bellies swelling to split seams, reforming in loops of excess. A chef soul bowed to them, offering skewers of glistening orbs. "Fresh-picked hungers, travelers," the soul rasped, voice wet gravel. "Prince Belphegor's vintage. One bite, and voids fill." Isolde tilted her head, lavender eyes distant. "Bites circle back to hollows carved wider." Aurora's stomach twisted. Wonder warred with revulsion—the colors vivid, scents intoxicating, every curve of fruit and flesh engineered for crave. Nyx hovered near a vat, inhaling steam that coiled like lovers' breaths. "Try it," Nyx urged, whisper husky. "Shadows crave solidity here." "No." Aurora pulled them along. The pendant throbbed insistent, veering toward shadowed arches beyond the plaza. Music swelled—harps strung with veins, drums of taut hides slapping rhythms that matched heartbeats. They slipped under the arches. Cooler air rushed in, laced with fermentation's tang. Barrels lined walls, staves bulging, leaks forming puddles that bubbled like broth. Grapes fermented in open vats, helbound souls knee-deep, trampling pulp that splashed crimson. One soul locked eyes with Aurora, face melting into ecstasy mid-stomp. Deeper still, caverns yawned. Crystals jutted from ceilings, refracting amber light into rainbows that danced on walls slick with dew—nectar dew, sweet and cloying. Echoes multiplied: slurps, burps, sighs of overfull release. Aurora's legs burned. Sweat soaked her shirt. The pendant's heat spread to her chest, visions flickering—endless plates, her hands plunging in. She shook her head. "This place... it feeds on you." Nyx reformed fully, height towering. "Feeds, and we feed back. Balance in bloat." Isolde halted at a junction. Three paths branched: one to roaring kitchens, flames licking eternal meats; another to slumbering gardens where sleepers dreamed feasts; the third plunged into darkness pulsing faint crimson. Pendant swung toward the third. Aurora stepped forward. Air grew heavier, whispers coiling like smoke. "Shadows thicken where gluttony starves," Isolde intoned. Nyx's form frayed at edges. "Deeper hungers lurk." Aurora gripped her blade's hilt. Cold moonsilver grounded her. They pressed on, the cavern swallowing light, sounds muting to wet heartbeats echoing from unseen depths. Fruits dangled from stalactites, brushing shoulders, splitting on contact to stain skin with addictive stickiness. A distant roar built—feast or beast?—as vines closed in, leaves rustling invitations. One vine snagged Aurora's ankle. She slashed free with the blade; it parted like mist, spraying ichor that sizzled on stone. Nyx laughed low, a wind-rush. "Cuts clean. Fae work bites back here." Further, bioluminescent fungi carpeted floors, spores puffing clouds that tingled lungs, igniting phantom tastes on tongues. Aurora coughed, visions sharpening: tables infinite, her form bloating in mirror pools. Unease coiled tight. Yet wonder pulled—crystals chimed symphonies, air alive with promise of satiation unbound. Isolde's bare feet skimmed spores untouched. "Spores sow seeds of want unending." They rounded a bend. Vast chamber opened: ceiling lost in haze, floor a mosaic of feast remnants—bones polished, shells cracked, husks gleaming. Central altar bore a chalice overflowing froth that sang on spill. Helbound figures circled it, chanting in tongues that twisted bowels. Aurora froze. Pendant blazed, chain scorching. The air thrummed invitation.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:16:00.895Z" 2/20/2026, 8:16:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.345
leniency0.69
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1460
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"throbbed"
count2
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count2
7
word"quivered"
count1
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"echoed"
count1
10
word"cacophony"
count1
11
word"chill"
count2
12
word"cascading"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"marble"
count1
15
word"glistening"
count2
16
word"echoes"
count2
17
word"hulking"
count1
18
word"lurched"
count1
19
word"depths"
count2
20
word"pulse"
count1
21
word"racing"
count1
22
word"silk"
count1
23
word"trembled"
count1
24
word"roaring"
count1
25
word"echoing"
count1
26
word"mosaic"
count1
27
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"tracing"
2"charged"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"whisper"
6"stomach"
7"quivered"
8"etched"
9"echoed"
10"cacophony"
11"chill"
12"cascading"
13"weight"
14"marble"
15"glistening"
16"echoes"
17"hulking"
18"lurched"
19"depths"
20"pulse"
21"racing"
22"silk"
23"trembled"
24"roaring"
25"echoing"
26"mosaic"
27"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences135
matches
0"d in bliss"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences135
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences155
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1423
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.39% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions60
wordCount1270
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant3
Nyx13
Richmond1
Park1
Veil1
Shadowy1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Aurora22
Saliva1
Isolde10
One4
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Nyx"
2"Veil"
3"Aurora"
4"Saliva"
5"Isolde"
6"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.634
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.703
wordCount1423
matches
0"Not fire's bite, but a languid embrace, amber light flooding from a sky stretched"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.62
std18.46
cv0.584
sampleLengths
080
129
215
319
473
534
627
720
869
917
1079
1131
1240
1324
1431
1558
1629
1713
1826
1948
2024
2116
2238
2327
2424
2549
2617
2714
2832
2910
3030
3149
3232
3331
3413
3532
3615
377
388
3952
4033
4143
4212
4343
4410
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs305
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount25
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences22
totalSentences155
ratio0.142
matches
0"Isolde stood ahead, her silver hair swaying like mist, pale lavender eyes fixed on the shimmering distortion ahead—the Veil's tear, jagged and pulsing in sync with the pendant."
1"Ground squelched underfoot—rich soil, black as ink, veined with glowing fungi that pulsed in rhythm with her pendant."
2"Paths wound between orchards, bark etched with faces—mouths agape, eyes hollowed pits weeping sap."
3"Steam rose from pits where cauldrons bubbled, helbound souls—translucent figures in aprons stained crimson—stirred vats with bones as ladles."
4"Water—no, wine—spurted from mouths of carved cherubs, pooling in basins etched with runes that fizzed on contact."
5"They descended, air thickening with spice—cinnamon bark, smoked flesh, blooms rotting sweet."
6"Servitors—hulking shades with bellies distended—lurched past, trays balanced on palms scarred from eternal toil."
7"One dropped a platter; pies burst open, fillings writhing like maggots before dissolving into steam."
8"A hand breached the water—pale, clawing—before submerging with a slurp."
9"Depths swirled with fish scales and pearlized orbs—eyes?"
10"The pendant yanked her onward, past groves where trees bore candied limbs—fingers, toes—glazed and proffered on branches."
11"Diners—mortals?"
12"shades?—gorged, cheeks ballooned, bellies swelling to split seams, reforming in loops of excess."
13"Wonder warred with revulsion—the colors vivid, scents intoxicating, every curve of fruit and flesh engineered for crave."
14"Music swelled—harps strung with veins, drums of taut hides slapping rhythms that matched heartbeats."
15"Crystals jutted from ceilings, refracting amber light into rainbows that danced on walls slick with dew—nectar dew, sweet and cloying."
16"The pendant's heat spread to her chest, visions flickering—endless plates, her hands plunging in."
17"Three paths branched: one to roaring kitchens, flames licking eternal meats; another to slumbering gardens where sleepers dreamed feasts; the third plunged into darkness pulsing faint crimson."
18"A distant roar built—feast or beast?—as vines closed in, leaves rustling invitations."
19"She slashed free with the blade; it parted like mist, spraying ichor that sizzled on stone."
20"Yet wonder pulled—crystals chimed symphonies, air alive with promise of satiation unbound."
21"Vast chamber opened: ceiling lost in haze, floor a mosaic of feast remnants—bones polished, shells cracked, husks gleaming."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount944
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.013771186440677966
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean9.18
std5.6
cv0.609
sampleLengths
06
118
27
321
428
513
68
78
89
96
102
116
123
138
144
1518
165
1718
1828
199
209
2116
225
237
244
258
263
2712
288
2914
3019
318
3211
3317
349
358
364
378
3818
3911
4019
4119
424
4312
445
454
466
479
4817
497
93.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.5612903225806452
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners87
25.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"Further, bioluminescent fungi carpeted floors,"
ratio0.008
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences129
matches
0"Its deep crimson core throbbed"
1"She extended a hand, fingers"
2"She nodded once."
3"They moved as one, stepping"
4"It clung to her fingertip,"
5"Her stomach growled unbidden."
6"She wiped it off on"
7"She batted it away."
8"She dipped a finger, lifted"
9"They descended, air thickening with"
10"Her mouth watered."
11"She clenched teeth."
12"They slipped under the arches."
13"She shook her head."
14"They pressed on, the cavern"
15"She slashed free with the"
16"They rounded a bend."
ratio0.132
53.02% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences129
matches
0"Aurora gripped the Heartstone Pendant"
1"Its deep crimson core throbbed"
2"The silver chain bit into"
3"Isolde stood ahead, her silver"
4"Isolde murmured, her voice a"
5"She extended a hand, fingers"
6"Nyx leaned forward, violet glow"
7"The air hummed, charged like"
8"She nodded once."
9"They moved as one, stepping"
10"Heat enveloped them first."
11"Aurora blinked against the glow."
12"Ground squelched underfoot—rich soil, black"
13"Vines thicker than her thigh"
14"Nyx pointed, their whisper slicing"
15"Shadowy hand passed through a"
16"Juice splattered the soil, releasing"
17"Aurora knelt, touched a droplet."
18"It clung to her fingertip,"
19"Her stomach growled unbidden."
ratio0.814
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Vines thicker than her thigh coiled around obsidian trunks, heavy with fruits the size of fists: skins bruised purple, splitting to ooze nectar that steamed in …"
1"Isolde glided ahead, waist-length hair brushing fruits that quivered at her passage."
2"Laughter swelled closer, a banquet hall's roar spilling from colonnades of bone-white stone draped in living moss."
3"The ground pulsed underfoot, syncing with her steps, urging her toward the scents."
4"Petals unfolded in their palm, revealing a core of pulsing meat."
5"Tables groaned under spreads: towers of pastries flaking gold, roasts carved mid-bleed, fruits sculpted into nudes that wept juice."
6"Music swelled—harps strung with veins, drums of taut hides slapping rhythms that matched heartbeats."
7"Grapes fermented in open vats, helbound souls knee-deep, trampling pulp that splashed crimson."
8"Crystals jutted from ceilings, refracting amber light into rainbows that danced on walls slick with dew—nectar dew, sweet and cloying."
9"The pendant's heat spread to her chest, visions flickering—endless plates, her hands plunging in."
10"Further, bioluminescent fungi carpeted floors, spores puffing clouds that tingled lungs, igniting phantom tastes on tongues."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her voice a chime lost in wind"
1"Nyx pointed, their whisper slicing the humid air"
2"the soul rasped, voice wet gravel"
81.03% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.069
leniency0.138
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.138
77.2277%