| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.345 | | leniency | 0.69 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1460 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1460 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | | | 25 | | | 26 | | | 27 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "tracing" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "quivered" | | 8 | "etched" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "cacophony" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "cascading" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "marble" | | 15 | "glistening" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "hulking" | | 18 | "lurched" | | 19 | "depths" | | 20 | "pulse" | | 21 | "racing" | | 22 | "silk" | | 23 | "trembled" | | 24 | "roaring" | | 25 | "echoing" | | 26 | "mosaic" | | 27 | "gleaming" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 135 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 155 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1423 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.39% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 60 | | wordCount | 1270 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.73 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 3 | | Nyx | 13 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Shadowy | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Aurora | 22 | | Saliva | 1 | | Isolde | 10 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Saliva" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.634 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.703 | | wordCount | 1423 | | matches | | 0 | "Not fire's bite, but a languid embrace, amber light flooding from a sky stretched" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 45 | | mean | 31.62 | | std | 18.46 | | cv | 0.584 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 73 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 69 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 79 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 24 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 38 | | 23 | 27 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 49 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 31 | | 34 | 13 | | 35 | 32 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 52 | | 40 | 33 | | 41 | 43 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 43 | | 44 | 10 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 135 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 305 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 25 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 22 | | totalSentences | 155 | | ratio | 0.142 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde stood ahead, her silver hair swaying like mist, pale lavender eyes fixed on the shimmering distortion ahead—the Veil's tear, jagged and pulsing in sync with the pendant." | | 1 | "Ground squelched underfoot—rich soil, black as ink, veined with glowing fungi that pulsed in rhythm with her pendant." | | 2 | "Paths wound between orchards, bark etched with faces—mouths agape, eyes hollowed pits weeping sap." | | 3 | "Steam rose from pits where cauldrons bubbled, helbound souls—translucent figures in aprons stained crimson—stirred vats with bones as ladles." | | 4 | "Water—no, wine—spurted from mouths of carved cherubs, pooling in basins etched with runes that fizzed on contact." | | 5 | "They descended, air thickening with spice—cinnamon bark, smoked flesh, blooms rotting sweet." | | 6 | "Servitors—hulking shades with bellies distended—lurched past, trays balanced on palms scarred from eternal toil." | | 7 | "One dropped a platter; pies burst open, fillings writhing like maggots before dissolving into steam." | | 8 | "A hand breached the water—pale, clawing—before submerging with a slurp." | | 9 | "Depths swirled with fish scales and pearlized orbs—eyes?" | | 10 | "The pendant yanked her onward, past groves where trees bore candied limbs—fingers, toes—glazed and proffered on branches." | | 11 | "Diners—mortals?" | | 12 | "shades?—gorged, cheeks ballooned, bellies swelling to split seams, reforming in loops of excess." | | 13 | "Wonder warred with revulsion—the colors vivid, scents intoxicating, every curve of fruit and flesh engineered for crave." | | 14 | "Music swelled—harps strung with veins, drums of taut hides slapping rhythms that matched heartbeats." | | 15 | "Crystals jutted from ceilings, refracting amber light into rainbows that danced on walls slick with dew—nectar dew, sweet and cloying." | | 16 | "The pendant's heat spread to her chest, visions flickering—endless plates, her hands plunging in." | | 17 | "Three paths branched: one to roaring kitchens, flames licking eternal meats; another to slumbering gardens where sleepers dreamed feasts; the third plunged into darkness pulsing faint crimson." | | 18 | "A distant roar built—feast or beast?—as vines closed in, leaves rustling invitations." | | 19 | "She slashed free with the blade; it parted like mist, spraying ichor that sizzled on stone." | | 20 | "Yet wonder pulled—crystals chimed symphonies, air alive with promise of satiation unbound." | | 21 | "Vast chamber opened: ceiling lost in haze, floor a mosaic of feast remnants—bones polished, shells cracked, husks gleaming." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 944 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.013771186440677966 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 155 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 155 | | mean | 9.18 | | std | 5.6 | | cv | 0.609 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 28 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 93.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5612903225806452 | | totalSentences | 155 | | uniqueOpeners | 87 | |
| 25.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Further, bioluminescent fungi carpeted floors," |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Its deep crimson core throbbed" | | 1 | "She extended a hand, fingers" | | 2 | "She nodded once." | | 3 | "They moved as one, stepping" | | 4 | "It clung to her fingertip," | | 5 | "Her stomach growled unbidden." | | 6 | "She wiped it off on" | | 7 | "She batted it away." | | 8 | "She dipped a finger, lifted" | | 9 | "They descended, air thickening with" | | 10 | "Her mouth watered." | | 11 | "She clenched teeth." | | 12 | "They slipped under the arches." | | 13 | "She shook her head." | | 14 | "They pressed on, the cavern" | | 15 | "She slashed free with the" | | 16 | "They rounded a bend." |
| | ratio | 0.132 | |
| 53.02% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 105 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora gripped the Heartstone Pendant" | | 1 | "Its deep crimson core throbbed" | | 2 | "The silver chain bit into" | | 3 | "Isolde stood ahead, her silver" | | 4 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a" | | 5 | "She extended a hand, fingers" | | 6 | "Nyx leaned forward, violet glow" | | 7 | "The air hummed, charged like" | | 8 | "She nodded once." | | 9 | "They moved as one, stepping" | | 10 | "Heat enveloped them first." | | 11 | "Aurora blinked against the glow." | | 12 | "Ground squelched underfoot—rich soil, black" | | 13 | "Vines thicker than her thigh" | | 14 | "Nyx pointed, their whisper slicing" | | 15 | "Shadowy hand passed through a" | | 16 | "Juice splattered the soil, releasing" | | 17 | "Aurora knelt, touched a droplet." | | 18 | "It clung to her fingertip," | | 19 | "Her stomach growled unbidden." |
| | ratio | 0.814 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Vines thicker than her thigh coiled around obsidian trunks, heavy with fruits the size of fists: skins bruised purple, splitting to ooze nectar that steamed in …" | | 1 | "Isolde glided ahead, waist-length hair brushing fruits that quivered at her passage." | | 2 | "Laughter swelled closer, a banquet hall's roar spilling from colonnades of bone-white stone draped in living moss." | | 3 | "The ground pulsed underfoot, syncing with her steps, urging her toward the scents." | | 4 | "Petals unfolded in their palm, revealing a core of pulsing meat." | | 5 | "Tables groaned under spreads: towers of pastries flaking gold, roasts carved mid-bleed, fruits sculpted into nudes that wept juice." | | 6 | "Music swelled—harps strung with veins, drums of taut hides slapping rhythms that matched heartbeats." | | 7 | "Grapes fermented in open vats, helbound souls knee-deep, trampling pulp that splashed crimson." | | 8 | "Crystals jutted from ceilings, refracting amber light into rainbows that danced on walls slick with dew—nectar dew, sweet and cloying." | | 9 | "The pendant's heat spread to her chest, visions flickering—endless plates, her hands plunging in." | | 10 | "Further, bioluminescent fungi carpeted floors, spores puffing clouds that tingled lungs, igniting phantom tastes on tongues." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice a chime lost in wind" | | 1 | "Nyx pointed, their whisper slicing the humid air" | | 2 | "the soul rasped, voice wet gravel" |
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| 81.03% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx urged (urge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.069 | | leniency | 0.138 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.138 | |