Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB3VAQXVXB8CRB55R5H359

Run Details

Duration:
31.5s
Cost:
$0.000651
Provider:
Nebius

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of wet concrete and something older, something like dust motes and forgotten prayers. Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her trench coat, the fabric doing little against the chill that clung to the abandoned Tube station. Camden Town North, the sign above the blocked-off emergency exit proclaimed, though no tube rattled through these tunnels anymore. This was the Veil Market’s current location, and it smelled like trouble even before the call came in. “Right mess, eh?” DS Davies said, gesturing with a gloved hand. Davies was good people, solid, but lacked the necessary cynicism for this line of work. He saw things at face value. A weakness, sometimes. The ‘mess’ was a man sprawled on the damp platform, a crimson bloom blossoming on the grey tiling. He was young, mid-twenties maybe, dressed in the sort of flamboyant clothes you saw on the fringes of Camden High Street—velvet jacket, too many rings. A tourist, probably, drawn in by whispers of the market. Harlow knelt, her knees protesting the cold, and began the slow, methodical process of assessment. Usual procedure. Davies busied himself with the uniformed officers, barking questions, filling out forms. She needed quiet, and she needed to see. The victim’s eyes were wide, fixed on the vaulted ceiling. No obvious sign of a struggle. No defensive wounds. Just the single, precise puncture wound to the chest. It wasn’t a knife. Too clean, too small. “Looks like a stabbing,” Davies commented, joining her. Harlow didn’t bother looking up. “Looks like someone wanted it to look like a stabbing.” “What do you mean?” “Look at the angle, Davies. The trajectory. A downward thrust, yes, but…surgical. Almost bloodless, initially. And see the lack of disturbance? No scuffle, no dropped belongings. He didn’t even manage a shout, I’d wager.” Davies frowned. “So, professional?” “Unlikely. Professionals don’t pick picturesque locations. They don’t leave a velvet jacket and a silver skull ring as calling cards.” She glanced around the platform, taking in the market’s makeshift stalls. Silk scarves shimmered under flickering gas lamps. Jars filled with murky liquids sat beside stacks of bone carvings. The usual assortment of the bizarre and the illicit. The vendors, a motley crew of shadowed faces and knowing eyes, were unusually subdued. They were watching, but not offering. “The Market people haven’t touched a thing,” Davies observed. "They’re all claiming they didn't see anything." “They never do.” Harlow ran a gloved hand along the victim’s jacket. “Anything missing?” "Wallet’s still there. Phone’s present.” Davies consulted his notepad. "Some cash. Doesn't seem like a robbery." Harlow focused on the wound again. It was small, almost insignificant, yet she knew, instinctively, that it wasn't made by anything conventional. Something…finer. Something that bypassed the usual defenses. “Get a tox screen done, Davies. And I want a full sweep of this platform. Every inch. I want to know if there’s anything out of place. Anything at all.” “You think it was one of them?” Davies gestured towards the market stalls. “Some sort of…supernatural hit?” Harlow suppressed a sigh. “I think we need to consider all possibilities, Sergeant.” She stood and walked towards a stall draped in dark velvet. A woman with eyes like polished obsidian sat behind it, sorting through a collection of dried herbs. “Seraphina,” Harlow said, her voice flat and devoid of pleasantries. Seraphina knew her. Most of them did. The woman didn’t look up. “Detective Quinn. A shame about the young man.” “Did you see anything?” Seraphina finally raised her gaze, her expression unreadable. “The Market sees everything. But the Market doesn't always speak.” “Try me.” “He was asking about…artifacts. Seeking something specific. A way to enhance his perception, he said. To ‘see beyond the veil.’” Harlow's worn leather watch glinted as she checked the time. Just seven hours until the Market relocated. They never stayed in one place long. “Did he find what he was looking for?” Seraphina offered a small, cryptic smile. “Perhaps. Curiosity is a dangerous pursuit, Detective.” Harlow moved further into the Market, her military precision in stark contrast to the chaotic energy around her. She passed a stall selling bottled shadows, another offering teeth purportedly from mythical beasts. She stopped at a stall run by a man known only as Silas, a purveyor of forgotten lore and strange instruments. “Silas,” she greeted him. “Detective.” He didn’t bother with a pleasantry either. Silas was a practical man. "Interesting evening." “I'm looking for information. A recent arrival. Young man, flamboyant attire. Asking about supernatural enhancements.” Silas’s eyes, magnified by thick lenses, narrowed. “Ah, yes. The seeker. He was admiring my Veil Compass.” Harlow’s attention sharpened. A Veil Compass. She’d only encountered a handful in her eighteen years on the force. They were expensive, rare, and only sold to those who truly understood their purpose. A compass tuned to supernatural energy; the needle pointed towards rifts and portals. “Did he purchase it?” Silas shook his head. “He lacked the…resonance. The Compass rejects those who are not aligned. But he was persistent. He asked about ways to bypass the restriction. About rituals to open oneself to the unseen.” That was the key. “Did you tell him?” Silas offered a shrug. “I provide information. I do not judge its use.” Harlow’s gaze swept over the compasses on display. Small brass casings, faces etched with protective sigils. Patina of verdigris giving them an ancient look. She noticed one was missing from its velvet stand. “Show me your inventory log, Silas.” He reluctantly produced a leather-bound book, the pages filled with meticulous handwriting. Harlow scanned the entries, her finger tracing the rows. The missing compass was marked as “Reserved – Potential Buyer." Beneath it, a single name, scrawled in a different hand: “A. Thorne.” “Who is A. Thorne?” Silas hesitated. “A…collector. Discreet. Pays well. I didn't ask too many questions.” Harlo felt a knot tighten in her stomach. A collector. That didn't fit. This felt…targeted, not random. This wasn't some tourist stumbling into the wrong crowd. The puncture wound, the surgical precision, the knowledge of the Veil – it all pointed to a calculated act. “Davies,” she called out, her voice cutting through the murmur of the market. “I want a full background check on anyone named A. Thorne connected to the supernatural community. And I want you to pull the security footage from every entrance and exit to this station for the past twenty-four hours. Let’s see who was meeting with our ‘seeker.’” Davies, finally seeming to grasp the shift in her assessment, nodded and hurried off. Harlow returned to the victim, kneeling once more beside the body. She examined the wound again, a new detail catching her eye. A faint, almost imperceptible residue around the puncture. A shimmering, iridescent dust. She directed a uniformed officer to collect a sample. “Send it to forensics. Tell them to look for anything…unusual. Anything that doesn't belong.” As she stood, she noticed Eva Kowalski, her friend from the British Museum, pushing her way through the crowd, her curly red hair a beacon in the gloom. Eva was clutching her worn leather satchel, her round glasses perched on her nose. She looked flustered, her nervous habit of tucking hair behind her left ear on full display. “Harlow?” Eva called out, spotting her. “I saw the news. What happened?” “Murder,” Harlow said, her tone grim. “And I think it’s more complicated than it appears.” Eva’s eyes widened. “Complicated how?” “I think,” Harlow said, her gaze sweeping over the shrouded stalls and watchful faces of the Veil Market, “we’re dealing with someone who knows more about the unseen world than they let on.” And a creeping feeling told her that this was only the beginning. This wasn't just a murder. It was a message. And she had a feeling it was meant for her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.298
leniency0.596
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.31% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"truly"
count1
1
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"truly"
1"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1301
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count4
2
word"methodical"
count1
3
word"silk"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"stark"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"resonance"
count1
9
word"aligned"
count1
10
word"etched"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count1
13
word"potential"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"calculated"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"gloom"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"velvet"
2"methodical"
3"silk"
4"shimmered"
5"unreadable"
6"stark"
7"chaotic"
8"resonance"
9"aligned"
10"etched"
11"scanned"
12"tracing"
13"potential"
14"stomach"
15"calculated"
16"beacon"
17"gloom"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences97
matches
0"felt a knot"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1298
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount863
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Davies"
discoveredNames
Quinn1
Tube1
Town1
North1
Veil4
Market4
Davies9
Camden2
High1
Street1
Harlow15
Seraphina3
Silas6
Compass1
Eva4
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tube"
2"Davies"
3"Harlow"
4"Seraphina"
5"Silas"
6"Compass"
7"Eva"
8"Kowalski"
9"Museum"
places
0"Town"
1"North"
2"Market"
3"Camden"
4"High"
5"Street"
6"British"
globalScore0.631
windowScore0.667
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like dust motes and forgotten pray"
1"smelled like trouble even before the call"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1298
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean23.18
std17.26
cv0.745
sampleLengths
076
135
253
337
436
58
615
74
834
94
1020
1158
1216
1314
1416
1529
1630
1717
1813
1928
2017
2113
224
2318
242
2520
2624
278
2813
2953
304
3115
3215
3317
3445
354
3635
374
384
3913
4033
416
4243
434
4412
4545
4659
4714
4834
4923
98.03% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences97
matches
0"was marked"
1"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs150
matches
0"were watching"
1"was clutching"
76.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences130
ratio0.023
matches
0"He was young, mid-twenties maybe, dressed in the sort of flamboyant clothes you saw on the fringes of Camden High Street—velvet jacket, too many rings."
1"A compass tuned to supernatural energy; the needle pointed towards rifts and portals."
2"The puncture wound, the surgical precision, the knowledge of the Veil – it all pointed to a calculated act."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount730
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.038356164383561646
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.0136986301369863
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean9.98
std7.42
cv0.743
sampleLengths
016
123
219
318
411
515
66
73
818
925
1010
1115
122
1312
148
1510
166
173
189
194
204
218
225
2310
244
2534
262
272
2820
2911
307
3111
329
3314
346
359
367
3712
382
399
407
416
4216
431
446
4530
4613
474
484
499
57.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences90
matches
0"Just the single, precise puncture"
1"Too clean, too small."
2"Just seven hours until the"
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences90
matches
0"He saw things at face"
1"He was young, mid-twenties maybe,"
2"She needed quiet, and she"
3"It wasn’t a knife."
4"She glanced around the platform,"
5"They were watching, but not"
6"It was small, almost insignificant,"
7"She stood and walked towards"
8"They never stayed in one"
9"She passed a stall selling"
10"She stopped at a stall"
11"she greeted him"
12"He didn’t bother with a"
13"She’d only encountered a handful"
14"They were expensive, rare, and"
15"She noticed one was missing"
16"He reluctantly produced a leather-bound"
17"she called out, her voice"
18"She examined the wound again,"
19"She directed a uniformed officer"
ratio0.244
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences90
matches
0"The air tasted of wet"
1"Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar"
2"Camden Town North, the sign"
3"This was the Veil Market’s"
4"DS Davies said, gesturing with"
5"Davies was good people, solid,"
6"He saw things at face"
7"A weakness, sometimes."
8"He was young, mid-twenties maybe,"
9"A tourist, probably, drawn in"
10"Harlow knelt, her knees protesting"
11"Davies busied himself with the"
12"She needed quiet, and she"
13"The victim’s eyes were wide,"
14"It wasn’t a knife."
15"Davies commented, joining her"
16"Harlow didn’t bother looking up."
17"She glanced around the platform,"
18"Silk scarves shimmered under flickering"
19"Jars filled with murky liquids"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her trench coat, the fabric doing little against the chill that clung to the abandoned Tube station."
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Harlow said, her voice flat and devoid of pleasantries"
1"she called out, her voice cutting through the murmur of the market"
2"Harlow said, her tone grim"
64.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Davies commented (comment)"
1"Davies observed (observe)"
2"she called out (call out)"
3"Eva called out (call out)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.17
leniency0.34
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.17
82.5927%