Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB3XJY8VGJW09H7VZ1QE03

Run Details

Duration:
21.6s
Cost:
$0.001066
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell above the door jingles, high and thin, cutting through the murmur of The Raven's Nest. Rory glances up from the glass she's buffing, her wrist flicking as the cloth scrubs a smudge from the rim until it catches the light. Cardiff blue eyes narrow, expecting the usual: a builder on a lunch break, a student needing directions, Silas' regulars who think the word "sir" is a compliment. But it's not. A woman stands in the doorway, half-shadowed by the neon green sign. Rory freezes. The woman's hair is shorter now, cropped close to her head, streaked with something the color of wet asphalt—maybe silver, maybe just the light. Her face is a map of lines Rory doesn't recognize: a furrow between her brows, a crease at the corner of her eyes that wasn't there before. She's wearing a coat that looks too expensive, a tailored thing in charcoal, and her shoes click on the creaky wooden floor like she's not used to them. "Rory Carter," the woman says, and her voice is a lower, rougher version of the one that used to sing in the rain at Roath Park. Rory's throat tightens. She sets the glass down hard enough to make a *clink* that echoes. "Eva," she says, and it comes out a question. Eva steps further in, her coat slipping off one shoulder. She pulls it up, self-conscious, and Rory notices the ring—a fat gold band, engraved with initials, sitting on her left finger. The nail polish is chipped at the edges, like she's been biting it. "Took you long enough to recognize me," Eva says, but her smile doesn't reach her eyes. Rory's hand flies to her left wrist, where the crescent moon scar peeks out from her sleeve. She hadn't thought about it in years—not since Evan asked what it was, and she told him a factory accident, and he laughed, hard, like it was a joke. "You look... different," she says, because it's true, even if it's the stupidest thing she's ever said. Eva snorts. "Yeah. Me too." She nods at the bar, at the stools lined up along the oak counter. "Mind if I sit?" Rory moves before she can think, sliding a stool out. The wood groans under Eva's weight. Rory leans against the counter, her fingers wrapping around a nearly full glass of ale—Silas' usual. She doesn't take a drink. "Silas said you worked here now," Eva says, tracing the rim of her glass. The beer is dark, murky, and Rory realizes she's poured it for herself, without asking. "Deliveries mostly," she says. "Golden Empress. He let me crash upstairs when I couldn't sleep at night." Eva's gaze flicks up, then away. "Right. You always had a knack for crashing." Rory's spine stiffens. The "always" hangs in the air, thick with unspoken things. "You always had a knack for saying the wrong thing," she fires back, before she can stop herself. Eva's eyes darken. "At least I *said* things. You just... ran." The word hangs, sharp. Rory's thumb rubs the scar on her wrist. Evan—*Evan*—had called her a coward when she left. *You can't run forever*, he'd screamed, his hand around her throat. *Coward*, *weak*, *useless*. But Eva never called her that. Not even when Rory vanished, three years gone, leaving only a postcard from Brighton and a text that said *Sorry* before the number went dead. "I didn't run from you," she says, and it's true. She ran from Evan, from the rent collector, from the mirror that showed her a stranger. But she didn't run from Eva. She ran *from the memory* of what they'd had—of the way Eva would laugh at her bad jokes, of the way she'd hold Rory's hand when she had nightmares about her father's texts. She ran because she was terrified, back then, that Eva would look at her and see the mess she was, and walk away. Eva's lip twitches. "You didn't run from much, did you?" Rory's chest tightens. She pushes off the counter, strides to the taps, and pours herself a glass of water. The ice clinks. "What d'you want, Eva? You found me. You gonna tell me you're here to rub my nose in how perfect your life is? How you got married, had kids, a house with a garden? Go ahead. I can take it." Eva sets down her glass. "I don't care about my *garden*," she says, her voice breaking. "I care about the girl who used to sneak into my room and read me poetry when I couldn't sleep. I care about the girl who promised we'd never let anyone take us down. I care about the *friend* who didn't have the decency to say goodbye." The words hit Rory like a fist. She leans against the bar, her knees suddenly wobbly. "I said goodbye," she whispers. "I didn't know how to *not* say goodbye and still be alive." Eva is on her feet in a second, her hand on Rory's arm. Her touch is warm, familiar, like coming home after a long winter. "Oh, love," she says, and the nickname is back, soft and fond, and Rory's eyes sting. "You never had to say goodbye to me." Rory pulls away, wiping her eyes with the back of her hand. "How long have you been in London?" she asks, changing the subject. It's easier to talk about shoes than about hearts. "Three weeks," Eva says. "Divorce. Kids—Christopher and Lila—stayed with their dad. I couldn't... look at them without seeing... him. So I left." Rory nods. She remembers the feeling, the way the walls close in when you're reminded of someone who broke you. "I get it," she says. Eva shakes her head. "No, you don't. You left. I stayed. What's the same?" Rory opens her mouth, but nothing comes out. There's no answer, not really. They're two people, separated by time and fear and the choices they made, and all the words in the world can't bridge that gap. A shadow falls over the bar. Silas stands in the doorway, his auburn beard catching the neon light, his limp evident as he steps closer. He nods at them, once, like he's saying *I see you*, and then he moves to the jukebox, selecting a record—something slow, jazz, the kind that feels like old silk. "I heard a commotion," he says, sliding into the stool beside Rory. He picks up her water glass, takes a sip, and sets it down. "Eva. Long time no see." Eva's expression softens. "Silas. You look... exactly the same." He chuckles. "Thanks. Took me decades to perfect the 'I don't care if you broke my knee' look." He nods at her hand. "Still married?" Eva hesitates, then pulls off the ring, holding it up. The gold is dull, scuffed. "Divorced. Three weeks ago." Silas nods. "Good. He was a fool." Rory snorts. "Speak for yourself." Silas looks at her, his hazel eyes warm. "You're still a firecracker, you know that?" She rolls her eyes, but she's smiling. It's a real smile, the kind that reaches her blue eyes, and for a second, she's 16 again, standing in Eva's backyard, laughing as Silas—old, with a gun and a scar and a secret—teaches them to shoot wine bottles. "You gonna tell us why you ran, or are we gonna wait until midnight?" Eva asks, but her tone is gentle, not accusatory. Rory takes a breath. "Evan. His dad was a judge. Powerful. I... I got pregnant. He found out. He made me get an abortion. Then he started hitting me. I didn't know who to turn to. I was so scared—of him, of the police, of... of being alone. So I took the next train to London. And I didn't call. Because what was I gonna say? *Hey, I messed up, and now I'm broke, and I'm sleeping in a closet?*" She laughs, wet and shaky, and Eva takes her hand. "I should've called," Rory says. "I should've kept trying. But I was scared you'd think I was weak." Eva squeezes her hand. "I never thought you were weak. I thought you were *brave*. Running from him, starting over. That's the opposite of weak." Rory looks down at their hands, intertwined, and remembers the last time she held Eva's hand—at the station, before she left. Eva had pressed a locket into her palm, a photo of them inside, and said *Call me when you can*, and Rory had nodded, because she couldn't speak, couldn't breathe, couldn't bear to see the look in her eyes when she realized Rory was leaving for good. "I have the locket," she says, surprising herself. Eva's face lights up. "Really?" Rory nods. "I kept it. Under my floorboard. I looked at it every night." Silas stands, stretching. "I'll leave you two to it. But Rory—" he pauses, "—close the back door when you're done. The wind's picking up." He walks away, the jukebox humming now, a slow tune that makes the beer slosh in the glasses. The bar feels quieter, cozier, like a secret. "You know," Eva says, "I've thought about you every single day." Rory's throat burns. "I know." Eva sighs. "We should get coffee. Tomorrow. Or lunch. Or... something. Just us." Rory smiles. "Yeah. We should." They sit in silence for a while, listening to the music, the hum of the bar, the sound of their own hearts beating. The scar on Rory's wrist itches, but she doesn't mind. It's a reminder, now, not of pain, but of the way people can come back—broken, but still there. Eva stands, gathering her coat. "I should go. The train's at six." Rory stands too. "I'll walk you to the station." Eva nods. "Good." They step into the night, the neon green sign of The Raven's Nest glowing behind them, a small, steady light. Rory's shoulder brushes Eva's, and for a second, they're 16 again, walking home from the movies, late, talking about the future like it's a promise. It still is. For now.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:16:03.689Z" 2/20/2026, 8:16:03 PM
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native_tokens_reasoning844
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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provider_responses
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.453
leniency0.906
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1689
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.40% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1689
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoes"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count2
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"silk"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"echoes"
1"weight"
2"tracing"
3"unspoken"
4"perfect"
5"familiar"
6"silk"
7"silence"
8"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences112
matches
0"was terrified"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords40
totalWords1673
ratio0.024
matches
0"clink"
1"said"
2"Evan"
3"You can't run forever"
4"Coward"
5"weak"
6"useless"
7"Sorry"
8"from the memory"
9"garden"
10"friend"
11"not"
12"I see you"
13"Hey, I messed up, and now I'm broke, and I'm sleeping in a closet?"
14"brave"
15"Call me when you can"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions32
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
10.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions79
wordCount1180
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Rory33
Roath1
Park1
Eva30
Evan4
Brighton1
Silas5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Silas"
places
0"Roath"
1"Park"
2"Brighton"
globalScore0.102
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.598
wordCount1673
matches
0"not of pain, but of the way people can come back"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences141
matches
0"bridge that gap"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean29.35
std23.47
cv0.799
sampleLengths
069
13
293
326
425
560
663
723
837
929
1017
1114
1231
1311
1465
1588
1610
1762
1863
1933
2049
2133
2222
2325
2414
2537
2655
2730
289
2925
3019
317
325
3315
3446
3523
3680
3710
3818
3925
4068
418
425
4314
4424
4526
4611
475
4813
495
95.86% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"is chipped"
1"was terrified"
2"reminded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs232
matches
0"was leaving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences141
ratio0.078
matches
0"The woman's hair is shorter now, cropped close to her head, streaked with something the color of wet asphalt—maybe silver, maybe just the light."
1"She pulls it up, self-conscious, and Rory notices the ring—a fat gold band, engraved with initials, sitting on her left finger."
2"She hadn't thought about it in years—not since Evan asked what it was, and she told him a factory accident, and he laughed, hard, like it was a joke."
3"Rory leans against the counter, her fingers wrapping around a nearly full glass of ale—Silas' usual."
4"Evan—*Evan*—had called her a coward when she left."
5"She ran *from the memory* of what they'd had—of the way Eva would laugh at her bad jokes, of the way she'd hold Rory's hand when she had nightmares about her father's texts."
6"He nods at them, once, like he's saying *I see you*, and then he moves to the jukebox, selecting a record—something slow, jazz, the kind that feels like old silk."
7"It's a real smile, the kind that reaches her blue eyes, and for a second, she's 16 again, standing in Eva's backyard, laughing as Silas—old, with a gun and a scar and a secret—teaches them to shoot wine bottles."
8"Rory looks down at their hands, intertwined, and remembers the last time she held Eva's hand—at the station, before she left."
9"\"I'll leave you two to it. But Rory—\" he pauses, \"—close the back door when you're done. The wind's picking up.\""
10"It's a reminder, now, not of pain, but of the way people can come back—broken, but still there."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount490
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.02857142857142857
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0020408163265306124
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean11.87
std10.81
cv0.911
sampleLengths
017
125
227
33
412
52
624
727
828
926
103
1113
129
1310
1421
1513
1616
1717
1829
1917
202
2117
224
2310
246
2516
265
2714
2815
294
3013
316
328
333
3410
3518
363
378
384
398
408
4111
423
436
4425
4510
4616
476
4833
4923
45.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.2765957446808511
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences95
matches
0"Her face is a map"
1"She's wearing a coat that"
2"She sets the glass down"
3"she says, and it comes"
4"She pulls it up, self-conscious,"
5"She hadn't thought about it"
6"she says, because it's true,"
7"She nods at the bar,"
8"She doesn't take a drink."
9"she fires back, before she"
10"*You can't run forever*, he'd"
11"she says, and it's true"
12"She ran from Evan, from"
13"She ran *from the memory*"
14"She ran because she was"
15"She pushes off the counter,"
16"she says, her voice breaking"
17"She leans against the bar,"
18"Her touch is warm, familiar,"
19"she says, and the nickname"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount90
totalSentences95
matches
0"The bell above the door"
1"Rory glances up from the"
2"Cardiff blue eyes narrow, expecting"
3"A woman stands in the"
4"The woman's hair is shorter"
5"Her face is a map"
6"She's wearing a coat that"
7"the woman says, and her"
8"Rory's throat tightens."
9"She sets the glass down"
10"she says, and it comes"
11"Eva steps further in, her"
12"She pulls it up, self-conscious,"
13"The nail polish is chipped"
14"Eva says, but her smile"
15"Rory's hand flies to her"
16"She hadn't thought about it"
17"she says, because it's true,"
18"She nods at the bar,"
19"Rory moves before she can"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.28% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory glances up from the glass she's buffing, her wrist flicking as the cloth scrubs a smudge from the rim until it catches the light."
1"Her face is a map of lines Rory doesn't recognize: a furrow between her brows, a crease at the corner of her eyes that wasn't there before."
2"She's wearing a coat that looks too expensive, a tailored thing in charcoal, and her shoes click on the creaky wooden floor like she's not used to them."
3"She ran from Evan, from the rent collector, from the mirror that showed her a stranger."
4"It's a real smile, the kind that reaches her blue eyes, and for a second, she's 16 again, standing in Eva's backyard, laughing as Silas—old, with a gun and a sc…"
20.83% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"the woman says, and her voice is a lower, rougher version of the one that used to sing in the rain at Roath Park"
1"Eva says, but her smile doesn't reach her eyes"
2"she says, her voice breaking"
3"she says, and the nickname is back, soft and fond, and Rory's eyes sting"
4"Eva asks, but her tone is gentle, not accusatory"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispers (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.679
rawRatio0.056
effectiveRatio0.038
74.8234%