"Rory froze, her hand still gripping the knob, the cool draft from the hallway carrying the faint scent of rain-slicked streets and something sharper—cologne, expensive and familiar, like aged leather and smoke."
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"He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the tip planted firmly on the worn linoleum, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers: one amber, piercing as a flame; the other black, swallowing the light whole."
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"The flat behind her hummed with the low chaos of Eva's domain—books teetering on every shelf, scrolls unrolled across the kitchen table like forgotten maps, notes pinned to the walls in frantic clusters."
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"The scar from that stupid fall off the swing set as a kid—innocent then, now just another mark in a life full of them."
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"Rory turned, her boots scuffing the rug, putting the kitchen island between them—a flimsy barrier stacked with Eva's research, yellowed pages fluttering in the draft."
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"The motion revealed the crisp white shirt beneath, sleeves rolled to his elbows, forearms corded with faint scars—souvenirs from his demon side, she knew, though he'd never confirmed it."
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"That word had burned bridges between them months ago, when she'd walked out of his Mayfair townhouse after he'd promised discretion in their world—the supernatural underbelly where deals were struck in shadows and information flowed like blood."
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"The flat's walls seemed to shrink, bookshelves looming with their weight of arcane lore—Eva's obsession with the old realms, notes on half-breeds like him scribbled in margins."
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"He reached out then, his fingers brushing her arm—light, testing. The touch sent a jolt through her, warm and unwelcome, stirring memories of his hands on her skin in the dim light of his study, maps of underworld territories spread beneath them like a bed. She didn't pull away, not yet."
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"His voice dipped, the accent thickening, wrapping around her name like a caress. Rory's breath caught, her pulse thudding in her ears. The scar on her wrist itched, as if alive with the past. She remembered the night they'd argued, words flying like daggers—her accusing him of using her as a pawn in his games, him countering that she feared her own strength. They'd parted with the door slamming, her fleeing back to Eva's, to this cluttered sanctuary where normalcy pretended to exist."
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"She stepped back, breaking the contact, her hip bumping the table. A scroll toppled, unrolling to reveal sketches of demonic sigils—Eva's latest fixation on Avaros, Lucien's birthplace. He bent to retrieve it, his fingers lingering on the paper, tracing a line with a precision that spoke of lifetimes in shadows."
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"Rory's eyes flashed, bright blue storming. How did he know? His networks, of course—tendrils everywhere, from street informants to supernatural whispers. She leaned against the counter, arms barred again, but her voice softened, edged with the hurt she'd buried."
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"He straightened, the scroll forgotten on the table. In two strides, he closed the distance, his cane left behind, hands finding her waist—firm, anchoring. Up close, his eyes held hers, amber and black swirling with unspoken pleas. The scent of him enveloped her, rain and cologne mingling with the flat's undercurrent of curry from the shop below."
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"Her hands rose, pressing against his chest, feeling the steady beat beneath the shirt. She could push him away, should, but the warmth seeped through, thawing the frost she'd built. Things left unsaid bubbled up—regrets over stolen kisses in alleyways, fears of his demon heritage pulling him under, her own terror of vulnerability after Evan."
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"The attraction—it wasn't just heat."
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"His laugh rumbled low, vibrating through her palms. One hand lifted, cupping her jaw, thumb brushing her lower lip—gentle, electric."
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"Half-demon chaos in my veins, but you—your mind, your fire—it's the anchor.\""
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"Her resolve cracked, blue eyes softening as she tilted into his touch. The flat faded—the books, the notes, the deadbolts sealing them in. History pressed close: the night he'd bandaged her wrist after a delivery gone wrong in the wrong neighborhood, his fingers lingering; the whispered confessions in French she pretended not to understand, promises of protection laced with possession."
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"Just—let me in.\""
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"He smiled, full and rare, pulling her toward the couch buried under notes. They sank into it, bodies close, words spilling in fragments—apologies woven with admissions, attraction rekindling like embers to flame. The night stretched, complicated terms unraveling thread by thread, the flat a witness to their fragile reunion."
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"She nodded, eyes drifting shut, the world outside—the deliveries, the underworld, Eva's return—fading for the moment. Just them, tangled in the aftermath."
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"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, slunk between her ankles, his tail flicking like a metronome counting down to disaster."
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"Lucien stepped forward, crossing the threshold without waiting for permission, his cane tapping once against the floorboards."
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"Rory turned, her boots scuffing the rug, putting the kitchen island between them—a flimsy barrier stacked with Eva's research, yellowed pages fluttering in the …"
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"Straightening, he unbuttoned his coat, letting it slide off his shoulders onto a nearby chair piled with books."
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"Ptolemy leaped onto the counter, weaving between her arms, his purr a low rumble that did nothing to ease the knot in her chest."
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"His voice dipped, the accent thickening, wrapping around her name like a caress. Rory's breath caught, her pulse thudding in her ears. The scar on her wrist itc…"
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"Ptolemy chose that moment to butt his head against Lucien's hand, demanding attention. Lucien obliged, scratching behind the cat's ears with a gentleness that b…"
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"She stepped back, breaking the contact, her hip bumping the table. A scroll toppled, unrolling to reveal sketches of demonic sigils—Eva's latest fixation on Ava…"
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"Her hands rose, pressing against his chest, feeling the steady beat beneath the shirt. She could push him away, should, but the warmth seeped through, thawing t…"
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"Lucien's thumbs traced circles at her sides, a silent counterpoint to his words. He leaned in, forehead nearly touching hers, breath mingling."
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"She searched his face, the slicked-back hair falling slightly askew, vulnerability cracking his polished exterior. Ptolemy jumped down, padding away as if sensi…"
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"Her resolve cracked, blue eyes softening as she tilted into his touch. The flat faded—the books, the notes, the deadbolts sealing them in. History pressed close…"
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"He kissed her then, not rushing, lips brushing hers with the weight of all the unsaid. Rory's hands fisted in his shirt, pulling him closer, the taste of rain a…"
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"She hesitated, the flat's clock ticking in the corner, marking time they'd lost. Ptolemy watched from afar, tail swishing. Rory's fingers traced his jaw, feelin…"