Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB496K6GKQFF3XMS9P8AV8

Run Details

Duration:
51.5s
Cost:
$0.000338
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest bled light onto the slick pavement. Rain feathered the glass, distorting the figures within. Rory wiped condensation from the bar’s door, the familiar scent of stale beer and something akin to old paper pulling her inside. She clocked out an hour ago, the Golden Empress’s delivery bike secured out back, and needed a quiet corner to sort through bills. Silas, leaning against the burnished mahogany of the bar, barely glanced up as she entered. He knew her schedule. Just a nod, a small acknowledgement. She preferred it that way, generally. Tonight, though, the bar wasn't empty. A man occupied a booth near the back, nursing a drink—a booth Rory hadn't seen occupied during peak hours in months. He was broader now, shoulders straining the fabric of a bespoke coat. Used to be all angles and nervous energy. The hair, once a chaotic mop, was cropped short, revealing a hint of silver at the temples. But it was the eyes she remembered. Intense, the color of storm clouds. "Evan?" He lifted his head. Recognition sparked, followed by something unreadable. A ghost of a smile played on his lips, but it didn't reach his eyes. “Rory. Fancy seeing you here.” She didn't move, her hand still resting on the doorframe. The air thickened, suddenly heavy, colder than the November rain outside. “You, uh, look good.” It felt weak, automatic. A stock phrase. “Do I?” He swirled the amber liquid in his glass. "Some might suggest you're being polite." “Just… different.” A long pause. She walked towards the bar, snagging a stool two seats down from him. “Last I heard, you were heading to Bristol for a grad scheme.” “Bristol happened. Didn’t stick.” “What changed?” He laughed, a dry, humorless sound. “What *didn’t* change? That’s the better question.” He took a slow sip of his drink. “It’s been… eight years, hasn’t it?” “Seven, actually.” Rory’s voice was flat. She hadn’t actively kept track, of course. Hadn’t allowed herself to. “Right. Seven. Feels like a lifetime.” He finally met her gaze, and she saw the weight there, settled deep in the lines around his eyes. A weight she knew, though it manifested differently on him. “You haven’t aged a day.” “Liar.” “A practiced one, perhaps.” He gestured to Silas. “Si makes a mean Old Fashioned. You should ask him.” “I work downstairs.” Rory pointed a thumb over her shoulder toward the restaurant. “I deliver for Yu-Fei. Keeps me busy.” “The Golden Empress?” He arched an eyebrow. "Not exactly the path to barrister-dom your father envisioned, was it?” A flicker of annoyance. “I needed a job. And I left Cardiff, remember? That ambition died a long time ago.” She hadn't spoken about it freely in years. Not even to Silas. “Still running, then?” The question hung in the air, acidic. Rory clenched her jaw. “I’m not *running*.” “Aren’t you? From him? From…everything?” He leaned forward, his voice dropping to a near whisper. “From us?” “Don’t.” Her tone brooked no argument. She felt Silas’s eyes on them, assessing, but he remained impassive, polishing glasses with a slow, deliberate movement. “Don’t what, Rory? Don’t state the obvious? Don’t remind you of the things you've conveniently forgotten?” “I haven’t forgotten anything!” The words burst out. "I remember perfectly well." Too perfectly, maybe. She regretted the sharpness immediately. He chuckled again, no warmth in it this time. “Do you? Do you remember the promises we made? The plans we had?” “Plans change, Evan.” “Some things shouldn’t.” He set his glass down with a soft click. “I’ve been doing…security consulting. Mostly corporate. It pays well.” “Suits you.” Sarcasm dripped from the remark. She hadn't meant it to, but it came out anyway. “Does it?” He tilted his head, studying her. "I always thought you'd be saving the world, one legal battle at a time." “And you’d be building robots or designing bridges. We all had ideas.” “Some of us reinvent ourselves.” "Some of us become shadows of what they could have been." She bit back the rest. The words felt too raw, too close to the truth. He didn't respond. His gaze tracked to her wrist where the pale scar curved. “Still got the mark?” he asked, his voice quiet. Rory instinctively covered it with her hand. A childhood accident. A simple explanation. A lie she’d repeated so many times it felt like fact. “It fades.” “Doesn’t really, does it? Just gets less noticeable.” He mirrored her gesture, running a finger over the edge of his coat sleeve. She noticed, then, the subtle bulge beneath the fabric. “What do you do now, Evan? Actually.” “Let’s just say I solve problems.” He offered a knowing smirk. “For people with…complicated needs.” Silas cleared his throat, placing a fresh glass of something amber in front of Rory. "On the house. Thought you might need it." The Spymaster's calm demeanor was a sharp contrast to the simmering tension between them. “Thanks, Si.” She took a slow sip. It burned going down, but it was a welcome distraction. “You look…settled,” Evan said, after a beat. “Living above a bar. Delivering takeout.” “It’s a life.” She avoided his gaze, focusing on the condensation forming on the glass. “It’s honest.” “Is it?” He raised an eyebrow. “Or is it just safe?” Rory didn’t answer. She couldn't. The question lodged in her throat, a painful reminder of everything she’d sacrificed for that safety. “I heard about your father.” The unexpected words cut through the silence. Rory froze. “He’s…well.” “Ill? I read the obituaries online.” “He had a stroke. Last year.” “I’m sorry, Rory.” A flicker of something genuinely remorseful crossed his face. “He’s recovering. Slowly.” “He always wanted the best for you.” “I know.” “He never approved of me, did he?” “He had reservations.” A massive understatement. “He saw through me, I suppose.” “He saw you weren't…rooted.” “And you are?” “I’m here, aren’t I?” Rory’s voice cracked. She took another long drink, the liquor doing little to thaw the ice in her veins. “Being *here* and being grounded are different things.” He leaned back, studying her with an intensity that made her skin crawl. “You always were the practical one, Rory. The sensible one. The one who held everything together.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She bit back [back]"
1"He leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.343
leniency0.686
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.057
76.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1043
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count2
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"perfectly"
2"really"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1043
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"eyebrow"
count2
5
word"flicker"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"simmering"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"chaotic"
2"unreadable"
3"weight"
4"eyebrow"
5"flicker"
6"whisper"
7"warmth"
8"simmering"
9"tension"
10"reminder"
11"silence"
12"intensity"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1040
ratio0.003
matches
0"didn’t"
1"running"
2"here"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
74.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount664
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.51
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Rory10
November1
Silas5
Sarcasm1
Spymaster1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Empress"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
5"Sarcasm"
6"Spymaster"
places(empty)
globalScore0.747
windowScore0.833
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something akin to old paper pulling her inside"
1"felt like fact"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1040
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean16.51
std13.65
cv0.827
sampleLengths
067
158
250
31
425
55
621
711
816
930
104
112
1227
1317
1440
151
1618
1720
1818
1932
203
2114
2217
2324
2416
2520
2622
273
2821
2917
3022
3112
325
3326
3414
359
3624
372
3831
397
4015
4137
4217
4313
4417
4511
4621
475
489
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was cropped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences120
ratio0.008
matches
0"A man occupied a booth near the back, nursing a drink—a booth Rory hadn't seen occupied during peak hours in months."
99.47% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount665
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.0406015037593985
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.016541353383458645
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean8.67
std5.54
cv0.639
sampleLengths
014
18
222
323
415
54
66
76
86
921
1012
118
1217
137
146
151
164
176
1815
195
2010
2111
228
233
2410
256
265
2713
2812
294
302
316
3215
336
346
357
364
3725
3810
395
401
418
4210
4313
447
457
4611
474
4824
494
56.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.39166666666666666
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners47
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Just a nod, a small"
1"Too perfectly, maybe"
ratio0.026
30.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences78
matches
0"She clocked out an hour"
1"He knew her schedule."
2"She preferred it that way,"
3"He was broader now, shoulders"
4"He lifted his head."
5"She didn't move, her hand"
6"It felt weak, automatic"
7"He swirled the amber liquid"
8"She walked towards the bar,"
9"He laughed, a dry, humorless"
10"He took a slow sip"
11"She hadn’t actively kept track,"
12"He finally met her gaze,"
13"He gestured to Silas"
14"He arched an eyebrow"
15"She hadn't spoken about it"
16"He leaned forward, his voice"
17"Her tone brooked no argument"
18"She felt Silas’s eyes on"
19"She regretted the sharpness immediately."
ratio0.474
4.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences78
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rain feathered the glass, distorting"
2"Rory wiped condensation from the"
3"She clocked out an hour"
4"Silas, leaning against the burnished"
5"He knew her schedule."
6"She preferred it that way,"
7"Tonight, though, the bar wasn't"
8"A man occupied a booth"
9"He was broader now, shoulders"
10"The hair, once a chaotic"
11"He lifted his head."
12"Recognition sparked, followed by something"
13"A ghost of a smile"
14"She didn't move, her hand"
15"The air thickened, suddenly heavy,"
16"It felt weak, automatic"
17"A stock phrase."
18"He swirled the amber liquid"
19"A long pause"
ratio0.91
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"It felt, automatic"
1"He leaned, his voice dropping to a near whisper"
2"he asked, his voice quiet"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.9390%