Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB54Z834CE1SH3H3H1N62E

Run Details

Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.001491
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the Soho pavements like a thousand tiny fists, turning the gutters into rushing black rivers that swallowed cigarette butts and crumpled flyers. Detective Harlow Quinn hunched her shoulders against the deluge, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered flat to her scalp beneath the hood of her trench coat. Water streamed down her sharp jaw, blurring the edges of her vision, but she didn't blink. Not when she'd just caught sight of him—Tomás Herrera, slipping out the back door of the Raven's Nest like a shadow detaching from the wall. Quinn's worn leather watch ticked against her left wrist, marking the seconds since she'd clocked him inside the bar twenty minutes ago, nursing a whiskey neat while whispering with that shifty bartender, Silas. Eighteen years on the force had honed her instincts to a razor's edge; Herrera wasn't just some off-books medic patching up bar fights. No, he was tangled in something darker, tied to the clique she'd been chasing for months—disappearances, ritualistic symbols carved into alley walls, whispers of unnatural shit that didn't fit the Met's tidy case files. Her partner's ghost still haunted her dreams, DS Morris vanishing three years back into fog that reeked of brimstone. Supernatural bollocks, the brass had called it. Clean accident. Quinn knew better. She bolted from her unmarked sedan parked curbside, boots splashing through puddles that mirrored the green neon glow of the Raven's Nest sign. "Herrera!" she barked, voice cutting through the roar of traffic and rain. He didn't stop. Just glanced over his shoulder—warm brown eyes flashing recognition under the brim of his hood—before ducking into a narrow alley off Wardour Street. Bastard was fast for a healer, legs pumping with the urgency of a man who'd ditched scrubs for flight. Quinn's lungs burned as she gave chase, military precision driving her strides. At 5'9", she matched his height, but he had youth on his side—twenty-nine, her files said, olive-skinned Spaniard from Seville with a knife scar snaking his left forearm and a Saint Christopher medallion bouncing against his chest. She glimpsed it now as he shoved past overflowing bins, the silver glinting under sodium lamps. Rain slicked the cobbles, turning the alley into a skidway; she nearly went down when her boot hydroplaned on a slick leaf, but she caught herself on a graffiti-scarred wall—tagged with that same looping sigil she'd seen at three crime scenes. "Police! Stop!" The words echoed off brick, futile as prayers. He vaulted a low chain-link fence into a side street, and she followed, coat flapping like sodden wings. Horns blared as they burst onto Oxford Street, weaving through umbrellas and late-night revelers spilling from pubs. A cab swerved, brakes screeching; Quinn dodged left, her brown eyes locked on Herrera's curly dark hair, sodden and wild. He was heading north—Camden way. Why? The Nest was his haunt, not some midnight hike through the storm. Blocks blurred: neon shopfronts bleeding color into puddles, the acrid tang of wet asphalt and fried kebabs. Her watch strap chafed her wrist, soaked through, but she ignored it. Flash of memory— Morris's face, pale and twisted, the last she'd seen before the alley ate him whole. No body, no trace, just her gut screaming otherworldly. This clique, Herrera's crew—they were the thread. She wouldn't lose it now. He cut east into a maze of backstreets behind a shuttered market, breath ragged, audible over the downpour. Quinn closed the gap, fingers brushing her holstered Glock beneath the coat. "Herrera, you wanker—give it up!" He stumbled on a pothole, righted himself with a curse in Spanish—something about la puta madre—and plunged into a service alley flanked by towering skips. She vaulted after, heart thundering, adrenaline sharpening every sense: the metallic bite of rain on her tongue, the slap of his trainers ahead. Camden's fringes loomed now, the air thickening with the ghosts of punk rock and market stalls long shuttered for the night. He darted across a deserted junction, past a flickering "Closed" sign on a tattoo parlor, then vanished down a set of concrete stairs half-hidden by chain-link and weeds. Quinn skidded to the top, peering into the gloom. Abandoned Tube access—disused since the Blitz, cordoned off with rusted barriers and "Danger: No Entry" signs flapping in the wind. Rain cascaded down the steps like a waterfall, pooling at her feet. She drew her Glock, two-handed grip steady despite the wet. Torch beam from her phone pierced the dark: Herrera's silhouette midway down, fumbling at a grate set into the wall. No—not fumbling. He pulled something from his pocket—a small, yellowish token, carved like a femur, etched with runes that twisted her gut. Bone. Her files had scraps on this: Veil Market, supernatural bazaar in the underbelly, entry by token only. Moves every full moon. Bollocks, but real enough to chase leads here before. The grate swung open on silent hinges, unnatural in the rusty decay. Herrera shot her one last look—defiance mixed with pity?—before slipping inside. The grate clanged shut behind him, but not fully; a sliver gaped, enough for a slim frame. Quinn's breath fogged the air. Pulse hammered in her temples. Follow him down there? Into the black maw of legend, where her partner had maybe met his end? Stories from beat cops: whispers of enchanted blades that drank blood, alchemists peddling elixirs that melted flesh, creatures bartering souls under gaslight. Unfamiliar territory, crawling with the unknown. Backup? Miles away, radios crackling static in this storm. Her radio hissed now—control checking in—but she thumbed it silent. Solo op, always had been since Morris. She holstered the Glock, fingers numb. Military bearing kicked in: assess, decide, act. The alley behind her was empty, rain erasing her tracks. If she turned back, he'd vanish into the clique's web again—another dead end, another night staring at case files till dawn. But down there... Her free hand brushed her watch, ticking relentlessly. Morris's voice echoed in her skull: "Harlow, some shadows you don't chase." Sod that. She was no stranger to darkness. Quinn wedged her fingers into the grate's gap, muscles straining as she heaved. It gave with a groan, runes pulsing faint green before fading. She squeezed through, torch sweeping the narrow stairwell beyond: damp brick walls slick with moss, air turning fetid, laced with incense and ozone. Steps descended in a spiral, endless, her boots echoing like gunshots. Fifty feet down, the passage widened into a platform—abandoned Tube station, alright. Cracked tiles bore faded station names: "Camden Underworld – Next Train: Never." Arched doorways yawned into tunnels, but straight ahead, a heavy curtain of black velvet hung, embroidered with silver eyes that seemed to track her. Muffled voices seeped through—accents from nowhere, laughter like shattering glass. The Veil Market. She pushed the curtain aside, Glock drawn again, and stepped into hell's bazaar. Torchlight fractured across a cavernous chamber, brick vaults soaring overhead, strung with bioluminescent lanterns that cast writhing shadows. Stalls crammed the platform: rickety tables laden with glowing vials, amulets pulsing with inner fire, books bound in what looked suspiciously like skin. Vendors hawked wares in tongues that twisted her ear—hags with eyes like oil slicks, men in top hats with tails curling from coattails, a woman whose arms forked into tentacles coiling around potion bottles. Crowds milled: humans with haunted eyes rubbing shoulders with... things. Scales glinting under hoods, fangs bared in grins, wings folded like umbrellas. The air hummed with magic's static, thick as the rain outside. Quinn's skin crawled; her partner's disappearance flashed vivid—fog coiling like serpents, screams cut short. "There—human copper!" A rasp from a stall selling jars of writhing worms. Heads turned, eyes narrowing. A growl rippled through the throng. Herrera was ahead, weaving toward a shadowed archway opposite. He glanced back, medallion swinging, scar stark white on his forearm as he shoved through the press. Quinn lunged forward, elbowing a spindly figure with too many joints. "Outta my way!" Chaos erupted. A vendor hurled a vial—green liquid splattered near her boot, tile hissing into smoke. "Filth! No badges here!" Tentacle-woman lashed out, appendage whipping Quinn's arm; pain flared, but she twisted free, Glock barking a warning shot into the ceiling. Dust rained, lanterns swinging wild. The crowd parted like oil, revealing Herrera at the arch. He paused, rain still dripping from his curls, face a mask of conflict. "Quinn—go back. You don't belong here." She leveled the Glock, breath heaving. "Neither do you, Tommy. What's Saint Christopher think of black markets and body parts?" His jaw tightened, hand dipping toward his pocket. "This ain't your world. DS Morris learned that." Ice lanced her gut. He knew. "What happened to him?" Herrera's eyes flicked to the shadows beyond the arch—reinforcements? "Follow, and find out. Or walk away alive." The mob closed in, murmurs rising to snarls. A blade glinted from a nearby stall, long and hungry. Quinn's finger tightened on the trigger. Unknown territory. Deadly. But the truth—about Morris, the clique, all of it—lay beyond that arch. She stepped forward, Glock steady. "Lead on, Herrera." He vanished into the dark, and she followed, the Veil swallowing her whole. The curtain fell shut behind, sealing her fate in the underbelly's roar.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:16:44.02Z" 2/20/2026, 8:16:44 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He glanced back [back]"
1"The crowd parted like [like]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.773
leniency1
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.118
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1567
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1567
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"pumping"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count2
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"maw"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"fractured"
count1
12
word"stark"
count1
13
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"pumping"
1"glinting"
2"echoed"
3"otherworldly"
4"loomed"
5"gloom"
6"etched"
7"pulse"
8"maw"
9"echoing"
10"velvet"
11"fractured"
12"stark"
13"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences46
matches
0"d with pity"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount4
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences46
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"think"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences48
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen99
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1528
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions57
wordCount1272
uniqueNames24
maxNameDensity0.86
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn11
Tomás1
Herrera8
Raven2
Nest2
Silas1
Met1
Morris6
Wardour1
Street1
Blocks1
Glock6
Spanish1
Tube2
Blitz1
Veil3
Market2
Sod1
Arched1
Saint1
Christopher1
Ice1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Nest"
6"Silas"
7"Met"
8"Morris"
9"Glock"
10"Blitz"
11"Veil"
12"Saint"
13"Christopher"
14"Ice"
places
0"Soho"
1"Wardour"
2"Street"
3"Spanish"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences37
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1528
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean54.57
std31.48
cv0.577
sampleLengths
091
1121
280
3106
483
568
683
790
883
940
1082
1167
1266
1361
1413
1575
1647
1722
1840
1946
2029
2120
2216
2310
2417
2539
268
2725
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"was tangled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs238
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount24
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences20
totalSentences48
ratio0.417
matches
0"Not when she'd just caught sight of him—Tomás Herrera, slipping out the back door of the Raven's Nest like a shadow detaching from the wall."
1"Eighteen years on the force had honed her instincts to a razor's edge; Herrera wasn't just some off-books medic patching up bar fights."
2"No, he was tangled in something darker, tied to the clique she'd been chasing for months—disappearances, ritualistic symbols carved into alley walls, whispers of unnatural shit that didn't fit the Met's tidy case files."
3"Just glanced over his shoulder—warm brown eyes flashing recognition under the brim of his hood—before ducking into a narrow alley off Wardour Street."
4"At 5'9\", she matched his height, but he had youth on his side—twenty-nine, her files said, olive-skinned Spaniard from Seville with a knife scar snaking his left forearm and a Saint Christopher medallion bouncing against his chest. She glimpsed it now as he shoved past overflowing bins, the silver glinting under sodium lamps. Rain slicked the cobbles, turning the alley into a skidway; she nearly went down when her boot hydroplaned on a slick leaf, but she caught herself on a graffiti-scarred wall—tagged with that same looping sigil she'd seen at three crime scenes."
5"Stop!\" The words echoed off brick, futile as prayers. He vaulted a low chain-link fence into a side street, and she followed, coat flapping like sodden wings. Horns blared as they burst onto Oxford Street, weaving through umbrellas and late-night revelers spilling from pubs. A cab swerved, brakes screeching; Quinn dodged left, her brown eyes locked on Herrera's curly dark hair, sodden and wild. He was heading north—Camden way. Why? The Nest was his haunt, not some midnight hike through the storm."
6"Blocks blurred: neon shopfronts bleeding color into puddles, the acrid tang of wet asphalt and fried kebabs. Her watch strap chafed her wrist, soaked through, but she ignored it. Flash of memory— Morris's face, pale and twisted, the last she'd seen before the alley ate him whole. No body, no trace, just her gut screaming otherworldly. This clique, Herrera's crew—they were the thread. She wouldn't lose it now."
7"He cut east into a maze of backstreets behind a shuttered market, breath ragged, audible over the downpour. Quinn closed the gap, fingers brushing her holstered Glock beneath the coat. \"Herrera, you wanker—give it up!\" He stumbled on a pothole, righted himself with a curse in Spanish—something about la puta madre—and plunged into a service alley flanked by towering skips. She vaulted after, heart thundering, adrenaline sharpening every sense: the metallic bite of rain on her tongue, the slap of his trainers ahead."
8"Camden's fringes loomed now, the air thickening with the ghosts of punk rock and market stalls long shuttered for the night. He darted across a deserted junction, past a flickering \"Closed\" sign on a tattoo parlor, then vanished down a set of concrete stairs half-hidden by chain-link and weeds. Quinn skidded to the top, peering into the gloom. Abandoned Tube access—disused since the Blitz, cordoned off with rusted barriers and \"Danger: No Entry\" signs flapping in the wind. Rain cascaded down the steps like a waterfall, pooling at her feet."
9"She drew her Glock, two-handed grip steady despite the wet. Torch beam from her phone pierced the dark: Herrera's silhouette midway down, fumbling at a grate set into the wall. No—not fumbling. He pulled something from his pocket—a small, yellowish token, carved like a femur, etched with runes that twisted her gut. Bone. Her files had scraps on this: Veil Market, supernatural bazaar in the underbelly, entry by token only. Moves every full moon. Bollocks, but real enough to chase leads here before."
10"The grate swung open on silent hinges, unnatural in the rusty decay. Herrera shot her one last look—defiance mixed with pity?—before slipping inside. The grate clanged shut behind him, but not fully; a sliver gaped, enough for a slim frame."
11"Quinn's breath fogged the air. Pulse hammered in her temples. Follow him down there? Into the black maw of legend, where her partner had maybe met his end? Stories from beat cops: whispers of enchanted blades that drank blood, alchemists peddling elixirs that melted flesh, creatures bartering souls under gaslight. Unfamiliar territory, crawling with the unknown. Backup? Miles away, radios crackling static in this storm. Her radio hissed now—control checking in—but she thumbed it silent. Solo op, always had been since Morris."
12"She holstered the Glock, fingers numb. Military bearing kicked in: assess, decide, act. The alley behind her was empty, rain erasing her tracks. If she turned back, he'd vanish into the clique's web again—another dead end, another night staring at case files till dawn. But down there... Her free hand brushed her watch, ticking relentlessly. Morris's voice echoed in her skull: \"Harlow, some shadows you don't chase.\""
13"Fifty feet down, the passage widened into a platform—abandoned Tube station, alright. Cracked tiles bore faded station names: \"Camden Underworld – Next Train: Never.\" Arched doorways yawned into tunnels, but straight ahead, a heavy curtain of black velvet hung, embroidered with silver eyes that seemed to track her. Muffled voices seeped through—accents from nowhere, laughter like shattering glass. The Veil Market."
14"Torchlight fractured across a cavernous chamber, brick vaults soaring overhead, strung with bioluminescent lanterns that cast writhing shadows. Stalls crammed the platform: rickety tables laden with glowing vials, amulets pulsing with inner fire, books bound in what looked suspiciously like skin. Vendors hawked wares in tongues that twisted her ear—hags with eyes like oil slicks, men in top hats with tails curling from coattails, a woman whose arms forked into tentacles coiling around potion bottles."
15"Crowds milled: humans with haunted eyes rubbing shoulders with... things. Scales glinting under hoods, fangs bared in grins, wings folded like umbrellas. The air hummed with magic's static, thick as the rain outside. Quinn's skin crawled; her partner's disappearance flashed vivid—fog coiling like serpents, screams cut short."
16"Chaos erupted. A vendor hurled a vial—green liquid splattered near her boot, tile hissing into smoke. \"Filth!"
17"No badges here!\" Tentacle-woman lashed out, appendage whipping Quinn's arm; pain flared, but she twisted free, Glock barking a warning shot into the ceiling. Dust rained, lanterns swinging wild."
18"Herrera's eyes flicked to the shadows beyond the arch—reinforcements? \"Follow, and find out."
19"The mob closed in, murmurs rising to snarls. A blade glinted from a nearby stall, long and hungry. Quinn's finger tightened on the trigger. Unknown territory. Deadly. But the truth—about Morris, the clique, all of it—lay beyond that arch."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount359
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount5
adverbRatio0.013927576601671309
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002785515320334262
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences48
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences48
mean31.83
std27.41
cv0.861
sampleLengths
024
126
216
325
433
523
634
719
87
92
103
1123
1212
133
1423
1519
1612
1794
181
1982
2068
2183
2290
2383
2440
2582
2667
2766
2861
2913
3075
3147
3222
3340
3417
3529
3625
374
3810
3910
4012
414
4210
4313
444
4539
468
4725
100.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.6875
totalSentences48
uniqueOpeners33
77.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences43
matches
0"Just glanced over his shoulder—warm"
ratio0.023
99.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences43
matches
0"Her partner's ghost still haunted"
1"She bolted from her unmarked"
2"she barked, voice cutting through"
3"He didn't stop."
4"He cut east into a"
5"She drew her Glock, two-handed"
6"She holstered the Glock, fingers"
7"She pushed the curtain aside,"
8"You don't belong"
9"She leveled the Glock, breath"
10"His jaw tightened, hand dipping"
11"She stepped forward, Glock steady."
12"He vanished into the dark,"
ratio0.302
64.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount34
totalSentences43
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn hunched her"
1"Water streamed down her sharp"
2"Quinn's worn leather watch ticked"
3"Her partner's ghost still haunted"
4"Quinn knew better."
5"She bolted from her unmarked"
6"she barked, voice cutting through"
7"He didn't stop."
8"Bastard was fast for a"
9"Quinn's lungs burned as she"
10"Blocks blurred: neon shopfronts bleeding"
11"He cut east into a"
12"Camden's fringes loomed now, the"
13"She drew her Glock, two-handed"
14"The grate swung open on"
15"Quinn's breath fogged the air."
16"She holstered the Glock, fingers"
17"Sod that. She was no"
18"She pushed the curtain aside,"
19"Torchlight fractured across a cavernous"
ratio0.791
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Rain hammered the Soho pavements like a thousand tiny fists, turning the gutters into rushing black rivers that swallowed cigarette butts and crumpled flyers."
1"She bolted from her unmarked sedan parked curbside, boots splashing through puddles that mirrored the green neon glow of the Raven's Nest sign."
2"She drew her Glock, two-handed grip steady despite the wet. Torch beam from her phone pierced the dark: Herrera's silhouette midway down, fumbling at a grate se…"
3"Quinn's breath fogged the air. Pulse hammered in her temples. Follow him down there? Into the black maw of legend, where her partner had maybe met his end? Stor…"
4"Sod that. She was no stranger to darkness. Quinn wedged her fingers into the grate's gap, muscles straining as she heaved. It gave with a groan, runes pulsing f…"
5"Torchlight fractured across a cavernous chamber, brick vaults soaring overhead, strung with bioluminescent lanterns that cast writhing shadows. Stalls crammed t…"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she barked, voice cutting through the roar of traffic and rain"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.091
81.5059%