Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB60HGT1HFA6GN0YKFMB42

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Duration:
19.0s
Cost:
$0.000156
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The chime above the door to Eva’s flat warbled, a tinny, unwelcome sound that cut through the scent of cardamom and coriander spilling from the curry house below. Aurora, perched on a stack of ancient scrolls attempting to decipher a particularly dense alchemical diagram, didn’t look up. The chime had been insistent for several minutes, a repeated plea for attention she’d been deliberately ignoring. She told herself she was focused. She told herself she’d deal with it later. Then the door opened. He was there. Lucien Moreau. Not a dramatic entrance, not a theatrical swirl of charcoal silk, but a simple, deliberate push, revealing a man framed by the grey London drizzle. He stood in the doorway, a silhouette of slicked-back platinum blond against the gloom, holding a small, dark umbrella. The scent of sandalwood and something sharper, something distinctly *him*, drifted into the flat. Aurora finally looked up. The diagram, the alchemical symbols, the desperate need to understand – all of it vanished instantly. It wasn’t a gradual fade, not a subtle shift in focus. It was a violent, sudden pull, like a stone dropped into a still pond. The air thickened, the dust motes dancing in the single shaft of afternoon light seemed to hold their breath. “Lucien,” she said, the word a ghost in her throat. It had been years. Too many years. He didn’t smile. A small, almost imperceptible quirk of his lips was the closest thing to a gesture of recognition. "Aurora. You haven't changed." He stepped inside, the umbrella sliding into his hand with a quiet *thunk*. The flat, already crammed with the chaotic detritus of her life, seemed to shrink around him. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, materialized from behind a precarious tower of books, blinking languidly at Lucien before retreating back to his favorite spot atop a stack of maps. He didn’t seem particularly surprised. Aurora suspected he’d anticipated this. “What are you doing here?” she asked, her voice sharper than she intended. It wasn't a question born of genuine curiosity. It was a defensive maneuver, a carefully constructed barrier against a flood of unwanted memories. “Eva suggested I might find you,” he said, his voice a low, carefully modulated baritone, accented with a subtle Parisian lilt. He surveyed the room, his heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – taking in the organized chaos with an unnerving detachment. “She said you’d be… preoccupied.” Preoccupied. That was a generous understatement. She’d been wrestling with a particularly stubborn transmutation formula, haunted by a half-forgotten argument with Evan, and desperately trying to ignore the persistent ache of his absence. “I’m always preoccupied,” she replied, turning back to the scrolls, attempting to recapture the fragile illusion of control. He moved closer, the scent of sandalwood intensifying. “That’s what I noticed,” he observed, his gaze lingering on her face. "You have a way of burying yourself in the details, Aurora. It's a remarkably effective shield.” She didn’t meet his eyes. She adjusted a magnifying glass, meticulously examining a faded inscription. "It’s practical.” “Is it?” Lucien tilted his head, a flicker of something unreadable in his black eye. “Or is it a way of avoiding… things?” The question hung in the air, heavy with unspoken history. He knew. Of course, he knew. They both did. The wreckage of their last encounter, the raw, painful parting, still clung to the edges of their memories like smoke. “Let’s not,” she said, her voice strained. “Let’s just… not.” He ignored her. He walked over to the small, battered table beside her and retrieved a glass of water from a chipped ceramic pitcher. He didn’t offer it to her. He simply placed it on the table, a deliberate, almost challenging gesture. “Eva mentioned you were working for Cheung,” he said, his voice softer now, laced with a hint of something she hadn’t heard from him in years: genuine interest. “Delivering meals. A far cry from a Pre-Law student in Cardiff.” “It pays the bills,” she replied, her fingers tracing the edge of a scroll. It wasn’t a lie, exactly. It was survival. “And you’re happy?” he pressed, the question carrying a weight she couldn’t entirely deflect. She hesitated. The truth was complicated, tangled with regret and a lingering sense of… what? Not happiness, certainly not in the conventional sense. But there was a quiet resilience, a stubborn determination to carve out a life for herself, free from the ghosts of the past. “Content,” she finally said. “I’m content.” Lucien took a slow sip of water, his gaze unwavering. “Contentment isn’t the same as fulfillment, Aurora.” He reached out, his hand hovering just above the scrolls, then withdrawing as if burned. The light caught the ivory handle of his cane, glinting momentarily before returning to the shadows. It was a subtle movement, a whisper of contact, but it sent a shiver through her. The scar on her wrist, a memento of a childhood accident, throbbed faintly. “It’s been a long time,” he said, his voice almost a murmur. “A very long time since we last… spoke frankly.” “Some things are better left unspoken,” she replied, turning away again, desperately trying to regain her composure. “Are they?” He stepped closer, closing the distance between them. The sandalwood scent filled her senses, overwhelming the smell of curry and cardamom. “Or are they just easier to bury?” She didn't answer. She couldn't. His presence, his eyes, his voice – it was all too potent, too familiar, too fraught with the unresolved feelings that had simmered beneath the surface for years. She felt a strange pull, a magnetic force drawing her back to him, even as every instinct screamed at her to resist. He leaned in, slowly, deliberately, his breath warm against her ear. “You’re a fascinating woman, Aurora,” he whispered. “Complex, guarded, and utterly captivating.” And then he kissed her. It wasn't a passionate, demanding kiss. It was hesitant, tentative, a question as much as an assertion. But it held a depth of emotion, a recognition of something lost and perhaps, just perhaps, worth reclaiming. She responded, her arms instinctively going around him, pulling him closer. The scent of sandalwood mingled with the faint metallic tang of his cane, creating a dizzying, intoxicating blend. As their lips met again, she closed her eyes, letting go of the carefully constructed defenses, allowing herself to be swept away by the current of a memory, a desire, and the undeniable, impossible pull of a man she thought she'd buried long ago. The alchemical diagram remained forgotten on the table, the ash of a half-burned candle stained the air, and for one brief, glorious moment, in the cluttered confines of Eva’s flat above Brick Lane, Aurora Carter was lost, entirely and completely, to Lucien Moreau.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
55.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count2
1
adverb"languidly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count3
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"utterly"
count1
6
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"languidly"
2"carefully"
3"very"
4"slowly"
5"utterly"
6"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1124
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"silk"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"dancing"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"constructed"
count2
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count2
9
word"encounter"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"glinting"
count1
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"throbbed"
count1
17
word"familiar"
count1
18
word"magnetic"
count1
19
word"fascinating"
count1
20
word"complex"
count1
21
word"swept away"
count1
22
word"desire"
count1
highlights
0"silk"
1"gloom"
2"dancing"
3"chaotic"
4"constructed"
5"lilt"
6"flicker"
7"unreadable"
8"unspoken"
9"encounter"
10"tracing"
11"weight"
12"sense of"
13"unwavering"
14"glinting"
15"whisper"
16"throbbed"
17"familiar"
18"magnetic"
19"fascinating"
20"complex"
21"swept away"
22"desire"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"d with regret"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1125
ratio0.002
matches
0"him"
1"thunk"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount990
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Moreau2
London1
Lucien5
Parisian1
Evan1
Brick1
Lane1
Aurora4
Carter1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Evan"
4"Aurora"
5"Carter"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
22.22% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.778
wordCount1125
matches
0"Not a dramatic entrance, not a theatrical swirl of charcoal silk, but a simple, deliberate push, revealing a man framed by the gre"
1"not a theatrical swirl of charcoal silk, but a simple, deliberate push, revealing a man framed by the gre"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean37.5
std21.52
cv0.574
sampleLengths
078
14
263
364
417
553
638
736
848
951
1036
1117
1223
1339
1410
1542
1639
1722
1814
1952
2017
2160
2221
2317
2430
2555
2623
275
2864
2987
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was lost"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
52.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences95
ratio0.032
matches
0"The diagram, the alchemical symbols, the desperate need to understand – all of it vanished instantly."
1"He surveyed the room, his heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one black – taking in the organized chaos with an unnerving detachment."
2"His presence, his eyes, his voice – it was all too potent, too familiar, too fraught with the unresolved feelings that had simmered beneath the surface for years."
81.10% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount989
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.055611729019211326
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.0262891809908999
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean11.84
std8.55
cv0.722
sampleLengths
028
119
217
36
48
54
63
72
825
919
1014
114
1216
1311
1414
1519
1610
174
183
193
2017
2117
2216
2328
245
255
2613
278
2815
2921
3022
315
321
335
3427
3518
368
3712
3816
395
4010
412
4215
438
4410
452
464
473
4820
497
43.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3368421052631579
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then the door opened."
1"Too many years."
2"Of course, he knew."
ratio0.039
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences77
matches
0"She told herself she was"
1"She told herself she’d deal"
2"He was there."
3"He stood in the doorway,"
4"It wasn’t a gradual fade,"
5"It was a violent, sudden"
6"she said, the word a"
7"It had been years."
8"He didn’t smile."
9"He stepped inside, the umbrella"
10"He didn’t seem particularly surprised."
11"she asked, her voice sharper"
12"It wasn't a question born"
13"It was a defensive maneuver,"
14"he said, his voice a"
15"He surveyed the room, his"
16"She’d been wrestling with a"
17"she replied, turning back to"
18"He moved closer, the scent"
19"he observed, his gaze lingering"
ratio0.597
18.44% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences77
matches
0"The chime above the door"
1"Aurora, perched on a stack"
2"The chime had been insistent"
3"She told herself she was"
4"She told herself she’d deal"
5"He was there."
6"He stood in the doorway,"
7"The scent of sandalwood and"
8"Aurora finally looked up."
9"The diagram, the alchemical symbols,"
10"It wasn’t a gradual fade,"
11"It was a violent, sudden"
12"The air thickened, the dust"
13"she said, the word a"
14"It had been years."
15"He didn’t smile."
16"A small, almost imperceptible quirk"
17"He stepped inside, the umbrella"
18"The flat, already crammed with"
19"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, materialized"
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He reached out, his hand hovering just above the scrolls, then withdrawing as if burned."
1"The light caught the ivory handle of his cane, glinting momentarily before returning to the shadows."
2"His presence, his eyes, his voice – it was all too potent, too familiar, too fraught with the unresolved feelings that had simmered beneath the surface for year…"
3"As their lips met again, she closed her eyes, letting go of the carefully constructed defenses, allowing herself to be swept away by the current of a memory, a …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"she said, the word a ghost in her throat"
1"He stepped, the umbrella sliding into his hand with a quiet *thunk*"
2"she asked, her voice sharper than she intended"
3"he observed, his gaze lingering on her face"
4"Lucien tilted, a flicker of something unreadable in his black eye"
5"she said, her voice strained"
6"she replied, her fingers tracing the edge of a scroll"
7"he pressed, the question carrying a weight she couldn’t entirely deflect"
8"he said, his voice almost a murmur"
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"he observed (observe)"
1"he pressed (press)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.222
71.5548%