"She expected Eva—her friend was due back from that occult symposium in Oxford, scrolls probably spilling out of her battered satchel."
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"Heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, unblinking."
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"No apology for the hour—half-past eleven—or the unannounced drop-in."
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"Things left unsaid: his world of shadows and deals that could swallow her whole; her own scars, the crescent on her wrist throbbing like a fresh wound whenever she thought of Evan, the ex who'd left bruises deeper than skin."
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"\"Eva's away. I know that. And you... you're keeping the flat aired out.\" His gaze flicked past her to the chaos inside—books teetering on every surface, yellowed scrolls unrolled across the kitchenette counter, research notes pinned to the fridge with mismatched magnets."
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"The pull was there, magnetic, the same that had drawn her to him last autumn—after Eva had dragged her to that underground soiree in Clerkenwell, where humans mingled with things that shouldn't exist."
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"The door thudded shut behind him; she didn't bother with the deadbolts."
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"Lucien surveyed the flat with a raised eyebrow, adjusting his cufflinks—silver, etched with infernal runes."
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"Her straight black hair fell across one eye; she shoved it back, feeling exposed under his stare."
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"She busied her hands pouring tea from the kettle Eva always left simmering—chamomile, too weak for the tension coiling in her gut."
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"The flat's clutter faded; it was just them, breaths syncing."
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"His proximity was a drug—tailored suits hiding the wildness beneath, the way he'd whispered French endearments in the dark."
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"Gentle, but the power hummed beneath—half-demon strength leashed."
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"Heat bloomed low in her belly; she gasped against him, hands roaming the hard planes of his chest."
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"Skin met skin—his fever-hot, hers chilled by the flat's draft."
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"His hands—long-fingered, precise—slid under her tank top, mapping the curve of her waist, thumbs brushing the underside of her breasts."
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"Amber held hunger; black, something vulnerable."
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"\"Later.\" His cane hand—ivory handle pressing into her thigh—gripped harder, grounding."
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"Naked now, save his trousers, he carried her to the bedroom—Eva's domain, bed buried under research notes they scattered like confetti."
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"He entered her slow, deliberate, eyes locked—amber promising fire, black endless night."
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"He followed, burying his face in her neck, a guttural sound rumbling from his chest—demonic, human, hers."
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"The pull was there, magnetic, the same that had drawn her to him last autumn—after Eva had dragged her to that underground soiree in Clerkenwell, where humans m…"
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"She busied her hands pouring tea from the kettle Eva always left simmering—chamomile, too weak for the tension coiling in her gut."
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"Lucien broke the kiss, trailing fire down her neck, nipping the pulse point that made her knees buckle."