| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 15 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.536 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 68.85% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 963 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.50% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 963 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "almost alive" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "flicked" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.73% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 62 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 955 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 787 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 2 | | Aurora | 12 | | Varga | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Belphegor | 4 | | Isolde | 6 | | Dymas | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Belphegor" | | 6 | "Isolde" | | 7 | "Earth" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.738 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "smelled like damp earth and something swee" | | 1 | "thread that seemed to shift when she looked at it—like liquid fire" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 955 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 39.79 | | std | 20.78 | | cv | 0.522 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 56 | | 1 | 56 | | 2 | 86 | | 3 | 58 | | 4 | 60 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 80 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 48 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 35 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 37 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 31 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled like damp earth and something sweeter—wild honey, maybe, or the faintest trace of rotting fruit left too long in the sun." | | 1 | "The Shade’s violet eyes gleamed, though they didn’t reflect light—just absorbed it, drinking in the strange glow of the place." | | 2 | "She was too busy taking it all in—the towering oaks, their bark etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, their leaves a deep emerald that shimmered as if dusted with starlight." | | 3 | "The air tasted of spices—cinnamon, cloves, something richer, like the flesh of a fruit she’d never tasted." | | 4 | "They wore a robe of deep red, embroidered with gold thread that seemed to shift when she looked at it—like liquid fire." | | 5 | "Plates of fruit glistened under the amber sky—figs the size of her fist, grapes so dark they seemed to drink in the light, pastries filled with something creamy and golden." | | 6 | "The moment her foot touched the ground, the world seemed to shift—like stepping into a dream that wasn’t quite real." |
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| 95.38% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 795 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.045283018867924525 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013836477987421384 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 12.73 | | std | 7.33 | | cv | 0.576 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 30 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 58.67% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.4 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she walked, her bare" | | 1 | "Instead, she turned to Aurora," |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 90.97% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "She was too busy taking" | | 1 | "She reached out, brushing her" | | 2 | "She didn’t turn, didn’t speak." | | 3 | "It stretched in a warm" | | 4 | "they said, low and urgent" | | 5 | "They wore a robe of" | | 6 | "His gaze flicked to Aurora," | | 7 | "she said, her voice firmer" | | 8 | "He tilted his head, studying" | | 9 | "His fingers twitched, and suddenly," | | 10 | "She forced herself to look" | | 11 | "He gestured to the pendant" | | 12 | "His gaze darkened" | | 13 | "they said, their voice a" | | 14 | "He exhaled, running a hand" | | 15 | "His eyes flicked to Isolde" | | 16 | "She reached into her robes" | | 17 | "He gestured to the table," | | 18 | "She wasn’t just entering Dymas." | | 19 | "She was entering a place" |
| | ratio | 0.323 | |
| 16.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled like damp" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, her" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "The Shade’s violet eyes gleamed," | | 4 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 5 | "Aurora didn’t answer." | | 6 | "She was too busy taking" | | 7 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 8 | "She reached out, brushing her" | | 9 | "The wood was warm, almost" | | 10 | "Isolde Varga stood a few" | | 11 | "She didn’t turn, didn’t speak." | | 12 | "Aurora followed, her pulse quickening" | | 13 | "The sky here wasn’t sky" | | 14 | "It stretched in a warm" | | 15 | "The air tasted of spices—cinnamon," | | 16 | "The scent made her stomach" | | 17 | "Nyx moved silently beside her," | | 18 | "they said, low and urgent" | | 19 | "Aurora turned just in time" |
| | ratio | 0.887 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 62 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 12.99% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the moss that cushioned the ground." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx shifted, their shadowy form flickering as if caught between two breaths." | | 2 | "She was too busy taking it all in—the towering oaks, their bark etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, their leaves a deep emerald that shimmered as if duste…" | | 3 | "Instead, she walked, her bare feet leaving no mark on the ground, as if the earth itself resisted her presence." | | 4 | "Aurora followed, her pulse quickening as the trees thinned, revealing a clearing bathed in golden light." | | 5 | "They wore a robe of deep red, embroidered with gold thread that seemed to shift when she looked at it—like liquid fire." |
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| 58.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 15 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her voice firmer than she felt" | | 1 | "they said, their voice a blade of wind" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |