Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB70YNH7A4QMSFRCMTJEDK

Run Details

Duration:
6.9s
Cost:
$0.000469
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled like damp earth and something sweeter—wild honey, maybe, or the faintest trace of rotting fruit left too long in the sun. Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the moss that cushioned the ground. The pendant at her throat pulsed warm against her skin, a slow, steady rhythm like a heartbeat. Beside her, Nyx shifted, their shadowy form flickering as if caught between two breaths. The Shade’s violet eyes gleamed, though they didn’t reflect light—just absorbed it, drinking in the strange glow of the place. "This isn’t Earth," Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper that slithered into her mind before she could hear it with her ears. Aurora didn’t answer. She was too busy taking it all in—the towering oaks, their bark etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, their leaves a deep emerald that shimmered as if dusted with starlight. The air hummed, a low vibration that made her teeth ache slightly, like the moment before a storm. She reached out, brushing her fingers against the bark of the nearest tree. The wood was warm, almost alive, and when she pulled her hand back, her palm glowed faintly for a second before fading. Isolde Varga stood a few paces ahead, her silver hair catching the dappled light like spun moonlight. She didn’t turn, didn’t speak. Instead, she walked, her bare feet leaving no mark on the ground, as if the earth itself resisted her presence. Aurora followed, her pulse quickening as the trees thinned, revealing a clearing bathed in golden light. The sky here wasn’t sky at all. It stretched in a warm amber hue, thick and heavy, like the last light of dusk stretched thin over an endless horizon. The air tasted of spices—cinnamon, cloves, something richer, like the flesh of a fruit she’d never tasted. The scent made her stomach clench, and she swallowed hard, forcing herself to focus. Nyx moved silently beside her, their form flickering like a candle flame in a draft. "We’re not alone," they said, low and urgent. Aurora turned just in time to see a figure step from behind the nearest oak. Tall, broad-shouldered, their skin the colour of polished mahogany, their eyes dark and knowing. They wore a robe of deep red, embroidered with gold thread that seemed to shift when she looked at it—like liquid fire. A crown of twisted vines rested on their head, leaves curling around their brow. "Prince Belphegor," Isolde said, her voice steady, though her fingers tightened around the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her side. "I didn’t expect to see you here." The prince smiled, slow and knowing. "Nor did I expect to see *you*, Seer." His gaze flicked to Aurora, then Nyx, lingering on the Shade’s shifting form. "And who are these guests?" Aurora stepped forward, her hand instinctively going to the pendant. "We’re not here by choice," she said, her voice firmer than she felt. "We were drawn here." Belphegor’s smile widened. "Drawn, were you?" He tilted his head, studying her. "Then you must be very special indeed." His fingers twitched, and suddenly, the air around them rippled, the golden light flickering like a heat haze. A table appeared between them, laden with dishes she hadn’t seen being prepared. Plates of fruit glistened under the amber sky—figs the size of her fist, grapes so dark they seemed to drink in the light, pastries filled with something creamy and golden. Aurora’s stomach growled, loud enough that even she heard it. She forced herself to look away, her fingers curling into her palms. "We’re not here to eat." Belphegor laughed, a rich, warm sound. "No? Then why does your pendant burn so brightly?" He gestured to the pendant at her throat, and suddenly, the warmth against her skin flared, a pulse of heat that made her skin prickle. "Ah. So it’s true. You’ve found the Heartstone." Aurora’s breath hitched. "What is this place?" "The Heart of Dymas," Belphegor said, spreading his arms wide. "A place of excess, of indulgence. A place where the hungry are never left wanting." His gaze darkened. "And where the lost are often found." Nyx stepped forward, their shadow stretching unnaturally long, blocking the prince’s view. "We’re not lost," they said, their voice a blade of wind. "We’re here because of the Veil. It’s thinning." Belphegor’s smile faltered for just a second. "The Veil..." He exhaled, running a hand through his hair. "Yes. It does thin at the solstice." His eyes flicked to Isolde. "You’ve seen this before, haven’t you?" Isolde didn’t answer. Instead, she turned to Aurora, her pale lavender eyes sharp. "The Heartstone. It’s calling you here. It’s been waiting for you." Aurora’s fingers tightened around the pendant. "What does it want?" Isolde’s lips curved, just slightly. "That’s not for me to say." She reached into her robes and pulled out a slender dagger, its blade cold to the touch, glowing faintly in the amber light. "But I think you already know." The prince’s voice cut through the tension, smooth as honeyed wine. "Come. Eat. Rest. The night is long, and the Veil grows thin." He gestured to the table, his eyes never leaving Aurora’s. "You’ll need your strength." Aurora hesitated, then forced herself to take a step forward. The moment her foot touched the ground, the world seemed to shift—like stepping into a dream that wasn’t quite real. The air tasted richer, the light warmer. And for the first time, she understood why Isolde had called this place a pocket between realms. She wasn’t just entering Dymas. She was entering a place where the rules of Earth didn’t apply. Where hunger wasn’t just for food. Where the Veil was paper-thin, and something dark and hungry waited just beyond.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.536
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
68.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount963
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount963
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"whisper"
count1
2
word"etched"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"almost alive"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"stomach"
count2
7
word"flicked"
count2
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"whisper"
2"etched"
3"shimmered"
4"almost alive"
5"pulse"
6"stomach"
7"flicked"
8"warmth"
9"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
73.73% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords955
ratio0.001
matches
0"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount787
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Nyx5
Shade2
Aurora12
Varga1
Fae-forged1
Belphegor4
Isolde6
Dymas1
Earth1
Veil1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Aurora"
4"Varga"
5"Belphegor"
6"Isolde"
7"Earth"
places(empty)
globalScore0.738
windowScore0.667
53.85% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"smelled like damp earth and something swee"
1"thread that seemed to shift when she looked at it—like liquid fire"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount955
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean39.79
std20.78
cv0.522
sampleLengths
056
156
286
358
460
523
665
728
832
927
1080
1127
1248
137
1435
1531
1635
1724
1810
1940
2037
2154
225
2331
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was entering"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences75
ratio0.093
matches
0"The air smelled like damp earth and something sweeter—wild honey, maybe, or the faintest trace of rotting fruit left too long in the sun."
1"The Shade’s violet eyes gleamed, though they didn’t reflect light—just absorbed it, drinking in the strange glow of the place."
2"She was too busy taking it all in—the towering oaks, their bark etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, their leaves a deep emerald that shimmered as if dusted with starlight."
3"The air tasted of spices—cinnamon, cloves, something richer, like the flesh of a fruit she’d never tasted."
4"They wore a robe of deep red, embroidered with gold thread that seemed to shift when she looked at it—like liquid fire."
5"Plates of fruit glistened under the amber sky—figs the size of her fist, grapes so dark they seemed to drink in the light, pastries filled with something creamy and golden."
6"The moment her foot touched the ground, the world seemed to shift—like stepping into a dream that wasn’t quite real."
95.38% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount795
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.045283018867924525
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.013836477987421384
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean12.73
std7.33
cv0.576
sampleLengths
024
115
217
314
420
522
63
730
818
913
1022
1117
125
1320
1416
157
1622
1717
1814
1915
208
2115
2214
2322
2414
2521
267
276
2821
295
3010
3113
324
333
349
3525
3613
3730
3810
3912
405
416
4234
438
443
454
4610
4718
487
4912
58.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Instead, she walked, her bare"
1"Instead, she turned to Aurora,"
ratio0.032
90.97% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences62
matches
0"She was too busy taking"
1"She reached out, brushing her"
2"She didn’t turn, didn’t speak."
3"It stretched in a warm"
4"they said, low and urgent"
5"They wore a robe of"
6"His gaze flicked to Aurora,"
7"she said, her voice firmer"
8"He tilted his head, studying"
9"His fingers twitched, and suddenly,"
10"She forced herself to look"
11"He gestured to the pendant"
12"His gaze darkened"
13"they said, their voice a"
14"He exhaled, running a hand"
15"His eyes flicked to Isolde"
16"She reached into her robes"
17"He gestured to the table,"
18"She wasn’t just entering Dymas."
19"She was entering a place"
ratio0.323
16.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences62
matches
0"The air smelled like damp"
1"Aurora Carter stepped forward, her"
2"The pendant at her throat"
3"The Shade’s violet eyes gleamed,"
4"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
5"Aurora didn’t answer."
6"She was too busy taking"
7"The air hummed, a low"
8"She reached out, brushing her"
9"The wood was warm, almost"
10"Isolde Varga stood a few"
11"She didn’t turn, didn’t speak."
12"Aurora followed, her pulse quickening"
13"The sky here wasn’t sky"
14"It stretched in a warm"
15"The air tasted of spices—cinnamon,"
16"The scent made her stomach"
17"Nyx moved silently beside her,"
18"they said, low and urgent"
19"Aurora turned just in time"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences33
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the moss that cushioned the ground."
1"Beside her, Nyx shifted, their shadowy form flickering as if caught between two breaths."
2"She was too busy taking it all in—the towering oaks, their bark etched with symbols she didn’t recognise, their leaves a deep emerald that shimmered as if duste…"
3"Instead, she walked, her bare feet leaving no mark on the ground, as if the earth itself resisted her presence."
4"Aurora followed, her pulse quickening as the trees thinned, revealing a clearing bathed in golden light."
5"They wore a robe of deep red, embroidered with gold thread that seemed to shift when she looked at it—like liquid fire."
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she said, her voice firmer than she felt"
1"they said, their voice a blade of wind"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.071
77.6126%