Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB7HFA7GG35AA1Y73PQBYF

Run Details

Duration:
22.6s
Cost:
$0.000187
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the windows of The Raven’s Nest, a steady, insistent drumbeat mirroring the thrum in my chest. Steam curled from my pint of stout, blurring the already hazy faces in the room. Silas polished glasses behind the bar, his movements deliberate, economical. The air smelled of aged wood, spilled whiskey, and something faintly metallic—gun oil, maybe. He didn’t look up when I entered, simply continued his work, a quiet, familiar ritual. “Rory?” The voice cut through the ambient noise, sharp and unexpected. I turned, and the world tilted on its axis. He was taller, undeniably. The build beneath his worn tweed jacket was broader, the shoulders heavier. Hair, once a riot of unruly brown curls, was now cropped close, grey threading through the remaining strands. His eyes, a startling, almost unsettlingly bright blue, scanned me with a disconcerting intensity. “Evan?” I asked, the word a rusty hinge, unused and protesting. He didn’t smile. He didn’t offer any of the easy, comfortable warmth I remembered. “Not Evan. Not anymore.” He gestured to a stool beside me with a hand thick with veins. “Sit.” The stool felt cold beneath my jeans. I obeyed, not wanting to initiate further scrutiny. The silence stretched, punctuated only by the rain and the clinking of glasses. He studied me, a slow, assessing appraisal. “You look…good,” he finally said, the observation strangely awkward. “Not the wide-eyed student I recall.” “Life happens,” I replied, taking a long swallow of stout. It burned going down. “London’s not exactly a breeding ground for youthful innocence.” “It’s a crucible,” he corrected, his gaze drifting towards the shelves crammed with maps. “Shapes you. For better or worse.” “You’ve changed,” I stated, stating the obvious. It felt necessary, like pulling a thread to unravel a tangled knot. “So have you,” he acknowledged, a ghost of a flicker in his blue eyes. “The barrister’s daughter had ambitions beyond delivery routes and greasy takeout.” I laughed, a short, brittle sound. “Yu-Fei’s a good cook. And the deliveries pay the rent.” There was a disconnect between the reality of my life - the early mornings, the constant hustle - and the theoretical aspirations of my past. “I heard about the gallery,” he said, his voice low. “In Berlin.” “It’s open for a few months,” I replied, avoiding his gaze. The gallery was a compromise, a sliver of the art world I’d briefly chased before the stability of greasy driveways and instant noodles became my reality. “Pays the bills.” He leaned forward slightly, resting his elbows on the bar. “You still see the world in lines and angles, I suspect.” “I try to,” I admitted. “It’s a useful skill when you’re navigating a city full of potholes.” He remained silent for a moment, then asked, “What happened with him?” His voice was carefully neutral, devoid of judgment, but the question was a barbed hook, drawing blood. “It ended,” I said, deliberately blunt. “A messy, unpleasant ending.” I refused to elaborate, to dredge up the details of his controlling behavior, his possessiveness, the suffocating feeling of being trapped. The rain intensified, drumming a frantic rhythm against the windows. “He was…determined,” he observed. “That’s one word for it,” I replied, swirling the remaining stout in my glass. "He left a scar.” I instinctively touched the small crescent-shaped mark on my wrist, a reminder of a childhood accident, now a carefully hidden symbol of his control. “Some scars are harder to erase,” he said quietly. “Some take a lifetime.” He paused, then added, “I saw a man fitting your description in Prague. About six months ago.” My breath hitched. “Prague? What were you doing there?” The gravity of the question settled over us, thick and heavy. “Old business,” he said, his jaw tightening. "Things I’d rather forget.” He signaled to a young man, a wiry, intense fellow with a perpetually shadowed face, who silently refilled my pint. “You’ve gone back,” I stated, the realization dawning. The comfortable, somewhat disillusioned man I knew was buried beneath something colder, harder. “Let’s just say I’m still…active,” he said, carefully. “Retired, but not idle.” I studied his face, searching for clues, for any sign of the man I remembered—the quick wit, the dry humor, the genuine warmth. But all I saw was a guardedness, a permanent layer of something unreadable. "You look like you haven’t slept in a decade," I said, gesturing to his face. He nodded. "A few sleepless nights. A lot of bad coffee." He took a swig of whiskey from a tumbler on the bar. It didn't look like he was enjoying it. “The poppy fields aren’t as plentiful as they used to be.” “What *are* you doing, Silas?” I demanded, the question laced with a sharp edge. He met my gaze, unflinching. “Protecting things. Maintaining a semblance of order, you could say.” His voice was a carefully constructed facade of professional detachment. “Things you wouldn’t understand.” “I understand people who disappear,” I countered, my voice rising slightly. "People who vanish without a trace. People who leave a trail of broken lives behind them." He didn't flinch. "Some trails are best left untread." "You're building a wall," I said, the words tasting like ash in my mouth. “A wall around yourself. A wall around everything.” He pushed himself away from the bar, his limp evident as he moved towards the back room —the secret room. “Some walls are necessary, Rory,” he said, his back to me. “They keep the darkness out." I followed him, pushing past the bookshelf that concealed the entrance. The air in the back room was thick with the smell of dust and old paper. A single bare bulb cast long, distorted shadows, illuminating a small, cluttered office filled with maps, files, and a vintage telephone. "You used to tell me stories,” I said, studying the maps. “About faraway places. About impossible missions.” He consulted a faded photograph pinned to the wall – a grainy image of a Prague street lined with shadowed buildings. “Those were simpler times,” he admitted. “Before the walls started closing in." “Did you ever regret it?” I asked, my voice barely a whisper. He turned around, his face etched with a profound sadness. "Regret is a luxury I can't afford," he said, looking at me with a softness that surprised me. “But I do wish...I'd told you sooner. About what really happened.” “What *really* happened?” I repeated, the question hanging in the air, heavy with unspoken truths. "That you weren't truly retired?" He didn’t answer immediately. He simply stared out at the rain, lost in thoughts I didn't want to confront. Finally, he spoke, his voice almost lost in the drumming of the rain. “I was trying to save you.” He paused, then added, with a weary resignation, “And in doing so, I broke you.” The admission felt like a physical blow. The years melted away, and I saw him again—the young, idealistic agent, brimming with conviction, driven by a desperate need to protect the innocent. But that man was gone, replaced by this – a haunted, solitary figure consumed by regret. “You didn’t protect anyone,” I said, my voice flat. “You just pushed me away.” He didn’t argue. He simply turned back to the maps, his hands tracing the routes of forgotten missions, lost causes. The rain continued to fall, a lonely, mournful soundtrack to a conversation that could never truly be finished. I finished my stout. The taste was bitter, like the truth we both carried. I left the Raven’s Nest alone, the sound of Silas’s heavy footsteps echoing behind me—a reminder that some ghosts are best left undisturbed, some doors never reopened.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.71% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags35
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
2"He paused then [then]"
3"He paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.583
leniency1
rawRatio0.114
effectiveRatio0.114
56.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1277
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"carefully"
count4
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"truly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"deliberately"
3"really"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1277
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"intensity"
count1
3
word"comfortable"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"unravel"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"navigating"
count1
9
word"determined"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count2
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"constructed"
count1
13
word"facade"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"profound"
count1
17
word"unspoken"
count1
18
word"solitary"
count1
19
word"tracing"
count1
20
word"footsteps"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"scanned"
2"intensity"
3"comfortable"
4"warmth"
5"silence"
6"unravel"
7"flicker"
8"navigating"
9"determined"
10"reminder"
11"unreadable"
12"constructed"
13"facade"
14"whisper"
15"etched"
16"profound"
17"unspoken"
18"solitary"
19"tracing"
20"footsteps"
21"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences87
matches
0"consumed by regret"
1"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1275
ratio0.002
matches
0"are"
1"really"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions36
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Finally, he spoke, his voice almost lost in the drumming of the rain."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount932
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.21
worstName"Raven"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Raven"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Prague1
Silas2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
places
0"Prague"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a physical blow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1275
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean28.98
std17.15
cv0.592
sampleLengths
074
11
267
311
432
535
615
723
820
919
1025
1141
1212
1340
1421
1517
1629
1741
184
1942
2030
2120
2231
2321
2412
2536
2615
2742
2814
2929
3027
319
3222
3336
3448
3517
3633
3712
3839
3920
4053
4147
4214
4379
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"was buried"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs170
matches
0"was enjoying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences109
ratio0.073
matches
0"The air smelled of aged wood, spilled whiskey, and something faintly metallic—gun oil, maybe."
1"“Yu-Fei’s a good cook. And the deliveries pay the rent.” There was a disconnect between the reality of my life - the early mornings, the constant hustle - and the theoretical aspirations of my past."
2"I studied his face, searching for clues, for any sign of the man I remembered—the quick wit, the dry humor, the genuine warmth."
3"He pushed himself away from the bar, his limp evident as he moved towards the back room —the secret room."
4"He consulted a faded photograph pinned to the wall – a grainy image of a Prague street lined with shadowed buildings."
5"The years melted away, and I saw him again—the young, idealistic agent, brimming with conviction, driven by a desperate need to protect the innocent."
6"But that man was gone, replaced by this – a haunted, solitary figure consumed by regret."
7"I left the Raven’s Nest alone, the sound of Silas’s heavy footsteps echoing behind me—a reminder that some ghosts are best left undisturbed, some doors never reopened."
79.39% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount933
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped mark"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04715969989281887
lyAdverbCount28
lyAdverbRatio0.030010718113612004
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean11.7
std6.83
cv0.584
sampleLengths
020
115
210
314
415
51
610
79
84
912
1018
1114
1211
133
1411
1517
161
177
188
1913
207
219
226
2310
244
259
2614
276
287
2912
3014
3111
326
3335
3410
352
3611
3726
383
3910
4011
415
4212
4329
446
4525
4610
474
4814
4928
55.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3669724770642202
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners40
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Finally, he spoke, his voice"
ratio0.012
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount60
totalSentences83
matches
0"He didn’t look up when"
1"I turned, and the world"
2"He was taller, undeniably."
3"His eyes, a startling, almost"
4"I asked, the word a"
5"He didn’t smile."
6"He didn’t offer any of"
7"He gestured to a stool"
8"I obeyed, not wanting to"
9"He studied me, a slow,"
10"he finally said, the observation"
11"I replied, taking a long"
12"It burned going down."
13"he corrected, his gaze drifting"
14"I stated, stating the obvious"
15"It felt necessary, like pulling"
16"he acknowledged, a ghost of"
17"I laughed, a short, brittle"
18"he said, his voice low"
19"I replied, avoiding his gaze"
ratio0.723
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences83
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"Steam curled from my pint"
2"Silas polished glasses behind the"
3"The air smelled of aged"
4"He didn’t look up when"
5"The voice cut through the"
6"I turned, and the world"
7"He was taller, undeniably."
8"The build beneath his worn"
9"Hair, once a riot of"
10"His eyes, a startling, almost"
11"I asked, the word a"
12"He didn’t smile."
13"He didn’t offer any of"
14"He gestured to a stool"
15"The stool felt cold beneath"
16"I obeyed, not wanting to"
17"The silence stretched, punctuated only"
18"He studied me, a slow,"
19"he finally said, the observation"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"I followed him, pushing past the bookshelf that concealed the entrance."
1"The rain continued to fall, a lonely, mournful soundtrack to a conversation that could never truly be finished."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags35
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"he finally said, the observation strangely awkward"
1"he corrected, his gaze drifting towards the shelves crammed with maps"
2"he acknowledged, a ghost of a flicker in his blue eyes"
3"he said, his voice low"
4"he said, his jaw tightening"
5"I stated, the realization dawning"
6"he said, carefully"
7"I demanded, the question laced with a sharp edge"
8"I countered, my voice rising slightly"
9"I asked, my voice barely a whisper"
10"I repeated, the question hanging in the air, heavy with unspoken truths"
11"I said, my voice flat"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags27
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"he corrected (correct)"
1"I stated (state)"
2"he acknowledged (acknowledge)"
3"I admitted (admit)"
4"I refused (refuse)"
5"he observed (observe)"
6"I stated (state)"
7"I demanded (demand)"
8"he admitted (admit)"
9"I repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.45
leniency0.9
rawRatio0.37
effectiveRatio0.333
70.5127%