Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB7N5Z047DC0K3Q9A68RW7

Run Details

Duration:
9.7s
Cost:
$0.000464
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered the pavement like a drumline of fury, each drop striking the cobblestones with the precision of a metronome set to chaos. Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that had swallowed the glow of streetlamps whole, the neon haze of Soho’s signs bleeding into the downpour. She didn’t slow. The suspect—a wiry figure in a long coat, collar turned up—ducked into the alley between *The Raven’s Nest* and a shuttered tailor’s shop. Quinn didn’t hesitate. The scent of damp wool and old whiskey clung to the air as she rounded the corner, her breath steady despite the adrenaline. The suspect was already halfway down the narrow passage, his footsteps echoing off the brick walls. Quinn’s fingers twitched toward the baton at her belt, but she didn’t draw it. Not yet. The man moved like he knew these streets by heart, like he’d been here before. And if he had, then the alley might not be the end of the line. A flicker of movement caught her eye—a rusted fire escape, its ladder dangling like a broken promise. The suspect didn’t take it. He kept going, vanishing around the corner where the alley opened into a wider, darker thoroughfare. Quinn followed, her pulse thrumming in her throat. The rain had turned the pavement into a slick mirror, reflecting the dim glow of a flickering streetlamp. Somewhere ahead, a door stood slightly ajar, its frame warped with age. No sign. No light. Just the promise of somewhere to hide. She pressed herself against the wall, listening. The city’s usual hum had been drowned out by the storm, but beneath the rain’s white noise, she caught it—a low, rhythmic *thump*. Not footsteps. Not quite. More like something being dragged. Or carried. Quinn exhaled through her nose, her breath fogging in the cold air. She wasn’t sure what she’d find behind that door, but she was sure of one thing: the suspect wasn’t running from her. He was running *toward* something. The door creaked when she pushed it open, the hinges groaning like a warning. Inside, the air was thick with the scent of damp earth and something metallic, something old. A staircase spiraled downward, the steps worn smooth by decades of use. No light. No sound except the rain, now distant, as if the world above had been sealed away. She descended carefully, her hand brushing the cold stone wall. The air grew heavier, the temperature dropping with each step. By the time she reached the bottom, her breath was visible in the dim glow of a single flickering bulb. The tunnel stretched ahead, the walls lined with graffiti and the occasional flicker of movement—rats, or something else. The *thump* came again, closer this time. Not from the tunnel, but from a side passage, barely wide enough for one person to squeeze through. Quinn crouched, her eyes adjusting to the dark. The suspect was gone. But the sound—it was coming from the passage. She hesitated. The Veil Market wasn’t on any map. It wasn’t supposed to exist. And yet, here she was, standing at the edge of something that didn’t belong in her world. A voice cut through the dark, low and rough. *"You shouldn’t be here, Detective."* Quinn didn’t turn. She knew that voice. Or at least, she’d heard it before—in the whispers of informants, in the half-truths of men who dealt in things they shouldn’t. She kept her back straight, her fingers flexing around the grip of her service revolver. *"Neither should you,"* she said. *"But here we are."* A shadow detached itself from the wall, stepping into the dim light. Tomás Herrera. The paramedic. The one who’d slipped through the cracks of the law, who’d treated wounds that shouldn’t have healed, who’d known things he shouldn’t have known. His olive skin was pale in the sickly light, his dark eyes sharp with something between warning and pity. *"You’re not supposed to be down here,"* he repeated. *"This isn’t your fight."* Quinn’s jaw tightened. *"Neither was the last one. And neither was the one before that."* Tomás didn’t flinch. He knew what she meant. The cases that had gone wrong. The ones that had left her partner in the ground, his last breath stolen by something that didn’t make sense. Something that lived in the dark. *"You don’t understand what you’re chasing,"* Tomás said. *"Then explain it to me."* A beat of silence. The rain still drummed above, but down here, it was just the two of them, and the weight of what came next. Tomás exhaled, slow and measured. *"The Veil Market doesn’t just sell goods. It sells *deals*. And some of them… they don’t end the way they’re supposed to."* Quinn’s gaze flicked to the passage. The *thump* had stopped. But the air had changed. It was thicker now, like the moment before a storm breaks. She could feel it in her bones. *"Where is he?"* she asked. Tomás didn’t answer. Instead, he reached into his coat and pulled out a small, irregular bone. White. Fresh. *"You need this to get in. And you need to decide—right now—if you’re still sure you want to follow."* Quinn took the bone. It was warm in her palm. She looked back at the passage. Then she looked at Tomás. *"I don’t turn back,"* she said. The paramedic’s expression didn’t change. But the way he stepped aside told her everything she needed to know. The tunnel ahead twisted, the walls now lined with strange symbols carved into the stone. The air smelled of ozone and something sweet, like rotting fruit. And then—movement. A figure, half-hidden in the dark, dragging something behind them. The suspect. And whatever he was carrying wasn’t human. Quinn didn’t wait. She moved.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount967
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount967
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"footsteps"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"footsteps"
1"echoing"
2"flicker"
3"pulse"
4"rhythmic"
5"silence"
6"weight"
7"measured"
8"flicked"
9"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"the air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
13.61% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans17
markdownWords89
totalWords955
ratio0.093
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest"
1"thump"
2"toward"
3"thump"
4"\"You shouldn’t be here, Detective.\""
5"\"Neither should you,\""
6"\"But here we are.\""
7"\"You’re not supposed to be down here,\""
8"\"This isn’t your fight.\""
9"\"Neither was the last one. And neither was the one before that.\""
10"\"You don’t understand what you’re chasing,\""
11"\"Then explain it to me.\""
12"\"The Veil Market doesn’t just sell goods. It sells *deals"
13"thump"
14"\"Where is he?\""
15"\"You need this to get in. And you need to decide—right now—if you’re still sure you want to follow.\""
16"\"I don’t turn back,\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount861
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Quinn11
Soho1
Raven1
Veil1
Market1
Herrera1
Tomás6
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Raven"
2"Herrera"
3"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.861
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences53
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something between warning and pity"
95.29% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.047
wordCount955
matches
0"Not from the tunnel, but from a side passage, barely wide enough for one person to sq"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean31.83
std26.21
cv0.823
sampleLengths
0100
162
287
341
439
560
683
751
89
95
1044
119
1240
1332
1415
1540
168
175
1826
1927
2033
215
2237
2310
246
255
266
2718
2847
295
90.33% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences94
matches
0"been drowned"
1"being dragged"
2"been sealed"
3"was gone"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs144
matches
0"wasn’t running"
1"was running"
2"was coming"
3"was, standing"
4"was carrying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences101
ratio0.069
matches
0"The suspect—a wiry figure in a long coat, collar turned up—ducked into the alley between *The Raven’s Nest* and a shuttered tailor’s shop."
1"A flicker of movement caught her eye—a rusted fire escape, its ladder dangling like a broken promise."
2"The city’s usual hum had been drowned out by the storm, but beneath the rain’s white noise, she caught it—a low, rhythmic *thump*."
3"The tunnel stretched ahead, the walls lined with graffiti and the occasional flicker of movement—rats, or something else."
4"But the sound—it was coming from the passage."
5"Or at least, she’d heard it before—in the whispers of informants, in the half-truths of men who dealt in things they shouldn’t."
6"And then—movement."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount871
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03214695752009185
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.004592422502870264
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean9.46
std6.82
cv0.721
sampleLengths
024
124
23
323
43
523
616
714
82
915
1015
1117
125
1316
148
1518
1612
172
182
197
207
2123
222
232
245
252
2612
2722
285
2914
3016
3112
322
3316
3410
3510
3620
3718
387
3918
408
414
428
432
447
455
4617
479
485
493
42.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2871287128712871
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners29
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences74
matches
0"Somewhere ahead, a door stood"
1"Just the promise of somewhere"
2"More like something being dragged."
3"Instead, he reached into his"
4"Then she looked at Tomás."
ratio0.068
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences74
matches
0"She didn’t slow."
1"He kept going, vanishing around"
2"She pressed herself against the"
3"She wasn’t sure what she’d"
4"He was running *toward* something."
5"She descended carefully, her hand"
6"It wasn’t supposed to exist."
7"She knew that voice."
8"She kept her back straight,"
9"His olive skin was pale"
10"He knew what she meant."
11"It was thicker now, like"
12"She could feel it in"
13"It was warm in her"
14"She looked back at the"
ratio0.203
68.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences74
matches
0"The rain hammered the pavement"
1"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through"
2"She didn’t slow."
3"The suspect—a wiry figure in"
4"Quinn didn’t hesitate."
5"The scent of damp wool"
6"The suspect was already halfway"
7"Quinn’s fingers twitched toward the"
8"The man moved like he"
9"A flicker of movement caught"
10"The suspect didn’t take it."
11"He kept going, vanishing around"
12"Quinn followed, her pulse thrumming"
13"The rain had turned the"
14"She pressed herself against the"
15"The city’s usual hum had"
16"Quinn exhaled through her nose,"
17"She wasn’t sure what she’d"
18"He was running *toward* something."
19"The door creaked when she"
ratio0.784
67.57% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"By the time she reached"
ratio0.014
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that had swallowed the glow of streetlamps whole, the neon haze of Soho’s signs bleeding into the downpour."
1"Or at least, she’d heard it before—in the whispers of informants, in the half-truths of men who dealt in things they shouldn’t."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences12
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.167
81.2644%