| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.66% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 967 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 37.95% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 967 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footsteps" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "flicker" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "flicked" | | 9 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 94 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 13.61% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 17 | | markdownWords | 89 | | totalWords | 955 | | ratio | 0.093 | | matches | | 0 | "The Raven’s Nest" | | 1 | "thump" | | 2 | "toward" | | 3 | "thump" | | 4 | "\"You shouldn’t be here, Detective.\"" | | 5 | "\"Neither should you,\"" | | 6 | "\"But here we are.\"" | | 7 | "\"You’re not supposed to be down here,\"" | | 8 | "\"This isn’t your fight.\"" | | 9 | "\"Neither was the last one. And neither was the one before that.\"" | | 10 | "\"You don’t understand what you’re chasing,\"" | | 11 | "\"Then explain it to me.\"" | | 12 | "\"The Veil Market doesn’t just sell goods. It sells *deals" | | 13 | "thump" | | 14 | "\"Where is he?\"" | | 15 | "\"You need this to get in. And you need to decide—right now—if you’re still sure you want to follow.\"" | | 16 | "\"I don’t turn back,\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 861 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Tomás" | | discoveredNames | | Quinn | 11 | | Soho | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 | | Herrera | 1 | | Tomás | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Raven" | | 2 | "Herrera" | | 3 | "Tomás" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.861 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something between warning and pity" |
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| 95.29% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.047 | | wordCount | 955 | | matches | | 0 | "Not from the tunnel, but from a side passage, barely wide enough for one person to sq" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 31.83 | | std | 26.21 | | cv | 0.823 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 100 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 87 | | 3 | 41 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 83 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 33 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 47 | | 29 | 5 |
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| 90.33% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "been drowned" | | 1 | "being dragged" | | 2 | "been sealed" | | 3 | "was gone" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 144 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t running" | | 1 | "was running" | | 2 | "was coming" | | 3 | "was, standing" | | 4 | "was carrying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 101 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect—a wiry figure in a long coat, collar turned up—ducked into the alley between *The Raven’s Nest* and a shuttered tailor’s shop." | | 1 | "A flicker of movement caught her eye—a rusted fire escape, its ladder dangling like a broken promise." | | 2 | "The city’s usual hum had been drowned out by the storm, but beneath the rain’s white noise, she caught it—a low, rhythmic *thump*." | | 3 | "The tunnel stretched ahead, the walls lined with graffiti and the occasional flicker of movement—rats, or something else." | | 4 | "But the sound—it was coming from the passage." | | 5 | "Or at least, she’d heard it before—in the whispers of informants, in the half-truths of men who dealt in things they shouldn’t." | | 6 | "And then—movement." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 871 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03214695752009185 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004592422502870264 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 101 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 101 | | mean | 9.46 | | std | 6.82 | | cv | 0.721 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 18 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 42.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.2871287128712871 | | totalSentences | 101 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere ahead, a door stood" | | 1 | "Just the promise of somewhere" | | 2 | "More like something being dragged." | | 3 | "Instead, he reached into his" | | 4 | "Then she looked at Tomás." |
| | ratio | 0.068 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t slow." | | 1 | "He kept going, vanishing around" | | 2 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 3 | "She wasn’t sure what she’d" | | 4 | "He was running *toward* something." | | 5 | "She descended carefully, her hand" | | 6 | "It wasn’t supposed to exist." | | 7 | "She knew that voice." | | 8 | "She kept her back straight," | | 9 | "His olive skin was pale" | | 10 | "He knew what she meant." | | 11 | "It was thicker now, like" | | 12 | "She could feel it in" | | 13 | "It was warm in her" | | 14 | "She looked back at the" |
| | ratio | 0.203 | |
| 68.11% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hammered the pavement" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through" | | 2 | "She didn’t slow." | | 3 | "The suspect—a wiry figure in" | | 4 | "Quinn didn’t hesitate." | | 5 | "The scent of damp wool" | | 6 | "The suspect was already halfway" | | 7 | "Quinn’s fingers twitched toward the" | | 8 | "The man moved like he" | | 9 | "A flicker of movement caught" | | 10 | "The suspect didn’t take it." | | 11 | "He kept going, vanishing around" | | 12 | "Quinn followed, her pulse thrumming" | | 13 | "The rain had turned the" | | 14 | "She pressed herself against the" | | 15 | "The city’s usual hum had" | | 16 | "Quinn exhaled through her nose," | | 17 | "She wasn’t sure what she’d" | | 18 | "He was running *toward* something." | | 19 | "The door creaked when she" |
| | ratio | 0.784 | |
| 67.57% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "By the time she reached" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Harlow Quinn’s boots splashed through puddles that had swallowed the glow of streetlamps whole, the neon haze of Soho’s signs bleeding into the downpour." | | 1 | "Or at least, she’d heard it before—in the whispers of informants, in the half-truths of men who dealt in things they shouldn’t." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 12 | | tagDensity | 0.417 | | leniency | 0.833 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |