Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB7W0ETSF84CYXKVQ6MHSK

Run Details

Duration:
37.9s
Cost:
$0.000270
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted of overripe peaches and something metallic, something akin to old pennies. Rory wrinkled her nose, pulling her black hair away from her face. It felt oddly heavy, clinging to her skin in a way it never did in London. Beside her, Nyx shifted, their form rippling like heat haze. They hadn’t spoken since stepping through the shimmering distortion in Richmond Park, hadn’t needed to. The Grove wasn’t a place for idle chatter. "Dreadfully opulent for exile," Nyx murmured, their voice a whisper that seemed to emanate from the wind itself. Rory glanced at Isolde, whose silver hair shimmered with an otherworldly luminescence in the dappled light. The Seer merely regarded them with pale lavender eyes, an expression impossible to decipher. She hadn't offered a greeting, hadn't acknowledged their arrival beyond a curt nod. Isolde was like that, she supposed; a monument of stillness and veiled meaning. Around them, the Grove pulsed with an unsettling vitality. Wildflowers, riotous in color – hues Rory had never seen before – bloomed in profusion, crowding the mossy ground. Familiar English wildflowers – bluebells, primroses – were swallowed whole by blooms of obsidian black and vibrant, arterial red. The ancient oak standing stones, marking the Grove's boundary, weren't simply standing; they were *breathing*, a subtle expansion and contraction barely perceptible but undeniably present. It altered the ambient air pressure, creating a low, resonating hum in her chest. Rory reached out, brushing her fingers against the velvety petals of a flower that resembled a terrestrial orchid, only with deep crimson, almost black veining. The petals felt strangely warm, thrumming with a faint vibration. She glanced down at the Heartstone Pendant nestled against her collarbone. It pulsed faintly, a deeper crimson than the flower, a steady, rhythmic throb that intensified with each step deeper into the Grove. “It’s reacting strongly,” she muttered, mostly to herself. The artifact, a gift from someone she still didn’t know, had always been a silent guide, a faint beacon whenever places touched by Hel lingered nearby. Nyx, now solidifying somewhat, their humanoid outline less blurry, tilted their head. "Hel’s influence is… strong… but not overt. More akin to a lingering perfume than an open wound." Isolde finally moved, gliding – not walking, *gliding* – along a path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet. She left no impression on the soft earth. It was disconcerting. "The Feast draws near," she said, her voice a melodic murmur. It wasn’t a question. Rory frowned. "Feast? What feast?" Isolde didn’t reply, simply continued to move forward, deeper into the interwoven labyrinth of trees and flowers. Rory and Nyx exchanged a look before following. The deeper they went, the more unnatural the landscape became. The flowers grew larger, their forms grotesquely beautiful. Vines thick as a man’s torso twisted around the trees, bearing fruit the size of pumpkins in shades of emerald and gold. The air grew heavier, laden with the scent of sugared plums and something else… something feral, like warm fur and damp earth. A stream gurgled nearby – not water, Rory realized, but something viscous and amber-colored. It smelled of honey and something slightly rotten. Dipping a finger, she touched it cautiously. It coated her skin with a sticky sweetness, leaving a tingling sensation. “Definitely not water,” Nyx observed dryly. "More like… fermented nectar." They rounded a bend, and the Grove opened into a vast, circular clearing. And there, in the center, was a table. A table of polished obsidian, stretching impossibly long, laden with food. Mountains of glistening grapes, towers of candied fruits, roasted meats dripping with rich sauces, pastries piled high with cream and jewels of candied ginger. It was a display of such opulent excess that Rory felt a physical wave of nausea. "Gluttony’s touch is evident,” Nyx murmured, their form flickering again, as if the sight was destabilizing their permanence. The Heartstone pulsed violently now, almost painfully warm against her skin. “This is… Dymas,” Rory said, the realization hitting her like a physical blow. The realm of Gluttony, from the faded lore she’d absorbed from Yu-Fei’s cryptic collection of books. "You were warned," Isolde said, her voice devoid of emotion. “All feasts have a price.” The silence stretched, thick and suffocating. It was broken by a sound, a soft rustling from the edges of the clearing. Then another, and another, until the entire perimeter was alive with movement. Figures emerged from the shadows, their forms indistinct at first. As they drew closer, Rory could see they were… people. Or, at least, they appeared to be. They were dressed in elaborate, faded finery: silks and velvets, jewels and gold. But their faces… their faces were blank, devoid of expression. Their eyes, dull and vacant, stared straight ahead. They began to move towards the table, shuffling forward in a silent, deliberate procession. Rory noticed something else. Each figure wore a faint, greyish pallor, their skin stretched taut over their bones. There was a hollowness to them, a profound lack of… life. “Helbound souls,” Nyx whispered, their voice low with a dawning comprehension. Rory’s stomach churned. These were people, ripped from Earth, condemned to an eternity of indulgence, trapped in Dymas. A figure detached itself from the procession and approached the head of the table. It was larger than the others, more elaborately dressed. A crown of withered grapes sat upon its head. It gestured towards the table, its hand skeletal and pale. “Eat,” the figure croaked, its voice a dry rasp. “Feast.” The procession surged forward, converging on the table with a horrifying eagerness. They began to gorge themselves, stuffing their mouths with food, oblivious to the emptiness that consumed them. The sounds of their consumption - slurps, crunches, moans of what might have been pleasure – filled the clearing. Suddenly the Heartstone flared, the crimson light blinding. Rory instinctively recoiled, clutching at the pendant. A vision flooded her mind: a swirling vortex of shadows, a gate opening, a figure beckoning. The figure was vaguely familiar, a distorted reflection of someone she knew… someone she *had* known. The vision vanished as quickly as it came, leaving her gasping for breath. “Evan,” she breathed, the name a choked whisper. Her abusive ex, gone these past two years. And then, a horrifying realization: the figure in the vision had been wearing a crown of withered grapes. "The feast has a host," Isolde stated flatly, her lavender eyes fixed on Rory. “And he remembers you.” Rory looked back at the figures devouring every scrap before her. The feasting souls were not merely being entertained. They were serving some purpose. Providing sustenance. “He’s feeding off their memories,” Rory realized, her voice trembling. “Their lingering regrets, their missed opportunities… their pain.” A wave of profound dread washed over her. She looked at Nyx. Then at Isolde. “We need to leave. Now.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
33.33% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx observed dryly [dryly]"
1"Isolde stated flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
82.32% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"cautiously"
2"suddenly"
3"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1131
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count3
4
word"familiar"
count2
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"beacon"
count1
8
word"glistening"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"profound"
count2
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"churned"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"shimmered"
2"otherworldly"
3"pulsed"
4"familiar"
5"rhythmic"
6"throb"
7"beacon"
8"glistening"
9"silence"
10"profound"
11"stomach"
12"churned"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach churned"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
68.45% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1138
ratio0.003
matches
0"breathing"
1"gliding"
2"had"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
74.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1053
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London1
Nyx8
Richmond1
Park1
Grove5
Rory16
Isolde7
Seer1
English1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Hel1
Gluttony1
Yu-Fei1
Earth1
Dymas1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Grove"
2"Rory"
3"Isolde"
4"Seer"
5"Hel"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Dymas"
globalScore0.74
windowScore1
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something akin to old pennies"
1"whisper that seemed to emanate from the wind itself"
2"path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.879
wordCount1138
matches
0"not water, Rory realized, but something viscous"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean32.51
std21.53
cv0.662
sampleLengths
075
118
256
386
468
534
629
730
815
95
1025
1162
1241
1310
1472
1518
1611
1729
1815
1933
2058
2143
2211
2318
2442
2510
2648
2747
2813
2934
3018
3126
3218
3315
345
90.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences96
matches
0"were swallowed"
1"was broken"
2"were dressed"
3"being entertained"
41.27% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs168
matches
0"were *breathing"
1"was disconcerting"
2"was destabilizing"
3"were serving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences104
ratio0.067
matches
0"Isolde was like that, she supposed; a monument of stillness and veiled meaning."
1"Wildflowers, riotous in color – hues Rory had never seen before – bloomed in profusion, crowding the mossy ground."
2"Familiar English wildflowers – bluebells, primroses – were swallowed whole by blooms of obsidian black and vibrant, arterial red."
3"The ancient oak standing stones, marking the Grove's boundary, weren't simply standing; they were *breathing*, a subtle expansion and contraction barely perceptible but undeniably present."
4"Isolde finally moved, gliding – not walking, *gliding* – along a path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet."
5"A stream gurgled nearby – not water, Rory realized, but something viscous and amber-colored."
6"The sounds of their consumption - slurps, crunches, moans of what might have been pleasure – filled the clearing."
93.35% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1046
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04206500956022945
lyAdverbCount27
lyAdverbRatio0.02581261950286807
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean10.94
std5.62
cv0.514
sampleLengths
014
112
216
310
415
58
618
716
814
913
1013
119
1219
1319
1425
1514
1625
1710
1811
1922
208
2126
2212
2317
2419
258
263
2711
284
292
303
3117
328
3310
348
3522
3614
378
3814
398
407
4112
426
434
4413
458
4611
4724
4816
4918
70.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4423076923076923
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners46
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences92
matches
0"Then another, and another, until"
1"Suddenly the Heartstone flared, the"
2"Then at Isolde."
ratio0.033
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences92
matches
0"It felt oddly heavy, clinging"
1"They hadn’t spoken since stepping"
2"She hadn't offered a greeting,"
3"It altered the ambient air"
4"She glanced down at the"
5"It pulsed faintly, a deeper"
6"she muttered, mostly to herself"
7"She left no impression on"
8"It was disconcerting."
9"she said, her voice a"
10"It wasn’t a question."
11"It smelled of honey and"
12"It coated her skin with"
13"They rounded a bend, and"
14"It was a display of"
15"It was broken by a"
16"They were dressed in elaborate,"
17"their faces were blank, devoid"
18"Their eyes, dull and vacant,"
19"They began to move towards"
ratio0.293
30.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences92
matches
0"The air tasted of overripe"
1"Rory wrinkled her nose, pulling"
2"It felt oddly heavy, clinging"
3"They hadn’t spoken since stepping"
4"The Grove wasn’t a place"
5"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
6"Rory glanced at Isolde, whose"
7"The Seer merely regarded them"
8"She hadn't offered a greeting,"
9"Isolde was like that, she"
10"Wildflowers, riotous in color –"
11"The ancient oak standing stones,"
12"It altered the ambient air"
13"Rory reached out, brushing her"
14"The petals felt strangely warm,"
15"She glanced down at the"
16"It pulsed faintly, a deeper"
17"she muttered, mostly to herself"
18"The artifact, a gift from"
19"Nyx, now solidifying somewhat, their"
ratio0.859
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Or, at least, they appeared"
ratio0.011
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory reached out, brushing her fingers against the velvety petals of a flower that resembled a terrestrial orchid, only with deep crimson, almost black veining."
1"It pulsed faintly, a deeper crimson than the flower, a steady, rhythmic throb that intensified with each step deeper into the Grove."
2"Isolde finally moved, gliding – not walking, *gliding* – along a path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet."
3"They began to gorge themselves, stuffing their mouths with food, oblivious to the emptiness that consumed them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she muttered, mostly to herself"
1"she said, her voice a melodic murmur"
2"Rory said, the realization hitting her like a physical blow"
3"Isolde said, her voice devoid of emotion"
4"Nyx whispered, their voice low with a dawning comprehension"
5"the figure croaked, its voice a dry rasp"
6"Isolde stated flatly, her lavender eyes fixed on Rory"
7"Rory realized, her voice trembling"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Nyx observed dryly (observe)"
3"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
5"the figure croaked (croak)"
6"she breathed (breathe)"
7"Isolde stated flatly (state)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0.727
effectiveRatio0.727
73.3871%