| 33.33% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx observed dryly [dryly]" | | 1 | "Isolde stated flatly [flatly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.6 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 82.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 20.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "otherworldly" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "glistening" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "profound" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "churned" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.45% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "appeared to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 104 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1138 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "breathing" | | 1 | "gliding" | | 2 | "had" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.03% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1053 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 8 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Rory | 16 | | Isolde | 7 | | Seer | 1 | | English | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Seer" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" | | 4 | "Dymas" |
| | globalScore | 0.74 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 56.25% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "something akin to old pennies" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to emanate from the wind itself" | | 2 | "path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.879 | | wordCount | 1138 | | matches | | 0 | "not water, Rory realized, but something viscous" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 32.51 | | std | 21.53 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 75 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 86 | | 4 | 68 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 41 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 72 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 33 | | 20 | 58 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 47 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 5 |
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| 90.64% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "were swallowed" | | 1 | "was broken" | | 2 | "were dressed" | | 3 | "being entertained" |
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| 41.27% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "were *breathing" | | 1 | "was disconcerting" | | 2 | "was destabilizing" | | 3 | "were serving" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 104 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde was like that, she supposed; a monument of stillness and veiled meaning." | | 1 | "Wildflowers, riotous in color – hues Rory had never seen before – bloomed in profusion, crowding the mossy ground." | | 2 | "Familiar English wildflowers – bluebells, primroses – were swallowed whole by blooms of obsidian black and vibrant, arterial red." | | 3 | "The ancient oak standing stones, marking the Grove's boundary, weren't simply standing; they were *breathing*, a subtle expansion and contraction barely perceptible but undeniably present." | | 4 | "Isolde finally moved, gliding – not walking, *gliding* – along a path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet." | | 5 | "A stream gurgled nearby – not water, Rory realized, but something viscous and amber-colored." | | 6 | "The sounds of their consumption - slurps, crunches, moans of what might have been pleasure – filled the clearing." |
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| 93.35% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1046 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.04206500956022945 | | lyAdverbCount | 27 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02581261950286807 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 104 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 104 | | mean | 10.94 | | std | 5.62 | | cv | 0.514 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 70.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.4423076923076923 | | totalSentences | 104 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Then another, and another, until" | | 1 | "Suddenly the Heartstone flared, the" | | 2 | "Then at Isolde." |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "It felt oddly heavy, clinging" | | 1 | "They hadn’t spoken since stepping" | | 2 | "She hadn't offered a greeting," | | 3 | "It altered the ambient air" | | 4 | "She glanced down at the" | | 5 | "It pulsed faintly, a deeper" | | 6 | "she muttered, mostly to herself" | | 7 | "She left no impression on" | | 8 | "It was disconcerting." | | 9 | "she said, her voice a" | | 10 | "It wasn’t a question." | | 11 | "It smelled of honey and" | | 12 | "It coated her skin with" | | 13 | "They rounded a bend, and" | | 14 | "It was a display of" | | 15 | "It was broken by a" | | 16 | "They were dressed in elaborate," | | 17 | "their faces were blank, devoid" | | 18 | "Their eyes, dull and vacant," | | 19 | "They began to move towards" |
| | ratio | 0.293 | |
| 30.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 79 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted of overripe" | | 1 | "Rory wrinkled her nose, pulling" | | 2 | "It felt oddly heavy, clinging" | | 3 | "They hadn’t spoken since stepping" | | 4 | "The Grove wasn’t a place" | | 5 | "Nyx murmured, their voice a" | | 6 | "Rory glanced at Isolde, whose" | | 7 | "The Seer merely regarded them" | | 8 | "She hadn't offered a greeting," | | 9 | "Isolde was like that, she" | | 10 | "Wildflowers, riotous in color –" | | 11 | "The ancient oak standing stones," | | 12 | "It altered the ambient air" | | 13 | "Rory reached out, brushing her" | | 14 | "The petals felt strangely warm," | | 15 | "She glanced down at the" | | 16 | "It pulsed faintly, a deeper" | | 17 | "she muttered, mostly to herself" | | 18 | "The artifact, a gift from" | | 19 | "Nyx, now solidifying somewhat, their" |
| | ratio | 0.859 | |
| 54.35% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Or, at least, they appeared" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 85.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory reached out, brushing her fingers against the velvety petals of a flower that resembled a terrestrial orchid, only with deep crimson, almost black veining." | | 1 | "It pulsed faintly, a deeper crimson than the flower, a steady, rhythmic throb that intensified with each step deeper into the Grove." | | 2 | "Isolde finally moved, gliding – not walking, *gliding* – along a path that seemed to materialize beneath her feet." | | 3 | "They began to gorge themselves, stuffing their mouths with food, oblivious to the emptiness that consumed them." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, mostly to herself" | | 1 | "she said, her voice a melodic murmur" | | 2 | "Rory said, the realization hitting her like a physical blow" | | 3 | "Isolde said, her voice devoid of emotion" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered, their voice low with a dawning comprehension" | | 5 | "the figure croaked, its voice a dry rasp" | | 6 | "Isolde stated flatly, her lavender eyes fixed on Rory" | | 7 | "Rory realized, her voice trembling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed dryly (observe)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "the figure croaked (croak)" | | 6 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 7 | "Isolde stated flatly (state)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.727 | | effectiveRatio | 0.727 | |