"Her breath comes sharp, hot against the cold, and she ignores the way her lungs burn—ignores the man at her heels, too."
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"Seventeen years on the force doesn’t teach you to slow down—doesn’t teach you to *stop* when the dark hums like a live wire."
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"Quinn follows, her hand drifting to the holster at her waist—empty."
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"Quinn veers, skidding on a puddle, and catches a glimpse of the man’s back—tattoos of scales snaking up his neck, a cut on his cheek that bleeds into the water."
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"The ones who’d left a coin—cold, metallic, *wrong*—on his chest."
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"But her eyes—hollow, gray—tell Quinn she’s got teeth."
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"The air smells like ozone, and somewhere far below, a bell rings—low, deep, like a gong struck underwater."
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"The woman grunts, but her strength is wrong, too—pale, brittle, like a reed."
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"Somewhere below, a voice—male, low, speaking a language she doesn’t recognize."
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"She’d never been superstitious, but after that night, she’d started to see things—shadows that moved when she wasn’t looking, whispers in empty rooms."
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"His eyes—amber, slitted—meet hers."
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"The door is black, the frame carved with symbols she doesn’t recognize—twisted lines, eyes, a crescent moon."
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"This one—she can’t walk away."
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"The Veil Market hits her like a wave—smells of sweat and sandalwood, of something sweet and rotting."
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"People move between them, but they’re not all human—scales, horns, skin that shifts color."
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"The man she’s chasing is somewhere in here—she can feel it, a hot, foul presence."
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"He’s holding a syringe, capped, but his eyes are soft—kind, even here."
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"Quinn pulls a photo from her pocket—the man from The Raven’s Nest, his face blurred, but the scales visible."
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"Marcus is somewhere back there—she can feel his fear, his desperation."
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"She walks toward it, her hand on the hilt of her knife—nowhere near her, but it’s there."
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"For a moment, she sees Morris—smiling, hand on her shoulder, telling her to take a breath."
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"Marcus stands in the center, his hands shaking, a coin in his hand—the same coin from Morris’s body."
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"The men move closer, their hands in their pockets—she can see the knives, the blades glinting."
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"She draws a breath, and she thinks of Morris—of the way he’d laughed when she’d botched her first case, of the way he’d said, *“You’ll get better. I know you will.”*"
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"Quinn looks up, at the sky, and for a moment, she thinks she sees Morris—smiling, waving."
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"The streets thin here, potholes holding black water that ripples as she runs."
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"Quinn veers, skidding on a puddle, and catches a glimpse of the man’s back—tattoos of scales snaking up his neck, a cut on his cheek that bleeds into the water."
2
"The ones who’d left a coin—cold, metallic, *wrong*—on his chest."
3
"She’d never been superstitious, but after that night, she’d started to see things—shadows that moved when she wasn’t looking, whispers in empty rooms."
4
"People move between them, but they’re not all human—scales, horns, skin that shifts color."
5
"He gestures to a stall, where a woman with a face like a bird’s is stacking jars of something that glitters."