Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB9H6M2R76MANP28X9WK1D

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.000390
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts clicked in rapid succession, each a small, defiant sound against the thrum of Brick Lane rising up from below. Eva hadn’t expected anyone. She’d told precisely no one she’d be home, buried in research for the Van Derlyn manuscript. She peered through the peephole and her breath hitched. Rory. Her Rory. Though that felt like a trespass, a claiming of something long gone. Eva hesitated, a cold knot tightening low in her stomach. It had been six months. Six months since the slammed doors, the clipped words, the carefully constructed distance. Six months since Rory had walked away, a ghost already fading. She opened the door. Rory stood on the landing, small and solid in a faded denim jacket, the black of her hair a sharp contrast to the grimy yellow of the hallway. Her bright blue eyes met Eva’s, and for a heartbeat, the years between them vanished. Rory looked…tired. The lightness Eva remembered, the quick, easy smile, was absent. A small crescent-shaped scar, barely visible, peeked from beneath the cuff of her jacket where it pulled tight across her left wrist. Eva hadn’t noticed it before. Or perhaps she’d simply forgotten. “Hi,” Rory said, the single word a little rough around the edges. She didn’t smile. Didn't offer an explanation. Just stood there, occupying space in Eva’s doorway. Eva stepped back, gesturing vaguely into the flat. “Come in.” The words felt hollow, practiced. She hadn't imagined saying them again. Rory moved past her without a touch, a ghost re-entering a haunted house. The smell of cardamom and cumin wafted up from the curry house downstairs, mingling with the scent of old paper and dust that permeated Eva’s flat. Ptolemy, the tabby, materialized from the depths of the room, arching his back and rubbing against Rory’s legs. Rory didn’t acknowledge him, didn't even look down, but didn’t shrug him off, either. “It’s…a mess,” Eva said, unnecessarily, her gaze sweeping over the stacks of books threatening to topple from every surface. Scrolls were unfurled on the floor, open to brittle, yellowed pages. The flat was more chaos than home. “Always was,” Rory said softly, finally looking around. A ghost of a smile touched her lips. "Comfortably chaotic." Eva wanted to ask *why*, to demand an explanation for this unexpected intrusion, but the words caught in her throat. She hadn’t realized how much she’d missed Rory’s presence, the way she seemed to absorb the energy of a room, grounding it, making it feel…full. It was a painful ache in her chest, a reminder of all she’d lost. “So,” Eva said, settling for something neutral. “What brings you to Brick Lane?” Rory didn’t answer immediately. She walked further into the flat, passing a precarious tower of books, and stopped in front of a small, cluttered table where Eva usually worked. She ran a finger along the edge, disturbing a thin layer of dust. “I need a favor.” The bluntness surprised Eva. “A favor? After…” She trailed off, unwilling to dredge up the past. “After I left? Yeah.” Rory finally met her gaze, and Eva saw a flicker of something vulnerable in those bright blue eyes. “I wouldn’t be here if it wasn’t important.” Eva crossed her arms, trying to regain some semblance of composure. “Important to whom?” “To Lucien.” The name landed like a stone. Lucien Moreau. Half-demon, master manipulator, and a man Eva actively avoided. “What does Lucien want?” “He, uh…he needs someone to do a delivery.” Rory shifted uncomfortably, her gaze dropping to Ptolemy, who had settled at her feet, purring loudly. “A delivery?” Eva repeated, incredulous. “Lucien needs *you* to deliver something? He employs a network of…specialists. People who don't ask questions.” “He needed someone discreet. Someone who’s…under the radar. Someone who can blend in." Rory’s voice was barely a whisper. “And you think that’s me?” Eva raised an eyebrow. “I spend my days translating ancient texts. My idea of blending in is wearing muted colors.” “You’re resourceful, Eva. And you're good at getting around London. He knows you used to do deliveries.” “That was before I dedicated my life to deciphering forgotten languages.” Rory’s jaw tightened. “Look, I didn’t ask why. I just…he asked me to find you.” “And you came running.” “I needed the money.” The admission was raw, stripped of pretense. Eva hadn’t known Rory was struggling. She hadn’t even known how to find Rory. A wave of guilt washed over Eva. She’d been so consumed by her research, by the need to escape the wreckage of their past, that she’d completely shut Rory out. “What is it?” Eva asked, her voice softer now. “What does Lucien want delivered?” “I don’t know.” Eva stared at her, speechless. “You just show up at my door after six months, asking me to take on a potentially dangerous errand for a half-demon, and you don’t know what I’m delivering?” “He didn’t tell me. Just the address. And to make sure you get it to the right person.” Rory ran a hand through her hair, messing up the neat lines. She looked exhausted, defeated. “And why couldn’t he deliver it himself?” “Because it's sensitive. He says there are...complications." Eva sighed, pinching the bridge of her nose. “Of course there are.” “Please, Eva.” Rory’s voice was pleading now. “I wouldn’t ask if it wasn’t important. And… I could use the money. I’m a little behind on rent.” The last sentence was like a punch to the gut. Eva remembered Rory’s independence, her fierce refusal to ask for help. The fact that she was now admitting to financial trouble…it painted a bleak picture. “The address?” Eva asked, giving in. Rory recited it, a warehouse in the Isle of Dogs, a part of London Eva actively avoided. “And the recipient?” “Just a name. Mr. Silas Blackwood.” Silas Blackwood. Another name from the underworld, another red flag. Eva felt a knot of dread forming in her stomach. “And what do I get if I do this?” Eva asked, wanting to hear something more than just relief in Rory’s voice. Rory looked at her, her eyes searching, hesitant. “Lucien said…five hundred pounds. And… my gratitude.” “Five hundred pounds?” Eva scoffed. “That’s it? For running errands for a demon?” “He knows you don’t do it for the money.” Eva’s breath caught. He was right. It wasn’t about the money. It was about Rory. It always had been. She hadn’t realized how much she’d missed the pull, the magnetic force that had always existed between them, a dangerous current she’d tried so hard to ignore. “When do I need to deliver it?” she asked, already resigned to her fate. “Tomorrow night. Before midnight.” “And what am I delivering?” Rory hesitated again, her gaze fixed on the floor. “I honestly don't know. He just said… a package. Small. Discreet.” “Wonderful.” A silence descended, thick and uncomfortable. Ptolemy meowed, demanding attention. Eva ran a hand through her hair, trying to organize her thoughts. “Look,” she said finally, “I’ll do it. But you need to tell me everything you know. Everything Lucien said. No omissions.” Rory nodded, relief washing over her face. “Okay. Okay, I will.” She paused, then added, almost as an afterthought, “He said… he said to tell you he hopes this might… mend fences.” Eva laughed, a short, bitter sound. “Lucien mending fences? That's rich.” “I know.” Rory offered a weak smile. “He’s Lucien.” The silence returned, but it felt different now, less hostile. Eva studied Rory, the lines of tiredness etched around her eyes, the way she unconsciously fiddled with the silver ring on her thumb. She looked lost, vulnerable. And despite everything, despite the hurt and the betrayal, Eva felt a surge of protectiveness. “You’ll stay for tea?” Eva asked, surprising herself. Rory’s eyes widened, a flicker of hope igniting within them. “If it’s not too much trouble.” “It’s no trouble at all.” Eva turned towards the small kitchen, the scent of cardamom and cumin still clinging to the air. “I think I’ve got some biscuits somewhere under all this.” As she moved, she glanced back at Rory. The damage was done, the scars were there, but maybe, just maybe, this wasn’t the end of their story. Maybe it was a new, messy, complicated beginning. And for the first time in six months, Eva allowed herself to feel a sliver of hope. And a terrifying, undeniable flutter in her chest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.65% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"Rory said softly [softly]"
1"Rory shifted uncomfortably [uncomfortably]"
2"she said finally [finally]"
3"She paused then [then]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.19
effectiveRatio0.14
85.72% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"carefully"
2"softly"
3"completely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1401
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"constructed"
count1
2
word"depths"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"etched"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"constructed"
2"depths"
3"chaotic"
4"reminder"
5"flicker"
6"whisper"
7"eyebrow"
8"magnetic"
9"silence"
10"etched"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"a flicker of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences104
matches
0"A wave of guilt"
1"felt a knot"
2"a flicker of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1398
ratio0.001
matches
0"why"
1"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions82
wordCount1005
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity3.68
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity6.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Van1
Derlyn1
Rory32
Eva37
Scrolls1
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Isle1
Dogs1
London1
Blackwood1
persons
0"Van"
1"Derlyn"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Moreau"
5"Blackwood"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Isle"
3"London"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a trespass, a claiming of som"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1398
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs64
mean21.84
std17.51
cv0.802
sampleLengths
051
11
214
339
44
587
627
721
871
937
1018
1159
1213
1342
144
1516
1630
1714
182
1921
2024
2121
2219
2325
2417
2511
2615
274
2825
2930
3014
313
3234
3334
347
357
3612
3726
3835
396
4017
413
426
4320
4422
4515
4613
479
4846
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"were unfurled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was struggling"
1"was pleading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences137
ratio0
matches(empty)
85.55% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1007
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar,"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.04965243296921549
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.018867924528301886
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean10.2
std6.95
cv0.681
sampleLengths
022
14
216
39
41
52
612
710
85
913
1011
114
1228
1315
142
1510
1622
175
185
1912
203
214
228
238
247
256
2613
2726
2818
2914
3019
3111
327
338
348
352
3620
3725
3814
397
406
414
4225
4313
444
454
4612
4722
488
4911
47.69% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.32116788321167883
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners44
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"Just stood there, occupying space"
1"Maybe it was a new,"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences98
matches
0"She’d told precisely no one"
1"She peered through the peephole"
2"It had been six months."
3"She opened the door."
4"Her bright blue eyes met"
5"She didn’t smile."
6"She hadn't imagined saying them"
7"She hadn’t realized how much"
8"It was a painful ache"
9"She walked further into the"
10"She ran a finger along"
11"She trailed off, unwilling to"
12"She hadn’t even known how"
13"She’d been so consumed by"
14"She looked exhausted, defeated."
15"He was right."
16"It wasn’t about the money."
17"It was about Rory."
18"It always had been."
19"She hadn’t realized how much"
ratio0.245
21.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences98
matches
0"The three deadbolts clicked in"
1"Eva hadn’t expected anyone."
2"She’d told precisely no one"
3"She peered through the peephole"
4"Eva hesitated, a cold knot"
5"It had been six months."
6"She opened the door."
7"Rory stood on the landing,"
8"Her bright blue eyes met"
9"The lightness Eva remembered, the"
10"A small crescent-shaped scar, barely"
11"Eva hadn’t noticed it before."
12"Rory said, the single word"
13"She didn’t smile."
14"Eva stepped back, gesturing vaguely"
15"The words felt hollow, practiced"
16"She hadn't imagined saying them"
17"Rory moved past her without"
18"The smell of cardamom and"
19"Ptolemy, the tabby, materialized from"
ratio0.878
51.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Though that felt like a"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She hadn’t realized how much she’d missed the pull, the magnetic force that had always existed between them, a dangerous current she’d tried so hard to ignore."
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She trailed, unwilling to dredge up the past"
1"Eva repeated, incredulous"
2"Eva asked, her voice softer now"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.193
leniency0.386
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.035
82.3054%