Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYB9PA617F2777NHB1HW55C

Run Details

Duration:
23.2s
Cost:
$0.001513
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora twisted the third deadbolt with a click that echoed through the cramped flat. The air inside carried the faint spice of curry wafting up from the restaurant below, mingling with the musty scent of old books stacked on every shelf. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, leaped from the windowsill and rubbed against her legs, his fur brushing her jeans. She scooped him up absentmindedly, her fingers tracing the soft stripe down his back as she pulled the door open. Lucien stood there, framed by the dim hallway light, his platinum blond hair slicked back without a strand out of place. The charcoal suit hugged his frame, crisp as ever, and in his right hand, he gripped that ivory-handled cane, the one she knew hid a blade sharp enough to slice through resolve. His heterochromatic eyes locked on hers—one amber catching the light like a dying ember, the other black as the void between worlds. The sight of him hit her like a cold gust off the Thames, stealing the breath she'd been holding since the last time they parted. "Rory," he said, voice low and smooth, laced with that French accent that always twisted her name into something intimate. He didn't smile, but his gaze flickered over her face, down to the small crescent scar on her left wrist peeking from her sleeve, then back up. She clutched Ptolemy tighter, the cat squirming in protest. Her heart hammered against her ribs, but she kept her chin level, blue eyes narrowing. "Lucien. How the hell did you find me here?" He leaned on the cane, the tip tapping once against the worn floorboards. "Eva's place isn't exactly a secret. Brick Lane whispers if you listen." His amber eye glinted as he tilted his head. "May I come in? Or do we conduct this in the hallway like petty thieves?" The flat behind her waited, a chaos of scrolls and notes spilling across the kitchen table—Eva's latest research on some forgotten demon lore. Rory had crashed here after another brutal shift at the Golden Empress, delivering orders that tasted of exhaustion. Eva was out, chasing a lead at some occult shop in Soho, leaving Rory alone with her thoughts and the cat. Now this. Lucien, the half-demon fixer who'd pulled her into London's underbelly six months ago, then vanished after that night in his Mayfair safehouse. Attraction had sparked then—electric, undeniable—but so had the hurt when he ghosted her, leaving only a note that read, "Some debts demand distance." She stepped aside, the door creaking wider. Ptolemy wriggled free and darted past Lucien's legs into the shadows. "Fine. But make it quick. Eva's got enough weirdness here without adding your brand." He entered with that deliberate grace, the cane echoing soft thuds as he navigated the narrow path between teetering piles of books. The space shrank around him; his presence filled it like smoke from a hidden fire. He paused by the table, gloved fingers brushing the edge of a yellowed scroll without lifting it. "You look tired. The deliveries wearing you down?" "Don't." She shut the door, the deadbolts sliding home with finality. Her straight black hair fell across one eye as she crossed her arms. "You don't get to stroll in and play concerned after disappearing. What do you want, Luc? Information? A favor? Because if it's me, we're past that." He turned, black eye absorbing the light while the amber one held it. "It's always been you, Rory. From the moment you outsmarted that shade in the alley behind Silas'." He set the cane against the wall, freeing his hands. "But I came because of the mark on your wrist. Not the scar—the one that burns when shadows stir." Her pulse quickened. She glanced at her wrist, the childhood scar pale against her skin, but beneath it, a faint warmth pulsed now, unbidden. That night in his safehouse, after they'd tangled in sheets stained with the remnants of a botched ritual, he'd traced a protection rune there with his own blood. A half-demon's gift, he'd called it. A tether. She'd woken to find him gone, the rune hidden under fresh ink she'd hastily applied to cover it. "You left. No explanation, just shadows in your wake. I waited two weeks, Lucien. Eva had to drag me out of that flat above the bar." He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something sharper, like brimstone—cutting through the curry haze. "I had to. The contract on you came from Avaros. My father's realm. If I'd stayed, they'd have used me to reach you." His voice dropped, fingers hovering near her arm without touching. "The attraction between us... it blinded me at first. But the hurt? That was my choice, to keep you safe." She laughed, sharp and brittle, backing toward the kitchen counter where a half-empty mug of tea steamed forgotten. "Safe? You think tracing runes and vanishing makes me safe? I see your face in every dark corner now. Every delivery through fogged streets." Her blue eyes flashed, meeting his mismatched gaze. "Things left unsaid, Luc. Like how you kissed me that night, whispered in French that I couldn't understand but felt in my bones. Then nothing." He closed the distance, his hand finally brushing her wrist, thumb pressing over the scar. The warmth flared under his touch, a spark racing up her arm. "Je t'ai désiré plus que la vie elle-même." The words hung between them, his four languages weaving truth into the air. "I desired you more than life itself. But desire pulls demons closer. I thought distance would sever it." Ptolemy jumped onto the table, knocking a book to the floor with a thud. The cat's green eyes watched them, tail flicking like a metronome to their tension. Rory pulled her wrist away, but not far—her body betrayed her, leaning into the space he'd invaded. At 5'6", she met his 5'11" with defiance, her shoulder-length hair swinging as she shook her head. "You speak of contracts and realms like they're excuses. I fled Cardiff for this—abusive ex, overbearing parents. Thought London would be escape. Then you show up, all suits and secrets, and I let myself fall. Only to crash alone." Lucien's jaw tightened, the amber eye softening while the black one darkened further. He removed his glove with deliberate slowness, revealing skin pale and unmarked, save for the faint veins of infernal heritage that shimmered under stress. "The crash was mine too. Every deal I've brokered since, I've seen your eyes in the clients' lies." He cupped her face, callused palm rough against her cheek. "The underbelly chews on weakness. Our night together? That was my weakness exposed." She froze under his touch, the flat's clutter fading—the books, the scrolls, the cat's indifferent stare. Heat bloomed in her chest, mirroring the rune’s glow. "Then why now? Why show up unannounced, forcing this?" "Because the mark burns brighter. Something's coming for you, Rory. From Avaros." His thumb traced her lower lip, voice a rumble. "And I won't let it touch what I've left unsaid." Her breath hitched. The attraction roared back, raw and insistent, pulling her toward him like gravity. She gripped his suit lapel, fabric smooth under her fingers, and yanked him closer. "You left too much unsaid last time. Say it now. All of it." He kissed her then, fierce and claiming, his lips parting hers with the urgency of six months denied. She met him, hands sliding up to tangle in his slicked-back hair, disrupting the perfect lines. The cane clattered fully to the floor as he pressed her against the counter, the mug tipping over in a splash of tea that neither noticed. Ptolemy scattered, books trembled from the vibration. When they broke apart, gasping, his forehead rested against hers. "I love you, Aurora Carter. More than realms, more than blood debts. That's what I should have said." She searched his eyes, the amber warm, the black endless. Hurt lingered, a shadow in her chest, but the pull won. "Prove it. Stay this time. No vanishing." He nodded, pulling her toward the worn sofa buried under research notes. They sank into it, her head on his shoulder, his arm around her waist. The flat's chaos surrounded them—deadbolts secure, cat circling back with a meow. Outside, Brick Lane hummed with evening life, but here, words spilled forth. "Tell me about Marseille," she murmured, fingers tracing his cane's handle nearby. He did, voice weaving tales of sun-baked streets and a mother's human warmth against demonic fire. She shared Cardiff's rains, the barrister father's stern lectures, the Welsh mother's stories that fueled her quick mind. Attraction rebuilt itself in confessions, hurt easing under shared breaths. Hours blurred as they talked, bodies entwined on the sofa. His hand found her wrist again, peeling back the ink to reveal the rune, glowing softly. "This binds us," he said. "If you'll have it." She nodded, kissing the mark on his palm. "I will. But no more secrets, Luc. We're in this—London's shadows and all." The door's deadbolts held firm against the night, while inside, things left unsaid transformed into promises. Ptolemy curled at their feet, purring as the curry scent lingered, a reminder of the world beyond their reclaimed space. Lucien's suit jacket draped over the armrest, her jeans rumpled from his touch. They rose only to brew fresh tea, his cane propped nearby like a sentinel. As they stood in the kitchen, her back to his chest, his arms encircling her, she felt the rune's warmth steady. "Eva returns soon," she said. "She'll have questions." "Let her," he replied, chin on her shoulder. "I've answers now." The flat pulsed with their presence, books silent witnesses to the reunion. Attraction burned steady, hurt a scar they both bore, things unsaid finally voiced in the quiet hours.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:19:12.849Z" 2/20/2026, 8:19:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.99% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1659
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1659
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count3
2
word"resolve"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"electric"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count4
10
word"pulsed"
count2
11
word"traced"
count2
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"desire"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"shimmered"
count1
16
word"disrupting"
count1
17
word"perfect"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
19
word"reminder"
count1
20
word"sentinel"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"tracing"
2"resolve"
3"flickered"
4"electric"
5"echoing"
6"navigated"
7"pulse"
8"quickened"
9"warmth"
10"pulsed"
11"traced"
12"racing"
13"desire"
14"tension"
15"shimmered"
16"disrupting"
17"perfect"
18"trembled"
19"reminder"
20"sentinel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1639
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount1190
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Ptolemy"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Thames1
French1
Ptolemy6
Eva2
Golden1
Empress1
Soho1
Rory3
London1
Mayfair1
Lucien5
Brick1
Lane1
Cardiff1
Welsh1
Attraction3
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Empress"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Attraction"
places
0"Thames"
1"Golden"
2"Soho"
3"London"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1639
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean52.87
std26.66
cv0.504
sampleLengths
079
1100
247
333
449
5109
632
762
850
959
10104
1170
1275
1366
14101
1578
1634
1731
1843
1967
2028
2128
2250
2312
2444
2535
2621
2763
2829
2911
3029
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs209
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences104
ratio0.077
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes locked on hers—one amber catching the light like a dying ember, the other black as the void between worlds."
1"The flat behind her waited, a chaos of scrolls and notes spilling across the kitchen table—Eva's latest research on some forgotten demon lore."
2"Attraction had sparked then—electric, undeniable—but so had the hurt when he ghosted her, leaving only a note that read, \"Some debts demand distance.\""
3"The space shrank around him; his presence filled it like smoke from a hidden fire."
4"He stepped closer, the scent of his cologne—sandalwood and something sharper, like brimstone—cutting through the curry haze."
5"Rory pulled her wrist away, but not far—her body betrayed her, leaning into the space he'd invaded."
6"She froze under his touch, the flat's clutter fading—the books, the scrolls, the cat's indifferent stare."
7"The flat's chaos surrounded them—deadbolts secure, cat circling back with a meow."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1206
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.02902155887230514
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.007462686567164179
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean15.76
std7.36
cv0.467
sampleLengths
014
127
218
320
421
532
622
725
820
927
109
1115
129
1313
1421
1515
1623
1718
1821
192
2022
2123
227
2311
2414
2522
2615
2717
288
2911
3013
3126
3213
3327
3419
353
3621
3728
386
392
4018
4126
4217
4333
4420
4518
4632
4725
4815
4912
62.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.41% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences79
matches
0"She scooped him up absentmindedly,"
1"His heterochromatic eyes locked on"
2"he said, voice low and"
3"He didn't smile, but his"
4"She clutched Ptolemy tighter, the"
5"Her heart hammered against her"
6"He leaned on the cane,"
7"His amber eye glinted as"
8"She stepped aside, the door"
9"He entered with that deliberate"
10"He paused by the table,"
11"She shut the door, the"
12"Her straight black hair fell"
13"He turned, black eye absorbing"
14"He set the cane against"
15"Her pulse quickened."
16"She glanced at her wrist,"
17"She'd woken to find him"
18"He stepped closer, the scent"
19"His voice dropped, fingers hovering"
ratio0.519
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences79
matches
0"Aurora twisted the third deadbolt"
1"The air inside carried the"
2"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, leaped"
3"She scooped him up absentmindedly,"
4"Lucien stood there, framed by"
5"The charcoal suit hugged his"
6"His heterochromatic eyes locked on"
7"The sight of him hit"
8"he said, voice low and"
9"He didn't smile, but his"
10"She clutched Ptolemy tighter, the"
11"Her heart hammered against her"
12"He leaned on the cane,"
13"His amber eye glinted as"
14"The flat behind her waited,"
15"Rory had crashed here after"
16"Eva was out, chasing a"
17"Lucien, the half-demon fixer who'd"
18"Attraction had sparked then—electric, undeniable—but"
19"She stepped aside, the door"
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
93.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Rory had crashed here after another brutal shift at the Golden Empress, delivering orders that tasted of exhaustion."
1"Lucien, the half-demon fixer who'd pulled her into London's underbelly six months ago, then vanished after that night in his Mayfair safehouse."
2"He removed his glove with deliberate slowness, revealing skin pale and unmarked, save for the faint veins of infernal heritage that shimmered under stress."
3"She shared Cardiff's rains, the barrister father's stern lectures, the Welsh mother's stories that fueled her quick mind."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She shut, the deadbolts sliding home with finality"
1"His voice dropped, fingers hovering near her arm without touching"
2"she murmured, fingers tracing his cane's handle nearby"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.139
leniency0.278
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.056
76.8593%