Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYBA81TYA686P5AVJ7YHF87

Run Details

Duration:
37.1s
Cost:
$0.000260
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The insistent rapping echoed through the flat, a jarring counterpoint to the ambient hum of the refrigerator. Aurora stared at the door, a knot tightening in her stomach. She wasn’t expecting anyone. Yu-Fei needed the delivery by six, and she’d promised Silas she’d be by to help him restock the bitters before the evening rush. Neither errand involved door-to-door visitors. She padded across the worn Persian rug, the familiar chill of the hardwood floor seeping through her socks. Three deadbolts. Eva always insisted on three deadbolts. Paranoid, Rory used to tease, but Eva had a point about Brick Lane after dark. She reached the door, her hand hovering over the first lock. Another rap, sharper this time, followed by a voice, smooth and faintly accented. "Aurora? It's…Lucian. I need a word." The air whooshed from her lungs. Lucian. *Lucien Moreau.* He shouldn’t be here. He *couldn’t* be here. He was a phantom limb, a sharp ache she’d learned to ignore, a reminder of a messy entanglement she’d desperately tried to bury. She didn't answer, just fumbled with the first lock, the cold metal biting into her palm. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a souvenir of a childhood climbing accident, pulsed faintly with a dull ache. "Please, Aurora," he repeated, his voice softening, losing some of its usual polished edge. "It's important." Ignoring the internal scream that urged her to pretend she wasn't home, she released the second lock. The click seemed impossibly loud in the stillness of the flat. The final deadbolt required a deliberate, almost violent twist. He didn't rush, didn’t push. He simply stood there, the dim hallway light catching the silver of his slicked-back platinum blond hair, the sharp angles of his face. He’d traded his usual tailored charcoal suit for a dark gray cashmere coat, but the impeccable cut was undeniable. He exuded an aura of controlled power, a quiet confidence that had always both intimidated and captivated her. His eyes, that unsettling, mismatched pair – one amber, one black – locked onto hers, a silent interrogation. “Lucian,” she said, the word feeling foreign on her tongue. She kept her voice even, betraying none of the turmoil churning within her. “What are you doing here?” He didn’t immediately answer, his gaze sweeping over the cluttered hallway, finally settling on her. There was a flicker of something she couldn't quite decipher in those heterochromatic eyes—regret, perhaps? Or something that resembled…concern? “It’s a long story,” he said finally, his French accent more pronounced than she remembered. It had always been subtle, woven into the fabric of his impeccable English, but now it was a tangible thing, a reminder of the world he inhabited, a world so profoundly different from her own. Before she could formulate a reply, a tabby cat, a fluffy orange whirlwind named Ptolemy, wound around his legs, weaving between his polished shoes. He paused, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips as he reached down to scratch behind the cat’s ears. The gesture was surprisingly gentle, a vulnerability at odds with his usual air of detached authority. “He seems to approve,” she said, a wry amusement tugging at the corners of her mouth. "Ptolemy has excellent judgment," he agreed, his eyes meeting hers once more. “May I come in, Aurora?” She hesitated, her hand instinctively drifting to the small silver pendant she wore beneath her shirt – a simple Celtic knot, a gift from her father. It was a grounding talisman, a reminder of the ordinary life she’d been trying so hard to rebuild. “I’m in the middle of something,” she said, a flimsy excuse, but the best she could manage. “I’m aware,” he replied, his tone politely dismissive. “I wouldn’t have interrupted otherwise. It will only take a few minutes.” He didn’t wait for an invitation. He stepped past her, his movements fluid and silent, and into the flat. Aurora followed, closing the door behind him, the three deadbolts clicking into place with a finality that felt both reassuring and suffocating. The flat was exactly as he would expect it to be— a controlled chaos of books stacked precariously high, scrolls spilling from overflowing baskets, and research notes covering nearly every available surface. Eva, her childhood friend and current co-conspirator, was a collector of obscure knowledge, and the flat reflected that obsession. “It’s…cozy,” Lucian remarked, his gaze sweeping over the room with a detached amusement. “It’s lived in,” Aurora corrected, bristling at the implied criticism. She gestured towards a worn armchair piled high with cushions. “Sit. And tell me why you’ve materialized in my life after…three years.” He settled into the armchair, his posture impeccable, his hands clasped lightly on the ivory handle of his cane. The cane, she knew, concealed a thin, razor-sharp blade. Beautiful and deadly, much like the man himself. He paused, considering his words. "There's been a development. Something that concerns you. Something…familiar." Aurora’s breath hitched. “Familiar how?” He ignored her question, instead focusing on a point just beyond her shoulder. “A ritual. Resurfaced. The binding spell. It’s been reactivated.” The words slammed into her, a cold wave of dread washing over her. The binding spell. The reason she’d run. The reason she’d severed ties with the supernatural world, with *him*. “That’s impossible,” she said, her voice trembling, despite her best efforts to control it. “It was broken. We destroyed the artifacts. We made sure—" “Someone has recreated them,” he interrupted, his voice low and grave. “Or found another way. The energy signature is identical. It's centered...in London.” He looked at her then, those mismatched eyes burning into her. “And it’s calling to you, Aurora.” She shook her head, denial rising in her throat. “No. It can’t be. I’ve done everything I can to…” She trailed off, the unspoken words hanging heavy in the air: *to forget you. To forget this.* He seemed to anticipate her thoughts. "The magic binds to the bloodline, Aurora. You can't simply walk away from it.” Ptolemy, sensing the tension, rubbed against his leg, purring loudly. Lucian stroked the cat absently, his gaze fixed on her. "Why are you telling me this?" she asked, the question a hesitant accusation. "Why now, after all this time?" He finally met her gaze, and for a moment, the carefully constructed facade of detachment crumbled, revealing a raw vulnerability she hadn’t seen in him before. “Because, Aurora,” he said, his voice barely a whisper, “I need your help. And because,” he paused, a flicker of something— pain?— crossing his face, "I’m not entirely sure I can do this without you.” The admission hung in the air, a fragile bridge across the chasm of hurt and regret that had separated them for so long. She stared at him, at the man who had once been the center of her world, the man who had promised her everything and then taken it all away. The delivery for Yu-Fei, Silas’ bitters, her carefully constructed ordinary life—all of it seemed insignificant now, swallowed by the sudden, urgent return of the supernatural, and the unwelcome resurgence of a past she thought she had buried. “What do you need me to do?” she asked, the words escaping her lips before she could fully process them. He allowed himself a small, almost imperceptible nod. "First," he said, rising from the armchair, his tailored trousers impeccably pressed, "we need to assess the situation. And for that, I require a map. Eva’s map, specifically. I believe she has one that might prove…useful.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.063
88.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1254
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"lightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1254
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count3
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"churning"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"tangible"
count1
9
word"grave"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"constructed"
count2
13
word"facade"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"stomach"
2"familiar"
3"chill"
4"reminder"
5"pulsed"
6"churning"
7"flicker"
8"tangible"
9"grave"
10"unspoken"
11"tension"
12"constructed"
13"facade"
14"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords10
totalWords1248
ratio0.008
matches
0"Lucien Moreau."
1"couldn’t"
2"him"
3"to forget you. To forget this."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1006
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Silas1
Persian1
Rory1
Eva3
Brick1
Lane1
Ignoring1
French1
English1
Ptolemy2
Celtic1
Aurora4
Yu-Fei2
Lucian3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Eva"
3"French"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Aurora"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Lucian"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed impossibly loud in the stillness of the flat"
1"quite decipher in those heterochromatic eyes—regret, perhaps"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1248
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"reflected that obsession"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean32
std16.07
cv0.502
sampleLengths
060
152
219
340
436
516
637
783
828
934
1050
1161
1216
1317
1444
1517
1620
1741
1851
1913
2032
2136
2214
235
2422
2531
2624
2723
2817
2936
3020
3120
3219
3326
3435
3552
3637
3720
3844
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs166
matches
0"wasn’t expecting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences93
ratio0.054
matches
0"His eyes, that unsettling, mismatched pair – one amber, one black – locked onto hers, a silent interrogation."
1"There was a flicker of something she couldn't quite decipher in those heterochromatic eyes—regret, perhaps?"
2"She hesitated, her hand instinctively drifting to the small silver pendant she wore beneath her shirt – a simple Celtic knot, a gift from her father."
3"The flat was exactly as he would expect it to be— a controlled chaos of books stacked precariously high, scrolls spilling from overflowing baskets, and research notes covering nearly every available surface."
4"“Because, Aurora,” he said, his voice barely a whisper, “I need your help. And because,” he paused, a flicker of something— pain?— crossing his face, \"I’m not entirely sure I can do this without you.”"
87.52% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1006
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thin, razor-sharp blade."
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.0437375745526839
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.02385685884691849
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean13.42
std8.22
cv0.612
sampleLengths
017
111
24
323
45
518
62
76
815
911
1013
116
126
131
146
154
1623
1716
1820
1914
202
2117
2211
239
245
2523
2619
2718
2818
2910
3013
315
3215
3315
344
3515
3635
3724
3821
3916
4016
4112
425
4326
4418
4517
468
4712
486
4913
47.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.3763440860215054
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences77
matches
0"She wasn’t expecting anyone."
1"She padded across the worn"
2"She reached the door, her"
3"He *couldn’t* be here."
4"He was a phantom limb,"
5"She didn't answer, just fumbled"
6"he repeated, his voice softening,"
7"He didn't rush, didn’t push."
8"He simply stood there, the"
9"He’d traded his usual tailored"
10"He exuded an aura of"
11"His eyes, that unsettling, mismatched"
12"she said, the word feeling"
13"She kept her voice even,"
14"He didn’t immediately answer, his"
15"he said finally, his French"
16"It had always been subtle,"
17"He paused, a ghost of"
18"she said, a wry amusement"
19"he agreed, his eyes meeting"
ratio0.558
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences77
matches
0"The insistent rapping echoed through"
1"Aurora stared at the door,"
2"She wasn’t expecting anyone."
3"Yu-Fei needed the delivery by"
4"Neither errand involved door-to-door visitors."
5"She padded across the worn"
6"Eva always insisted on three"
7"She reached the door, her"
8"Another rap, sharper this time,"
9"The air whooshed from her"
10"*Lucien Moreau.* He shouldn’t be"
11"He *couldn’t* be here."
12"He was a phantom limb,"
13"She didn't answer, just fumbled"
14"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
15"he repeated, his voice softening,"
16"The click seemed impossibly loud"
17"The final deadbolt required a"
18"He didn't rush, didn’t push."
19"He simply stood there, the"
ratio0.909
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Before she could formulate a"
1"To forget this.*"
ratio0.026
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He exuded an aura of controlled power, a quiet confidence that had always both intimidated and captivated her."
1"Aurora followed, closing the door behind him, the three deadbolts clicking into place with a finality that felt both reassuring and suffocating."
2"Ptolemy, sensing the tension, rubbed against his leg, purring loudly."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"he repeated, his voice softening, losing some of its usual polished edge"
1"she said, the word feeling foreign on her tongue"
2"she said, a wry amusement tugging at the corners of her mouth"
3"he replied, his tone politely dismissive"
4"Lucian remarked, his gaze sweeping over the room with a detached amusement"
5"she said, her voice trembling, despite her best efforts to control it"
6"he interrupted, his voice low and grave"
7"he said, his voice barely a whisper,"
16.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he repeated (repeat)"
1"he agreed (agree)"
2"Aurora corrected (correct)"
3"he interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.267
74.2149%