| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.8 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1117 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1117 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "comforting" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "sense of" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "fleeting" | | 8 | "throbbed" | | 9 | "scanned" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "oppressive" | | 12 | "disrupting" | | 13 | "searing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.87% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 127 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 129 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 5 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 1112 | | ratio | 0.014 | | matches | | 0 | "felt" | | 1 | "Past the Isabella Plantation, follow the deer trails, look for the oaks." | | 2 | "warn" | | 3 | "know" | | 4 | "move" |
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| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "My imagination, I told myself." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1072 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.56 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 6 | | Old | 1 | | Man | 1 | | Hemlock | 1 | | Highgate | 1 | | Cemetery | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | October | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Isabella | 1 | | Plantation | 1 | | Deer | 1 | | Auroras | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Hemlock" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Isabella" | | 3 | "Plantation" | | 4 | "Deer" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.64% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like it was trying to claw its way" | | 1 | "felt like it was trying to *warn* me" | | 2 | "clothes that seemed to shimmer and shift in the light, woven from things that shouldn’t be cloth" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.899 | | wordCount | 1112 | | matches | | 0 | "Not unpleasant, but unsettling" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 28.51 | | std | 20.43 | | cv | 0.716 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 71 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 48 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 56 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 38 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 32 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 57 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 8 |
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| 96.97% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "were swallowed" | | 1 | "being brushed" | | 2 | "were dressed" |
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| 3.92% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "were proving" | | 1 | "was getting" | | 2 | "was trying" | | 3 | "was trying" | | 4 | "was telling" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 129 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "And then she'd described the standing stones—ancient oaks twisted with age, marking the edge of…something." |
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| 74.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1027 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "small, heavy-handled knife" |
| | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.054527750730282376 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02044790652385589 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 129 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 129 | | mean | 8.62 | | std | 5.51 | | cv | 0.64 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 2 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 9 |
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| 66.93% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.43410852713178294 | | totalSentences | 129 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "More of a…" | | 1 | "Too much of anything always" | | 2 | "Then I saw them." | | 3 | "Just the trees, their branches" | | 4 | "Just my imagination running wild." | | 5 | "More for peace of mind" |
| | ratio | 0.055 | |
| 84.22% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "I hadn’t felt it react" | | 1 | "I killed the engine of" | | 2 | "It wasn’t a terrifying wrongness," | | 3 | "I’d come looking for the" | | 4 | "she’d rasped, her voice smelling" | | 5 | "She'd pressed a tarnished silver" | | 6 | "I pulled the hood of" | | 7 | "It was the oaks that" | | 8 | "I walked, each step crunching" | | 9 | "I was getting closer." | | 10 | "They stood in a rough" | | 11 | "I hesitated at the edge," | | 12 | "I hadn't thought about that" | | 13 | "It felt like it was" | | 14 | "I ignored it, forcing myself" | | 15 | "It was beautiful." | | 16 | "I scanned the perimeter." | | 17 | "It wasn't a malicious feeling," | | 18 | "I whirled around, heart hammering" | | 19 | "My imagination, I told myself." |
| | ratio | 0.339 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 71 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pulsed, a slow," | | 1 | "I hadn’t felt it react" | | 2 | "Richmond Park at midnight wasn’t" | | 3 | "The usual rustle of foxes" | | 4 | "I killed the engine of" | | 5 | "It wasn’t a terrifying wrongness," | | 6 | "I’d come looking for the" | | 7 | "she’d rasped, her voice smelling" | | 8 | "She'd pressed a tarnished silver" | | 9 | "Eva, bless her cynical heart," | | 10 | "This prickling on the back" | | 11 | "I pulled the hood of" | | 12 | "A faint mist clung to" | | 13 | "The park, even in daylight," | | 14 | "Tonight, it felt actively predatory." | | 15 | "The map, sketched on the" | | 16 | "It was the oaks that" | | 17 | "Every cluster of trees seemed" | | 18 | "I walked, each step crunching" | | 19 | "The Heartstone warmed again, a" |
| | ratio | 0.651 | |
| 45.87% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Even from a distance, there" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "They stood in a rough triangle, their branches interwoven to form a canopy that blotted out the already feeble starlight." | | 1 | "The grass was unnaturally green, the wildflowers blooming in riotous colours that shouldn’t have existed this late in the year." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "I said, my voice trembling slightly" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |