Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYBB04CKTSY2J74N83RG02M

Run Details

Duration:
8.9s
Cost:
$0.000354
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon glow of the Raven’s Nest pulsed like a slow heartbeat against the brick facade of Soho, casting jagged shadows across the pavement. Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—stepped inside, her boots crunching on the gravel outside. The air smelled of stale beer and something sharper, like burnt coffee and old paper. She pushed open the door, the hinges groaning, and stepped into the dim light. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar, his back to her, the silver signet ring catching the flicker of the neon. He turned slowly, his hazel eyes sharp with something unreadable. "You’re late." She didn’t flinch. "I was early." A beat of silence. The kind that hung between them like a question. Then Silas set down a glass of whiskey, the amber liquid sloshing. "You look different." Aurora didn’t look away. "You too." The bar was quiet, save for the hum of the fridge and the occasional clink of glasses. Silas leaned against the counter, his limp making the wood creak. "You’re still the same." She exhaled, slow and steady. "And you’re still the same." A flicker of something—discomfort, maybe—crossed his face. "You’re not the same." She turned her wrist, tracing the crescent scar beneath her sleeve. "No." Silas didn’t press. Instead, he reached into the back and pulled out a bottle of something dark and thick. "You want this?" She nodded. He poured, the liquid burning as it slid down her throat. The bar was small, the walls lined with old maps and photographs, their edges frayed. Somewhere in the distance, a piano played a slow, mournful tune. Rory didn’t look up. "You left Cardiff," Silas said, voice low. "After Evan." Aurora’s fingers tightened around her glass. "I had to." Silas didn’t argue. "You came back." She didn’t deny it. "I came back for you." A pause. The kind that carried weight. Then Silas said, "You should’ve stayed." She looked at him then, really looked. The man in front of her wasn’t the same one she’d left behind. His hair was streaked with grey, his beard neat but worn. His eyes held something older, harder. "I couldn’t." Silas didn’t smile. "You could’ve tried harder." The whiskey burned again. Rory set her glass down. "I tried." Silas studied her for a long moment. Then he reached into his pocket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. "This was in my safe when I got here." She took it, the ink smudged at the edges. A letter. Her name scrawled at the top. She unfolded it slowly. The words were familiar, but the handwriting—her mother’s—made them feel foreign. *"Rory, if you’re reading this, I know you’re out there. I’m sorry I couldn’t stop him. I tried. I really did. But he was too strong. I love you."* Aurora’s breath hitched. She looked up at Silas. "You found this?" He didn’t answer right away. The piano stopped. The bar fell silent. Then Silas said, "I’ve been looking for you for years." She didn’t say anything. Just stared at the letter, the weight of it pressing down on her chest. Silas reached across the bar and took her hand. His fingers were rough, calloused. "You were always the one who could see the truth." Aurora pulled her hand back. "I was." Silas didn’t let go. "You should’ve stayed." She looked at him, really looked. The man in front of her wasn’t the same one she’d left behind. His eyes held something older, harder. "I couldn’t." Silas exhaled, slow and tired. "I know." The piano started up again, a slow, mournful melody. The bar was quiet, the air thick with unspoken things. Rory didn’t look away. Silas said, "You’re still the same." She didn’t deny it. "And you’re still the same." He didn’t smile. "You should’ve stayed." She set her glass down. The whiskey was gone. The letter was still in her hand. Silas reached into his pocket again. This time, he pulled out a key. "The safe in my office." She didn’t ask what was inside. She took it. The door to the back room was hidden behind a bookshelf, the wood worn smooth with use. Rory pushed it open, the hinges squeaking. Silas followed, his limp making the floorboards creak. Inside, the safe was open. Inside, a file lay on the desk, its contents scattered across the surface. Aurora picked up a photograph. It was of her, younger, standing in front of a university building. Beside her, a man with dark hair and a smirk. She looked up at Silas. "Evan." Silas didn’t say anything. He just watched her, his expression unreadable. She set the photo down. "I should’ve known." Silas reached for her, his hand closing around her wrist. "You did." She pulled away. "I tried." Silas exhaled, slow and tired. "I know." The piano played on, a slow, mournful melody. The bar was quiet, the air thick with unspoken things. Aurora looked at the file, the weight of it pressing down on her chest. She didn’t know what she was seeing. She didn’t know what she was feeling. Silas said, "You were always the one who could see the truth." She didn’t look at him. "I was." Silas didn’t smile. "You should’ve stayed." She set the file down. The whiskey was gone. The letter was still in her hand. Silas reached into his pocket again. This time, he pulled out a key. "The safe in my office." She didn’t ask what was inside. She took it. The door to the back room was hidden behind a bookshelf, the wood worn smooth with use. Rory pushed it open, the hinges squeaking. Silas followed, his limp making the floorboards creak. Inside, the safe was open. Inside, a file lay on the desk, its contents scattered across the surface. She picked up a letter. It was from her mother, dated years ago. The ink was faded, but the words were clear. *"Rory, if you’re reading this, I know you’re out there. I’m sorry I couldn’t stop him. I tried. I really did. But he was too strong. I love you."* Aurora’s fingers trembled. She looked up at Silas, who watched her with quiet intensity. She set the letter down. "I should’ve known." Silas didn’t speak. He just reached for her, his hand closing around her wrist. "You did." She pulled away, her breath coming fast. "I tried." Silas exhaled, the sound heavy. "I know." The piano stopped. The silence between them was thick, the weight of years pressing down on them both. Aurora looked at the file, the contents of which she didn’t yet understand. She didn’t know what she was seeing. She didn’t know what she was feeling. Silas said, "You were always the one who could see the truth." She didn’t look at him. "I was." He didn’t smile. "You should’ve stayed." She picked up the file, her fingers brushing against the edges of the photographs and letters. The whiskey was gone. The letter was still in her hand. Silas reached into his pocket again, pulling out another key. "The safe in my office." She didn’t ask. She took it. The door to the back room stood open, the hinges groaning. Rory stepped out, the weight of what she’d seen pressing down on her. Silas followed, his hand on her shoulder. She didn’t look at him. She just walked toward the bar, the key in her pocket. Silas didn’t follow. He just watched her go, the weight of the past pressing down on him too. The piano played on, a slow, mournful melody. The bar was quiet, the air thick with unspoken things. Aurora sat at the bar, her back to Silas. She didn’t look at him. She just stared at the whiskey in front of her. Silas set down his own glass. "You should’ve stayed." She didn’t answer. She just looked at the letter in her hand, the weight of it pressing down on her chest. Silas reached across the bar and took her hand. His fingers were rough, calloused. "You were always the one who could see the truth." Aurora pulled her hand back. "I was." Silas exhaled, slow and tired. "I know." The door to the bar opened, the hinges creaking. A woman stepped inside, her dark hair pulled into a tight bun. She looked at Silas, then at Rory. Silas didn’t look away. "This is Eva." Aurora didn’t smile. "Eva." Eva’s eyes flicked to Rory’s wrist, the crescent scar catching the light. "You look different." Rory didn’t look up. "I am." Eva studied her for a long moment. Then she said, "You should’ve stayed." Rory didn’t answer. She just looked at the whiskey in front of her. Silas reached into his pocket again, pulling out a file. "I found this in my safe." Eva took it, her fingers brushing against the edges of the photographs and letters. She looked up at Rory. "You were always the one who could see the truth." Rory didn’t look at her. She just stared at the whiskey, the weight of it pressing down on her chest. Silas exhaled, slow and tired. "You should’ve stayed." Eva set the file down. The piano stopped. The silence between them was thick, the weight of years pressing down on them all. Aurora stood, her back to the bar. She didn’t look at anyone. She just walked toward the door, the key in her pocket. Silas didn’t follow. He just watched her go, the weight of the past pressing down on him too. The door closed behind her. The bar fell silent, the air thick with unspoken things. Silas leaned against the bar, his hand resting on the file in front of him. He exhaled, slow and tired. Eva sat down at the bar, her eyes on the file. "You should’ve stayed." Silas didn’t look at her. He just watched the door, the weight of the past pressing down on him. The piano played on, a slow, mournful melody. The bar was quiet, the air thick with unspoken things. Silas reached into his pocket, pulling out another key. He set it down on the bar, the weight of it pressing down on him. Eva looked at him, her eyes unreadable. "You were always the one who could see the truth." Silas exhaled, slow and tired. "I know." The door to the bar opened again, the hinges creaking. A man stepped inside, his dark hair slicked back. He looked at Silas, then at Eva. Silas didn’t look away. "This is Brendan." Eva didn’t smile. "Brendan." Brendan studied Silas for a long moment. Then he said, "You should’ve stayed." Silas exhaled, slow and tired. "I know." The door closed behind them. The bar fell silent, the air thick with unspoken things. Silas leaned against the bar, his hand resting on the file in front of him. He exhaled, slow and tired. The piano stopped. The silence was complete.
created_at"2026-02-20T20:19:55.671Z" 2/20/2026, 8:19:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1823
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"really"
count4
highlights
0"slowly"
1"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1823
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"facade"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count2
3
word"unreadable"
count3
4
word"silence"
count4
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"weight"
count12
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"unspoken"
count6
9
word"trembled"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"facade"
2"flicker"
3"unreadable"
4"silence"
5"tracing"
6"weight"
7"familiar"
8"unspoken"
9"trembled"
10"intensity"
11"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences203
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences203
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences263
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords58
totalWords1818
ratio0.032
matches
0"\"Rory, if you’re reading this, I know you’re out there. I’m sorry I couldn’t stop him. I tried. I really did. But he was too strong. I love you.\""
1"\"Rory, if you’re reading this, I know you’re out there. I’m sorry I couldn’t stop him. I tried. I really did. But he was too strong. I love you.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions89
wordCount1520
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.29
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Rory13
Blackwood1
Silas50
Aurora13
Eva8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Blackwood"
4"Silas"
5"Aurora"
6"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1818
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences263
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs114
mean15.95
std9.88
cv0.62
sampleLengths
068
132
26
328
46
532
610
711
812
922
102
1141
129
139
146
159
1613
1739
187
1911
2030
2117
2215
2329
2411
2512
2610
2718
2824
297
307
3127
327
3323
346
359
366
3716
3818
399
4032
4118
4227
436
4411
458
4612
475
487
4918
94.89% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences203
matches
0"was streaked"
1"was gone"
2"was hidden"
3"was gone"
4"was hidden"
5"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs277
matches
0"was seeing"
1"was feeling"
2"was seeing"
3"was feeling"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences263
ratio0.011
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who knew her—stepped inside, her boots crunching on the gravel outside."
1"A flicker of something—discomfort, maybe—crossed his face."
2"The words were familiar, but the handwriting—her mother’s—made them feel foreign."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1525
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount54
adverbRatio0.03540983606557377
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.002622950819672131
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences263
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences263
mean6.91
std4.62
cv0.668
sampleLengths
024
115
215
314
420
510
62
73
83
94
109
1112
123
134
142
1517
1611
174
185
195
207
214
2211
231
243
2516
263
272
2811
2915
3011
314
327
332
346
353
363
373
384
395
402
415
426
437
4413
4511
466
472
483
494
39.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats28
diversityRatio0.09505703422053231
totalSentences263
uniqueOpeners25
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences197
matches
0"Then Silas set down a"
1"Instead, he reached into the"
2"Somewhere in the distance, a"
3"Then Silas said,"
4"Then he reached into his"
5"Then Silas said,"
6"Just stared at the letter,"
7"Then she said,"
8"Then he said,"
ratio0.046
81.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount68
totalSentences197
matches
0"She pushed open the door,"
1"He turned slowly, his hazel"
2"She didn’t flinch."
3"She exhaled, slow and steady."
4"She turned her wrist, tracing"
5"He poured, the liquid burning"
6"She didn’t deny it."
7"She looked at him then,"
8"His hair was streaked with"
9"His eyes held something older,"
10"She took it, the ink"
11"Her name scrawled at the"
12"She unfolded it slowly."
13"She looked up at Silas."
14"He didn’t answer right away."
15"She didn’t say anything."
16"His fingers were rough, calloused."
17"She looked at him, really"
18"His eyes held something older,"
19"She didn’t deny it."
ratio0.345
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount183
totalSentences197
matches
0"The neon glow of the"
1"Aurora Carter—Rory, to those who"
2"The air smelled of stale"
3"She pushed open the door,"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"He turned slowly, his hazel"
6"She didn’t flinch."
7"A beat of silence."
8"The kind that hung between"
9"Aurora didn’t look away."
10"The bar was quiet, save"
11"Silas leaned against the counter,"
12"She exhaled, slow and steady."
13"A flicker of something—discomfort, maybe—crossed"
14"She turned her wrist, tracing"
15"Silas didn’t press."
16"He poured, the liquid burning"
17"The bar was small, the"
18"Rory didn’t look up."
19"Silas said, voice low"
ratio0.929
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences197
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Silas said, voice low"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.2989%