Run: 2026-02-20-01KHYBBBM79F4EG9VFBT5YQ0MF

Run Details

Duration:
21.2s
Cost:
$0.000181
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air tasted like wet concrete and something else, something acrid and faintly floral—like bruised lilies. Detective Harlow Quinn knelt beside the body, the slickness of the grime seeping into the knees of her trousers. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden was a mausoleum of forgotten journeys, and now, apparently, a morgue for the inconveniently dead. The victim, a man named Silas Blackwood, lay sprawled across a section of rusted track, a single, elegant dagger protruding from his chest. It wasn't the brutality of the killing that bothered Quinn; it was the *absence* of it. The wound was precise, almost surgical, lacking the raggedness of a panicked struggle. Blackwood’s expensive suit was immaculate, his pockets filled with crisp banknotes—a man who meticulously cultivated an image of wealth and control. Yet, he was utterly, chillingly still. “Anything, Quinn?” Eva Kowalski asked, her voice a nervous tremor. She stood a few feet away, perched on an overturned crate, her round glasses reflecting the flickering lamplight. Her satchel, overflowing with books on ancient runes and forgotten languages, seemed ridiculously out of place in this subterranean decay. Eva tucked a stray curl behind her left ear, a habit Quinn had come to recognize as a sign of deep unease. “Too clean,” Quinn said, her brown eyes scanning the immediate vicinity. “No signs of a struggle, no discarded weapons, no footprints beyond Blackwood’s. The lighting’s poor, but I’ve seen more chaotic crime scenes after a brawl.” She gestured to a discarded bone – small and bleached white – lying near Blackwood’s hand. “The entry requirement for the Veil Market. He paid his way in, whatever that meant.” “The Market?” Eva’s voice was barely a whisper. “You think…?” “I think the usual collection of shadowy dealings extended beyond trinkets and obscure ingredients,” Quinn replied, her voice clipped. She reached for her watch – a worn leather piece that had seen a good deal more action than she cared to admit – checking the time. “Constable Davies is running forensics, but I doubt they’ll find much useful here. This place is saturated with residual energy. It washes everything clean.” Davies, a young officer clearly rattled by the scene, hurried over. “Detective, the forensics team are… baffled. No fingerprints, no DNA. Just… this.” He pointed to a faint, shimmering residue clinging to the dagger’s hilt. “It’s reacting oddly to the light. Almost…pushed back.” Quinn took the dagger, turning it over in her gloved hands. The patina of verdigris was unusually pronounced, almost velvety. “Shade work,” she murmured, the words tasting like ash in her mouth. Shade artisans were renowned for their meticulous craftsmanship and their detachment from the mortal world. They didn't leave traces, didn't make mistakes. “You think it was a Shade?” Eva asked, her eyes wide with a mixture of fear and fascination. “But why?” “Blackwood wasn’t just a collector of oddities,” Quinn said, her gaze drifting to a small, intricately carved box resting on a nearby crate. It was open, revealing a collection of polished stones and a single, tarnished Veil Compass. “He was a buyer. A significant buyer. He dealt with the things that shouldn't be bought.” She carefully picked up the Veil Compass, its brass casing cool against her palm. The face was etched with protective sigils, swirling patterns that seemed to shift slightly in the dim light. The needle, a slender strand of silver, pointed directly at the wall—a section of crumbling concrete covered in a strange, phosphorescent moss. “This compass,” Quinn said, her voice low, “doesn’t point to locations. It points to rifts. To tears in reality.” “A rift?” Eva repeated, her freckled face pale. “But that’s…legendary. Considered folklore.” “Legends often have roots in something real,” Quinn said, her gaze fixed on the moss-covered wall. She felt a prickling sensation on her skin, a subtle shift in the ambient energy. The air thrummed with a low, almost inaudible frequency. "And Blackwood wasn't just looking at them. He was *using* them.” Davies cleared his throat nervously. “Detective, with all due respect, aren’t you jumping to conclusions?” “I’m observing,” Quinn corrected, her voice sharp. “I’m noticing that the moss isn’t native to this station. It’s…older. Much older. And the energy signature it’s emitting isn’t consistent with any known earthly phenomenon.” She brought the compass closer to the wall, the needle spinning wildly, then settling with a decisive click. The moss pulsed with a brighter, ethereal glow. “The Market shifts locations,” Eva said, her voice gaining a sliver of conviction. “It moves with the full moon. Blackwood likely used this compass to track a rift, to find a specific point of entry.” “And he found it,” Quinn confirmed, stepping closer to the wall. “He didn't just stumble upon it. Someone led him here. Someone who knew the Market’s movements, the shifting of realities.” She ran a hand over the mossy surface. "There’s a trace. A very faint one, but it's there. Something… ritualistic.” Suddenly, a cold gust of air swept through the station, extinguishing one of the lamps. The remaining light flickered, casting long, distorted shadows. A voice, barely audible, echoed through the darkness. “He knew too much.” Quinn spun around, her hand instinctively reaching for the holster beneath her coat. “Who’s there?” A figure emerged from the shadows, tall and slender, clad in a dark, flowing robe. It was a Shade, its face obscured by a deep cowl. The individual held a small, intricately carved bone staff, topped with a pulsating shard of obsidian. “Detective Quinn,” the Shade said, its voice smooth and devoid of emotion. “You’ve been a persistent thorn. Silas Blackwood’s curiosity proved… detrimental.” “You killed him,” Quinn stated, her hand remaining on her weapon. “I facilitated his departure,” the Shade corrected. “The rift required a sacrifice. A conduit. He provided it willingly. He sought knowledge, and knowledge demands a price.” “The Veil Compass,” Quinn said, holding up the device. "It points to the rift. You used it to bring him here.” The Shade ignored her. "The Market operates on a different logic, Detective. A logic beyond your comprehension. You cling to your rules, your evidence, your mortal interpretations. But here, beneath the veil, those concepts hold no sway." “I understand that you're hiding something,” Quinn pressed, her gaze unwavering, her military precision honed by years of experience. “Tell me where you’re taking him.” “He’s… transitioned,” the Shade replied, a flicker of something unreadable crossing its face. “His essence has been absorbed into the flow. He is no longer an individual, but a part of the weave. A necessary component of a delicate balance.” “A convenient way to dispose of a liability,” Quinn said, her voice tight with suppressed anger. The Shade tilted its head, a subtle gesture that conveyed a chilling lack of surprise. “Perhaps. Or perhaps it was simply the correct course of action.” As the Shade began to recede back into the shadows, Quinn noticed something – a minute detail she’d initially missed. A tiny, almost invisible smear of silver residue on the Shade’s robe, identical to the material of the Veil Compass’s needle. And then, a wave of understanding washed over her, cold and stark. It wasn’t just the Shade who’d used the compass. It was Eva. Her eyes snapped to her friend, who was staring at the wall, her breath coming in shallow gasps. The frantic tucking of her hair behind her left ear was more pronounced now, a clear sign of her terror. Eva was not just a researcher; she was an active participant. A guardian, perhaps, of the Market's secrets, and a willing accomplice in Blackwood's demise. And Quinn realized, with a sickening certainty, that this case wasn’t about a single crime. It was about a network, a conspiracy, and a friend who might well be the most dangerous element of all.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.523
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"nervously"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
3"nervously"
4"very"
5"suddenly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Blackwood"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1296
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"unwavering"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"chaotic"
2"whisper"
3"etched"
4"pulsed"
5"flickered"
6"echoed"
7"unwavering"
8"flicker"
9"unreadable"
10"chilling"
11"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch –"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1298
ratio0.002
matches
0"absence"
1"using"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount869
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Shade"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn18
Tube1
Camden1
Silas1
Blackwood4
Kowalski1
Eva8
Shade10
Veil3
Compass3
Suddenly1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Silas"
3"Blackwood"
4"Kowalski"
5"Eva"
6"Shade"
7"Compass"
8"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0.464
windowScore0.167
29.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like wet concrete and something el"
1"neys, and now, apparently, a morgue for the i"
2"patterns that seemed to shift slightly in the dim light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1298
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean39.33
std22.96
cv0.584
sampleLengths
056
179
270
367
410
570
643
754
820
954
1054
1119
1212
1351
1415
1559
1635
1751
1831
194
2015
2142
2222
2311
2426
2521
2637
2725
2840
2916
3026
3165
3298
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs135
matches
0"was staring"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences89
ratio0.09
matches
0"The air tasted like wet concrete and something else, something acrid and faintly floral—like bruised lilies."
1"It wasn't the brutality of the killing that bothered Quinn; it was the *absence* of it."
2"Blackwood’s expensive suit was immaculate, his pockets filled with crisp banknotes—a man who meticulously cultivated an image of wealth and control."
3"“No signs of a struggle, no discarded weapons, no footprints beyond Blackwood’s. The lighting’s poor, but I’ve seen more chaotic crime scenes after a brawl.” She gestured to a discarded bone – small and bleached white – lying near Blackwood’s hand."
4"She reached for her watch – a worn leather piece that had seen a good deal more action than she cared to admit – checking the time."
5"The needle, a slender strand of silver, pointed directly at the wall—a section of crumbling concrete covered in a strange, phosphorescent moss."
6"As the Shade began to recede back into the shadows, Quinn noticed something – a minute detail she’d initially missed."
7"Eva was not just a researcher; she was an active participant."
95.15% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount867
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.04152249134948097
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.02422145328719723
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean14.58
std7.67
cv0.526
sampleLengths
016
119
221
323
416
513
621
76
810
918
1020
1122
1211
1341
1415
158
162
1719
1827
1924
2011
2124
228
2311
249
2512
2615
277
2818
292
3023
3115
3216
3314
3418
3522
3619
378
384
3916
4015
419
4211
435
4410
457
4644
478
4813
4922
46.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.34831460674157305
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners31
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Suddenly, a cold gust of"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences69
matches
0"It wasn't the brutality of"
1"She stood a few feet"
2"Her satchel, overflowing with books"
3"She gestured to a discarded"
4"She reached for her watch"
5"He pointed to a faint,"
6"she murmured, the words tasting"
7"They didn't leave traces, didn't"
8"It was open, revealing a"
9"She carefully picked up the"
10"She felt a prickling sensation"
11"She brought the compass closer"
12"She ran a hand over"
13"It was a Shade, its"
14"It wasn’t just the Shade"
15"It was Eva."
16"Her eyes snapped to her"
17"It was about a network,"
ratio0.261
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences69
matches
0"The air tasted like wet"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn knelt beside"
2"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
3"The victim, a man named"
4"It wasn't the brutality of"
5"The wound was precise, almost"
6"Blackwood’s expensive suit was immaculate,"
7"Eva Kowalski asked, her voice"
8"She stood a few feet"
9"Her satchel, overflowing with books"
10"Eva tucked a stray curl"
11"Quinn said, her brown eyes"
12"She gestured to a discarded"
13"Eva’s voice was barely a"
14"Quinn replied, her voice clipped"
15"She reached for her watch"
16"Davies, a young officer clearly"
17"He pointed to a faint,"
18"Quinn took the dagger, turning"
19"The patina of verdigris was"
ratio0.928
72.46% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Yet, he was utterly, chillingly"
ratio0.014
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She reached for her watch – a worn leather piece that had seen a good deal more action than she cared to admit – checking the time."
1"The face was etched with protective sigils, swirling patterns that seemed to shift slightly in the dim light."
2"Her eyes snapped to her friend, who was staring at the wall, her breath coming in shallow gasps."
3"It was about a network, a conspiracy, and a friend who might well be the most dangerous element of all."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"Eva Kowalski asked, her voice a nervous tremor"
1"Quinn said, her brown eyes scanning the immediate vicinity"
2"Quinn replied, her voice clipped"
3"Eva asked, her eyes wide with a mixture of fear and fascination"
4"Quinn said, her voice low,"
5"Eva repeated, her freckled face pale"
6"Quinn corrected, her voice sharp"
7"She brought, the needle spinning wildly, then settling with a decisive click"
8"Eva said, her voice gaining a sliver of conviction"
9"the Shade said, its voice smooth and devoid of emotion"
10"Quinn stated, her hand remaining on her weapon"
11"the Shade replied, a flicker of something unreadable crossing its face"
12"Quinn said, her voice tight with suppressed anger"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Eva repeated (repeat)"
2"Quinn corrected (correct)"
3"Quinn confirmed (confirm)"
4"Quinn stated (state)"
5"the Shade corrected (correct)"
6"Quinn pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.864
rawRatio0.368
effectiveRatio0.318
71.9521%