Run: 2026-02-22-01KJ35XSPVWXMA96X90DPK2G5Y

Model input

System
You are an expert prose editor. Whenever you're given text, rephrase it using the following instructions: <instructions>Rewrite from third person to first person, from Elena's perspective.</instructions> Imitate and keep the current writing style, and leave mannerisms, word choice and sentence structure intact. Keep the same stylistic writing choices. Use English spelling and grammar. Only return the rephrased text, nothing else.
User/Human
Text to rewrite: <text words="381"> The market square buzzed with the sound of a hundred voices. Elena pushed through the crowd, her satchel clutched against her chest. She knew the merchant would not wait — he never waited for anyone, least of all a girl from the outer ring. "You're late," Gregor said, without looking up from his ledger. He ran a thick finger down a column of numbers and frowned. Elena set the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around." "Not my problem." He unwrapped the cloth and held the crystal up to the light. It caught the sun and threw tiny rainbows across the stall's canvas roof. Gregor's frown deepened. "This isn't what I ordered." She had expected this. The old man always found something to complain about, whether the goods were perfect or not. Elena crossed her arms and stood her ground. "It's exactly what you ordered," she said. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." Gregor turned the crystal slowly, examining every facet. He brought it close to his eye, then held it at arm's length. Elena thought he looked like a jeweler appraising a diamond, though Gregor dealt in stranger things than jewelry. He set the crystal down and sighed. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He reached beneath the counter and produced a small leather pouch. The coins inside clinked as he slid it toward her. Elena scooped up the pouch and weighed it in her palm. It felt light. She loosened the drawstring and counted: eight silver crowns. They had agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," she said flatly. "That was before the bridge fee went up." Gregor smiled — a thin, practiced smile that never reached his eyes. "Take it or leave it." She took it. She always took it. The outer ring didn't offer many choices, and Gregor knew that as well as she did. Elena walked out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hung low over the rooftops, and the shadows stretched long across the cobblestones. She slipped the pouch into her satchel and quickened her pace. If she hurried, she would reach the bridge before dark. </text>

Model response

AI
The market square hums with a hundred voices, and I push through the crowd, my satchel pressed tight against my chest. I know Gregor won’t wait—he never does, least of all for someone like me, from the outer ring. "You’re late," he says without looking up from his ledger, his thick finger tracing a column of numbers before he scowls. I place the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around." "Not my problem." He unwraps the cloth and holds the crystal up to the light, letting the sun’s glow paint tiny rainbows across the stall’s canvas roof. His frown deepens. "This isn’t what I ordered." I expected this. The old man always finds something to gripe about, whether the goods are flawless or not. I cross my arms and stand my ground. "It’s exactly what you ordered," I say. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." Gregor turns the crystal slowly, examining every facet. He brings it close to his eye, then holds it at arm’s length. I picture him like a jeweler inspecting a diamond, though he deals in far stranger things than gems. He sets it down and sighs. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He slides a small leather pouch beneath the counter, and the coins inside clink as he slides it toward me. I lift the pouch, weighing it in my palm—it feels lighter than I expected. I loosen the drawstring and count: eight silver crowns. We’d agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," I say, voice flat. "That was before the bridge fee went up." His smile is thin, practiced, never reaching his eyes. "Take it or leave it." I take it. I always do. The outer ring doesn’t offer many choices, and Gregor knows that as well as I do. I step out into the narrow lanes beyond, the sun low over the rooftops. Shadows stretch long across the cobblestones. I slip the pouch into my satchel and quicken my pace—if I hurry, I’ll reach the bridge before dark.
total_cost0.00004236

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
77.78% Dialogue and other-character pronouns preserved
14/18 anchor points preserved
matched14
total18
details
0
id"dlg-1"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
1
id"dlg-2"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
2
id"dlg-3"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
3
id"dlg-4"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
4
id"dlg-5"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
5
id"dlg-6"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
6
id"dlg-7"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
7
id"dlg-8"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
8
id"dlg-9"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
9
id"dlg-10"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
10
id"greg-1"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
11
id"greg-2"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
12
id"greg-3"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
13
id"greg-4"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
14
id"set-1"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
15
id"set-2"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
16
id"set-3"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
17
id"set-4"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
4.00% POV transformation accuracy
1/25 pronouns/names correctly transformed
neededCleanfalse
matched1
total25
details
0
id"p01"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
1
id"p02"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
2
id"p03"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
3
id"p04"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
4
id"p05"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
5
id"p06"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
6
id"p07"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
7
id"p08"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
8
id"p09"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
9
id"p10"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
10
id"p11"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
11
id"p12"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"me"
difficulty"hard"
12
id"p13"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
13
id"p14"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
14
id"p15"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
15
id"p16"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
16
id"p17"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
17
id"p18"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
18
id"p19"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
difficulty"hard"
19
id"p20"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
20
id"p21"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
21
id"p22"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"my"
expected
0"my"
22
id"p23"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
23
id"p24"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
24
id"p25"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
nameMatched0
nameTotal6
pronounMatched1
pronounTotal19
100.00% No remaining protagonist name in narration
No protagonist name remaining
remaining(empty)
60.5926%