Run: 2026-02-22-01KJ361VTKQFB78XZGY608C264

Model input

System
You are an expert prose editor. Whenever you're given text, rephrase it using the following instructions: <instructions>Rewrite from third person past tense to first person present tense, from Elena's perspective.</instructions> Imitate and keep the current writing style, and leave mannerisms, word choice and sentence structure intact. Keep the same stylistic writing choices. Use English spelling and grammar. Only return the rephrased text, nothing else.
User/Human
Text to rewrite: <text words="381"> The market square buzzed with the sound of a hundred voices. Elena pushed through the crowd, her satchel clutched against her chest. She knew the merchant would not wait — he never waited for anyone, least of all a girl from the outer ring. "You're late," Gregor said, without looking up from his ledger. He ran a thick finger down a column of numbers and frowned. Elena set the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around." "Not my problem." He unwrapped the cloth and held the crystal up to the light. It caught the sun and threw tiny rainbows across the stall's canvas roof. Gregor's frown deepened. "This isn't what I ordered." She had expected this. The old man always found something to complain about, whether the goods were perfect or not. Elena crossed her arms and stood her ground. "It's exactly what you ordered," she said. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." Gregor turned the crystal slowly, examining every facet. He brought it close to his eye, then held it at arm's length. Elena thought he looked like a jeweler appraising a diamond, though Gregor dealt in stranger things than jewelry. He set the crystal down and sighed. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He reached beneath the counter and produced a small leather pouch. The coins inside clinked as he slid it toward her. Elena scooped up the pouch and weighed it in her palm. It felt light. She loosened the drawstring and counted: eight silver crowns. They had agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," she said flatly. "That was before the bridge fee went up." Gregor smiled — a thin, practiced smile that never reached his eyes. "Take it or leave it." She took it. She always took it. The outer ring didn't offer many choices, and Gregor knew that as well as she did. Elena walked out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hung low over the rooftops, and the shadows stretched long across the cobblestones. She slipped the pouch into her satchel and quickened her pace. If she hurried, she would reach the bridge before dark. </text>

Model response

AI
The market square hums with a hundred voices, each overlapping the last. I push through the crowd, my satchel pressed tight against my chest, knowing Gregor won’t wait—I’ve never been the kind of person he waits for, especially not a girl from the outer ring. "You’re late," he says without looking up from his ledger. His thick finger traces a column of numbers, his frown deepening as he studies them. I set the package down on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to go the long way around." "Not my problem," he mutters, unwrapping the cloth to reveal the crystal. It catches the sunlight, scattering rainbows across the canvas roof of his stall. His frown only sharpens. "This isn’t what I ordered." I brace for it. The old man always finds something to gripe about, no matter how perfect the goods. I cross my arms, standing my ground. "It’s exactly what you ordered," I say. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." Gregor turns the crystal slowly, inspecting every facet. He holds it close to his eye, then at arm’s length. I half-expect him to be appraising a diamond, though Gregor deals in far stranger things than jewelry. He sets the crystal down with a sigh. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He reaches beneath the counter and pulls out a small leather pouch. The coins inside clink as he slides it toward me. I scoop it up, weighing it in my palm. It feels lighter than it should. I loosen the drawstring and count: eight silver crowns. We’d agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," I say flatly. "That was before the bridge fee went up," he says, his smile thin and practiced, never quite reaching his eyes. "Take it or leave it." I take it. I always take it. The outer ring doesn’t offer many choices, and Gregor knows that as well as I do. I step out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hangs low over the rooftops, casting long shadows across the cobblestones. I slip the pouch into my satchel and quicken my pace. If I hurry, I’ll reach the bridge before dark.
total_cost0.00010830000000000002

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
71.43% Setting and Gregor references preserved
5/7 anchor points preserved
matched5
total7
details
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43.86% Combined transformation accuracy
25/57 transformations correctly applied
neededCleanfalse
matched25
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7/10 dialogue lines preserved unchanged
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