Run: 2026-02-22-01KJ365GBHB1EDS9MJGR4S01GN

Model input

System
You are an expert prose editor. Whenever you're given text, rephrase it using the following instructions: <instructions>Rewrite from third person to first person, from Elena's perspective.</instructions> Imitate and keep the current writing style, and leave mannerisms, word choice and sentence structure intact. Keep the same stylistic writing choices. Use English spelling and grammar. Only return the rephrased text, nothing else.
User/Human
Text to rewrite: <text words="381"> The market square buzzed with the sound of a hundred voices. Elena pushed through the crowd, her satchel clutched against her chest. She knew the merchant would not wait — he never waited for anyone, least of all a girl from the outer ring. "You're late," Gregor said, without looking up from his ledger. He ran a thick finger down a column of numbers and frowned. Elena set the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around." "Not my problem." He unwrapped the cloth and held the crystal up to the light. It caught the sun and threw tiny rainbows across the stall's canvas roof. Gregor's frown deepened. "This isn't what I ordered." She had expected this. The old man always found something to complain about, whether the goods were perfect or not. Elena crossed her arms and stood her ground. "It's exactly what you ordered," she said. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." Gregor turned the crystal slowly, examining every facet. He brought it close to his eye, then held it at arm's length. Elena thought he looked like a jeweler appraising a diamond, though Gregor dealt in stranger things than jewelry. He set the crystal down and sighed. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He reached beneath the counter and produced a small leather pouch. The coins inside clinked as he slid it toward her. Elena scooped up the pouch and weighed it in her palm. It felt light. She loosened the drawstring and counted: eight silver crowns. They had agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," she said flatly. "That was before the bridge fee went up." Gregor smiled — a thin, practiced smile that never reached his eyes. "Take it or leave it." She took it. She always took it. The outer ring didn't offer many choices, and Gregor knew that as well as she did. Elena walked out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hung low over the rooftops, and the shadows stretched long across the cobblestones. She slipped the pouch into her satchel and quickened her pace. If she hurried, she would reach the bridge before dark. </text>

Model response

AI
The market square hummed with a thousand voices. I pushed through the crowd, my satchel pressed tight against my chest. I knew Gregor wouldn’t wait—he never did, especially not for a girl from the outer ring. "You're late," he said, still not looking up from his ledger. He traced a thick finger down a column of numbers, his brow furrowed. I set the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around." "Not my problem." He peeled back the cloth and held the crystal up to the light, its facets catching the sun and scattering rainbows across the stall’s canvas roof. Gregor’s frown deepened. "This isn’t what I ordered." I’d expected that. The old man always found fault, whether the goods were flawless or not. I crossed my arms, refusing to back down. "It’s exactly what you ordered," I said. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." He turned the crystal slowly, examining every angle. He brought it close to his eye, then held it at arm’s length—like a jeweler testing a diamond, though Gregor dealt in far stranger things. He set it down and exhaled. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He pulled a leather pouch from beneath the counter, and the coins inside jingled as he slid it toward me. I scooped it up and felt the weight in my palm. It was lighter than I’d expected. I loosened the drawstring and counted: eight silver crowns. We’d agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," I said, voice flat. "That was before the bridge fee went up," he said, his smile thin and practiced, never reaching his eyes. "Take it or leave it." I took it. I always did. The outer ring didn’t offer much choice, and Gregor knew that as well as I did. I stepped out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun dipped low over the rooftops, shadows stretching long across the cobblestones. I slipped the pouch into my satchel and hurried. If I moved fast enough, I’d reach the bridge before dark.
total_cost0.00004244

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
38.89% Dialogue and other-character pronouns preserved
7/18 anchor points preserved
matched7
total18
details
0
id"dlg-1"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
1
id"dlg-2"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
2
id"dlg-3"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
3
id"dlg-4"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
4
id"dlg-5"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
5
id"dlg-6"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
6
id"dlg-7"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
7
id"dlg-8"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
8
id"dlg-9"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
9
id"dlg-10"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
10
id"greg-1"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
11
id"greg-2"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
12
id"greg-3"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
13
id"greg-4"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
14
id"set-1"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
15
id"set-2"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
16
id"set-3"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
17
id"set-4"
paragraphFoundfalse
preservedfalse
16.00% POV transformation accuracy
4/25 pronouns/names correctly transformed
neededCleanfalse
matched4
total25
details
0
id"p01"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"I"
expected
0"I"
1
id"p02"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
2
id"p03"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
3
id"p04"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
4
id"p05"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"I"
expected
0"I"
5
id"p06"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
6
id"p07"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"I"
expected
0"I"
7
id"p08"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
8
id"p09"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
9
id"p10"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"I"
expected
0"I"
10
id"p11"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
11
id"p12"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"me"
difficulty"hard"
12
id"p13"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
13
id"p14"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
14
id"p15"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
15
id"p16"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
16
id"p17"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
17
id"p18"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
18
id"p19"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
difficulty"hard"
19
id"p20"
paragraphFoundfalse
correctfalse
expected
0"I"
20
id"p21"
paragraphFoundfalse
correctfalse
expected
0"I"
21
id"p22"
paragraphFoundfalse
correctfalse
expected
0"my"
22
id"p23"
paragraphFoundfalse
correctfalse
expected
0"my"
23
id"p24"
paragraphFoundfalse
correctfalse
expected
0"I"
24
id"p25"
paragraphFoundfalse
correctfalse
expected
0"I"
nameMatched3
nameTotal6
pronounMatched1
pronounTotal19
100.00% No remaining protagonist name in narration
No protagonist name remaining
remaining(empty)
51.6296%