Run: 2026-02-22-01KJ36C0C5KP8H9ZXNMCA0HFVX

Model input

System
You are an expert prose editor. Whenever you're given text, rephrase it using the following instructions: <instructions>Rewrite from third person to first person, from Elena's perspective.</instructions> Imitate and keep the current writing style, and leave mannerisms, word choice and sentence structure intact. Keep the same stylistic writing choices. Use English spelling and grammar. Only return the rephrased text, nothing else.
User/Human
Text to rewrite: <text words="381"> The market square buzzed with the sound of a hundred voices. Elena pushed through the crowd, her satchel clutched against her chest. She knew the merchant would not wait — he never waited for anyone, least of all a girl from the outer ring. "You're late," Gregor said, without looking up from his ledger. He ran a thick finger down a column of numbers and frowned. Elena set the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around." "Not my problem." He unwrapped the cloth and held the crystal up to the light. It caught the sun and threw tiny rainbows across the stall's canvas roof. Gregor's frown deepened. "This isn't what I ordered." She had expected this. The old man always found something to complain about, whether the goods were perfect or not. Elena crossed her arms and stood her ground. "It's exactly what you ordered," she said. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." Gregor turned the crystal slowly, examining every facet. He brought it close to his eye, then held it at arm's length. Elena thought he looked like a jeweler appraising a diamond, though Gregor dealt in stranger things than jewelry. He set the crystal down and sighed. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He reached beneath the counter and produced a small leather pouch. The coins inside clinked as he slid it toward her. Elena scooped up the pouch and weighed it in her palm. It felt light. She loosened the drawstring and counted: eight silver crowns. They had agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," she said flatly. "That was before the bridge fee went up." Gregor smiled — a thin, practiced smile that never reached his eyes. "Take it or leave it." She took it. She always took it. The outer ring didn't offer many choices, and Gregor knew that as well as she did. Elena walked out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hung low over the rooftops, and the shadows stretched long across the cobblestones. She slipped the pouch into her satchel and quickened her pace. If she hurried, she would reach the bridge before dark. </text>

Model response

AI
The market square hummed with a hundred voices, their chatter washing over me as I pushed through the crowd, my satchel clutched tightly to my chest. I knew Gregor wouldn't wait — he never did, especially not for someone like me, a girl from the outer ring. "You're late," Gregor grunted, not bothering to look up from his ledger. His thick finger traced a line down a column of numbers, his frown deepening with each tick. I placed the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around." He waved a dismissive hand. "Not my problem." He unwrapped the cloth, revealing the crystal. It caught the sunlight, casting tiny rainbows across the stall's canvas roof. Gregor's frown grew darker. "This isn't what I ordered." I had anticipated this. The old man always found something to nitpick about, regardless of the quality of the goods. I stood my ground, crossing my arms. "It's exactly what you ordered. Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." Gregor turned the crystal over, examining every angle. He held it close to his eye, then at arm's length, like a jeweler appraising a diamond. Though, Gregor dealt in stranger things than jewelry. He set the crystal down with a sigh. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He reached under the counter and produced a small leather pouch. The coins inside clinked as he slid it towards me. I picked up the pouch, feeling its light weight in my palm. I loosened the drawstring and counted: eight silver crowns. We had agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," I said, my voice flat. "That was before the bridge fee went up." Gregor smiled — a thin, practiced smile that never reached his eyes. "Take it or leave it." I took it. I always did. The outer ring didn't offer many choices, and Gregor knew that as well as I did. I left the market, stepping into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hung low over the rooftops, casting long shadows across the cobblestones. I slipped the pouch into my satchel and quickened my pace. If I hurried, I would reach the bridge before dark.
total_cost0.0001617

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
55.56% Dialogue and other-character pronouns preserved
10/18 anchor points preserved
matched10
total18
details
0
id"dlg-1"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
1
id"dlg-2"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
2
id"dlg-3"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
3
id"dlg-4"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
4
id"dlg-5"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
5
id"dlg-6"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
6
id"dlg-7"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
7
id"dlg-8"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
8
id"dlg-9"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
9
id"dlg-10"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
10
id"greg-1"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
11
id"greg-2"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
12
id"greg-3"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
13
id"greg-4"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
14
id"set-1"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
15
id"set-2"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedfalse
16
id"set-3"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
17
id"set-4"
paragraphFoundtrue
preservedtrue
32.00% POV transformation accuracy
8/25 pronouns/names correctly transformed
neededCleanfalse
matched8
total25
details
0
id"p01"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
1
id"p02"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"my"
expected
0"my"
2
id"p03"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
3
id"p04"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
4
id"p05"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
5
id"p06"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
6
id"p07"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
7
id"p08"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
8
id"p09"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
9
id"p10"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
10
id"p11"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
11
id"p12"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"me"
difficulty"hard"
12
id"p13"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
13
id"p14"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"my"
14
id"p15"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
15
id"p16"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
16
id"p17"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"I"
expected
0"I"
17
id"p18"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
18
id"p19"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"I"
expected
0"I"
difficulty"hard"
19
id"p20"
paragraphFoundtrue
correctfalse
originalPresentfalse
expected
0"I"
20
id"p21"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"I"
expected
0"I"
21
id"p22"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"my"
expected
0"my"
22
id"p23"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"my"
expected
0"my"
23
id"p24"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"I"
expected
0"I"
24
id"p25"
paragraphFoundtrue
correcttrue
matched"I"
expected
0"I"
nameMatched0
nameTotal6
pronounMatched8
pronounTotal19
100.00% No remaining protagonist name in narration
No protagonist name remaining
remaining(empty)
62.5185%