Run: 2026-02-22-01KJ36DABF8WVXPYZFF27J8HYR

Model input

System
You are an expert prose editor. Whenever you're given text, rephrase it using the following instructions: <instructions>Rewrite from third person past tense to first person present tense, from Elena's perspective.</instructions> Imitate and keep the current writing style, and leave mannerisms, word choice and sentence structure intact. Keep the same stylistic writing choices. Use English spelling and grammar. Only return the rephrased text, nothing else.
User/Human
Text to rewrite: <text words="381"> The market square buzzed with the sound of a hundred voices. Elena pushed through the crowd, her satchel clutched against her chest. She knew the merchant would not wait — he never waited for anyone, least of all a girl from the outer ring. "You're late," Gregor said, without looking up from his ledger. He ran a thick finger down a column of numbers and frowned. Elena set the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around." "Not my problem." He unwrapped the cloth and held the crystal up to the light. It caught the sun and threw tiny rainbows across the stall's canvas roof. Gregor's frown deepened. "This isn't what I ordered." She had expected this. The old man always found something to complain about, whether the goods were perfect or not. Elena crossed her arms and stood her ground. "It's exactly what you ordered," she said. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." Gregor turned the crystal slowly, examining every facet. He brought it close to his eye, then held it at arm's length. Elena thought he looked like a jeweler appraising a diamond, though Gregor dealt in stranger things than jewelry. He set the crystal down and sighed. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He reached beneath the counter and produced a small leather pouch. The coins inside clinked as he slid it toward her. Elena scooped up the pouch and weighed it in her palm. It felt light. She loosened the drawstring and counted: eight silver crowns. They had agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," she said flatly. "That was before the bridge fee went up." Gregor smiled — a thin, practiced smile that never reached his eyes. "Take it or leave it." She took it. She always took it. The outer ring didn't offer many choices, and Gregor knew that as well as she did. Elena walked out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hung low over the rooftops, and the shadows stretched long across the cobblestones. She slipped the pouch into her satchel and quickened her pace. If she hurried, she would reach the bridge before dark. </text>

Model response

AI
The market square hums with a hundred voices, and I push through the crowd, my satchel pressed against my chest. I know Gregor won’t wait—he never does, least of all for someone like me, a girl from the outer ring. "You’re late," he says, not even glancing up from his ledger. He traces a thick finger down a column of numbers, his brow furrowed. I set the package on the counter. "The bridge was out. I had to take the long way around." "Not my problem." He unwraps the cloth and holds the crystal up to the light. It catches the sun, splintering light into rainbows across the stall’s canvas roof. His frown deepens. "This isn’t what I ordered." I expected this. The old man always finds something to gripe about, whether the goods are perfect or not. I cross my arms and stand firm. "It’s exactly what you ordered," I say. "Blue quartz, uncut, from the northern mines. I watched them pull it from the rock myself." Gregor turns the crystal slowly, examining every facet. He brings it close to his eye, then holds it at arm’s length. I imagine him like a jeweler appraising a diamond, though Gregor deals in far stranger things than stones. He sets it down and sighs. "Fine. But next time, wrap it properly. The edges are exposed." He digs beneath the counter and produces a small leather pouch. The coins inside clink as he slides it toward me. I pick it up, weighing it in my palm. It feels light. I loosen the drawstring and count: eight silver crowns. We’d agreed on ten. "We agreed on ten," I say, my voice flat. "That was before the bridge fee went up." Gregor smirks—a thin, practiced smile that never reaches his eyes. "Take it or leave it." I take it. I always do. The outer ring doesn’t leave many options, and Gregor knows that as well as I do. I step out of the market and into the narrow lanes beyond. The sun hangs low over the rooftops, and shadows stretch long across the cobblestones. I slip the pouch into my satchel and quicken my pace. If I hurry, I’ll reach the bridge before dark.
total_cost0.00004308

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.71% Setting and Gregor references preserved
6/7 anchor points preserved
matched6
total7
details
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57.89% Combined transformation accuracy
33/57 transformations correctly applied
neededCleanfalse
matched33
total57
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10/10 dialogue lines preserved unchanged
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