Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8TKBSEGRQXFEEJGVFBPWX5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 15s
Cost:
$0.075565
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hit the pavement in sheets, turning Chalk Farm Road into a river of reflected neon and brake lights. Quinn's boots slapped through a puddle that swallowed her ankle, cold water flooding the leather, but she didn't slow down. Thirty meters ahead, the man in the dark jacket cut left between a kebab shop and a shuttered tattoo parlour, his silhouette there and gone in the strobe of a passing bus. She keyed her radio. Nothing but static. Had been nothing but static since Camden High Street. Quinn wiped rain from her eyes with the back of her hand and pushed harder, her lungs burning with each breath of wet London air. Eighteen years on the force and she could still run a seven-minute mile when the situation demanded it. The situation demanded it. Tomás Herrera had bolted the moment she'd stepped into The Raven's Nest, knocked a table of drinks into her path, and vanished through a fire exit before she could get the cuffs free from her belt. Innocent men didn't run. Not like that. Not with that kind of practiced speed. She rounded the corner into the alley. Brick walls rose on both sides, slick with rain, plastered with peeling gig posters and tags she couldn't read. A fire escape ladder hung overhead, its lowest rung six feet off the ground. She checked it—no water dripping from disturbed rungs, no wet handprints on the metal. He hadn't gone up. Deeper into the alley, then. Past overflowing bins and a stack of sodden cardboard boxes. The passage narrowed and doglegged right, then opened into a service yard behind a row of Camden shops. Quinn slowed, pressing her back against the wall, scanning the yard. Loading dock. Two skips. A white transit van with flat tyres. Movement. Far corner. A shape dropping through what looked like a hole in the ground—legs disappearing, then nothing. She sprinted across the yard, rain hammering her shoulders, and found a rusted metal hatch set into the concrete, propped open with a brick. Stone steps descended into darkness. The smell that rose from below hit her like a wall: incense, copper, something chemical she couldn't name. And beneath all of it, the ancient damp of deep underground spaces. She peered down the steps. Dim light somewhere at the bottom, amber and flickering. The sound of voices, muffled by stone, carried up like echoes from a well. Quinn pulled her phone from her jacket pocket. No signal. The screen showed 11:47 PM and a battery at thirty-one percent. She switched on the torch function and aimed it down the stairwell. The steps were old—Victorian, she guessed, worn smooth in the centre from decades of foot traffic. This was Tube infrastructure. Abandoned Tube infrastructure. She knew the stories. Everyone in Camden CID knew the stories about the market that moved locations every full moon, the one the informants whispered about but could never pin down. Fairy tales, she'd always thought. Useful fiction that drug dealers and fences hid behind to make themselves seem more interesting than they were. The steps waited. Quinn glanced back across the service yard. Rain fell straight down, no wind now, just the relentless vertical pour. She could radio for backup from the street. Could flag a patrol car. Could go back to the station, write up what she had, and try to pick up Herrera at his flat in the morning. She thought about DS Morris. Three years dead. The case file still open on her desk at home, not the official one—that had been closed, stamped with "accidental death during pursuit," sealed and shelved. Her own file. The one with the photographs no one else had seen. The wounds that didn't match any weapon in the forensic database. The look frozen on Morris's face that she saw every time she closed her eyes. Herrera had been there that night. His name sat in the margins of the case like a ghost. Not a suspect. Not a witness. A paramedic who'd responded to the call and whose report contained exactly nothing useful. She'd read it forty times. Quinn pulled her jacket tighter, felt the weight of her warrant card in the inside pocket and the reassuring press of her extendable baton against her hip. No firearm. This was London. She had a torch, a baton, and the authority of the Metropolitan Police, for whatever that was worth underground. She went down. The steps turned twice, a tight spiral that her torch barely illuminated one revolution at a time. The walls changed from Victorian brick to something older—rough-hewn stone blocks fitted without mortar, sweating moisture. The voices grew louder. She caught fragments: laughter, the clink of glass, someone haggling in a language she didn't recognize. At the bottom of the stairs, a short corridor ended in an archway hung with strips of dark fabric. Light leaked around the edges, warm and amber, and shadows moved behind the cloth. Quinn killed her torch and let her eyes adjust. She pushed through the fabric with one hand and stepped into the Veil Market. The space opened before her like a cathedral turned sideways. The old platform of the abandoned station stretched in both directions, its tiled walls still bearing the faded roundel of the Underground, though someone had painted over the station name with symbols she didn't recognize. Stalls lined both sides—wooden tables, canvas awnings, makeshift shelving units crammed with bottles and boxes and things that caught the lamplight in ways that seemed wrong. Oil lamps and strings of mismatched bulbs provided the amber glow she'd seen from above. Dozens of people moved between the stalls, browsing, bargaining, carrying packages wrapped in cloth and paper. Quinn stood very still. She scanned the crowd for Herrera's dark jacket, his curly hair. There—forty meters along the platform, moving with purpose toward a cluster of stalls draped in deep red fabric. He wasn't running anymore. He walked with the ease of someone who belonged here, nodding to a vendor, sidestepping a woman carrying a crate of glass vials that clinked with every step. Nobody had noticed Quinn yet. Or if they had, they hadn't reacted. She was wearing plain clothes—dark trousers, a rain-soaked grey jacket, boots that could pass for civilian. Nothing that screamed police. She smoothed her salt-and-pepper hair flat against her skull and stepped forward, keeping to the edge of the crowd, using the stalls as cover. The goods on display made her slow despite herself. One table held rows of small bones arranged in patterns on black velvet. Another displayed jars of liquid in colours she'd never seen outside a chemical lab—vivid, shifting, alive. A man behind a table of old books watched her pass with eyes that reflected the lamplight like a cat's and she looked away, kept moving. The smell was thicker down here. Incense, yes, but also herbs she couldn't identify, something metallic and bright, and an undercurrent of ozone as though lightning had just struck nearby. The air itself felt heavy, charged, pressing against her skin. She closed the distance. Twenty meters. Herrera had stopped at one of the red-draped stalls and was leaning across the table, speaking in low, rapid Spanish to someone Quinn couldn't see behind a curtain of hanging charms. His left hand rested on the table, and even from this distance she could make out the scar that ran the length of his forearm—the one from his file. Knife attack, 2019, circumstances unclear. The Saint Christopher medallion at his throat caught a glint of lamplight as he turned his head. Quinn drifted closer. Fifteen meters. She positioned herself behind a stall selling what appeared to be antique maps—hand-drawn, depicting coastlines and cities she couldn't place—and watched. Herrera received something from behind the curtain. Small, wrapped in dark cloth. He tucked it into his jacket with a practiced motion and turned. His eyes found hers across the crowded platform. For a full second, neither of them moved. The market noise continued around them—the haggling, the laughter, the clink and murmur of commerce—but between Quinn and Herrera, the air went rigid. She watched his expression cycle through recognition, surprise, and something harder to read. Not fear. Something closer to resignation, or pity. He shook his head. A small, definite gesture. Go back. Quinn stepped out from behind the map stall. She squared her shoulders, planted her feet, and held up her warrant card. "Tomás Herrera." The market didn't go silent. It went absent. Conversations didn't trail off—they stopped, mid-syllable, as though someone had pressed a mute button on the entire platform. Every face turned toward her. Every pair of eyes—and some of those eyes were wrong, shaped wrong, coloured wrong, lit from within—fixed on the small leather wallet in her raised hand. "Metropolitan Police. I need to speak with you." Her voice carried in the sudden silence, bouncing off the tiled walls, the vaulted ceiling. It sounded thin down here. Insufficient. Herrera moved first. He walked toward her, hands visible, palms out, the universal gesture of no threat. But his face carried something urgent, a tension in his olive skin that pulled his features tight. "Put that away." His accent was soft, Andalusian vowels rounded by years in London. "Right now. Put it away." "You ran from me, Herrera. From a lawful attempt to—" "I ran to keep you out of here." He was close now, close enough that she could see the rain still beaded on his jacket, the rapid pulse at his throat. "You don't understand what you've done." Quinn held the warrant card steady. "I understand you're connected to an open investigation. I understand you fled a police officer. And I understand that whatever this place is, it doesn't operate outside the law." Herrera's mouth pressed into a line. He glanced over his shoulder. The vendors and customers hadn't resumed their business. They watched, dozens of them, in that unified stillness that made Quinn's skin prickle. Some had moved closer. She couldn't tell when, or how—they simply occupied space they hadn't occupied seconds ago. "The law." Herrera's voice dropped to barely above a breath. His brown eyes held hers with an intensity that burned through the bravado she was projecting like armour. "Detective Quinn. The law has no weight here. The only thing keeping you alive right now is that they don't know if you came alone." The worn leather of her watch strap was damp against her wrist. She felt her pulse against it, fast and steady. She didn't lower the warrant card. "Did you come alone?" Herrera asked. The silence pressed in. The wrong-shaped eyes watched. Somewhere deeper in the market, in the old tunnel beyond the platform, something scraped against stone with a sound like a whisper made physical. Quinn's fingers tightened on the leather wallet. She thought of Morris. The wounds that didn't match. The report Herrera had written that said nothing at all. "Yes," she said. Herrera closed his eyes. When he opened them, he reached out and gently, firmly, folded her fingers over the warrant card and pushed her hand down to her side. "Then stay close to me. Don't speak to anyone. Don't look at anything for longer than a second. And whatever happens in the next ten minutes, do not reach for that baton." He turned and walked deeper into the market. The crowd parted for him like water around a stone, then began—slowly, reluctantly—to resume its murmur and motion, though Quinn felt the attention cling to her like oil on wet skin. She followed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1951
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
3"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1951
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"echoes"
count1
2
word"database"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"echoes"
2"database"
3"weight"
4"scanned"
5"velvet"
6"charged"
7"glint"
8"silence"
9"tension"
10"pulse"
11"intensity"
12"whisper"
13"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences162
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences162
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences170
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1929
ratio0
matches(empty)
97.22% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The steps were old—Victorian, she guessed, worn smooth in the centre from decades of foot traffic."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1790
uniqueNames23
maxNameDensity0.95
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Chalk1
Farm1
Road1
Camden3
High1
Street1
London3
Herrera13
Raven1
Nest1
Victorian2
Tube2
Morris3
Metropolitan1
Police1
Veil1
Market1
Underground1
Quinn17
Spanish1
Saint1
Christopher1
Andalusian1
persons
0"Herrera"
1"Nest"
2"Morris"
3"Quinn"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
places
0"Chalk"
1"Farm"
2"Road"
3"Camden"
4"High"
5"Street"
6"London"
7"Raven"
8"Victorian"
9"Veil"
10"Market"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a hole in the ground—legs dis"
1"seemed wrong"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1929
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences170
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean39.37
std25.49
cv0.648
sampleLengths
072
116
297
358
455
577
628
756
854
93
1055
1173
1243
1351
143
1553
1656
17102
1865
1956
2064
2140
2288
2326
2424
258
2652
2710
2821
292
3057
318
3221
3334
3419
3510
3637
3735
3851
3953
4027
416
4232
4326
443
4529
4632
4739
482
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences162
matches
0"been closed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs291
matches
0"wasn't running"
1"was wearing"
2"was projecting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount22
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences16
totalSentences170
ratio0.094
matches
0"She checked it—no water dripping from disturbed rungs, no wet handprints on the metal."
1"A shape dropping through what looked like a hole in the ground—legs disappearing, then nothing."
2"The steps were old—Victorian, she guessed, worn smooth in the centre from decades of foot traffic."
3"The case file still open on her desk at home, not the official one—that had been closed, stamped with \"accidental death during pursuit,\" sealed and shelved."
4"The walls changed from Victorian brick to something older—rough-hewn stone blocks fitted without mortar, sweating moisture."
5"Stalls lined both sides—wooden tables, canvas awnings, makeshift shelving units crammed with bottles and boxes and things that caught the lamplight in ways that seemed wrong."
6"There—forty meters along the platform, moving with purpose toward a cluster of stalls draped in deep red fabric."
7"She was wearing plain clothes—dark trousers, a rain-soaked grey jacket, boots that could pass for civilian."
8"Another displayed jars of liquid in colours she'd never seen outside a chemical lab—vivid, shifting, alive."
9"His left hand rested on the table, and even from this distance she could make out the scar that ran the length of his forearm—the one from his file."
10"She positioned herself behind a stall selling what appeared to be antique maps—hand-drawn, depicting coastlines and cities she couldn't place—and watched."
11"The market noise continued around them—the haggling, the laughter, the clink and murmur of commerce—but between Quinn and Herrera, the air went rigid."
12"Conversations didn't trail off—they stopped, mid-syllable, as though someone had pressed a mute button on the entire platform."
13"Every pair of eyes—and some of those eyes were wrong, shaped wrong, coloured wrong, lit from within—fixed on the small leather wallet in her raised hand."
14"She couldn't tell when, or how—they simply occupied space they hadn't occupied seconds ago."
15"The crowd parted for him like water around a stone, then began—slowly, reluctantly—to resume its murmur and motion, though Quinn felt the attention cling to her like oil on wet skin."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1820
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, charged, pressing against her"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.01978021978021978
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.004945054945054945
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences170
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences170
mean11.35
std8.49
cv0.748
sampleLengths
020
120
232
34
43
59
625
718
84
936
104
113
127
137
1419
1514
1614
174
185
1910
2018
2111
222
232
247
251
262
2715
2824
295
3018
3112
325
339
3414
358
362
3711
3812
3916
404
413
424
4327
445
4518
463
477
4812
498
60.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.4117647058823529
totalSentences170
uniqueOpeners70
22.52% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences148
matches
0"Somewhere deeper in the market,"
ratio0.007
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences148
matches
0"She keyed her radio."
1"She rounded the corner into"
2"She checked it—no water dripping"
3"He hadn't gone up."
4"She sprinted across the yard,"
5"She peered down the steps."
6"She switched on the torch"
7"She knew the stories."
8"She could radio for backup"
9"She thought about DS Morris."
10"Her own file."
11"His name sat in the"
12"She'd read it forty times."
13"She had a torch, a"
14"She went down."
15"She caught fragments: laughter, the"
16"She pushed through the fabric"
17"She scanned the crowd for"
18"He wasn't running anymore."
19"He walked with the ease"
ratio0.297
44.46% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount123
totalSentences148
matches
0"The rain hit the pavement"
1"Quinn's boots slapped through a"
2"She keyed her radio."
3"Nothing but static."
4"Quinn wiped rain from her"
5"The situation demanded it."
6"Tomás Herrera had bolted the"
7"Innocent men didn't run."
8"She rounded the corner into"
9"Brick walls rose on both"
10"A fire escape ladder hung"
11"She checked it—no water dripping"
12"He hadn't gone up."
13"The passage narrowed and doglegged"
14"Quinn slowed, pressing her back"
15"A white transit van with"
16"A shape dropping through what"
17"She sprinted across the yard,"
18"Stone steps descended into darkness."
19"The smell that rose from"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
ratio0
54.79% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Everyone in Camden CID knew the stories about the market that moved locations every full moon, the one the informants whispered about but could never pin down."
1"Stalls lined both sides—wooden tables, canvas awnings, makeshift shelving units crammed with bottles and boxes and things that caught the lamplight in ways that…"
2"He walked with the ease of someone who belonged here, nodding to a vendor, sidestepping a woman carrying a crate of glass vials that clinked with every step."
3"She was wearing plain clothes—dark trousers, a rain-soaked grey jacket, boots that could pass for civilian."
4"A man behind a table of old books watched her pass with eyes that reflected the lamplight like a cat's and she looked away, kept moving."
5"Incense, yes, but also herbs she couldn't identify, something metallic and bright, and an undercurrent of ozone as though lightning had just struck nearby."
6"Conversations didn't trail off—they stopped, mid-syllable, as though someone had pressed a mute button on the entire platform."
7"But his face carried something urgent, a tension in his olive skin that pulled his features tight."
8"They watched, dozens of them, in that unified stillness that made Quinn's skin prickle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.4302%