Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8TKBSMVCDHWF9F1NDTHGBM

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Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.038865
Provider:
Anthropic

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The smell hit Quinn before she reached the bottom of the emergency access stairs — damp concrete and old iron, the mineral rot of a space that hadn't seen proper ventilation in decades, and beneath all of it something else. Something charred and chemical that she couldn't name and didn't like. She ducked under the incident tape and straightened, letting her eyes adjust. The abandoned station had been sealed since 1967, according to the briefing she'd skimmed in the car. It sat beneath the Camden Road junction, swallowed by the Northern line expansion that had rerouted everything and left this particular stretch of tunnel to gather darkness. The platform was still intact — the original green and cream tiles, the ghost of a station name someone had scrubbed to illegibility, the curved ceiling overhead pressing down like the inside of a ribcage. Three of her uniformed officers had set up work lights at intervals along the platform edge, but the light they threw was industrial and cold and seemed somehow reluctant to penetrate the far ends of the space. DC Farrell was waiting for her near the body. He had his notebook out and the particular expression he wore when he thought a case was simpler than it was being made. "Quinn," he said. "Glad you're here. Straightforward, by the look of it." She glanced at him, then past him to the body. The deceased was male, mid-forties, dressed well. Dark overcoat, good shoes. He was lying on his back on the platform tiles with one arm extended toward the track below, as though he'd reached for something in the moment he fell. There was no visible wound that Quinn could see from where she stood, though the forensics team was still working the perimeter and she hadn't yet crouched close. "Straightforward," she repeated, not as agreement. "Cardiac event, most likely. Place is a maze down here — there are two more tunnels feeding off the main platform, both blocked. We think he got lost, panicked, heart gave out. His wallet's on him, nothing taken. Name's on his oyster card, Nils Bergman, registered address in Islington. No criminal record so far." Quinn walked slowly around the body in a wide arc, keeping her hands in her coat pockets. She counted the work lights. She counted the officers. She looked at the tiles near the body, at the edge of the platform, at the far end of the station where the light didn't reach. "Who called it in?" she asked. "Anonymous. Burner phone, no signal trace. Someone who knew enough not to leave a trail." "Someone who was here." "Possibly." She stopped. Crouched. Looked at the dead man's face without touching anything, reading it the way she'd learned to read faces in the field, in the dark, under pressure. Bergman looked surprised. Not afraid — she knew fear on a dead face, the slack jaw and the furrowed brow, the body's final protest. This was different. His expression was open. Almost curious. Cardiac arrest from panic didn't leave you looking curious. She stood and kept moving. Near his right hip, half tucked under the fold of his coat, she saw it. "Farrell. Has this been photographed?" He came over, peered down. "Yeah, we got the full grid before anyone touched anything. That's — some kind of compass, it looks like." Quinn pulled on a glove and lifted it carefully. A small brass compass, no larger than a pocket watch. The casing was warm despite the cold of the station, and the metal had gone green at the seams — not from neglect, she thought, but from age of a particular kind. Real age. The kind that accumulated in things that had been handled by many different hands over a very long time. She turned it over. The face was etched with markings she didn't immediately recognise — fine lines and angular symbols arranged in concentric rings around the central dial. Not a manufacturer's mark. Nothing she'd seen before. The needle was pointing east-northeast. She tilted it left. The needle swung. She tilted it right. The needle swung back, and then, slowly, corrected itself back to east-northeast. It wasn't tracking magnetic north. "Someone's been down here," Quinn said. Farrell looked at her steadily. "Bergman was down here." "Before Bergman." She straightened, still holding the compass, still looking at the needle. "This station's been sealed since the sixties. The dust pattern on the access stairs — you noticed it?" "Footprints going in and out on the dust, yes. We logged them. That'll be whoever found the body." "There were four different tread patterns, Farrell. I counted them on the way down. One set going in and out that matches Bergman's shoes." She looked around the platform. The work lights. The far dark. "Three others. And the dust on this platform has been disturbed in arcs — not tracks, arcs — as though people were moving in deliberate patterns, setting things up or taking them down." She gestured along the platform. "Look at the tiles. Look where the grime is broken. There were tables here. Stalls, maybe. Whatever was happening here tonight was larger than one man getting lost." Farrell was quiet for a moment. Then, carefully: "A meet of some kind?" "More than that." Quinn looked at the compass in her gloved hand. At the needle still pressing east-northeast with a kind of insistence that made the hairs on her forearm stand up through the latex. "Where does east-northeast take us from here?" Farrell checked his phone's map. "Islington. Highbury, roughly, if you follow it far enough." "Bergman's address." "His address." "He didn't get lost," Quinn said. "He came here on purpose. He knew exactly where he was. Something happened to him here, and then whoever else was here left before we arrived and took their evidence with them." She turned the compass over once more. The markings on the face caught the work light and for a moment the shadows in the etched lines seemed almost to move. She filed the sensation away without indulging it. "Get someone cross-referencing Bergman's financials with any properties or businesses in that Highbury radius. And I want a full cast of those tread patterns on the stairs — all four sets." "Right." Farrell made his notes with the tone of a man recalibrating. Quinn was still looking at the far end of the platform when she heard footsteps on the access stairs — lighter than her own, quicker. She turned. The woman who appeared under the incident tape was short, freckled, and breathing hard, her curly red hair escaping a knot at her neck. She wore a leather satchel slung across one shoulder that was clearly heavy, its strap creasing the shoulder of her jacket. Round glasses. Somewhere in her mid-twenties. She stopped when she saw Quinn and the composure in her face did something complicated — not guilt exactly, but something adjacent to it. The kind of careful neutral expression that people built when they had relevant information they were deciding whether to volunteer. Her eyes went straight to the compass in Quinn's gloved hand. They stayed there for just a fraction too long. "This is a closed crime scene," Farrell said. "I know." The woman shifted the satchel strap. "I was — I work at the British Museum, restricted archives. My name is Eva Kowalski. I received a call about an hour ago that there'd been an incident down here. I came to see if I could be of assistance." "Who called you?" Quinn asked. A beat. "A colleague. I don't know their name — it came through an internal channel." Quinn watched her. Eva Kowalski's left hand moved upward, tucked a loose strand of hair behind her ear, and then dropped back to her side with visible deliberateness, as though she'd caught herself at something. "What kind of work does the British Museum's restricted archives do that would make an incident in a sealed Underground station any of their business?" Quinn asked. "Historical significance. These old stations sometimes contain artefacts." "Is the compass historically significant, Ms Kowalski?" The hair went behind the ear again. The woman couldn't help it. "I'd need to examine it properly to say." "You recognised it from twenty feet away," Quinn said pleasantly. "So I'll ask again. Is the compass historically significant — and more importantly, what can you tell me about what was happening in this station tonight?" Eva Kowalski looked at the compass, then at Quinn, then at the body of Nils Bergman lying on the old platform tiles with his arm extended and his expression of faint, terrible surprise. "I think," she said slowly, "that you may be investigating something more complicated than you realise." Quinn looked down at the compass in her hand again. The needle was still pointing east-northeast. Still insisting. Still certain of something she wasn't yet. "Yes," she said. "I'm beginning to think you're right."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She looked around [around]"
1"Quinn said pleasantly [pleasantly]"
2"she said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.143
79.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1477
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count3
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"carefully"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1477
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"furrowed"
count1
1
word"etched"
count2
2
word"magnetic"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"furrowed"
1"etched"
2"magnetic"
3"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"looked surprised"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1493
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount986
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.62
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Quinn16
Camden1
Road1
Northern1
Farrell6
Kowalski2
Eva2
Nils1
Bergman2
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Farrell"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
4"Nils"
5"Bergman"
places
0"Camden"
1"Road"
globalScore0.689
windowScore0.333
43.62% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed somehow reluctant to penetrate the far ends of the space"
1"appeared under the incident tape was short, freckled, and breathing hard, her curly red hair escaping a knot at her neck"
66.04% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.34
wordCount1493
matches
0"not from neglect, she thought, but from age of a particular kind"
1"not guilt exactly, but something adjacent to it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean27.15
std29.57
cv1.089
sampleLengths
051
112
2116
332
412
510
668
76
854
952
106
1115
124
131
1462
159
1620
175
1824
19108
205
217
2216
235
246
259
2631
2718
28101
2913
3042
3114
322
332
34107
3512
3627
3795
3811
399
408
4149
425
4316
4435
4527
468
477
4812
498
90.01% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences92
matches
0"been sealed"
1"being made"
2"been handled"
3"was etched"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount8
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was waiting"
1"was lying"
2"was still working"
3"was pointing"
4"wasn't tracking"
5"was still looking"
6"were deciding"
7"was still pointing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences115
ratio0.061
matches
0"The smell hit Quinn before she reached the bottom of the emergency access stairs — damp concrete and old iron, the mineral rot of a space that hadn't seen proper ventilation in decades, and beneath all of it something else."
1"The platform was still intact — the original green and cream tiles, the ghost of a station name someone had scrubbed to illegibility, the curved ceiling overhead pressing down like the inside of a ribcage."
2"Not afraid — she knew fear on a dead face, the slack jaw and the furrowed brow, the body's final protest."
3"The casing was warm despite the cold of the station, and the metal had gone green at the seams — not from neglect, she thought, but from age of a particular kind."
4"The face was etched with markings she didn't immediately recognise — fine lines and angular symbols arranged in concentric rings around the central dial."
5"Quinn was still looking at the far end of the platform when she heard footsteps on the access stairs — lighter than her own, quicker."
6"She stopped when she saw Quinn and the composure in her face did something complicated — not guilt exactly, but something adjacent to it."
95.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount985
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.04467005076142132
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.01116751269035533
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean12.98
std11.25
cv0.867
sampleLengths
040
111
212
317
427
535
637
79
823
93
109
1110
127
134
1429
1528
166
1754
1817
195
204
2126
226
2315
244
251
262
271
2826
293
3021
313
324
332
349
355
3615
375
385
3919
409
4110
4232
432
4419
454
4624
474
484
495
69.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4608695652173913
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners53
88.89% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"Somewhere in her mid-twenties."
1"Still certain of something she"
ratio0.027
81.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences75
matches
0"She ducked under the incident"
1"It sat beneath the Camden"
2"He had his notebook out"
3"She glanced at him, then"
4"He was lying on his"
5"she repeated, not as agreement"
6"She counted the work lights."
7"She counted the officers."
8"She looked at the tiles"
9"His expression was open."
10"She stood and kept moving."
11"He came over, peered down."
12"She turned it over."
13"She tilted it left."
14"She tilted it right."
15"It wasn't tracking magnetic north."
16"She straightened, still holding the"
17"She looked around the platform"
18"She gestured along the platform"
19"She turned the compass over"
ratio0.347
33.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences75
matches
0"The smell hit Quinn before"
1"Something charred and chemical that"
2"She ducked under the incident"
3"The abandoned station had been"
4"It sat beneath the Camden"
5"The platform was still intact"
6"DC Farrell was waiting for"
7"He had his notebook out"
8"She glanced at him, then"
9"The deceased was male, mid-forties,"
10"He was lying on his"
11"she repeated, not as agreement"
12"Quinn walked slowly around the"
13"She counted the work lights."
14"She counted the officers."
15"She looked at the tiles"
16"Bergman looked surprised."
17"This was different."
18"His expression was open."
19"She stood and kept moving."
ratio0.853
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The smell hit Quinn before she reached the bottom of the emergency access stairs — damp concrete and old iron, the mineral rot of a space that hadn't seen prope…"
1"It sat beneath the Camden Road junction, swallowed by the Northern line expansion that had rerouted everything and left this particular stretch of tunnel to gat…"
2"The kind that accumulated in things that had been handled by many different hands over a very long time."
3"At the needle still pressing east-northeast with a kind of insistence that made the hairs on her forearm stand up through the latex."
4"The woman who appeared under the incident tape was short, freckled, and breathing hard, her curly red hair escaping a knot at her neck."
5"She wore a leather satchel slung across one shoulder that was clearly heavy, its strap creasing the shoulder of her jacket."
6"The kind of careful neutral expression that people built when they had relevant information they were deciding whether to volunteer."
7"Eva Kowalski's left hand moved upward, tucked a loose strand of hair behind her ear, and then dropped back to her side with visible deliberateness, as though sh…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.262
leniency0.524
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.048
74.0743%