| 70.97% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Nyx said flatly [flatly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.419 | | leniency | 0.839 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |
| 80.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1790 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "truly" | | 3 | "gently" | | 4 | "sharply" | | 5 | "softly" | | 6 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 60.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1790 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "pulsed" | | 7 | "almost alive" | | 8 | "calibrated" | | 9 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 128 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1813 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 54 | | wordCount | 1597 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 16 | | Veil | 1 | | Bermondsey | 1 | | London | 2 | | November | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | Wardens | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae | 5 | | Dymas | 3 | | Hel | 4 | | Clean | 1 | | Hel-touched | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Half-Fae" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Wardens" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Dymas" | | 7 | "Clean" | | 8 | "Pendant" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "November" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Hel" | | 4 | "Hel-touched" | | 5 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.999 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like pomegranates split open on th" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 2.758 | | wordCount | 1813 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the grey drizzle of London in November but a warm, saturated amber, as though someone had dipped the en" | | 1 | "not grapes exactly, but something rounder, darker, with skins" | | 2 | "not truly, but the suggestion of features gathered in the darkness" | | 3 | "Not the jagged, sulfurous architecture she'd half-expected from a realm of Hel, but something altogether more unsettling in its beauty" | | 4 | "not the vine's seductive melody but something cleaner, colder, a note" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 38.57 | | std | 34.2 | | cv | 0.887 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 66 | | 4 | 71 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 123 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 85 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 121 | | 19 | 65 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 52 | | 24 | 117 | | 25 | 58 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 51 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 127 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 61 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 58 | | 41 | 50 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 23 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 30 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 244 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 22 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 128 | | ratio | 0.148 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd expected the crossing to feel like something — a threshold, a door, a ripping sensation as the Veil parted around them." | | 1 | "Their form had solidified for the crossing — six feet and change of humanoid shadow, dense enough to have edges — but now they rippled at the margins, violet eyes bright with something that might have been recognition." | | 2 | "There was no visible sun, no clouds — just that impossible golden glow pressing down from above, turning everything it touched the color of late afternoon in a place that had never known morning." | | 3 | "Vineyards cascaded down terraced hillsides in perfect geometric rows, their leaves a green so vivid it looked painted, heavy with clusters of fruit she couldn't name — not grapes exactly, but something rounder, darker, with skins that caught the amber light and refracted it in bruised purples and deep golds." | | 4 | "She saw crimson spheres the size of her fist, pale yellow crescents dripping clear sap, and — impossibly — what looked like pomegranates split open on the branch, seeds glittering like garnets." | | 5 | "Layer upon layer — fresh bread, caramelized sugar, roasted meat, something floral she couldn't place, and underneath all of it, a cloying sweetness that sat at the back of her throat and wouldn't leave." | | 6 | "In London, it had pulsed faintly near the rift points the Wardens monitored — a gentle nudge, easily ignored." | | 7 | "They had no face, not truly, but the suggestion of features gathered in the darkness where a face should be — the angle of cheekbones, the faint impression of a mouth." | | 8 | "They descended the ridge single file, Isolde leading with the unerring confidence of someone who could see five minutes into the future — or five centuries, depending on her mood." | | 9 | "The golden light, the fragrant air, the soft soil yielding gently beneath each step — it felt designed, calibrated to soothe." | | 10 | "The rows were wider than they'd appeared from above — broad enough for three people to walk abreast, the trellised vines arching overhead to form a canopy that dappled the amber light into shifting patterns on the ground." | | 11 | "Not music exactly — more like the memory of music, a melody that lived just below the threshold of recognition." | | 12 | "She counted her steps — twelve, thirteen, fourteen — and the humming faded to a dull background noise, still present but no longer pulling." | | 13 | "The vineyards gave way to an orchard of trees she had no name for — massive, gnarled things with bark the color of dark chocolate and leaves that chimed softly when the breeze caught them." | | 14 | "Some she almost recognized — apples, but with skins that swirled with iridescent color; pears, but translucent, their seeds visible through the flesh like dark stars in pale sky." | | 15 | "The stains formed patterns — or Rory's brain insisted on seeing patterns, spirals within spirals, like the growth rings of a tree drawn by a fevered hand." | | 16 | "Long tables set with platters of food so elaborate they looked sculpted — towers of glazed pastry, spirals of carved meat, arrangements of fruit and flower and spun sugar that defied gravity and good sense." | | 17 | "Because it was wonderful — that was the trap." | | 18 | "The steel hummed — not the vine's seductive melody but something cleaner, colder, a note that said not here, not yours, not yet." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1585 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 53 | | adverbRatio | 0.033438485804416405 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010094637223974764 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 128 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 128 | | mean | 14.16 | | std | 10.28 | | cv | 0.726 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 71.09% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.46875 | | totalSentences | 128 | | uniqueOpeners | 60 | |
| 35.46% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, it was quiet." |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd expected the crossing to" | | 1 | "Her hand shot out and" | | 2 | "Their form had solidified for" | | 3 | "she said quietly" | | 4 | "They stood on a ridge" | | 5 | "She saw crimson spheres the" | | 6 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 7 | "She stood very still at" | | 8 | "She pressed her hand flat" | | 9 | "They had no face, not" | | 10 | "Their violet eyes studied the" | | 11 | "They descended the ridge single" | | 12 | "She found herself leaning toward" | | 13 | "Their form had thinned at" | | 14 | "They were uncomfortable here, Rory" | | 15 | "She counted her steps —" | | 16 | "They walked deeper." | | 17 | "She stopped and pointed to" | | 18 | "She reached up and touched" | | 19 | "She suspected the principle held" |
| | ratio | 0.277 | |
| 66.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory's" | | 1 | "She'd expected the crossing to" | | 2 | "Her hand shot out and" | | 3 | "Nyx's voice came from everywhere" | | 4 | "Their form had solidified for" | | 5 | "Rory blinked hard." | | 6 | "The light was wrong." | | 7 | "she said quietly" | | 8 | "They stood on a ridge" | | 9 | "Vineyards cascaded down terraced hillsides" | | 10 | "She saw crimson spheres the" | | 11 | "The smell hit her next." | | 12 | "Layer upon layer — fresh" | | 13 | "Isolde moved past her without" | | 14 | "The Half-Fae's bare feet touched" | | 15 | "Her silver hair caught the" | | 16 | "She stood very still at" | | 17 | "Isolde tilted her head." | | 18 | "A faint smile, the kind" | | 19 | "A chill walked the length" |
| | ratio | 0.787 | |
| 53.19% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 94 | | matches | | 0 | "Because it was wonderful —" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 16 | | matches | | 0 | "Their form had solidified for the crossing — six feet and change of humanoid shadow, dense enough to have edges — but now they rippled at the margins, violet ey…" | | 1 | "Not the grey drizzle of London in November but a warm, saturated amber, as though someone had dipped the entire sky in honey and held it up to a flame." | | 2 | "There was no visible sun, no clouds — just that impossible golden glow pressing down from above, turning everything it touched the color of late afternoon in a …" | | 3 | "They stood on a ridge of dark soil overlooking a valley that stretched farther than it had any right to." | | 4 | "Vineyards cascaded down terraced hillsides in perfect geometric rows, their leaves a green so vivid it looked painted, heavy with clusters of fruit she couldn't…" | | 5 | "Between the vineyards, orchards spread in dense copses, their branches sagging under the weight of things that glistened like wet jewels." | | 6 | "Layer upon layer — fresh bread, caramelized sugar, roasted meat, something floral she couldn't place, and underneath all of it, a cloying sweetness that sat at …" | | 7 | "The Half-Fae's bare feet touched the dark soil and left no impression, as though the ground refused to acknowledge her weight." | | 8 | "They descended the ridge single file, Isolde leading with the unerring confidence of someone who could see five minutes into the future — or five centuries, dep…" | | 9 | "The rows were wider than they'd appeared from above — broad enough for three people to walk abreast, the trellised vines arching overhead to form a canopy that …" | | 10 | "Not music exactly — more like the memory of music, a melody that lived just below the threshold of recognition." | | 11 | "Some she almost recognized — apples, but with skins that swirled with iridescent color; pears, but translucent, their seeds visible through the flesh like dark …" | | 12 | "Others were entirely alien: spiraling cones of layered flesh that peeled open like flowers, fat pods that oozed a golden syrup from their seams, clusters of tin…" | | 13 | "Low-slung structures of pale stone and dark wood, strung with lanterns that burned with the same amber glow as the sky." | | 14 | "Long tables set with platters of food so elaborate they looked sculpted — towers of glazed pastry, spirals of carved meat, arrangements of fruit and flower and …" | | 15 | "The steel hummed — not the vine's seductive melody but something cleaner, colder, a note that said not here, not yours, not yet." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 85.48% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.355 | | leniency | 0.71 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.129 | |