Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8TP6EXC93HPMS53MVJTRCV

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Duration:
1m 21s
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$0.076500
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Amazon Bedrock

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt stuck the way it always did, and Rory had to throw her shoulder against the door to wrench it open. She expected the Deliveroo driver she'd caved and ordered from twenty minutes ago. Pad thai. Extra lime. A Friday night concession to the fact that she'd been alone in Eva's flat for six days now with nothing but Ptolemy and a growing stack of translated Avarosian trade manifests for company. What she got was Lucien Moreau, standing on the narrow landing with rain darkening the shoulders of his charcoal suit, his ivory-handled cane hooked over one forearm, and a expression on his face she'd never seen before. Something close to uncertainty. It looked wrong on him, like a crack in porcelain. "No," Rory said, and pushed the door. His hand caught it. Not hard. Just enough. The amber eye caught the hallway light while the black one swallowed it whole, and the contrast made her stomach do something she refused to name. "Five minutes." "I gave you five minutes three weeks ago and you used them to lie to my face." "I used them to keep you breathing." He paused. Rain dripped from the edge of his jaw onto his collar. He didn't seem to notice. "There is a distinction." "Not one I recognize." They stood like that — her gripping the edge of the door, him holding it open with one palm flat against the wood — and somewhere below them the curry house exhaled its permanent cloud of cumin and fenugreek into the wet October air. Ptolemy threaded between her ankles, rumbling. Lucien looked down at the cat. Something in his jaw softened a fraction. "Your hands are shaking," he said, quiet. Rory curled her fingers into fists and stepped back from the door. Not an invitation. A retreat. He read it correctly and didn't move. "Eva's in Lisbon," she said. "Whatever you need from her—" "I know where Eva is. I arranged her transport." Of course he did. Lucien arranged everything. Lucien knew everything. Lucien operated in the spaces between what people said and what they meant, and he'd been doing it so long he'd forgotten how to just stand in front of someone and be honest. "Then why are you here?" He looked past her into the flat, taking in the familiar chaos — books stacked on books stacked on scrolls, Eva's conspiracy-wall of pinned notes and red string above the radiator, the single lamp burning by the window where Rory had been sitting cross-legged with a highlighter between her teeth an hour ago. His gaze settled on the crumpled blanket on the sofa. The pillow. He understood immediately that she'd been sleeping there instead of in the bedroom, and she hated him for understanding. "I am here," he said, "because I owe you something I cannot broker, trade, or delegate." "Try me." "An apology." The word sat between them like a grenade with the pin still in. Rory leaned against the doorframe, folded her arms, and felt the small crescent scar on her left wrist press against the inside of her elbow. A grounding point. A reminder of older pain, simpler pain, the kind that healed clean. "You don't apologize, Lucien. You recalibrate." His mouth twitched. Not a smile. The ghost of one that died before it reached his eyes. "Perhaps I am recalibrating now." She should have shut the door. Every rational cell in her body — and Rory had built her entire identity on those cells, on being the calm one, the quick-thinking one, the one who didn't crack — told her to shut the door, slide all three deadbolts back into place, and go eat her pad thai on the sofa with the cat. She'd survived Evan. She'd survived fleeing Cardiff with one bag and no plan. She could survive Lucien Moreau standing in a hallway looking at her like she was the only fixed point in a city full of shifting ground. Instead she said, "You're getting the landing wet." He stepped inside. He moved the way he always moved, deliberate, each motion considered, like a man who'd learned early that carelessness had consequences. He set his cane against the wall by the door — the one with the blade inside, the one he never let out of arm's reach — and that single gesture said more than anything he'd managed so far. Rory shut the door. Slid the first deadbolt. Left the other two. The flat shrank with him in it. It was already small — one bedroom, a galley kitchen barely wide enough for two people to pass, a bathroom with a shower that screamed when you turned it past lukewarm — but Lucien occupied space differently than other people. Not because of his height, though five-eleven was enough to make the low ceiling feel personal. Because of the weight he carried. The demon-blood weight, the Marseille weight, the weight of every secret he'd collected and filed away in that meticulous mind. He stood in the center of the room and looked at her, and for once he didn't fill the silence. Rory picked up Ptolemy before the cat could start winding around Lucien's ankles. The tabby protested, paddling the air with one indignant paw. "Talk, then. You said five minutes." "I told Hargrove where to find the Machen text. I told him you had already translated half of it. I told him—" He stopped. Swallowed. She watched the muscles in his throat work and felt a vicious, unwanted spike of tenderness. "I told him you were nobody. Inconsequential. A delivery girl with no ties to the underground." "I know all this. You told me all this. Three weeks ago, during your five minutes." "What I did not tell you is why." "You said it was to protect me." "That was true. But it was not complete." He pressed two fingers against his temple — an old gesture, one she'd seen him make dozens of times during late-night sessions in this very flat, bent over texts with Eva while Rory brought them tea and pretended she wasn't watching the lamplight play across his cheekbones. "Hargrove asked me to name the person I would least like him to harm. That was the question. Not 'who translated the text.' Not 'who is helping Eva Ellis.' He asked me to name the person and I—" He stopped again, and something fractured behind his mismatched eyes, and Rory put the cat down. "You said my name." "I said your name. And he heard everything in it." The rain intensified against the window. Below them, someone in the curry house dropped a pan, and the clatter rang up through the floorboards like a gunshot. Neither of them flinched. Rory's hand found the back of the kitchen chair. She gripped it. The wood was cool and solid and real, and she needed real right now because the rest of this — him, here, the raw thing in his voice — felt like the edge of a cliff she'd been backing away from for months. "So the lie," she said, slow, "the 'she's nobody, she's inconsequential' — that was damage control. After you'd already given him leverage." "Yes." "Because you couldn't keep my name out of your mouth." "Because when a man like Hargrove asks that question, the answer bypasses every defense I have ever built." He looked at her with both eyes, the amber and the black, and she felt it in her sternum. "I have spent my life being fluent. Four languages. Thousands of negotiations. I have talked my way out of rooms that were designed to be coffins. But he asked me for a name and I could not lie. Not about that. Not about you." Rory released the chair. Took a step forward. Then another. They were close enough now that she could smell rain and cedar and something faintly sulfuric underneath — the Avarosian trace, the demon-blood warmth that always ran hotter than human. She'd noticed it the first time they met, in Silas' bar, when Lucien had taken her hand to examine the crescent scar and his fingers had been almost feverish against her pulse. "You should have told me." "I know." "Three weeks ago. You should have told me all of it. Instead of the version that made you look strategic instead of—" "Instead of compromised." His voice dropped. "Instead of the man who handed your enemy a weapon because he could not say anyone else's name." Her eyes burned. She blinked it back. She was not going to cry in front of Lucien Moreau in Eva's cluttered flat at nine o'clock on a Friday while her pad thai got cold on someone's moped. "I thought you'd done the math," she said. "I thought you'd weighed me against whatever Hargrove was offering and decided I was the cheaper loss." Something moved across his face — not a flinch, deeper than that, tectonic — and he reached for her hand, then stopped. His fingers hung in the air between them, waiting. Asking. "That is what I came to correct," he said. "There is no math. There has not been math since the night you brought tea to this flat and argued with Eva about Sumerian verb declensions for forty minutes and I realized I had not looked away from you once." Rory stared at his hand. Long fingers, a thin silver ring on the index, the faintest tremor visible if she looked hard enough. Lucien Moreau, who bartered in secrets and never showed his cards, was shaking. She closed the distance. Not his hand — she bypassed it entirely, stepped into his space, grabbed the wet lapel of his jacket, and pulled him down to her. The kiss was graceless and fierce. His mouth tasted like espresso and rain. One of his hands found the back of her neck and the other settled at her waist with a care that bordered on reverence, and she felt the heat of him through every layer, the demon-blood furnace that made his skin burn while the rest of London shivered in October. She broke away first. Kept her fist in his lapel. Kept him close, his forehead almost touching hers, his breath ragged against her mouth. "That's not forgiveness," she said. "I know." "That's me telling you I'm angry and I want you here anyway, and if you lie to me again — even to protect me, even to recalibrate — I will lock all three deadbolts and you will never stand on that landing again." His thumb traced a line along her jaw. Slow. Deliberate. The amber eye was molten this close, flecked with gold she'd never noticed before. "Understood." "And you're going to tell me everything about Hargrove. Every piece of it. Tonight." "Yes." "And you're going to stay." It wasn't a question. She watched him hear it, watched the crack in the porcelain widen into something that looked, impossibly, like relief. "If you'll have me." Ptolemy jumped onto the kitchen table and knocked a stack of Avarosian manifests onto the floor. Neither of them moved. Rory's grip on his lapel tightened, the wet wool bunching under her fingers, and she pulled him down again — slower this time, her mouth finding his with a precision that surprised them both. The rain hammered against the window. The curry house hummed below. Somewhere out in the wet tangle of Brick Lane, her pad thai was getting delivered to an empty doorstep. She couldn't bring herself to care.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.612
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1908
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.69% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1908
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"porcelain"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"reminder"
count1
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"tenderness"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"porcelain"
1"stomach"
2"familiar"
3"reminder"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"tenderness"
7"fractured"
8"warmth"
9"pulse"
10"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences114
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences114
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"hear"
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences149
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1928
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions34
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1390
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory14
Deliveroo1
Friday2
Eva4
Ptolemy4
Avarosian3
Lucien10
Moreau4
Rain1
October2
Evan1
Cardiff1
Marseille1
Swallowed1
London1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Avarosian"
4"Lucien"
5"Moreau"
6"Rain"
7"Evan"
places
0"October"
1"Cardiff"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
globalScore0.996
windowScore1
73.08% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like the edge of a cliff she'd bee"
1"tasted like espresso and rain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1928
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences149
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean27.15
std26.51
cv0.976
sampleLengths
073
151
27
334
42
517
629
74
850
913
107
1124
1210
139
1443
155
1684
1716
182
192
2053
216
2217
235
24101
258
2663
2712
2889
2920
3023
316
3257
3316
348
357
3693
3716
384
3910
4031
4155
4222
431
4410
4581
4672
475
482
4922
99.11% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"got was"
1"was molten"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs228
matches
0"wasn't watching"
1"was shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount17
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences149
ratio0.074
matches
0"They stood like that — her gripping the edge of the door, him holding it open with one palm flat against the wood — and somewhere below them the curry house exhaled its permanent cloud of cumin and fenugreek into the wet October air."
1"He looked past her into the flat, taking in the familiar chaos — books stacked on books stacked on scrolls, Eva's conspiracy-wall of pinned notes and red string above the radiator, the single lamp burning by the window where Rory had been sitting cross-legged with a highlighter between her teeth an hour ago."
2"Every rational cell in her body — and Rory had built her entire identity on those cells, on being the calm one, the quick-thinking one, the one who didn't crack — told her to shut the door, slide all three deadbolts back into place, and go eat her pad thai on the sofa with the cat."
3"He set his cane against the wall by the door — the one with the blade inside, the one he never let out of arm's reach — and that single gesture said more than anything he'd managed so far."
4"It was already small — one bedroom, a galley kitchen barely wide enough for two people to pass, a bathroom with a shower that screamed when you turned it past lukewarm — but Lucien occupied space differently than other people."
5"\"That was true. But it was not complete.\" He pressed two fingers against his temple — an old gesture, one she'd seen him make dozens of times during late-night sessions in this very flat, bent over texts with Eva while Rory brought them tea and pretended she wasn't watching the lamplight play across his cheekbones."
6"The wood was cool and solid and real, and she needed real right now because the rest of this — him, here, the raw thing in his voice — felt like the edge of a cliff she'd been backing away from for months."
7"They were close enough now that she could smell rain and cedar and something faintly sulfuric underneath — the Avarosian trace, the demon-blood warmth that always ran hotter than human."
8"Something moved across his face — not a flinch, deeper than that, tectonic — and he reached for her hand, then stopped."
9"Not his hand — she bypassed it entirely, stepped into his space, grabbed the wet lapel of his jacket, and pulled him down to her."
10"Rory's grip on his lapel tightened, the wet wool bunching under her fingers, and she pulled him down again — slower this time, her mouth finding his with a precision that surprised them both."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1177
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03143585386576041
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.00594732370433305
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences149
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences149
mean12.94
std12.85
cv0.993
sampleLengths
023
113
22
32
433
537
64
710
87
94
102
112
1226
132
1417
159
1611
175
184
194
2044
216
226
237
247
2512
263
272
287
295
305
319
324
333
343
3533
365
3753
3810
392
4019
4116
422
432
4413
4525
463
4712
486
493
52.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.37583892617449666
totalSentences149
uniqueOpeners56
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences96
matches
0"Of course he did."
1"Instead she said,"
2"Somewhere out in the wet"
ratio0.031
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences96
matches
0"She expected the Deliveroo driver"
1"It looked wrong on him,"
2"His hand caught it."
3"He didn't seem to notice."
4"They stood like that —"
5"he said, quiet"
6"He read it correctly and"
7"He looked past her into"
8"His gaze settled on the"
9"He understood immediately that she'd"
10"His mouth twitched."
11"She should have shut the"
12"She'd survived Evan."
13"She'd survived fleeing Cardiff with"
14"She could survive Lucien Moreau"
15"He stepped inside."
16"He moved the way he"
17"He set his cane against"
18"It was already small —"
19"He stood in the center"
ratio0.417
48.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences96
matches
0"The third deadbolt stuck the"
1"She expected the Deliveroo driver"
2"A Friday night concession to"
3"Something close to uncertainty."
4"It looked wrong on him,"
5"Rory said, and pushed the"
6"His hand caught it."
7"The amber eye caught the"
8"Rain dripped from the edge"
9"He didn't seem to notice."
10"They stood like that —"
11"Ptolemy threaded between her ankles,"
12"Lucien looked down at the"
13"Something in his jaw softened"
14"he said, quiet"
15"Rory curled her fingers into"
16"He read it correctly and"
17"Lucien arranged everything."
18"Lucien knew everything."
19"Lucien operated in the spaces"
ratio0.823
52.08% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"Because of the weight he"
ratio0.01
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He moved the way he always moved, deliberate, each motion considered, like a man who'd learned early that carelessness had consequences."
1"It was already small — one bedroom, a galley kitchen barely wide enough for two people to pass, a bathroom with a shower that screamed when you turned it past l…"
2"One of his hands found the back of her neck and the other settled at her waist with a care that bordered on reverence, and she felt the heat of him through ever…"
3"Rory's grip on his lapel tightened, the wet wool bunching under her fingers, and she pulled him down again — slower this time, her mouth finding his with a prec…"
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he said, quiet"
1"she said, slow,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.204
leniency0.408
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.041
85.8042%