Run: 2026-02-24-01KJ8TR73S5M3RK9KTVSSD6G1S

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Duration:
47.6s
Cost:
$0.036621
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rory heard three sharp knocks and assumed it was the curry house delivery she hadn't ordered. She padded across the stacks of Eva's books in her socks, nearly catching her toe on a rolled scroll that had migrated from the coffee table to the middle of the floor, and began working through the deadbolts without bothering to check the peephole. Three deadbolts. By the time she'd cleared the second one her irritation at the interruption had already dulled into mild curiosity. By the time she cleared the third, she had half a theory about Eva forgetting her keys again. She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, one hand lifted as though prepared to knock a fourth time. He wore charcoal, naturally — a suit cut so precisely it had no business existing above a curry house in Brick Lane. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his ivory-handled cane was hooked over his forearm with the practiced ease of an accessory rather than a necessity. His mismatched eyes found her immediately: the amber one warm and searching, the black one giving nothing away, as it never had. For a moment neither of them said anything. The smell of cardamom drifted up from downstairs. Somewhere behind her, Ptolemy knocked something off a shelf. "You look terrible," Lucien said, which was a lie, and they both knew it. "You're not supposed to know I'm here," Rory said, which was not a lie at all. "No," he agreed. "And yet." She should have closed the door. That was the rational, self-preserving thing to do — close the door, engage all three deadbolts, go back to the glass of wine she'd poured herself forty minutes ago and had thus far failed to actually drink. She had a plan for this evening. The plan did not include Lucien Moreau. She stepped back and let him in. He moved through the flat with the quiet assurance of a man who had been in worse places and made himself at home in all of them. His gaze tracked the chaos of Eva's research without judgment — the towers of books, the scrolls mapped with symbols Rory still couldn't read, the corkboard above the desk that had evolved in recent weeks into something that looked less like an investigation and more like evidence of a spiraling obsession. Ptolemy materialized from behind the armchair, regarded Lucien with the inscrutability common to all cats and most half-demons, and then wound once around his ankles before departing again. "Traitor," Rory said, to the cat. Lucien glanced at her. The ghost of something moved across his face — not quite a smile, but adjacent to one. "He has excellent taste." "He also eats spiders. I wouldn't flatter yourself." She moved past him toward the kitchen, because she needed something to do with her hands and the wine glass was in there and if she stood still she would have to look at him properly, and looking at him properly was a thing she was not currently equipped to do. She heard the soft tap of his cane on the floorboards as he followed, unhurried. "How did you find me?" she asked. "You told Eva to tell no one." He settled against the kitchen doorframe. "Eva told Silas not to worry. Silas mentioned to his Tuesday regulars that you were fine, just staying with a friend for a bit. One of his Tuesday regulars is a man named Declan who does occasional work for me." "Declan." She poured herself more wine, though her glass was still three-quarters full. "I don't know a Declan." "Most people don't, until they need to." "So you just — what? Looked me up through a chain of mutual acquaintances and decided to come round." "I decided to come round three weeks ago," Lucien said. "I've been deciding against it ever since." He paused. "I reconsidered this afternoon." She turned to look at him properly then, because there was no way to respond to that without facing it. He was watching her with that particular quality of attention he had — the kind that felt less like being observed and more like being understood, which was considerably more alarming. His cane was resting on the counter now, and without it his posture shifted slightly, something in the angle of his shoulders becoming less performance and more person. "Why?" she asked. "Because I dislike unfinished things." "That's not an answer." "It's the honest part of one." He looked at the wine glass she was holding with both hands like a shield. "May I?" She got down a second glass without meaning to. Her hands made the decision before her brain had caught up, which had always been the problem with Lucien Moreau — he had a gift for making her operate on instinct, and she'd spent most of the past year trying to recover her preference for deliberate thought. She poured. He took the glass, and when he did his fingers didn't quite touch hers, but it was a near thing, and the near thing registered in the same place it always had. "You left," she said. "In April. You left without—" She stopped, because the sentence had too many possible endings and she hadn't decided yet which one was true. "Without explaining," he supplied. "Without anything." He was quiet for a moment. The sounds of the street drifted up through the kitchen window — a cab, a group laughing, the eternal low heartbeat of the city that never stopped regardless of what was happening in cramped flats above curry houses. Rory thought about Cardiff, the way silence there had weight and texture, the way London silence was different — thinner, interrupted, somehow both lonelier and less so. "I had information," Lucien said, "that put you in a position of danger. Not theoretical danger. Immediate." She watched his jaw tighten slightly, the only outward sign of something working beneath the surface. "The safest thing I could do was remove myself." "You could have told me." "You would have argued." "Yes," she said. "I would have. That was rather my right." Something shifted in the amber eye — a crack in the careful composure, small but there, unmistakable to anyone paying close enough attention, and she was always paying close enough attention. "Yes," he said quietly. "It was." The admission sat between them. Rory turned her wine glass slowly against her palm, felt the familiar press of the crescent scar against the glass's base, grounding. She'd learned in the past year to use it that way — a small anchor, something real and physical and hers, when everything else was moving too fast. "I thought you'd decided I wasn't worth the trouble," she said, and hated that she'd said it, and meant it anyway. He straightened away from the doorframe. He crossed the small kitchen — it took approximately two steps, Eva's kitchen being what it was — and stopped when he was close enough that she could see both eyes clearly: the amber one that caught the overhead light and the black one that swallowed it. He said nothing immediately. He simply looked at her with an expression she had no adequate word for, something composed of equal parts frustration and care and something older, more settled, that made her chest do something inconvenient. "Quite the opposite," he said. "You were far too much trouble to risk." She held his gaze. Her heartbeat was doing the thing it had always done around him, the thing she'd catalogued and then pointedly refused to analyze. Behind them, somewhere in the flat, Ptolemy knocked another object off another surface with the absolute serenity of a creature who had never once worried about the consequences of anything. "You're going to have to do better than that," she said. But she didn't move away. "I know." He reached up — slowly, telegraphing the motion — and tucked a strand of her black hair back from her face. His touch was brief and careful, the way careful looks when it's learned from having been its opposite. He let his hand fall. "I have a great deal to explain. If you're willing." She thought about the three deadbolts on the door. She'd unlocked them all before she'd even known who was on the other side. "Sit down," she said. "I'll get the bottle."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0.045
effectiveRatio0.045
82.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1391
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"practiced ease"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"practiced ease"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences93
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1406
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions24
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1156
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.69
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Moreau3
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy3
Rory6
Lucien8
Cardiff1
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Cardiff"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
51.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite a smile, but adjacent to one"
1"quite touch hers, but it was a near thing, and the near thing registered in the same place it always had"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.711
wordCount1406
matches
0"not quite a smile, but adjacent to one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"hated that she'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean29.91
std27.59
cv0.922
sampleLengths
060
139
24
394
48
517
614
716
85
957
107
11106
126
1325
148
1566
167
1753
1818
197
2019
2123
2279
233
245
254
2623
2756
2834
2928
304
312
3271
3342
345
354
3611
3737
3855
3921
4091
4113
4256
4316
4456
4523
468
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"was slicked"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was watching"
1"was resting"
2"was holding"
3"was happening"
4"was always paying"
5"was doing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences93
ratio0.129
matches
0"He wore charcoal, naturally — a suit cut so precisely it had no business existing above a curry house in Brick Lane."
1"That was the rational, self-preserving thing to do — close the door, engage all three deadbolts, go back to the glass of wine she'd poured herself forty minutes ago and had thus far failed to actually drink."
2"His gaze tracked the chaos of Eva's research without judgment — the towers of books, the scrolls mapped with symbols Rory still couldn't read, the corkboard above the desk that had evolved in recent weeks into something that looked less like an investigation and more like evidence of a spiraling obsession."
3"The ghost of something moved across his face — not quite a smile, but adjacent to one."
4"He was watching her with that particular quality of attention he had — the kind that felt less like being observed and more like being understood, which was considerably more alarming."
5"Her hands made the decision before her brain had caught up, which had always been the problem with Lucien Moreau — he had a gift for making her operate on instinct, and she'd spent most of the past year trying to recover her preference for deliberate thought."
6"The sounds of the street drifted up through the kitchen window — a cab, a group laughing, the eternal low heartbeat of the city that never stopped regardless of what was happening in cramped flats above curry houses."
7"Rory thought about Cardiff, the way silence there had weight and texture, the way London silence was different — thinner, interrupted, somehow both lonelier and less so."
8"Something shifted in the amber eye — a crack in the careful composure, small but there, unmistakable to anyone paying close enough attention, and she was always paying close enough attention."
9"She'd learned in the past year to use it that way — a small anchor, something real and physical and hers, when everything else was moving too fast."
10"He crossed the small kitchen — it took approximately two steps, Eva's kitchen being what it was — and stopped when he was close enough that she could see both eyes clearly: the amber one that caught the overhead light and the black one that swallowed it."
11"\"I know.\" He reached up — slowly, telegraphing the motion — and tucked a strand of her black hair back from her face."
83.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1146
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"rational, self-preserving thing"
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.05148342059336824
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01832460732984293
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences93
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences93
mean15.12
std12.82
cv0.848
sampleLengths
016
144
22
319
418
54
618
722
832
922
108
118
129
1314
1416
153
162
176
1837
197
207
217
2227
2351
2428
256
264
2717
284
298
3051
3115
327
3313
3440
3513
365
377
3819
3910
409
414
4220
4331
4428
453
465
474
4821
492
48.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3763440860215054
totalSentences93
uniqueOpeners35
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Somewhere behind her, Ptolemy knocked"
ratio0.017
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences60
matches
0"She padded across the stacks"
1"She opened the door."
2"He wore charcoal, naturally —"
3"His platinum hair was slicked"
4"His mismatched eyes found her"
5"She should have closed the"
6"She had a plan for"
7"She stepped back and let"
8"He moved through the flat"
9"His gaze tracked the chaos"
10"She moved past him toward"
11"She heard the soft tap"
12"He settled against the kitchen"
13"She poured herself more wine,"
14"She turned to look at"
15"He was watching her with"
16"His cane was resting on"
17"He looked at the wine"
18"She got down a second"
19"Her hands made the decision"
ratio0.617
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount54
totalSentences60
matches
0"Rory heard three sharp knocks"
1"She padded across the stacks"
2"She opened the door."
3"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
4"He wore charcoal, naturally —"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"His mismatched eyes found her"
7"The smell of cardamom drifted"
8"Lucien said, which was a"
9"Rory said, which was not"
10"She should have closed the"
11"That was the rational, self-preserving"
12"She had a plan for"
13"The plan did not include"
14"She stepped back and let"
15"He moved through the flat"
16"His gaze tracked the chaos"
17"Ptolemy materialized from behind the"
18"Rory said, to the cat"
19"Lucien glanced at her."
ratio0.9
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"By the time she'd cleared"
1"By the time she cleared"
ratio0.033
4.61% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She padded across the stacks of Eva's books in her socks, nearly catching her toe on a rolled scroll that had migrated from the coffee table to the middle of th…"
1"He moved through the flat with the quiet assurance of a man who had been in worse places and made himself at home in all of them."
2"His gaze tracked the chaos of Eva's research without judgment — the towers of books, the scrolls mapped with symbols Rory still couldn't read, the corkboard abo…"
3"He was watching her with that particular quality of attention he had — the kind that felt less like being observed and more like being understood, which was con…"
4"His cane was resting on the counter now, and without it his posture shifted slightly, something in the angle of his shoulders becoming less performance and more…"
5"Behind them, somewhere in the flat, Ptolemy knocked another object off another surface with the absolute serenity of a creature who had never once worried about…"
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"She poured, though her glass was still three-quarters full"
1"She stopped, because the sentence had too many possible endings and she hadn't decided yet which one was true"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.048
76.6141%